Daisuke Achiwa - BASARA · forum

100pa-

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100pa- 2010-02-12T10:18:31+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年9月8日 at 19:11:04

Artist: Daisuke Achiwa
Title: BASARA
Source: Ar tonelico II
Tags: Ar Tonelico II 2
BPM: 130
Filesize: 6729kb
Play Time: 03:21
Difficulties Available:

BASARA (5 stars, 870 notes)
Chroche (4.8 stars, 435 notes)
Luca (4.99 stars, 774 notes)

Download: Daisuke Achiwa - BASARA
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アルトネリコ2　世界に響く少女たちの創造詩」 Vocal CD
「焔～ホムラ」～Ar tonelico2 hymmnos concert Side.紅~～

Track 01.BASARA

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AdRon Zh3Ro

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AdRon Zh3Ro 2010-02-13T15:02:45+00:00

Very good beatmap.

Although, spacing of various circles aren't right.

If you want to create faster and slowers sections, create a section and put 0,5x, 1x or 2x BPM adjustment.

Good work

Card N'FoRcE

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Card N'FoRcE 2010-02-16T21:31:47+00:00

adron zhero wrote:
Very good beatmap.

Although, spacing of various circles aren't right.

If you want to create faster and slowers sections, create a section and put 0,5x, 1x or 2x BPM adjustment.

Good work

That's not true.
This spacing is really intuitive and i was really surprised when i tired it. (if he changed something after you said that, please ignore this)

Actually, i don't have anything to complain about.
Maybe you only have to add some breaks, because i think they're missing.
Add breaks at:
00:47:850 ; 00:51:500 ; 01:17:400 ; 01:24:500.

Other than that, i'm honestly impressed: noone would believe that this is a map from a first timer.
Can't wait to see this completed, send me a PM when it's done and i'll gladly check it again.

I'm giving you a kd-star in the meanwhile ^^

EDIT: if you don't understand something, ask someone in #japanese or PM me ^^

LKs

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LKs 2010-02-17T18:00:36+00:00

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Card N'FoRcE

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Card N'FoRcE 2010-02-20T13:51:31+00:00

WHY DID YOU REMOVE OVERALL DIFFICULTY 9???

WHY?

WHY?

It's awesome with overall 9 and it's even more playable. Your beat placement feels really intuitive when played with Overall Difficulty 9.
So, please use it like you did before.

100pa-

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100pa- 2010-02-20T14:59:28+00:00

yeah i thought oa9 is funny 2, but my friends said thats too hard lol. okay i'll change it back now XD
though i wont pass it myself maybe

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Card N'FoRcE

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Card N'FoRcE 2010-02-20T15:15:29+00:00

Well, the whole map is INSANE, so changing Overall to 8 won't help much xD

Anyway, i insisted on Overall 9 because it fits so much in this map. It's just perfect.

Anyway, the last part is really cruel xDD
(This is an opinion

)

Keep the good work up ^^

yaya

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yaya 2010-02-21T12:51:44+00:00

for me . overall 9 i will delete in 10 sec.
overall 8 is better .
for me overall 7 is the best

tsuka

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tsuka 2010-02-21T13:14:22+00:00

potential map ,i like it

anyway

OA9 and OA7 are both fine for me

Dangaard

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Dangaard 2010-02-21T15:03:32+00:00

Really impressive map, can't wait to see more.
And OA9 = win (ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

Gabi

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Gabi 2010-02-21T15:16:22+00:00

osu_CN_yaya wrote:
for me . overall 9 i will delete in 10 sec.
overall 8 is better .
for me overall 7 is the best

unfair yaya OA9 is good <_<

and yea this map is also fun, loving the hitsounds ^^

Card N'FoRcE

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Card N'FoRcE 2010-02-22T20:18:58+00:00

Yeah sure let's make all maps the same.
Let's all use overall 7, use Circe Size 4 and whatever HP drain.
Let's not make something original/different because "meh it's easy/hard/weird to play and wtf"

I'm still for Overall 9, because that's what this map had from the beginning and it was the mapper who chose it.
Also, i still think it fits better than 7/8, that's my opinion.
Final decision to the mapper, but if he decides for overall 9 and i see something like "Use Overall 7/8 or i won't star/bubble/rank/whatever" I'll really get angry because that's useless shit that limits the mapper's freedom.

I dunno if you can go for rank with two difficulties being exactly the same exept for Overall Difficulty.
I don't mind personally, but i dunno about what BATs will say.

Good luck for the next difficulty, can't wait to see it.

lota78

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lota78 2010-02-28T19:38:46+00:00

Nice map, very original :3. But,

01:32:158 (1,2,3) - I didn't like this part :X it's a bit out of sink at my point of view

In spite of it, veeeery well done =D, very original. Take this star

EDIT: Overall 9 is good, i wouldn't change it

lxy

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lxy 2010-03-23T05:07:46+00:00

very good map indeed

Dangaard

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Dangaard 2010-04-02T20:53:56+00:00

You should finish this, and add some easy diff

NatsumeRin

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NatsumeRin 2010-04-17T07:29:32+00:00

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
awesome hitsounds.
you need a 3-star diff to meet the difficulty spread rules... and i won't make a taiko diff since here's already... 3 [I]....

[Luca]
……我感觉整体就堆的太紧了……建议调高distance spacing 把间距拉开。然后可以叫我remod。这个spacing我实在觉得不好看。
HP Drain Rate -1
00:06:774 (4) - new combo
00:14:620 (7) - ^
00:15:889 (1) - start 1/4 later.
00:53:158 (4,5,6,7) - 不建议堆一起。
……我发现到后来我就只顾听歌和hitsounds了……

[Cocona]
Combo Colors中有两个是重复的orz，改掉。
只是一个感觉，你的note太过注重中轴线了。。。
01:21:082 (1) - remove new combo
01:21:774 (1) - ^
01:22:466 (1) - ^
01:23:158 (1) - ^
01:23:735 (1) -
……还有很多new combo让我不能理解。
整体其实没什么问题，但我就是说不出的别扭，简单而言，就是任意选取一段内的note，你就可以看到中间密密麻麻一片，两边基本对称分布着稀疏的几个。

[BASARA]
combo color又变了
这个难度是我三个里面最喜欢的，但是分超过20M了，属于app，顺便就是以你做音效的水平做太鼓绝对富裕了……

100pa-

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100pa- 2010-04-17T11:48:26+00:00

thx for modding

第一张[Luca]估计你看的时候我正在排版还没上传，你来太快了= =||
而且这张明显是3星难度不到的谱，3连小跳什么都没有我实在搞不懂这系统是怎么判星星的，把这张摁在4.5星已经是我竭尽所能了。。

[Cocona]的红蓝蓝，稍微注意下颜色跟音效应该能看出来点蹊跷.....
至于中线么，本来准备全部扔中间的，实在没法排就旁边也扔了几颗这样