1. Hard (4,24 stars, 157 notes)
2. Insane (4,7 stars, 187 notes)
3. Normal (3,1 stars, 106 notes)

Ichigo-Sora wrote:

I love the storyboard, but I think you should get someone with timing experience to check the offset >< I got 2137, but I'm not complete sure its correct ^^" I'll probably mod this when the timing gets sorted out, but for now have a star (:
Don't kudosu this post please.

Vikon wrote:

Im not a pro-modder, just a few I can find.

[ALL]
set a preview point rdy
Lack of hitsoundrdy

[Normal]
00:50:596 (5)(6)(7)(8) a little bit messy rdy
01:03:404 (9) distance snap rdy

[Hard]
00:37:904 (4) overlapped,quite hard to get I only move it a bit, but it's a necesary circle <.<
01:07:673 (7) distance snap moved 1 square and added new combo

[Insane]
00:37:904 (4) overlappedmoved
00:41:596 (7,8,9) distance snap I use the same distance as the rest of the map


quite good, get my star~

James2250 wrote:

remove the break at the beginning of the song for all diff's rdy
you can get rid of [ ] in tags rdy
background has to be 1024x768 and below (yours is 1039x768 so resize it) rdy
keep kiai the same on all diff's mmm.. why?

Normal:
I would lower hp drain and overall diff by 1 rdy
00:09:981 - break isn't needed rdy
00:22:673 (1) - add a repeat rdy
00:27:750 (9) - add note rdy
00:34:211 (1) - remove new combo rdy
00:54:519 - add some notes around here? rdy
01:19:673 (2) - add note rdy
01:20:596 (1) - end at 01:21:519 rdy

Hard:
00:10:442 - break isnt needed rdy
00:15:288 (1) - remove new combo rdy
00:23:135 (5) - add note rdy
00:34:211 (1) - remove new combo rdy
00:48:981 (7) - add note rdy
00:54:750 (4) - ^? fixed in another way :3
01:07:673 (1) - remove new combo rdy
01:19:673 (2) - add note rdy
01:20:596 (1) - end at 01:21:519 rdy

Insane:
00:09:981 (1,1) - I would just stack these at center of grid rdy
00:15:288 (1) - remove new combo rdy
00:38:596 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make it different from hard rdy
00:48:981 (7) - add note rdy
01:20:481 (1) - start at 01:20:596 end at 01:21:519 rdy
this diff uses many of the same patterns as hard...try and mix it up some more

*star*

James2250 wrote:

it is generally said if its the same song on all diff's and the same creator there is no reason to change the kiai (you can argue with other modders about that if you don't want to change it)
-end kiai time at the end of the last spinner? mmmm

remodding because im avoiding doing an essay atm

Normal:
00:15:288 (1) - remove new combo rdy
00:16:211 (6,1) - switch new combo's? rdy
00:24:981 (6) - straighten this out? rdy
00:48:288 (7) - add a repeat rdy
00:55:211 (1) - remove new combo rdy

Hard:
00:54:981 (1) - remove new combo rdy
01:01:673 (1) - ^ rdy

Insane:
00:10:211 (1) - remove new combo rdy
00:21:519 (4,5,6) - align? rdy
00:30:981 (14) - this is only diff where this doesnt have a new combo in english again please xD, i don't understand
00:38:596 (5) - new combo? rdy
00:49:904 (4) - I wouldn't put this slider under previous notes rdy
01:05:135 (1) - auto has to be able to get 2000 on spinners for them to be rankable rdy
01:20:481 (1) - start on white tick rdy

good luck

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hello Astom

Nice map
Especially the sliders with wing pattern absolutely love it

Comment on the SB even though not pro on it, the white flashes are quite distracting for me maybe reduce some of it or give longer interval for each flashes, any way it's a good Sb and skin. Also the jump and 2xtime SB in normal and hard are still visible even though there aren't any jump in normal or speed up in hard on, ask someone good with SB to hide those

that's all I can point up good luck with the map
Here's your star

1. - Add the name of anime instead of "Anime" tag.
2. - Set slider tick rate to "1" on Normal. It will sound better.
3. - Re-place all notes using Distance Snap.
4. - The SB text is a bit hard to read

Midget wrote:

>Requested Mod<

~Overall~

1. - Add the name of anime instead of "Anime" tag. Anime name in Source Already
2. - Set slider tick rate to "1" on Normal. It will sound better. I think about it
3. - Re-place all notes using Distance Snap. this is for u viewtopic.php?f=56&t=16919
4. - The SB text is a bit hard to read I think about it

Request a mod again, when you'll re-place all notes with Distance Snap. I'll check it again.
And next time you'll ask the mod, specify the type of mod please.

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- Red - You must fix that

- Orange - You should fix that

- Blue - A Suggestion

Astom wrote:

Anime name in Source Already If Source is OST, it's Ok then.
this is for u viewtopic.php?f=56&t=16919 Lawl

FishHook wrote:

First off, I must have watched this part 10 times over before continuing watching the rest of the episode ^_^ I love this song. <3 Too bad the mangaka is taking so damn slow with his releases.

Now off to modding. I focused mostly on spacing, but also looked at combo patterns. I like symmetry so if you think the song would be better without the change, just say so. I'm still new at modding and making maps so I'm not going to label anything as YOU MUST CHANGE THIS because as far as I know, it might not be best for the map. Take everything as a suggestion. (Until I start feeling what I say is 100% better for the map ) Now, change your grid level to 3 before making any of my movement/spacing suggestions.

[Normal]
maybe (xD) I fix all of this in another way
0:35:365 (4),(5),(6),(7),(8) All move 2 squares up, and 1 square right for alignment.
0:36:750 (7),(8) Now move these two 1 square left for spacing.
0:42:750 (2) Move up just a tiny tiny bit for alignment. (I think beat snapping might do it.)
0:48:288 (7) Move 2 squares left. You would then want to move the next beats 1,2,3 to match spacing. (Maybe create a slant to the slider instead of a straight line down. (1) 3 squares left, (2) 2 squares left, (3) 1 square left. I don't think the spacing between (7) and (1) would be too much of a problem since its [Normal] difficulty. )
1:00:981 (2) all the way to (2) in the next combo move 1 square down.
1:02:365 (6) Up 1 square. Right 1 square.
1:02:596 (7) Right 2 squares
For (8), (9), (1), (2) maintain 1.2x spacing and re-position to your liking. I don't quite understand the reason for how you placed those beats . battery?

[Hard]
maybe (xD) I fix all of this in another way
0:21:519 (4), (5), (6) Snap align with the end of the (3) slider. (It's a bit nazi modding but it shouldn't effect the following combo with spacing and it makes the song just a tad ever more beautiful then it already is haha.)
0:30:288 (11), (12), (13) Basically, (11) and (13) could be symmetric with (8) and (9). Best bet would be to move the whole combo to the x-axis. Then turn off grid snapping. Make sure spacing is at 0.83x (Hold down alt+shift for fine tuning). Now align (11) and (13) on top of (9) and (8) respectively and then do Shift+J to flip the beat vertically. Finally, fit (12) in between (11) and (13) and you got symmetry. Move the whole combo back to its original position.I fix this in another way
0:30:981 (1) Same spacing, align with (13)
0:49:442 (2), (3), (4). The same thing as 0:30:288. Move to y-axis and match (2) with (5) in the previous combo. (3) with (3). (4) with (1). I fix this in another way
0:49:904 (4)-(10) Might need to re-arrange spacing after you do the last suggestion, but I think it will match up fine afterwards. Just a word of caution.
1:11:365 (1) Move down 2 squares.

[Insane]
This part is new so i didn't notice
0:11:596 (3) - (5) Spacing is irregular. Keep it at a static 1.0x spacing like the rest of the song. (3) and (4) up 1 square. (5) up 2 squares. rdy
0:12:981(1) - (6) Same as above. Keep a 1.0x spacing. rdy
0:12:519 (6) Re-adjust its' spacing due to note placement changing. rdy

0:19:442 (8) Move down 2 squares so it matches (1), (2), (3), in the combo. I don't see the problem
0:23:596 If you were making the combo the shape of half a heart, ignore. If you weren't move (2) down 1 square, left 1 square. Move (3) right 4 squares. Move (4) right 5 squares, down 1 square. Move (5) right 6 squares, down 2 squares.
This also matches 1.0x spacing with the following combo. I like the heart
0:41:365 (4), (5), (6) I don't like the way this looks with the rest of the combo. Either make it into a slider or have (2) be a triplet of notes to match (4), (5), (6). "fixed"
0:45:058(7)-(13) Why did you stop making square jump patterns? Its possible to make 3 squares with the third square ending with (1) of the next combo. The two new squares could be placed anywhere as long as it matches spacing. "fixed"
1:11:365 (1) Move 1 square down.rdy

Really nice designing by the way. Got my +star.

.i did this before and when i read the nazi post and viewtopic.php?f=56&t=16919 well...

FishHook wrote:

.i did this before and when i read the nazi post and viewtopic.php?f=56&t=16919 well...

lol, everyone has their own degree of neatness and tidiness. If I were to Nazi post, I'd have spent an extra 1.5hours checking the spacing between every note. Even the notes between combos. I was only looking at things that caught my eye when playing through that didn't seem right, trying to avoid sounding like a Nazi modder

Glad it helped tho. Gonna go check out what you've done now.