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Tama - Sonna Yume wo Mita no ~lonely dreaming girl~

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Topic Starter
saymun
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, 17 February 2010 at 2:30:23 AM

Artist: Tama
Title: Sonna Yume wo Mita no ~lonely dreaming girl~
Source: Touhou
Tags: Cirno Beloved Tomboyish Daughter
BPM: 125
Filesize: 10532kb
Play Time: 03:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.93 stars, 460 notes)
  2. Normal (3.91 stars, 198 notes)
Download: Tama - Sonna Yume wo Mita no ~lonely dreaming girl~
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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5th beatmap

and 1st time using SB :D
Breeze
Ichigo-Sora
[Overall]
  • - I really love the hitsounds and storyboard in this map ^^
    - File size is a bit over 10mb ): Since there is no video, i has to be under 10 mb
[Normal]
  • Great ^^
[Hard]
  • 03:41:520 (3) - Spacing
Awesome map <3
Topic Starter
saymun

Ichigo-Sora wrote:

[Overall]
  • - I really love the hitsounds and storyboard in this map ^^
    - File size is a bit over 10mb ): Since there is no video, i has to be under 10 mb kk, ill reduce some image sizes
[Normal]
  • Great ^^
[Hard]
  • 03:41:520 (3) - Spacing Hahah oops XD Fixed
Awesome map <3
ouranhshc
awesome map

skin suggestions

*don't kudosu this*
taka1235
star for awesome map
Lilac
This is probably going to be the first time I will do an SB mod. ^_^;

[Storyboard]

black.png should technically be in the background.

bg8.jpg doesn't relate to the previous ones. If it's to have comedy relief, then it's a bad time since this technically is a sad song.

With the blur thing that comes out every once in a while. I think you could trigger loop it to a Finish but that's really up to you.

In fact, you could put all of the SB pictures into a folder so the song folder won't be clustered up. That's up to you though...

There is nothing wrong with the placements so now it would just be a standard hitsound mod.

[Hitsounds]

Normal
00:18:00 (2,6) - Whistle
00:20:88 (4) - Start of slider, put a whistle.
00:21:84 (1,5) - At the start and end of 5, whistle.
00:24:24 (1,3) - At the return arrow of 1 and the start of 3 put a whistle.
00:26:64 (1,2) - Start of 1 and return arrow of 2...well... you know...

Hard
00:18:00 (3,7) - Start of 7, put a whistle.
00:20:88 (4,8) - Start of both sliders, put a whistle.
00:25:68 (4) - Place a whistle.
00:27:36 (2) - Return arrow, place whistle.
00:29:52 (5) - Start of slider, put a whistle.

Other things

Normal
00:57:36 (6) - Keep it in the same distance, but horizontally flip it.
01:00:48 (4,5,6) - Center it, which may require you to move the whole combo.
01:30:00 (3) - You could center this slider if you wanted to.

It's also sad for this difficulty that it isn't mapped to the end like Hard... Ah well...

Hard
02:04:56 - New combo.
02:20:16 - New Combo (A little bit iffy on this one.)

And that's that. Good map! ^_^

Here are some other things you might want to use since you are following a blue theme... Providing it's alright with other people...



Topic Starter
saymun

MarioBros777 wrote:

This is probably going to be the first time I will do an SB mod. ^_^;

[Storyboard]

black.png should technically be in the background. Ok

bg8.jpg doesn't relate to the previous ones. If it's to have comedy relief, then it's a bad time since this technically is a sad song. Changeddd

With the blur thing that comes out every once in a while. I think you could trigger loop it to a Finish but that's really up to you. *lost* first time using SB lol

In fact, you could put all of the SB pictures into a folder so the song folder won't be clustered up. That's up to you though... Meh, who really looks in there when its ranked anyway

There is nothing wrong with the placements so now it would just be a standard hitsound mod.

[Hitsounds]

Normal
00:18:00 (2,6) - Whistle
00:20:88 (4) - Start of slider, put a whistle.
00:21:84 (1,5) - At the start and end of 5, whistle.
00:24:24 (1,3) - At the return arrow of 1 and the start of 3 put a whistle.
00:26:64 (1,2) - Start of 1 and return arrow of 2...well... you know...

Hard
00:18:00 (3,7) - Start of 7, put a whistle.
00:20:88 (4,8) - Start of both sliders, put a whistle.
00:25:68 (4) - Place a whistle.
00:27:36 (2) - Return arrow, place whistle.
00:29:52 (5) - Start of slider, put a whistle.

I added them, but i wanted to leave the start as quiet as possible

Other things

Normal
00:57:36 (6) - Keep it in the same distance, but horizontally flip it. Donee
01:00:48 (4,5,6) - Center it, which may require you to move the whole combo. Donee
01:30:00 (3) - You could center this slider if you wanted to. Donee

It's also sad for this difficulty that it isn't mapped to the end like Hard... Ah well...

Hard
02:04:56 - New combo. Changed
02:20:16 - New Combo (A little bit iffy on this one.) Changed

And that's that. Good map! ^_^

Here are some other things you might want to use since you are following a blue theme... Providing it's alright with other people...
xierbaliti
Very nice map.And here's some suggestion for -Hard- :
01:05:640 (4) - remove it and add a circle at 01:05:880?

02:23:400 (3) - remove it and add acircle at 02:23:640

02:10:680 also add a circle here?

Topic Starter
saymun

xierbaliti wrote:

Very nice map.And here's some suggestion for -Hard- :
01:05:640 (4) - remove it and add a circle at 01:05:880?
[attachment=1:85af8]1.jpg[/attachment:85af8]
02:23:400 (3) - remove it and add acircle at 02:23:640
[attachment=0:85af8]2.jpg[/attachment:85af8]
02:10:680 also add a circle here?
Kk Fixed
xierbaliti
oh I forget something ._.
01:54:240 (5) - end this slider at 01:54:720 will be better. ;)
Topic Starter
saymun
ok fixed x]
taNa
nice map~
Arusha Shuna
Request Accepted
I LOVE CIRNO XD

Normal
00:36:000 (x) - add a note
01:06:480 (2) - move 2 grid up & 1 grid right (turn off dist. snap)
01:06:720 (3) - 2 grid right (turn off dist. snap)
01:06:960 (4) - 3 grud right and 2 grid up (turn off dist. snap)
01:18:960 (2) - a set of slider instead of lots of repeats?
Hard
00:18:480 (5) - whistle?
00:21:840 (6) - slider start, whistle?
00:29:520 (5) - ^
00:51:120 (1) - spacing issue on purpose?
01:54:240 (5) - slider finish at previous white tick and add clap at the end of slider

pretty much the maps are ACE! :) STAR!
Topic Starter
saymun

Arusha Shuna wrote:

Request Accepted
I LOVE CIRNO XD

Normal
00:36:000 (x) - add a note Done
01:06:480 (2) - move 2 grid up & 1 grid right (turn off dist. snap)
01:06:720 (3) - 2 grid right (turn off dist. snap)
01:06:960 (4) - 3 grud right and 2 grid up (turn off dist. snap) Lol, doesn't really make much of a difference but i changed it
01:18:960 (2) - a set of slider instead of lots of repeats? Nahh lol
Hard
00:18:480 (5) - whistle?
00:21:840 (6) - slider start, whistle?
00:29:520 (5) - ^ Added some of the sounds, but i want to keep it quiet as possible
00:51:120 (1) - spacing issue on purpose? Yup, but i don't see any spacing issue here (new combo)
01:54:240 (5) - slider finish at previous white tick and add clap at the end of slider

xierbaliti wrote:

01:54:240 (5) - end this slider at 01:54:720 will be better. ;)

pretty much the maps are ACE! :) STAR!
Lybydose
Hmm, are you finished with the SB, or are you still working on it? Your first post says ~50% done.

Timing seems slightly off. I was doing better when I used -11ms.

The blue color makes it kind of hard to see approach circles against the background. You should make it a little bit lighter.

Normal:

01:28:080 (1,2) - Ok now this is interesting. The vocals here snap to 1/3, not 1/4. If you want to follow the vocals here, I suggest deleting the 2 and making the slider repeat on the purple ticks at 1/3 snap, like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3693

This also happens later at 2:29:520, but you seem to have mapped around it.

Hard:

01:28:080 (1,2,3) - That same part as normal. If you want these synced to the vocals, you'll need to use 1/3 snap.
02:29:520 (8,9,10,11,12) - same as above
03:27:120 (1,2,3,4,5) - and here

02:31:200 (2,3,4) - I found this slightly confusing. It's fine as it is I suppose, but the note at 02:31:309 felt somewhat out of place and threw me off.
Topic Starter
saymun

Lybydose wrote:

Hmm, are you finished with the SB, or are you still working on it? Your first post says ~50% done. Yup, still working on it

Timing seems slightly off. I was doing better when I used -11ms. Its fine for me, ill leave it for now, but if more people think its off, then ill change it

The blue color makes it kind of hard to see approach circles against the background. You should make it a little bit lighter. Done

Normal:

01:28:080 (1,2) - Ok now this is interesting. The vocals here snap to 1/3, not 1/4. If you want to follow the vocals here, I suggest deleting the 2 and making the slider repeat on the purple ticks at 1/3 snap, like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3693 Done

This also happens later at 2:29:520, but you seem to have mapped around it.

Hard:

01:28:080 (1,2,3) - That same part as normal. If you want these synced to the vocals, you'll need to use 1/3 snap.
02:29:520 (8,9,10,11,12) - same as above
03:27:120 (1,2,3,4,5) - and here Fixed all 3

02:31:200 (2,3,4) - I found this slightly confusing. It's fine as it is I suppose, but the note at 02:31:309 felt somewhat out of place and threw me off. Got rid of the triple ;)
Will finish off SB soon
Topic Starter
saymun
haven't decided whether i will make an english translation yet, but just in case i feel like it can someone help me translate the song? i'm noob at japanese D;

SPOILER
heres my attempt:

手を繋いで誰かと笑っていた
I'm holding hands laughing with someone
胸がドキドキなんだろう そんなゆめをみたの
Why does my chest thump? I had such a dream
目を開くといつも同じ月
When i open my eyes, i see the same moon
素敵な夢のはずなのに胸が痛いよ
Even though it was supposed to be a wonderful dream, my chest still hurts

涙なんて流さないわ 寂しくないんだもの!
I'm crying, but I'm not lonely!
夢がくれた笑顔を凍らせといたから
It's because the smile from my dream froze
涙なんて流れないわ あたいは冷たいから
I'm crying, Because I'm cold
どんなに寂しくて恋しくても涙は流れないの
Be it loneliness or love, I can't stop crying

すぐ隣で誰かが笑っていた
Soon after, someone was laughing
笑い返したら消えちゃった そんなゆめをみたの
Just as the laughing came back, it disappeared again. I had such a dream
胸に残る不思議なこのきもち
I have a strange feeling in my chest
嬉しい?悲しい?寂しい? だれかおしえて
Happiness? Sadness? Loneliness? Somebody tell me

涙なんて流さないわ 寂しくないんだもの!
I'm crying, but I'm not lonely!
夢で感じたぬくもり 凍らせといたから
The warmth i felt by my dream,.......err i have no clue
涙なんて流れないわ あたいは冷たいから
I'm crying, Because I'm cold
どんなに寂しくて恋しくても涙は流れないの
Be it loneliness or love, I can't stop crying

涙なんて流さないわ 寂しくないんだもの!
I'm crying, but I'm not lonely!
夢を願う心を凍らせといたから
again..no clue
涙なんて流れないわ あたいは冷たいから
I'm crying, but I'm not lonely!
どんなに寂しくて恋しくても涙は流れないの
Be it loneliness or love, I can't stop crying

ねぇ誰か聞いてよ あたいはひとりぼっち?
Hey...someone listen to me...Am i all alone?
だれかそばにいてよ 誰かあたためてよ
?
そしてそのまま溶けてしまいたい…
And i want to melt like this


lol fail translation D:

scratch that cbf SBing anymore lol
[DBF]
[Normal]
01:12:720 (1) - add finish in slider's end.
01:13:680 (3) - ^

all perfect.
[Hard]
all perfect.

oh my eyes!! its godlike!! Star~

i think Cirno love you~
YGOkid8

saymun wrote:

MarioBros777 wrote:

In fact, you could put all of the SB pictures into a folder so the song folder won't be clustered up. That's up to you though... Meh, who really looks in there when its ranked anyway
Oh you'll be surprised how many people do. I for one, do. I am grateful m980 did the folder thing with Don't Stop Me Now, for it was interesting to see all the storyboard stuff, etc. So, best to do it with yours as well ;)

General
For a first time at SB, you're doing very well IMO.

I personally don't like the big vibrate thing at 01:03:120... and the rest of them. Doesn't suit imo. But see what other people think. orz

Normal

Combo Mod~
02:09:360 (5) - New Combo.
02:21:840 (5) - ^ (maybe? [if you choose to do this, and there are similar places like this, change them too])
02:29:040 (5) - ^

Hard

Combo Mod~
Too long a list D:. So edited .osu file for myself. See what you think. If you don't like ALL of it, just ignore it. If you find some useful, change what you think shouldn't be changed, if it isn't too much of a hassle:
Download: Tama - Sonna Yume wo Mita no ~lonely dreaming girl~ (saymun) [Hard].osu

Normal Mod~
02:35:520 ~ 03:02:040 - Blimey, this is a long break. Try not to go over 15 seconds, it gets a bit boring otherwise.
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