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TERRA - Touka Renjou [Osu|Taiko]

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ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, March 09, 2010 at 1:59:00 AM

Artist: TERRA
Title: Touka Renjou
Source: Pop'n Music 15 Adventure
Tags: lepidopodus DJPop
BPM: 185
Filesize: 6676kb
Play Time: 01:57
Difficulties Available:
  1. DJPop's Insane (4.89 stars, 359 notes)
  2. Easy (2.19 stars, 100 notes)
  3. Hard (4.62 stars, 176 notes)
  4. lepidon! - Taiko Oni (4.98 stars, 441 notes)
  5. Normal+ (4.1 stars, 149 notes)
Download: TERRA - Touka Renjou
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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REDOWNLOAD - ADDED A DIFF FROM DJPOP :D

thank you for the taiko map lepidopodus ( did i spell that right?)

thank you for the hitcircles mystearica and thank you shinde for helping with the skin.
oh and thank you kyto for the SB
Last edited by ouranhshc , edited 30 times in total.
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
excelent song =) good skin and mapping

[general]

-Add tag and source
-Add whistle and finish

[Normal]
-I suggest -1 in HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty
-Maybe a little difficult for "normal"

[Hard]
-I don't see problems =)


Good luck and my star ;)
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
First, amazing map. Not much really I can say.

General:
Take off the countdown. It sounds bad 3:.

Hard:
00:20:790 (1) - Make this slider's ends even.
01:05:222 (2) - ^ (The end just needs to be moved one small grid up.)
01:07:817 (2) - ^

I don't mod takio, sorry 3:.

Star <3.
arien666
6,278 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
No problem on Taiko diff :3
And, yay!
Good luck :3

Here's my star.
H1ko
367 posts
Joined December 2008
H1ko
>3<
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
NoHitter
Overall
Hitsounds sound too soft.
The storyboard is kind of pointless. Maybe put a pass/fail sequence? (many flowers fall if you pass but few if you fail?)

Normal
01:49:330 (x) - Add break here

Hard
01:49:330 (x) - Add break here
01:54:844 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This part sounds weird. Try adding a note between 4 and 5 and/or add notes on 01:56:141 and 01:56:303
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
Beautiful skin

[SB]
  1. Those flowers are disappeared suddenly before they off screen completely, look a little werid :
[General]
  1. I feel countdown didn't fit this song, it's boring :/ Depend on you whether keep it
  2. Please set a preview time
[Normal]
  1. 01:49:330 Break - I feel this break is unnecessary
  2. 02:00:357 (1) - silence the spinner end better imo
[Hard]
  1. 01:29:871 (1) - This spinner didn't fit music well :/
  2. 01:49:330 Break - I feel this break is unnecessary
  3. 02:00:357 (1) - silence the spinner end better imo
I'm sorry I don't know how to mod taiko map, so pass the taiko diff.

nice map
star
NaomiMinette
osu! Alumni
3,916 posts
Joined June 2009
NaomiMinette
Lol, Taiko's difficulty threw me off. Either way, it sounds great.
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
purple and gold looks nice :P
personally I think the offset sounds better at 1678 (don't forget to resnap all notes if you change)

Normal:
slider velocity is pretty high for a normal..
00:57:438 (4) - stack on top of 00:54:844 (4) (turn off distance snap if you have to)
01:51:276 (1,2) - center on grid?
01:57:114 (1) - end at 02:00:033?

Hard:
00:40:249 (3,4,5) - move all of these down by 1 tiny grid
*same spinner comment*

taiko:
cant mod sorry
why does this diff have half the bpm when its an insane?

*star*
Cyril Scarlet
osu! Alumni
3,877 posts
Joined May 2009
Cyril Scarlet
NICE ♥
kiddly
885 posts
Joined February 2009
kiddly
easy:
slider velocity is a bit high for a easy?

normal:
good.

hard:
01:23:407 (1) -remove new combo.
01:31:191 (1) - ^
01:36:27 - remove timing point?

taiko
sorry I cant mod taiko maps...



good map
star
simplistiC
237 posts
Joined April 2009
simplistiC
[General]
Not really sure, but I think you should resnap all your timing points.

[Easy]
00:54:867 (4) - I think Kiai would be better here o_o.
01:09:137 (4,1) - Spacing?

[Normal]
00:54:867 (4) - I think Kiai would be better here o_o.
01:03:299 (4,1) - Spacing? Not really an issue for me though.

[Hard]
00:20:813 (1) - This kind of threw me off the first time. Not a huge problem though.
01:13:677 (1,2,3,4,5) - This looks uneven! >:(

Looks nice. Starrrrr~
saymun
299 posts
Joined July 2009
saymun
Hard:
SPOILER
00:41:083 (6,7) - spacing? i dunno if you would want to fix it, but i would probably start a new combo at (5)
00:57:461 (4,5) - i personally don't like this, i wuld prefer if you replace it with 00:54:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - but with horizontal flip
00:54:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - i like pentagons x] rotate by err.. 72deg interval?

Normal:
SPOILER
00:50:650 (4,5) - move right 1 space

Easy:
SPOILER
RAWR XD

AngelHoney
2,155 posts
Joined May 2009
AngelHoney
nice song nice map nice skin nice hitsound nice sb nice mapper :3

really like this song XD

Star&Kudosu
lepidopodus
3,548 posts
Joined November 2009
lepidopodus
fixed offset to 1678. Ofcourse notes are snapped and timing section snapped.

Originally BPM of this song is 92.5. ouran doubled that to make better map(slider speed and spacing I guess), but for Taiko map we don't have to do that. (there's some exceptions but not this one)

and for uninherited timing section in 54,867ms, this is for bar-dividing line which appears when playing Taiko mode. For standard map it's not important but for taiko it is important. (see kita saitama2000 mapped by arken1015. he used bunch of uninherit timing sections for bar-dividing line...)

Oh am I didn't star this yet? star~

Download: TERRA - Touka Renjou (ouranhshc) [lepidon! - Taiko Oni].osu
Matma Rex
586 posts
Joined March 2009
Matma Rex
Cute :D

[Overall]
Default osu! cursor blends with spinner background/circle. Skin the cursor too?
WTF is that sliderball. If you want this thing (is it hat?) to rotate smoothly, gimme a minute, I'll do it.
Convert spinner-background to jpg (yes, it works now. I think).
In storyboard, there are 3 flowers partially overlapping each other (second biggest grid to the right, counting from middle of screen). It looks weird, delete one of them?

[Easy]
00:37:353 (1) - not symmetrical enough.

[Normal]
01:26:326 (3,4) - sorta surprising and doesnt sound good. Delete (3)?
01:42:056 (2,3) - sorta surprising and doesnt sound good. Delete (2)?
01:54:867 (1,2,3) - replace with reverse slider, like you did earlier?

[Hard]
00:45:786 (3) - stacking moves it a bit up/left and breaks your pattern a bit. You might manually stack it, if you want to.
01:27:299 (5,7) - partially overlap each other.
01:33:786 (1,3) - try reversing (Ctrl+R) instead of flipping horizontally, they don't fit each other now.
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
[Hard]
01:45:948 (1) - end this spiner at 01:49:353?

[Normal]
01:28:596 (1) - end this spiner at 01:30:542?
01:45:948 (1) - end this spiner at 01:49:353?
01:57:137 (1) - end this spiner at 02:00:056?

[Easy]
01:57:137 (1) - end this spiner at 02:00:056?

Starrrr ~ our ~ ^.^
AngelHoney
2,155 posts
Joined May 2009
AngelHoney
Hard

00:19:191 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4170
01:21:137 - add 3 circles ? or a slider ?
01:24:056 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4171
01:23:407 (1) - ^
01:27:299 (5) - end of slider move 1 gird dowm ,and 01:27:786 (6) - move 1 gird right


XD
Shinxyn
osu! Alumni
1,179 posts
Joined June 2008
Shinxyn
Can't say I like the slider slider sound much... though it makes the slider tick sound stand out more... (in a good way)
The map could use more hitsounds, not just the tap sound from taiko... (I was thinking the actual drum hitsound from the taiko skin), cuz the tapping sound doesn't fit some parts of the song (even the default soft-hitnormal could work)
I get a bit early, offset -3? no biggie

Easy-
Fine

Normal-
Fine as well~

Hard-
01:14:326 (5) - just cuz your map seems soooo aligned and nice, up a tick or two! xD
01:38:975 (7) - new combo? (like the next verse of vocal after this)

I say replace the custom hitsound for the default soft hitsound where the light gong sound is in the song.. like.. 00:12:056,00:32:813,00:53:569, and so on... also spinner ends.
Only thing I didn't like was the continuous tapping sound in the whole map since it kinda dominates the whole song.
Gens
osu! Alumni
3,485 posts
Joined August 2008
Gens
[General]
  1. Yeah, IMO it needs more hitsounds.
[Storyboard]
  1. I didn't like how the flowers popped out like that, so I fixed that for you. I also added NoHItter's suggestion. ;)
    [attachment=0:7e8cc]TERRA - Touka Renjou (ouranhshc).osb[/attachment:7e8cc]
[Kiai Time]

I think the Kiai Time intervals would look better like this:

00:53:569 ~ 01:03:948
01:14:326 ~ 01:35:083
01:36:380 ~ fountain

Either way, you need to snap them correctly to the timeline!

[Easy]
  1. I agree the slider velocity is too fast for an Easy.
[Normal]
  1. Feels a bit more "Normal+" with all those jumps.
  2. OD feels a bit too low.
~ ~ ~

Well, that's it for now. I see you're creating some interesting patterns now. :)

EDIT: Oh yes, almost forgot, the "star.png" element is not used.
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