1. Ice Queen (4,71 stars, 434 notes)
2. Meltwater (2,43 stars, 79 notes)
3. Snowfall (4,07 stars, 289 notes)
4. WyndII Style (4,84 stars, 454 notes)

Astom wrote:

[general]
-personally, I don't like not being able to see the initial number of a combo, for example 03:08:855 in [Snowfall]
-I don't see much problems in gameplay

[meltwater]
-00:14:515 start new combo here - Done.

[Snowfall]
-00:41:968 start new combro here and finish it in 00:44:232 Done.
-01:36:307 to 01:38:005 (1) (1) (2) strange combo, maybe u can make it in another way - It's not strange, it fits the music.
-03:13:383 start new combo here - It fits the music too. Just listen to it.

[Ice Queen]

-Same problem with combos
-01:34:609(3) . 01:35:175(1) different distance from 01:33:477(2) . 01:34:043(3) - It's intuitive. It doesn't need any changes.

[WyndII]

-There are no problems that I see

I like u song =), good luck and my star

fartownik wrote:

It has 4 diffs...

General
02:27:817-02:50:458 in all diff (except meltwater) feels offbeat, i know because that part is a little hard to be mapped but still...
01:27:250-01:35:883 part is has a feeling of "calm" consider lower the volume a bit on that part in [Snowfall] and [Ice Queen] diff? (or maybe also in [WyndII])
Meltwater
00:28:383 (1) - make the slider curves look like 00:29:515 (2)
00:54:986 (3) - screenshot spoiler box'd

SPOILER

move the green circled point 2 tiny grid up
Snowfall
00:52:439 (x) - add a note?
00:53:571 (3) - remove?
01:15:364 (5) - screenshot spoiler boxed

SPOILER

remove the red circled point and move the green circled point 3 tiny grid right. (make sure it's EXACTLY 3 grid right, no grid up or down) to make the slider shape has the same diagonal as 01:14:515 (3,4)
01:22:439 (x) - add a note
01:58:100 (x) - ^
02:09:987 (x) - ^
02:10:553 (x) - ^
02:38:854 (2) - make the slider shape symmetry
02:39:421 (3) - ^
Ice Queen
00:44:515 (x) - add note?
01:00:930 (1,2,3,4) - no stack?
01:43:666 (4) - move the most bottom slider point 1 tiny grid right?
01:52:439 (x) - add note
01:58:100 (x) - ^
02:02:203 (2) - make the slider curves look like 02:01:779 (1) or vice versa?
02:18:336 (5,6) - screenshot says it

SPOILER

WyndII
00:29:939 (5) - start in the previous blue tick and lengthen the slider by 1/4 beat
00:35:175 (4) - shorten the slider by 1/4 beat
01:22:015 (x) - add note?
01:29:515 (7) - screenshot spoilerbox'd

SPOILER

move the greencircled point by 1 tiny grid right (again, must EXACTLY 1 tiny grid right, no up or downs) to make the slider shape has the same diagonal as 01:28:949 (6)
01:41:967 (1) - screenshot spoilerbox'd

SPOILER

move the greencircled point by 1 tiny grid left
01:43:100 (3) - screenshot spoilerbox'd

SPOILER

move the greencircled point by 1 tiny grid left. move 01:43:666 (4,5) 1 tiny grid down afterwards
03:17:062 (1) - silence at the end

Arusha Shuna wrote:

THAT FRIKKIN LONG MOD POST UP~

gdeath wrote:

Offset: 12,271

[Meltwater]
00:42:958 (2) - dont follow lyric.make it start on 00:43:100 and end on 00:43:383
there is an accent on 00:43:100.i think players can beat it easier if you follow this suggestion
01:01:779 (x) - add a note?
01:02:345 (x) - ^
01:19:185 (3) - i'd remove this note and reverse 01:18:194 (2)

[Snowfall]
01:23:874 (1) - i'd make it totally quiet

[Ice Queen]
01:23:854 (1) - i'd make it totally quiet

[WyndII]
01:34:609 (5) - try volume~30%~
02:34:609 (3) - ^
02:35:741 (1) - ^
02:36:590 (4,5) - ^
02:38:005 (3) - ^
02:39:137 (1) - ^
02:40:269 (5) - ^
02:41:118 (2) - ^
02:50:175 (4) - ^
03:05:741 (4) - move 1 grid to the down~level 3~(nazi)
03:17:062 (1) - i'd make it totally quiet

Nice map
Star.

Dangaard wrote:

try offset 6 316 ms (it's your current offset set back to fix the metronome and +9ms)

well, nice map, actually I've had enough of this winter, but I really enjoyed this map
fumoffu star :3

Dangaard wrote:

Don't forget to resnap the time sections (at least Kiai).