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Tonoko

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Tonoko 2010-02-23T14:58:57+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年3月7日 at 13:14:36

Artist: KOKIA
Title: Moonlight Shadow
Tags: Ningen-tte Sonna Mono ne Mike Oldfield deepsea
BPM: 128.94
Filesize: 4083kb
Play Time: 03:34
Difficulties Available:

deepsea's Shadow (4.63 stars, 395 notes)
Moonlight (2.07 stars, 166 notes)
Night (4.39 stars, 354 notes)
Shadow (4.8 stars, 422 notes)

Download: KOKIA - Moonlight Shadow
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Kokia ^.^

ty all.

Last edited by Tonoko 2011-03-11T16:00:10+00:00, edited 51 times in total.

Dark_D_old

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Dark_D_old 2010-03-13T15:58:35+00:00

nice

acethical

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acethical 2010-03-25T05:03:03+00:00

sweet!
star

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subarasikibuta

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subarasikibuta 2010-03-31T03:10:14+00:00

haruhiteamsos

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haruhiteamsos 2010-04-30T16:11:10+00:00

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freefish

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freefish 2010-05-21T01:44:32+00:00

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Cheery

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Cheery 2010-05-21T05:23:43+00:00

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Doomsday

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Doomsday 2010-05-21T20:47:31+00:00

Is this a collab map? It feels like Kioukiou starts mapping halfway through Shadow

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these

Timing seems fine
No tags? Maybe you could put "Vocal Rock" In there

[MOONLIGHT]

Looks good

[SHADOW]

03:18:701 (5,6,7,8) - These jumps feel a little weird. They don't really fit with the music well to me. Maybe you could put these into a different pattern?

Feels kinda overmapped, with all those streams, but it isn't too bad, so Its nice.

Nice mapset. Maybe you could map another diff to go in between Moonlight and Shadow, but that isn't really necessary. Good job

Starred

Tonoko

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Tonoko 2010-05-22T01:49:00+00:00

Doomsday93 wrote:
Is this a collab map? It feels like Kioukiou starts mapping halfway through Shadow [^.^]

Timing seems fine
No tags? Maybe you could put "Vocal Rock" In there
[MOONLIGHT]

Looks good

[SHADOW]

03:18:701 (5,6,7,8) - These jumps feel a little weird. They don't really fit with the music well to me. Maybe you could put these into a different pattern? I am thinking about it

Feels kinda overmapped, with all those streams, but it isn't too bad, so Its nice.

Nice mapset. Maybe you could map another diff to go in between Moonlight and Shadow, but that isn't really necessary. Good job
hard to map a middle diff between them

Shinxyn

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Shinxyn 2010-05-22T04:35:17+00:00

Hmm...

Moonlight-
Kinda short compared to Shadow, but other than that, its fine.

Shadow
So.. much... triplets... not a fan of slow streams like this x_x
01:32:614 (1,2) - have these as soft hitsound set? (like 01:25:169 (1,2))
Hmm...... rest of map seems solid...
Don't like the ending though... maybe fill in those short breaks...?

Yea... please map something in between Moonlight and Shadow (at the same length as Shadow, or something between)
You don't have to though x.x

Good job, not much to point out x_x

Tonoko

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Tonoko 2010-05-22T07:32:38+00:00

filled in short breaks ><

hmm...to add a normal+ diff seems necessary

but~~the diff's name ....

maybe[night]

aRiskOfRain

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aRiskOfRain 2010-05-26T17:12:20+00:00

This song is win.

Shadow;

00:25:378 (8,9) - I do not approve of this spacing.
00:33:521 (6) - New combo.
00:57:484 (2,3) - Spacing.
01:28:891 (4,5) - I'd change this spacing, but it's up to you.
I approve of the normal/soft sampleset mix going on here.
02:18:213 (3,4,5) - This spacing is a bit large, wouldn't you agree?
03:21:028 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This is wierd to play.

deepsea

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deepsea 2010-10-03T16:17:26+00:00

@___@

ignorethis

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ignorethis 2010-10-08T05:42:20+00:00

remove .osb file and reupload

<Night>
01:10:738 (7) - New combo
01:14:460 (14) - ^
01:27:023 (7,8,9) - Too loud
01:34:468 (7,8,9) - ^
01:59:128 (2,3) - Sound bad, either remove 2 or add a circle and adjust the slider
02:13:553 - Add a note

<Shadow>
00:25:139 (3,4,5) - I can see how they were arranged but they're weird
00:53:987 (1,2,3,4) - Move 2 and 4 to red ticks or add notes after them
01:04:689 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
03:23:114 (8) - Move right a bit

Niva

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Niva 2010-10-08T13:49:43+00:00

A new map

Allow me to mod your map once more

[General]
-> From what I see on this page :

# In 2002, Japanese artist Kokia included a cover version on her 7th single, "Ningen-tte Sonna Mono ne"

Yes, you can add that to the tags. Also from the same page I found that the original artist is Mike Oldfield, you can add that to the tags too.

[Moonlight]
00:22:347 (2) - Add clap at finish?
00:25:139 (6) - Curve it? Seems better because the previous 00:23:277 (3) is curved too
00:44:681 (2,3,4) - This perhaps?

SPOILER

And you can place the next (1) in the center.
00:54:918 (5) - The only triple 1/2 circles on the map... Not something you have to fix, but I prefer changing it to repeating slider

[Night]
00:32:583 (4) - Move the clap to (6)
01:14:460 (14,15,16,17) - You can just fan it...

SPOILER

Slider fans are miraculous

01:59:128 (2,3) - Sounds forced
03:13:576 (1,2) - Place in center?

[Shadow]
00:25:371 (4,5) - Unexpected spacing change?
00:56:546 (3) - 1/2 longer?
01:36:096 (6,7,8,9) - Create a fan pattern (again) so the jump is from (7) to (8), not (8) to (9) ?

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