1. Box's Easy (1,46 stars, 75 notes)
2. Hard (2,87 stars, 183 notes)
3. Insane (3,81 stars, 231 notes)
4. Normal (2,01 stars, 110 notes)

Gray Veyron wrote:

Hi, Requested via in-game! omg first modder to mod this

Almost a perfect map for me, but got some mods for it.

[> General <]

1. - Background is gud, 1206x768 is not gud, Since it's alike widescreen, resize to 1366x768... Just an opinion... okay I'll fix it
2. - Short version of the song :c o3o

[> Box's Easy <]

1. 00:36:638 (2,3) - You should extend slider (2) and remove circle (3), due this track is likely the same on 00:25:343 (2) -
2. 00:42:285 (2) - Almost the same reason as above, but just vice versa
3. 00:45:108 (5) - Add NC, new track.
4. 00:49:343 (4) - What does this slider follows in the song track?
5. 00:54:991 (5) - ^
6. 01:00:638 (1) - ^, hmmffff, not gonna repeat this again, try finding them yourself.
7. 01:13:343 (2) - Move this slider on x:324|y:244 to complete the diamond formation for the previous notes.
8. - Pretty fine here, no comment~

[> Normal <]

1. 00:30:285 (2) - I felt that the new track there is quite intense and needs to be clickable, i prefer reduce the reverse and add a circle next to it. ok hope it's better now
2. 00:33:814 (2,1) - Likely nazi, recorrect your blanket here. whatever, improved a bit xD
3. 00:54:638 (4,1,2) - How about forming this as a triangle formation? sounds good but at least for now I prefer to keep it as it is
4. 01:01:343 (2) - Same as 00:30:285 (2) - nah here shouldn't be a problem imo
5. 01:11:579 (4,1,2) - Same as 00:54:638 (4,1,2) -, you can also get to stack slider (3) on circle (4), and that'll replace off the overlap. I tried and DS will be broken, I think ><
6. 01:24:638 (3,4,1) - ^ same as 00:54:638 (4,1,2) -
7. 01:29:579 (2) - Ctrl + G? Watch the spacing. okay, should be fine
8. - Also fine here, i've seen you put your mapping much attention on symmetry, but that's fine and okay for me.

[> Hard <]

1. AR -1, too fast appearance for a Hard diff. -0,5 better
2. 00:24:991 (4,2) - I'm not sure about you that this overlap you made, split? ok did something different
3. 00:30:285 (2) - Same reason as the previous diff. ^
4. 00:42:285 (1,2,3,4) - Try recorrecting your full blanket here, since slider (4) ruined the formation by touching slider (1) a little. well I moved (4) a bit
5. 00:50:049 (2,3) - Nazi, a little more leftgrid moving for a perfect stacking. o3o didn't understand, (2) is perfectly stacked
6. 00:57:461 (4) - Ctrl + G? I like the flow on that way :3 sure
7. 01:07:696 (1,2,3,4) - Weird pattern placements, make a Square or a diamond formation here.
8. 01:10:167 (4) - Curve this slider to blanket slider (2), and also perform a Triangle-Cycle formation. it's ok imo, maybe a bit weird but still looks good and totally playable
9. - Symmetry looks awesome here, Good job at making them!

[> Insane <]

1. 00:25:696 (2,3) - The song track is not strong enough for a jump like this one, just use the same spacing as you used on 00:25:343 (1,2) - moved a bit
2. 00:28:520 (2) - I think this slider looks almost touches the healthbar, can you move it downgrid a little? Just a little.. sure, hope it's fine now
3. 00:31:696 (3,2,3) - Almost stacked perfectly, recorrect it. oops, fixed
4. 00:45:814 (3,2) - A bit overlap, Try to move circle (2) upgrid. Or, my opinion, move on x:88|y:100 to perform a diamond formation. fixed a bit
5. 00:53:579 (1) - Ctrl + G? Same reason as the previous diff :3 Also it makes a jump that's a little challenging, and fits for an Insane diff. good idea but I prefer my pattern because this http://puu.sh/cnsuU/4ebc405fc3.jpg
6. 00:54:285 (3) - ^ nah now it's better uwu
7. 01:29:932 (7,8) - Well, you should place these two circles somewhere than here, it's a little complicating when stacked on circle (4) and (5) that completed the formation. How about moving circle (7) to x:384|y:328, and circle (8) on vertical flipping(symmetry ofc). That'll perform a triangle formation for an end of playtime. And ofc, almost big jumps. seems good
8. - Not as much as i can say, this diff is really fun to play with your symmetry patterns. Greeeaatt (=3=)b

That's all i can find on you whole map, Awesome mapping btw

appleeaterx wrote:

Hitsounds

* 00:39:108 - There's a tone shift in the song, why not put a whistle here? unnecessary imo :c
* 01:08:049 (2,4) - Instead of ignoring these beats, try putting whistles here with a lower volume than (1,3) - see how it works out. hmm I'm not sure for now
* 01:30:373 (1) - Maybe increase spinner hitsounds every 1/2 tick near the end? Would fit the song. done in another way

Normal

* 00:30:285 (2,3,4,5) - Try to keep the nice circular flow you had earlier. Try this. hm, fixed

* 00:38:049 (1,2) - A mirror pattern looks better imo. maybe

* 01:11:579 (4) - and 01:14:402 (4) - I'd place these somewhere else, to have a similar flow like you had at (1,2,3) - use the code if you want. improved a bit, I'll see if I use your code ~

448,116,71579,1,8,0:0:0:0:
476,224,71932,6,0,L|424:264,2,55,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,192,72638,2,0,L|320:232,2,55,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,116,73343,2,0,P|403:59|255:79,1,220,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,136,74402,1,8,0:0:0:0:

Can't really find anything else

Hard

* 01:07:696 (1,2,3,4) - I thought you'd use symmetry here. there is symmetry between 01:08:049 (2,3,4) - :3
* 01:18:991 (1,2,3,4,5) - Similar to what I said in the Insane diff, but here's it's okay I guess. There's a different sound at the slider. o3o sounds good imo
* 01:29:579 (3,4,1) - I don't really see why you broke the symmetry here. Looks a little weird to me now, try these? I wanted to add a jump but fixed

Nice start you kept DS most of the times!

Insane

* I couldn't find a lot in this diff, so most of these are just suggestions based on my own mapping style - just to see if you like it or not. So none of these are really a problem ^^
* 00:24:814 (5) - This slider is offbeat. The beat starts at (4). I suggest you to have slider, 2 circles, slider, two circles. Sounds better - it sounds weird now, and especially since you put a whistle on (4), which makes (5) sound silent. fixed
* 00:38:049 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - My personal mapping preference, but the beat changes at 00:39:108 - so there are 6 regular beats. Since you have a star pattern there, you only have 5. So why not put a hexagon, and at 00:39:108 you change pattern, because the music changes. looks fine I guess

217,258,38049,5,0,0:0:0:0:
294,125,38226,1,0,0:0:0:0:
179,191,38402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,192,38579,1,0,0:0:0:0:
217,125,38755,1,0,0:0:0:0:
294,258,38932,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,272,39108,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,380,39285,1,0,0:0:0:0:

* 01:19:873 (6,7,8) - Make these equal DS like you did at 00:38:049 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) ? I don't really see a reason why (7) and (8) are far from each other. The beat between (6,7) is actually stronger, so if you want to add a jump shouldn't it be on (6,7)? I feel like it's good enough, jump fits in that moment o3o
* 01:23:755 (2,3) - Not sure if you intended to do this, but put these a little lower, so it's in the middle of (1)? it's like this because the flow o3o shouldn't be a problem
* 01:28:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - <3 c:

Nice use of symmetry and jumps in this diff. Not too overmapped and not too jumpy, good job!

Sorry for the short mod, couldn't find a lot, this might help you more
Really nice mapset and good luck =w=

1. Try to get a 1366x768 BG. This is the recommended resolution, so it's highly suggested to use it.
2. Your colours are too similar, they look all the same. Try to use a bit more colourful set of colours to make gameplay more enjoyable?

1. 00:45:814 (6,1) - the overlap itself is quite tricky, moreover, (1)'s shape might bug beginners. The slider changes its direction too suddenly and the curve is agressive.
2. 00:49:343 (4) - 00:54:991 (5) - these new combos are a bit too long.
3. 01:06:285 (1,1) - beginners might miss the 01:06:991 (2) - because (1) and (1) are too close.
   
   I like the diff, but you could make your combos a bit lshorter.

1. Please, use Circe Size 3,5. It'd help to create a better balanced spread and improve the diff gap betwen E-N and N-H. Moreover, CS 3,5 looks better.
2. The main problem here is that you don't use enough 1/2s. it makes your Normal too easy, and then, your hard is full of 1/2s, which makes the spread sorta unbalanced. What 'm trying to say, is that you should consider adding more 1/2 cpatterns in order to imporve the balance. of the mapset.
   
   Feel free to ask me if you need any help with that.

1. 00:42:285 (1,2,3,4) - the last jump feels unfitting and shape of the whole pattern can get sway better. I assume, that you were trying to make a blanket-pattern. Maybe you can make it neater? Example
2. 01:08:755 (4,1) - the music gets calm at this part, therefore, the jumps feels exaggerated and unfitting. Could you keep the DS consistent here, please?
3. 01:22:167 (2,3) - a little jump here would be alright, Ctrl+G them. So, there will be ajump like you did it with 01:13:343 (1,2) - and 01:17:579 (1,2).
   
   Your flow feels a bit forced, but it matches with the symmetrical style. I guess it's all fine. Anyway, try to work a bit more on your flow and you'll get a great diff!

1. Sorry, but I fail to understand the logic of your jumps. Basically, they do not represent the music and harddly correspond with it. For example, 00:28:167 (1,2,3) - calm part and really strong jumps here, while 00:30:638 (4,1) - the strong beat at (1)'s head has just a tiny jump. Same happens with 00:33:814 (1,2,3,4,1) - and becomes even more confusing during kiai. Please, try to focus on making your jumps more fitting with the song.
   

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, as requested.

[General]

1. Try to get a 1366x768 BG. This is the recommended resolution, so it's highly suggested to use it. sure, I have to do it orz
2. Your colours are too similar, they look all the same. Try to use a bit more colourful set of colours to make gameplay more enjoyable? we'll see

[Normal]

1. Please, use Circe Size 3,5. It'd help to create a better balanced spread and improve the diff gap betwen E-N and N-H. Moreover, CS 3,5 looks better. I've used CS:3,3; if it's not enough I'll use CS:3,5 o3o
2. The main problem here is that you don't use enough 1/2s. it makes your Normal too easy, and then, your hard is full of 1/2s, which makes the spread sorta unbalanced. What 'm trying to say, is that you should consider adding more 1/2 cpatterns in order to imporve the balance of the mapset. working on it
   
   Feel free to ask me if you need any help with that.

[Hard]

1. 00:42:285 (1,2,3,4) - the last jump feels unfitting and shape of the whole pattern can get sway better. I assume, that you were trying to make a blanket-pattern. Maybe you can make it neater? Example I hope it's fine now o3o
2. 01:08:755 (4,1) - the music gets calm at this part, therefore, the jumps feels exaggerated and unfitting. Could you keep the DS consistent here, please? hm, I don't really agree, those jumps fits well imo because (4) marks last calm's part and (1) is the beginning of second kiai, I don't know how to explain it better but shouldn't be a problem, at least for me
3. 01:22:167 (2,3) - a little jump here would be alright, Ctrl+G them. So, there will be ajump like you did it with 01:13:343 (1,2) - and 01:17:579 (1,2). it's a good idea, but I won't change it for now, I'm not totally sure ><
   
   Your flow feels a bit forced, but it matches with the symmetrical style. I guess it's all fine. Anyway, try to work a bit more on your flow and you'll get a great diff!

[Insane]

1. Sorry, but I fail to understand the logic of your jumps. Basically, they do not represent the music and harddly correspond with it. For example, 00:28:167 (1,2,3) - calm part and really strong jumps here, while 00:30:638 (4,1) - the strong beat at (1)'s head has just a tiny jump. Same happens with 00:33:814 (1,2,3,4,1) - and becomes even more confusing during kiai. Please, try to focus on making your jumps more fitting with the song. I know, you are right. I'll try to fix it, sorry if this disappointed you x_x

Jumps on the Insane and E-N-H balance could use some work . I think you still have some space to improve.

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Best of luck!

Kenterz wrote:

Hello, as requested :3

General

I don't know what is that weird size for the BG, I suggest to use 1024x768 as the ranking criteria said.

Normal

00:53:579 (3) - Why don't you use the same slider as 00:52:167 (1) to make a good symmetry ? The diff is very symmetric, so it'll be logical yeah maybe but I wanted to use another flow ~ at least the beginning is symmetric though :3

This is the only thing I can notice on this, the others things would be useless suggestions ;w;

Hard

00:42:285 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest this kind of pattern to continue the blanket with 00:42:108 (3) and to make a great circular movement : well I did another thing because Bakari's mod ~

SPOILER

00:52:167 (1) - I suggest to use 2 construction points for the curve, it'll make a better curve and blanket uh, I tried to fix blanket
01:06:285 (1,2) - The curves here are quite ugly, I really suggest to decrease them a little bit, it looks very strange atm maybe
01:07:696 (1,2,3,4) - Why don't you try to makes it look like a square ? It'll decrease the distance between 01:08:755 (4,1) if you do this :3 I prefer actual pattern at least for now x_x

Insane

I don't know about the HP... 8 is quite a lot, it'll make some people raging imo =/ sure, changed
The 1/4 beats are not here on the song, so most of the 1/4 patterns are overmapped and must be deleted. not sure about this, I've checked all the rhythm and should be fine ~ as long as they fit, sounds good imo o3o

00:47:932 (1,2,3) - You can make a better blanket with (1,2) on (3). fixed

I'm so sorry for the short mod, I hope it was helpful anyway :3

Good luck <3

1. http://puu.sh/cHwpJ/4edcf63c1a.png
2. 00:35:226 (1) - Podrías conciderar aquí hacer en haya algo qué golpear en 00:35:579 - dado que ahí comienza el grito.
3. 00:40:873 (1) - por qué no hacer un jump sencillo con este?
4. Casi que todos los triples son overmap xD y es chistoso que por ejemplo, en 00:52:079 (6) - si el triple estuviera es en 00:51:902 - va mejor con la música. Igual en 00:54:902 (6) - .
   Casualmente en 00:56:138 (4) - hiciste el triple tal que concuerda con el patrón que te acabo de decir.
   Es decir, el triple no va para terminar en el comienzo del compas, sinó en el pedaso anterior a este:
   
   
   En muchos está bien puesto, pero en otros no. Por favor corregelos.
5. 00:46:696 - aquí va un golpe lo bastante fuente como para ignorarlo, imo.
6. 00:52:343 - ^
7. 01:02:932 - ^
8. 01:14:226 - ^
9. 01:09:108 (1) - podrías conciderar acelerar este slider a 1.1x, y aumentarle es espaciado a 01:09:991 (3) - y a 01:10:167 (4,5,6) -
10. 01:26:049 (1) - Bueno, quizás podrías conciderar algo como esto:
    
    

1. 00:29:402 (3) - No siento cómodo el flow aquí. Por favor, muevelos un poco para que quede más suave:
   
   
2. 00:51:814 (3) - stack
3. 00:52:873 (3) - es un poco brusco el flow aquí. (Nota el intento de blanket cuadrado xD)
   
   
4. 01:03:108 (5,6) - En estos el flow tampoco lo siento tan cómodo como me gustaría. Pienso que lo ideal sería hacer stack de los dos sobre 01:01:343 (2) - , de forma que quede un jump a 2.1, lo cual pienso que es aceptable para un Hard.
   
   
5. 01:09:108 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Ctrl+H pls. Ya sabes... todo está en el mismo sentido de movimiento ( xDD ), y esta es la sección perfecta para cambiar de orientación
6. 01:15:991 (5) - No siento el flow comodo aquí, pls, subelo un poco:
   
   
7. 01:30:285 (1) - Aquí un jump quedaría muy bien. podrías espaciarlo a 1.5x.

1. 00:23:932 (1,2,3,4) - Por que el comienzo es tan aburrido D:
2. 01:18:991 (3,4) - La inclinación de estos no me parece la adecuada, mejor así:
   
   

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

[Insane]

1. http://puu.sh/cHwpJ/4edcf63c1a.png -> http://puu.sh/cIs0V/cc5898c651.png
2. 00:35:226 (1) - Podrías conciderar aquí hacer en haya algo qué golpear en 00:35:579 - dado que ahí comienza el grito. prefiero dejarlo así
3. 00:40:873 (1) - por qué no hacer un jump sencillo con este? miraré de hacer un pequeño jump xD
4. Casi que todos los triples son overmap xD y es chistoso que por ejemplo, en 00:52:079 (6) - si el triple estuviera es en 00:51:902 - va mejor con la música. Igual en 00:54:902 (6) - .
   Casualmente en 00:56:138 (4) - hiciste el triple tal que concuerda con el patrón que te acabo de decir.
   Es decir, el triple no va para terminar en el comienzo del compas, sinó en el pedaso anterior a este:
   
   
   En muchos está bien puesto, pero en otros no. Por favor corregelos.
5. 00:46:696 - aquí va un golpe lo bastante fuente como para ignorarlo, imo. no es tan fuerte xD
6. 00:52:343 - ^ ^
7. 01:02:932 - ^ ^
8. 01:14:226 - ^ ^
9. 01:09:108 (1) - podrías conciderar acelerar este slider a 1.1x, y aumentarle es espaciado a 01:09:991 (3) - y a 01:10:167 (4,5,6) - para nada, no veo por qué acelerar ESE slider justo AHÍ xD
10. 01:26:049 (1) - Bueno, quizás podrías conciderar algo como esto: los cambios respecto a ese ritmo... no sé, prefiero dejarlos así xD
    
    

No hablé de nada nazi, pero sí debes darle una checkeada a los stacks (ya sabes como soy con eso xD)

[Hard]

1. 00:29:402 (3) - No siento cómodo el flow aquí. Por favor, muevelos un poco para que quede más suave: fixed
   
   
2. 00:51:814 (3) - stack buena xD
3. 00:52:873 (3) - es un poco brusco el flow aquí. (Nota el intento de blanket cuadrado xD) blanket? ugu? lo hice por simetría owo
   
   
4. 01:03:108 (5,6) - En estos el flow tampoco lo siento tan cómodo como me gustaría. Pienso que lo ideal sería hacer stack de los dos sobre 01:01:343 (2) - , de forma que quede un jump a 2.1, lo cual pienso que es aceptable para un Hard. nah me parece exagerado
   
   
5. 01:09:108 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Ctrl+H pls. Ya sabes... todo está en el mismo sentido de movimiento ( xDD ), y esta es la sección perfecta para cambiar de orientación y esto del final qué? http://puu.sh/cJG2K/fa507befda.jpg ese flow se rompe ;_; es buena idea pero no encaja aquí...
6. 01:15:991 (5) - No siento el flow comodo aquí, pls, subelo un poco: sure
   
   
7. 01:30:285 (1) - Aquí un jump quedaría muy bien. podrías espaciarlo a 1.5x. supongo

[normal]

1. 00:23:932 (1,2,3,4) - Por que el comienzo es tan aburrido D: no lo es xD piensa que es el comienzo (?
2. 01:18:991 (3,4) - La inclinación de estos no me parece la adecuada, mejor así: maldito nazi
   
   

[Easy Box]
01:21:814 (2) - pls, delete it and copy/paste->Ctrl+H to 01:22:520 (3) - ... looks more clean:

Good Luck!

Kazuya wrote:

Hi. Random mod. It's only ideas!

[Insane]

00:28:520 (2) - Move here: x: 224, y: 40? Looks better when you move up. I prefer actual little jump because it's pretty calm =w=

Good symmetry:
00:34:167 (2) - move here: x: 102, y: 267.
00:34:520 (3) - x: 364, y: 312
00:34:873 (4) - x: 410, y: 117
00:49:255 (6) - Delete circle. There is no clearly audible sound.
00:52:079 (6) - ^ not here, play with 25% playback rate and listen better
00:54:902 (6) - ^
00:54:814 (5,1) - x: 432 y: 168. Perfect stack. o.o they are perfectly stacked
00:56:138 (4) - Delete circle. Same as 00:49:255 (6) -
00:56:226 (5) - Stack here: 00:56:402 (1) - (move circle: x: 124 y: 88
00:57:726 (5) - Delete circle. Same as 00:49:255 (6) - not here, same reason as before
01:01:785 (5) - ^ not sure about this, as long as it fits I think it's ok
01:01:873 (5) - Move circle here: x: 454 y: 131
01:10:255 (5) - Delete circle. Same as 00:49:255 (6) - and move 01:10:343 (5) - circle here: x: 219 y: 82 same as before
01:11:843 (8) - Same as 00:49:255 (6) - Delete circle. there is no emphasized sound.
01:13:079 (5) - ^ not here, same as before
01:15:638 (4,5,6,7,8) - Don't use stream! Not clearly heard beat/sound...
01:17:226 (4,5,6,7) - ^
01:17:579 (1,2,3,4) - Please, fix the symmetry. I didn't use symmetry here
01:23:138 (5) - Same as 00:49:255 (6) -
01:24:373 (4) - Same as 00:49:255 (6) - 01:24:461 (5) - = stack circle here: x: 320 y: 324

everything not mentioned means fixed

[Hard]

AR: Change to 7. nah, since the bpm is a bit high I prefer something between 7 and 8

01:10:520 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hmm hmm. Use this: http://puu.sh/cT6eg/1da50f7cfe.jpg thanks but I prefer actual pattern

Okay, Good.

[Normal]

00:35:226 (1) - Better blanket? Move 3rd white ticjk here: x: 129 y: 150 orz fixed
01:29:579 (2) - CTRL - G, and move slider here: x: 367 y: 179. it's nice but I prefer to avoid that stack ><

[Easy]

x'D

01:22:520 (3) - Blanket fix! 2rd white tick: x: 180 y: 43


Ok, Really good Mapset. :3 Only the insane left something to be desired.