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Dj Verstarker - Darkness

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AdRon Zh3Ro
900 posts
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Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domingo, 6 de junho de 2010 at 00:32:07

Artist: Dj Verstarker
Title: Darkness
Tags: Techno Hard Style
BPM: 150,01
Filesize: 5967kb
Play Time: 02:17
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy Style (2,66 stars, 128 notes)
  2. Insane Style (4,9 stars, 497 notes)
  3. Normal Style (4,52 stars, 290 notes)
Download: Dj Verstarker - Darkness
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Enjoy

If you downloaded before 22 march, please re-download it.
Last edited by AdRon Zh3Ro , edited 96 times in total.
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Oi!

[Normal Style]
There's some spacing that's makes me confusing
00:29:048 (2) - I think this slider is ugly.....
00:35:447 (4) - ^
01:11:642 (3) - This slider is hidden IMO
01:42:038 (6) - ^

[Hard]
01:30:040 (1) - Unrankable slider LOL (Don't let slider overlap themself, that cause everyone is confusing)
01:30:640 (3) - ^
02:06:235 (4) - This circle is hidden IMO
02:09:434 (8) - ^
04:21:017 (1) - Unrankable slider LOL (Don't let slider overlap themself, that cause everyone is confusing)
04:21:417 (2) - ^
04:21:817 (3) - ^
04:22:217 (4) - ^
04:22:617 (5) - ^
04:23:017 (6) - ^
04:23:417 (7) - ^

Nice song
STAR
AdRon Zh3Ro
900 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro
The sliders i liked the most you wanna take away from me :'(

Done.
Niva
Global Moderator
3,187 posts
Joined November 2009
Niva
-General-
I don't think very good song is a decent tag.

-Normal Style-
01:16:641 (7) - Finish at the end?

-Hard Style-
00:58:644 (2) - Make it more symmetrical
01:21:841 (1) - Why here? I think it would be better if placed in the center :)
01:30:040 (combo streak) - Since you've started with 90 degrees slider curve, I think it would be better if all sliders in the streak have a 90 degrees curve.

14 millions score... and 21 millions score with all the mods on... *stars*
iDwarf
1,202 posts
Joined February 2010
iDwarf
~Overall~
  1. "very good song" tags are odd. Delete them
  2. I suggest adding 3rd combo color (Maybe white?)
  3. Delete .osb file and do full submit
  4. I suggest offset: 6657
  5. Your Normal difficulty is too hard to be "Normal" Try to make it easier. (You should have 3,50 Star Rating)
~Normal Style~
  1. 00:40:152 (4) - This is unrankable. | Overlayed slider.
  2. 00:46:551 (4) - ^
  3. 00:54:650 (7) - New Combo
  4. 00:58:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Stack them properly.

Star~
xierbaliti
osu! Alumni
999 posts
Joined August 2008
xierbaliti
Dj Verstarker - Darkness is the song's artist&title not source I think._.
BTW you need an easier diff.

-Normal-
00:40:146 (4) - 00:46:545 (4) - 01:23:341 (4) - so strange slider. change them please.
01:21:841 (1) - Add finish here.
01:26:640 (8) - ^
01:29:840 (8) - ^
01:33:039 (8) - ^
01:36:239 (9) - ^
01:39:438 (8) - ^
01:42:638 (8) - ^
01:49:237 (1) - ^ Volume 70%~80% here.
AdRon Zh3Ro
900 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro
All done.

About sorce and tag, i changed, need to upload.
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
delete osb file in folder and do full submit
need more hitsounds in general

Easy:
not a fan of all the spinners at the beginning..
01:04:249 (7,1) - switch new combo
01:05:049 (2) - stack endpoint on 1?
01:19:847 - add notes or put break
from 01:23:047 (2) to 01:48:643 (8) is very repetitive..even for an easy, try and map it in different ways

Normal:
I would raise hp drain/overall so they are higher than easy
00:25:854 (1,2,3,4) - make these look nicer.. the first 1 is ok but the rest just seem random..try and put some symmetry into them (and don't have them overlap like 2)
00:57:850 (8,1) -switch new combo
01:07:449 (9,1) - ^
01:10:648 (8,1) - ^
^ I think that whole area could be made more interesting as it repeats alot..
01:23:347 (4) - don't have slider like this..its too hard to see if its a slider or not
01:26:646 (8,1) - switch new combo
01:29:846 (8,1) - ^
01:33:045 (8,1) - ^
01:36:245 (9,1) - ^
01:39:444 (8,1) - ^
Ending is way too repetitive.. need some more creativity to make the map more interesting

Hard:
lower audio on hitsounds by 4 or 5 ticks (and do this on all difficulties when you add more to normal/easy)
combo's seem kinda random..
some sliders in this difficulty could look better such as 00:53:051 (5) and 00:55:050 (5)..take a look through and see what you can do
00:29:054 (1) - move 1 tiny grid right to mirror other combo
00:35:453 (1) - move 1 tiny grid down to mirror other combo
00:53:850 (1) - remove new combo
00:54:650 (9) - new combo
00:56:250 (1) - remove new combo
00:57:850 (8) - new combo
00:58:250 (1) - remove new combo
01:01:049 (8) - new combo
01:01:449 (1) - remove new combo
01:04:249 (4,1) - switch new combo
01:07:449 (12,1) - ^
01:13:848 (11,1) - ^
01:17:847 (1,1,1,1,1) - spread these out
01:29:846 (12,1) - switch new combo
01:33:045 (5,1) - ^
01:36:245 (12,1) - ^
01:42:644 (5,1) - ^
02:00:242 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing
02:08:241 (5) - new combo
02:13:040 (6) - ^
03:04:233 (12,1) - switch new combo
im sure I don't need to keep listing the same combo things as you can continue the pattern to the end of the map
almost this entire map is using the same typing of patterns..basically same comment as other two difficulties
unless you are trying to get this approved Hard is too long (3:30 is about the max) and the score is too big

*star*
AdRon Zh3Ro
900 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro
Hard done. I'll do easy/normal later.
AdRon Zh3Ro
900 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro
* If the next ones that mod my beatmap CAN send the beatmap with the errors fixed, i'll be glad.
(College=No time to play)
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
As your request.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. I doubt the timing.
2. Add source and tags.
3. Crop the useless part of song.

[Easy Style]
-- Turn the volume down some level.
-- The distance is too big for easy diff. Make it smaller then re-map this diff.
-- The slider velocity is too fast. Lower it down.
-- Add some hitsounds.
01:17:447 - Add break here.

[Normal Style]
-- Turn the volume down some level.
-- Add some hitsounds.
00:29:054 (2) - I think this is overlapping, even distracting. Change it for sure. [!]
01:24:846 (4,5,6) - Confusing. Too crowded.
01:28:646 (5,6,7,8) - ^
01:30:446 (2,3,4) - ^
01:32:845 (7,8,1,2) - ^

[Hard Style]
00:25:854 (1) - Honestly, I like this slider and it should end on 00:28:654.
00:29:054 (1) - Is such this slider rankable if it ends on 00:31:853?
00:32:253 (1) - Too long slider but I love it if ends on 00:35:053.
00:35:453 (1) - Yes, should end on 00:38:253.
00:38:452 - Make the next notes to normal hitsound from this point.
Star.

adron zhero wrote:

* If the next ones that mod my beatmap CAN send the beatmap with the errors fixed, i'll be glad.
(College=No time to play)
No need to rush. Finish your busy work first, and then when you have free time, come to osu!.
AdRon Zh3Ro
900 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro
Done
Natteke
6,538 posts
Joined August 2009
Natteke
Irc modded.
GoLiMaR_old
GoLiMaR_old
Don't really like sliders in all diffs

Easy:
Seems fine

Normal:
01:42:636 (9) - new combo starts here?
01:46:235 (6) - new combo?

Also, can suggest using more hitsounds in both diffs.

Hard:
This difficulty looks very messy. Can't say I like it. This is just mine opininon.
Anyway, good luck with it!
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
[General]

BPM 150.000, offset 6,619 sounds better imo.
Delete the .osb.
Capitalize DJ in the artist?
Tags?
Why "style"? Why not just "Easy", etc...? :P
Your preview point isn't actually part of Easy/Normal...
Combos felt weird in all diffs.

[Easy Style]

00:38:644 (1) - The song really only starts here; remove the spinners before it, they're not particularly fun to play. In fact, you could start it as late as 00:51:443 (1).
01:09:861 - Lack of a note here is weird.
01:17:839 - Add a break?
01:17:439 - Unused timing section.
01:21:339 - Unused timing section.
01:36:637 (1) - Combos are awfully long in this section.

I dunno, even for an Easy, this feels quite boring. Maybe it's just that I don't like the song too much.

[Normal Style]

OD feels too low.

00:29:046 (2) - This looks terrible.
00:51:443 (1) - Consider just starting here.
01:10:440 (7,1,2) - Very hard to read.
01:21:839 (1,2,3,4) - Unreadable.
01:23:638 (1) - I didn't really like the use of notes and repeats in this section; it feels like they were placed randomly to follow a constant 1/2 pattern rather than follow some aspect of the music. It feels repetitive, just how long it is, too.
01:50:835 - Unused timing section.

[Hard Style]

Those fast sliders felt weird, especially ones that start on red ticks and end on white.

00:51:443 (1) - Once again, just start it here. The kicksliders at the beginning don't really fit, and the high OD + no bass after it is quite hard to play. It would also cut your score to below 10m, which is always good.
01:21:839 (1,1,2,3,4,1) - Err, this placement is weird.
01:26:238 (10,11,12) - Blah.
01:42:236 (10,11,12,13,14) - I know some people don't like zig-zag sliders.
02:00:234 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not readable at all.
03:00:226 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Weird pattern again.
03:07:025 (14,15,16,17,18) - Really don't like this formation, and don't like combos going so high. The twisty formations after this one aren't cool either.

Good luck!
Bittersweet
2,031 posts
Joined February 2010
Bittersweet
Mapa legal :3

Sinceramente, não tenho nenhuma sugestão pra dar, pq a meu ver não tem nada errado, então espero que os outros possam te ajudar melhor ^^ (pq eles sempre acham XD questão de costume, acho)

Enfim, estrelinha procê :*


ps.: música legal, bela escolha ^^
AdRon Zh3Ro
900 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro
Eles sempre acham algo errado...

Mas obrigado :)
Blazer27
7 posts
Joined February 2010
Blazer27
It's an awesome beatmap! Enjoyed playing it so much :)
AdRon Zh3Ro
900 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

BPM 150.000, offset 6,619 sounds better imo.
Delete the .osb.
Capitalize DJ in the artist?
Tags?
Why "style"? Why not just "Easy", etc...? :P
Your preview point isn't actually part of Easy/Normal...
Combos felt weird in all diffs.

[Easy Style]

00:38:644 (1) - The song really only starts here; remove the spinners before it, they're not particularly fun to play. In fact, you could start it as late as 00:51:443 (1).
01:09:861 - Lack of a note here is weird.
01:17:839 - Add a break?
01:17:439 - Unused timing section.
01:21:339 - Unused timing section.
01:36:637 (1) - Combos are awfully long in this section.

I dunno, even for an Easy, this feels quite boring. Maybe it's just that I don't like the song too much.

[Normal Style]

OD feels too low.

00:29:046 (2) - This looks terrible.
00:51:443 (1) - Consider just starting here.
01:10:440 (7,1,2) - Very hard to read.
01:21:839 (1,2,3,4) - Unreadable.
01:23:638 (1) - I didn't really like the use of notes and repeats in this section; it feels like they were placed randomly to follow a constant 1/2 pattern rather than follow some aspect of the music. It feels repetitive, just how long it is, too.
01:50:835 - Unused timing section.

[Hard Style]

Those fast sliders felt weird, especially ones that start on red ticks and end on white.

00:51:443 (1) - Once again, just start it here. The kicksliders at the beginning don't really fit, and the high OD + no bass after it is quite hard to play. It would also cut your score to below 10m, which is always good.
01:21:839 (1,1,2,3,4,1) - Err, this placement is weird.
01:26:238 (10,11,12) - Blah.
01:42:236 (10,11,12,13,14) - I know some people don't like zig-zag sliders.
02:00:234 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not readable at all.
03:00:226 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Weird pattern again.
03:07:025 (14,15,16,17,18) - Really don't like this formation, and don't like combos going so high. The twisty formations after this one aren't cool either.

Good luck!

This type of music is hardstyle.

Changed BPM Offset and stuff.

Thanks
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
[General]

  • • Offset: 6650 (resnap all notes)
    • The mp3 you are using is a lot longer than the part which is mapped. Consider cropping it to reduce filesize
[Normal]

  • • 00:29:019 (2) - This slider is hidden: make it more visible
    • 00:32:219 (3) - ^
    • 00:35:418 (4) - ^
[Hard]

  • • 01:04:218 (8,1) - Spacing
    • 01:21:018 (1,1) - ^
    • 02:05:818 (3) - This slider is hidden: make it more visible
    • 02:09:018 (3) - ^
    • 02:14:218 (4,1) - Spacing
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