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Tanaka Rie - Eternal (Short Ver.)

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Glass
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Glass
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on March-17-10 at 2:44:05 PM

Artist: Tanaka Rie
Title: Eternal (Short Ver.)
Source: Mabinogi
Tags: j-pop jpop Nexon devcat
BPM: 129
Filesize: 4470kb
Play Time: 02:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. Eternal (4.92 stars, 391 notes)
  2. Harmonious (2.18 stars, 159 notes)
  3. Melodious (4.31 stars, 200 notes)
Download: Tanaka Rie - Eternal (Short Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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March-17:
New offset by yaya
Bubbled by yaya

March-15:
Modded by Lissette

March-14:
Protobubbled by rust45

March-13:
Modded by rust45
Modded by VanMoNky
New slidertick sounds by VanMoNky

March-11:
Modded by kino77

March-10:
Modded by samipale
Modded by Astom
Modded by Leorda

March-9:
Modded by Breeze
Modded by xxheroxx
Modded by CrimmiSkye
Added a few skin elements
Added hitsounds
New offset by xxheroxx
Mapped and submitted [Harmonious]

March-8:
New offsets by Zekira
Modded by NoHItter
Modded by orioncomet

March-7:
Submitted
Last edited by Glass , edited 26 times in total.
Glass
Topic Starter
Glass
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Last edited by Glass , edited 1 time in total.
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
NoHitter
Overall
Delete the .osb file in the song folder and full submit.
Needs an easier diff IMO

Melodious
00:14:171 (1) - the start should be at 00:14:093
00:42:543 (2) - Suggestion: Stack this with the end of (1)
01:12:310 (4) - Move this away from (3)
01:31:730 (x) - Move kiai to 01:31:845 or 01:32:776

Eternal
00:14:171 (1) - the start should be at 00:14:093
01:07:543 (x) - The timing section here (since it changes from normal - soft hitsound) must be placed at least 1/4 before the note
01:31:729 (x) - Move kiai to 01:31:845 or 01:32:776
02:17:427 (x) - The timing section here (since it changes from normal - soft hitsound) must be placed at least 1/4 before the note
Glass
Topic Starter
Glass
There's no .osb file in the folder ._. and I think [Melodious] is easy enough lol.

Fixed everything else, thank you for modding.
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
[General]
- try offset: 16505, 137490 - resnap all note

[Melodious]
If This diff is Easy, I guess, This diff look like abit Hard Maybe because of Silder Velocity too fast =w=
00:14:093 (1) - This spinner isn't snapped [maybe start here 00:13:938]
00:20:915 (3) - try sound Whistle
00:23:938 (2,3) - ^
00:26:497 (4) - ^
00:30:683 (1) - Too short ;_;.. I mean for an Easy
01:28:124 (3) - try sound finish at last silder ~
01:32:776 - start kiai time here is better.. IMO >.< and add sound finish at begin of silder
02:16:496 (1) - Too short ;_;
02:16:496 (1) - ^
02:28:634 (3) - End this silder at 02:29:099?

[Eternal]
00:14:093 (1) - This spinner isn't snapped [maybe start here 00:13:938]
00:20:915 (4) - try sound Whistle
00:24:636 (6) - ^
00:26:497 (6) - ^
01:29:063 (8) - try sound finish ~
01:32:776 - Like [Melodious]
02:24:905 (5) - End this silder at 02:25:370?
02:28:636 (5) - End this silder at 02:29:101?

starr ~ ☆
Glass
Topic Starter
Glass
Umm I think the current offset is better cause I got less 100 and 50s from it xD But maybe that's just me, I dunno. I'll wait for more comments on that, hope you don't mind ><

Fixed everything else~ Thank you for modding :)
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
Oh wow, Mabinogi, I love this game ヾ(≧∇≦*)
If you like, you could take any skin sprites from my Mabinogi map (ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ☆ﾉﾉ
Girls' Generation - It's Fantastic

Only RED part is what I think you should fix, others are just suggestions

[General]
  1. You could add Nexon devcat to source
[Glasslake]
  1. 02:45:495 (S) - Spinner starts here better imo
  2. Map itsself is fine for me, but I'm afraid the spacing is a little far for a normal diff, and also there are few unusual spacing in this diff.
[Eternal]
  1. 00:30:683 (S) - This spinner is a little short, auto play could only get 1000 bonus, it should could get at least 2000 bonus. Even though this is fine for me, present rank standard don't like short spinner
  2. 02:45:495 (S) - Spinner starts here better imo
So maybe you should add another easier diff if possible
Map is neat
star
DeadAlready
1,575 posts
Joined August 2008
DeadAlready
Mabinogi and rierie~~ >w</

star~ <3
Glass
Topic Starter
Glass

Breeze wrote:

Oh wow, Mabinogi, I love this game ヾ(≧∇≦*)
If you like, you could take any skin sprites from my Mabinogi map (ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ☆ﾉﾉ
Girls' Generation - It's Fantastic

Only RED part is what I think you should fix, others are just suggestions

[General]
  1. You could add Nexon devcat to source
[Glasslake]
  1. 02:45:495 (S) - Spinner starts here better imo
  2. Map itsself is fine for me, but I'm afraid the spacing is a little far for a normal diff, and also there are few unusual spacing in this diff.
[Eternal]
  1. 00:30:683 (S) - This spinner is a little short, auto play could only get 1000 bonus, it should could get at least 2000 bonus. Even though this is fine for me, present rank standard don't like short spinner
  2. 02:45:495 (S) - Spinner starts here better imo
So maybe you should add another easier diff if possible
Map is neat
star
Sure I'll check it out and grab some sprites I like~

Added 'nexon' 'devcat' to tags, fixed all the spinners.

Maybe I should re-map [Melodious] with a smaller spacing lol then it'd definitly be considered Normal/Easy+ :3

Thank you for modding ^^

And thanks for the star quintitem
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
After you done changes or added new diff.
Fell free to PM me for a recheck
Glass
Topic Starter
Glass
Done
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
First Timing Section::: Offset: 16515 (resnap all notes)
I think you should make an Easy :|


[Melodious]

  • • 00:30:450 (1) - Start this spinner here 00:30:584 (end it here 00:31:398) and add a repetition at the previous slider (00:30:235 (6))
Crimmi
1,947 posts
Joined June 2009
Crimmi
Crimmi's Judgement <3
Some Suggestions ]

Melodious
[General] Why Do You Have The Default Spinner Circle?
00:45:673(2) align with (4)
00:59:391(1) New Combo
02:22:123(1) Align With the End Of The Previous Slider
02:28:634(3) Align With (2)

Eternal
No Problems.

*Star*
Glass
Topic Starter
Glass
Sorry for the late response guys, I was mapping an Easy level.

Made all the changes you mentioned, thank you for modding =)
SamiPale
766 posts
Joined October 2009
SamiPale
you really so like Tanaka Rie~

the rhythm of login music in this song mentions the time i played mabinogi...

note putting is so neat like DJPop and great placement.easy to mod and hard to find mistakes~

i just find one

[Eternal]
01:13:724(8) - spacing,or newcombo

and suggestion
also [Eternal]
01:46:747(1) - although there's new combo but the distance from previous note is too close so that when play it seems not good

here's your star :)
Glass
Topic Starter
Glass

samipale wrote:

you really so like Tanaka Rie~

the rhythm of login music in this song mentions the time i played mabinogi...

note putting is so neat like DJPop and great placement.easy to mod and hard to find mistakes~

i just find one

[Eternal]
01:13:724(8) - spacing,or newcombo

and suggestion
also [Eternal]
01:46:747(1) - although there's new combo but the distance from previous note is too close so that when play it seems not good

here's your star :)
Fixed the spacing problem and added another note before 01:46:747(1)

Thanks for modding and the good comments ^^

annnd yeah I really like some of Tanaka Rie's songs :3
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
in blue suggestions, in red maybe important
[General]
-erase star.png u don't need it
-Run AIMod
-Add hit sounds o_o

[Harmonious]
-Acc 100%
-00:17:910 new combo
-00:21:631 --^
-00:40:468 Add circle
-01:02:561 clean this break
-01:30:468 --^
-01:56:049 new combo
-02:10:003 (2) start this in 02:09:770
-02:11:863 (4) start this in 02:11:631
-02:29:797 add circle
-02:44:681add circle
-02:45:378 (6)move it to 02:45:146

[Melodious]
-Acc 100%
-01:02:561 clean this break
-01:30:352 --^

[Glasslake]
-Acc 98%
-01:02:561 clean this break
-01:30:352 --^
-try this

-01:20:933 (4) remove this and new combo in 01:21:166 (5)
-02:45:378 (4) remove this circle

mm that's all xD Nice map StaR
Glass
Topic Starter
Glass
Deleted star.png
AIMod didn't really find any critical errors, only some unimportant spacing nazi'ing that are readable anyways.
Added a few more hitsounds
I can't change the combos because I made each combo take 2 verses of the song and thats how I worked them in all 3 levels.
I can't remove those breaks 'cause they're required to give people some time to reposition their hand and stuff.
Fixed some of the things you mentioned.

Thanks for the mod ^^
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Hi ^^

[Skin]
The section-fail.png is missing......

[Harmonious]
01:10:933 (1) - The slider it's not like a star, make a perfect star

[Melodious]
00:19:770 (1) - No new combo
00:20:235 (2) - New combo
00:23:491 (1) - No new combo
00:23:956 (2) - New combo
00:25:352 (1) - No new combo
00:27:212 (1) - ^
00:27:677 (2) - New combo

Not bad
STAR
Glass
Topic Starter
Glass
Hi :)

Added section-fail.png

How can I draw a perfect star without overlapping both ends of the slider? nvm I figured out how

Fixed the combos

Thank you for the mod~
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