1. 10th Twilight - 4Key (5.56 stars, 4041 notes)
2. 1st Twilight - 4Key (1.36 stars, 614 notes)
3. 2nd Twilight - 4Key (1.89 stars, 1184 notes)
4. 3rd Twilight - 4Key (2.45 stars, 1673 notes)
5. 4th Twilight - 4Key (2.77 stars, 1937 notes)
6. 5th Twilight - 4Key (3.29 stars, 2339 notes)
7. 6th Twilight - 4Key (3.84 stars, 2621 notes)
8. 7th Twilight - 4Key (4.26 stars, 3164 notes)
9. 8th Twilight - 4Key (4.83 stars, 3395 notes)
10. 9th Twilight - 4Key (5.36 stars, 3790 notes)

Kaede37nT wrote:

irc mod?

09:52 Awang411: hi
09:53 Kaede37nT: hi
09:53 Awang411: 5th twilight finished
09:53 Kaede37nT: i haven't had the time to see the first part yet
09:53 Kaede37nT: okay
09:53 Kaede37nT: i'll update
09:53 Kaede37nT: wow haha 7th from 4.9 to 4.33
09:54 Awang411:
09:54 Kaede37nT: that's a big jump
09:54 Awang411: fixed the ed
09:55 Kaede37nT: 00:50:846 (50846|2) -
09:55 Kaede37nT: i think that one is a bit too long?
09:56 Kaede37nT: unless you're including the inhale
09:59 Awang411: until where
09:59 Kaede37nT: at the redline?
09:59 Kaede37nT: 00:51:255
09:59 Kaede37nT: i'm just suggesting
10:00 Awang411: ok
10:01 Awang411:
10:02 Awang411: ~* updated! *~
10:05 Kaede37nT: nothing wrong so far i think
10:06 Kaede37nT: going to try 5th properly now
10:06 Awang411:
10:06 Awang411: ok
10:06 Kaede37nT: hopefully my finger's don't give up
10:07 Awang411:
10:08 Kaede37nT: ouch
10:08 Kaede37nT: like starting 2nd quarter of the song it's already painful haha
10:09 Awang411: :P:P:P:P:P:P:P
10:09 Kaede37nT:
10:09 Kaede37nT: that part just now felt a bit awkward
10:09 Kaede37nT: the LN part..
10:10 Awang411: that ln was a break for players
10:10 Kaede37nT: wait
10:10 Kaede37nT: i'll show later
10:12 Kaede37nT: it gets increasingly hard
10:12 Awang411:
10:12 Awang411: i made it to gradually harder
10:12 Awang411:
10:13 Kaede37nT: yeah..
10:13 Kaede37nT: hahahaha
10:13 Kaede37nT: i suck
10:14 Awang411: :P:P:P:P
10:14 Awang411: i'll try
10:14 Kaede37nT: 02:09:255 (129255|2) -
10:14 Kaede37nT: this feels a bit awkward
10:15 Kaede37nT: is it intended?
10:15 Awang411: actually yes
10:16 Awang411: wait no
10:16 Kaede37nT: oh
10:16 Awang411: i thought the ln
10:16 Awang411: the extra note :p
10:16 Awang411: i'll remove it
10:17 Kaede37nT: 03:23:028 (203028|2,203028|0) -
10:17 Kaede37nT: to 03:24:664 (204664|0,204664|1,204664|2) -
10:17 Kaede37nT: the music tells me it should be a bit faster
10:17 Kaede37nT: but idk, i can't handle it properly >.<
10:18 Kaede37nT: i mean any faster would be hard for me but i think there should be more notes
10:18 Kaede37nT: in between
10:18 Awang411: misheard that one
10:18 Kaede37nT: in comparison with the other parts
10:19 Kaede37nT: make it similar to this part? 03:30:391 (210391|0,210391|1) -
10:20 Awang411: updated! :P
10:21 Kaede37nT: i think 5th should be fine for now
10:21 Awang411:
10:21 Kaede37nT: nothing more i can help with
10:21 Kaede37nT: i'll check 7th soon
10:23 Kaede37nT: 7th ._.
10:23 Kaede37nT: for pro people judging from the beginning..
10:24 Awang411: not so pro actually :
10:24 Kaede37nT: i think i'll fail the first part of the song
10:24 Awang411: for those who likes streams but can't play 9th
10:24 Awang411:
10:27 Kaede37nT: 00:47:573 (47573|2) -
10:27 Kaede37nT: seems a bit too long again
10:28 Awang411:
10:28 Kaede37nT: until 00:47:982?
10:28 Awang411: red line?
10:28 Kaede37nT: yeah
10:28 Awang411: ok
10:29 Awang411: updated
10:30 Kaede37nT: double note here? 01:22:755 (82755|0) -
10:30 Awang411: oops
10:30 Kaede37nT: and here 01:23:573 (83573|0) -
10:31 Kaede37nT: ah wait
10:31 Kaede37nT: let me recheck the 2nd one
10:31 Kaede37nT: yeah
10:32 Kaede37nT: 2nd one too?
10:32 Awang411: the music part in that one has no big sound for that
10:32 Kaede37nT: okay
10:32 Awang411: that too
10:32 Kaede37nT: just suggesting haha
10:32 Awang411:
10:35 Kaede37nT: make this part a bit harder? 01:43:005 (103005|2,103073|3,103141|2,103209|0,103209|3) -
10:35 Kaede37nT: oh wait
10:35 Kaede37nT: idk
10:36 Kaede37nT: or make this place triple one
10:36 Kaede37nT: 01:43:209 (103209|3,103209|0) -
10:36 Awang411: that would be too hard for players of that kind
10:36 Kaede37nT: but then again, there isn't any big sound there..
10:36 Awang411: ok
10:36 Kaede37nT: is it?
10:36 Kaede37nT: idk, the song is crazy already
10:36 Kaede37nT: but yeah, it's 7th not 9th
10:36 Awang411: it's louder than the cymbals
10:37 Awang411:
10:37 Kaede37nT: so you're adding?
10:37 Awang411: maybe no
10:37 Kaede37nT: okay
10:45 Kaede37nT: this part maybe? 03:17:846 (197846|3,197914|2,197982|1) -
10:46 Kaede37nT: but that'd be hard xD
10:46 Awang411:
10:46 Awang411: xDDD
10:47 Kaede37nT: why is there double note here? i wanna know 03:23:028 (203028|2,203028|0) -
10:48 Awang411: sorry extra notes
10:48 Awang411:
10:49 Kaede37nT: these three (03:23:096 (203096|1,203164|3,203232|2) - ) same case with the 03:17:846 (197846|3,197914|2,197982|1) - ?
10:50 Awang411: what to do?
10:51 Kaede37nT: no idea haha
10:51 Kaede37nT: i'd make 03:23:096 (203096|1,203164|3,203232|2) - into something like fjk
10:51 Kaede37nT: instead of fkj
10:52 Kaede37nT: do you get what i mean?
10:52 Awang411: yep
10:52 Awang411: ok
10:52 Awang411:
10:52 Kaede37nT: is this considered modding? haha
10:52 Kaede37nT: but can't get kudos
10:52 Awang411: yep
10:53 Awang411: yep :p
10:53 Awang411: unless in forum
10:53 Kaede37nT: 03:30:459 (210459|2) - until 03:31:209 (211209|3) -
10:53 Kaede37nT: i think should be a bit harder somehow?
10:54 Kaede37nT: it's too similar to normal parts of the song
10:54 Awang411: i tried to make it similar actually
10:54 Kaede37nT: oh
10:54 Kaede37nT: i see
10:54 Kaede37nT: 03:39:937 (219937|0) -
10:55 Awang411: o3:41:028 - this is where it's different
10:56 Kaede37nT: 03:39:937 (219937|0) - start earlier to around the blue or red line before it?
10:56 Kaede37nT: 03:39:869?
10:56 Kaede37nT: don't know about this one, vocals are usually harder to follow
10:57 Awang411: actually it's similar with the others
10:57 Awang411: so it should be at white
10:57 Kaede37nT: okay
10:57 Kaede37nT: 03:41:028 (221028|0,221028|3) - onwards so extreme xP
10:57 Awang411:
10:58 Awang411:
10:58 Awang411: xP
10:58 Awang411: well i did say gradually harder
10:58 Awang411: xP
10:58 Kaede37nT: yeah you did
10:59 Kaede37nT: 04:20:300 (260300|2) -
10:59 Kaede37nT: wth hahahaha
11:00 Awang411: gradually harder~ xPPPP
11:00 Kaede37nT: the thrills at the end are cool
11:00 Awang411:
11:01 Awang411: i like some trills
11:01 Kaede37nT: i'd make this a triple note though 04:26:846 (266846|2,266846|3) -
11:01 Awang411: ok
11:01 Awang411:
11:01 Kaede37nT: 9th is going to be hard to mod
11:01 Awang411:
11:05 Kaede37nT: takes so long for me to update
11:06 Awang411:
11:06 Awang411: takes so long for me to reupload ( update )
11:06 Kaede37nT: finally, managed to update 9th
11:06 Awang411:
11:07 Kaede37nT: ....
11:07 Kaede37nT: 9th.. i thought 7th was crazy
11:07 Awang411: xDDDD
11:07 Kaede37nT: nicely done 00:06:391 (6391|3,6391|1,6528|1,6528|2,6664|0,6664|1,6664|2) -
11:08 Awang411: PPP
11:08 Kaede37nT: but i'd move 00:06:391 (6391|3) - to 3rd column
11:08 Kaede37nT: 3rd from the left
11:08 Awang411: ok
11:09 Kaede37nT: wow 00:09:664 (9664|0,9664|1,9732|2,9732|3,9800|1,9800|0,9869|3,9869|2,9937|0,9937|1,9937|2) -
11:10 Awang411:
11:10 Awang411: xDD
11:10 Kaede37nT: can you play it btw?
11:10 Kaede37nT: haha
11:10 Awang411: yep
11:11 Awang411: barely xDDDD
11:11 Kaede37nT: i think there should be a note here? 00:38:232
11:12 Awang411: the music doesn't say so
11:13 Kaede37nT: oaky
11:13 Awang411: oaky
11:13 Kaede37nT: okay*
11:13 Awang411: oaky
11:14 Kaede37nT: oaky
11:14 Awang411: oaky
11:16 Kaede37nT: 01:42:528 (102528|2) -
11:16 Kaede37nT: feels a bit empy
11:16 Kaede37nT: maybe just me
11:17 Awang411: empy xDD
11:17 Kaede37nT: empty*
11:17 Kaede37nT: so much typos today
11:17 Kaede37nT: and well this 01:42:800 (102800|2) -
11:17 Kaede37nT: those two
11:18 Awang411: sound doesn't say anything about that
11:18 Kaede37nT: alright
11:19 Awang411:
11:21 Awang411: :P
11:22 Kaede37nT: 03:15:664 (195664|1) -
11:22 Kaede37nT: double note here?
11:22 Kaede37nT: and here 03:16:482 (196482|3) -
11:23 Kaede37nT: ops i meant here 03:16:414 (196414|2) -
11:23 Awang411: forgot to put those
11:23 Awang411:
11:23 Awang411: y there?
11:23 Kaede37nT: or maybe the one above
11:23 Kaede37nT: haha sorry
11:23 Awang411:
11:24 Kaede37nT: wat 03:36:800 (216800|0,216800|3) -
11:24 Kaede37nT:
11:25 Awang411: PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP
11:26 Kaede37nT: this 03:53:914 (233914|2,233982|3,233982|0,234050|1,234119|3,234119|0,234119|2) -
11:28 Awang411: what's there?
11:28 Kaede37nT: lack of notes?
11:29 Awang411: that much notes and still lacked notes xDDDDD
11:29 Awang411: i'll just keep it that way
11:30 Kaede37nT: i feel like it should be one of those crazy short bursts?
11:30 Kaede37nT: but ok
11:30 Awang411: sound doesn't say anything about that
11:31 Kaede37nT: finally
11:31 Kaede37nT: 04:26:846 (266846|0,266846|3) -
11:31 Kaede37nT: if you made it a triple note in 7th, i think it should also?
11:31 Kaede37nT: be in 9th i mean
11:31 Awang411: ok
11:32 Awang411: updated:P
11:32 Kaede37nT: okay done
11:32 Kaede37nT: sorry for taking so much time
11:33 Awang411: it's okay
11:33 Kaede37nT: wow OD 8, no wonder
11:33 Kaede37nT: OD 7's the usual no?
11:33 Awang411: wow i forgot to change that
11:33 Kaede37nT: wait
11:33 Kaede37nT: some ODs are 8
11:35 Awang411: updated :P
11:35 Kaede37nT: into 7?
11:36 Awang411: 9 is left as it is
11:36 Awang411: 5th and 7th changed to 7
11:36 Kaede37nT: ah
11:36 Kaede37nT: yeah that was what i wanted to say
11:36 Awang411:
11:38 Awang411: me have to leave now
11:38 Awang411: brb
11:38 Kaede37nT: okay
11:38 Awang411:

Gexigamma wrote:

you srsly are a bakawang ._.

iJXL wrote:

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Steinstwo wrote:

can i mods ?

Feerum wrote:

Great Map, Great Song.
Umineko <3

Muu-chan wrote:

Hi there ｡◕‿◕｡ mod here as requested from ✿Nekoworks
All of them are just suggestions, you can decline it if unnecessary ｡◕‿◕｡
|1|2|3|4|

General

* Delete Umineko No Naku Koro Ni from source or tags. Just put one of them. ok xP
* Idk more details about this song. But i got something about EXIT TRANCE, so i suggest to add it on tags http://music.douban.com/subject/4798659/ ok xP
* I think BPM at 220 is too fast .w. i suggest to half it~ doesn't that seems too slow for a song this upbeat?

1st Twilight

* 00:02:136 (2136|3) - i suggest move to 2, avoiding 1 line note with 00:01:727 (1727|3) - (try avoiding 1 line note in Easy difficulty ) beside that, it has different pitch. ok xP
* 00:05:000 - i suggest to add 1 more note on 4, it has pressure and based on your pattern hmm well according to the song there's no pressure and doesn't it seems smoother this way?
* 00:11:545 - ^ on 1 hmm ok xP
* 00:05:818 (5818|3) - i suggest change this to LN until 00:06:363 - seems ok xP
* 00:12:363 (12363|0) - ^ until 00:12:909 - and if you apply this, please move 00:13:181 (13181|0) - to 4 done xD
* 00:14:818 (14818|3) - i suggest to split this LN here 00:15:636 - because it has different pitch from here. can't hear it @@
* 00:18:091 (18091|2) - ^ split here 00:18:909 - still can't hear it @@
* 00:21:363 (21363|3) - ^ split here 00:22:181 - and delete 00:22:181 (22181|1) - ok here i sort of heard it xD
* 00:16:454 - might add 1 more for cymbal^^ ah right i forgot xD
* 00:23:000 - ^ wow why me forgot this too ;w;w;w;w;
* 00:24:636 (24636|2) - i suggest to stop this LN here 00:25:454 - ok xP
* 00:45:909 (45909|3) - i am highly recommended to split this LN here 00:46:727 - it has different pitch ok xP
* 00:47:545 (47545|2) - ^ split here 00:48:363 - okto that too xP
* 00:49:181 (49181|0) - ^ split here 00:50:818 - ok here i can't hear because i thought have same pitch @@
* I see the pattern after this is following vocal, so i suggest to add note here 00:56:272 here 00:56:545 here 00:56:818 here 00:57:091 - because the vocal start there ^^ I purposely left them empty so players could get ready?
* 00:57:363 - make one of them to LN for vocal until 00:58:454 - ok xP
* 00:59:545 - ^ until 01:00:091 - ok xP
* 01:01:181 - ^ until 01:01:727 - yep xP
* 01:07:181 - ^ until 01:07:727 - yep yep xP
* 01:10:454 - ^ until 01:11:545 - yep yep yep xD
* 01:12:636 - ^ until 01:13:181 - yep yep xD
* 01:14:272 - ^ until 01:14:818 - yep xD
* 01:17:000 - ^ until 01:17:545 - right xD
* 01:19:454 - ^ until 01:20:000 - right right xD
* 01:20:272 - ^ until 01:20:818 - right right right xD
* 01:36:636 - ^ until 01:37:454 - wow wow xD
* 01:39:091 - ^ until 01:39:636 - wow xD
* 01:49:727 - ^ until 01:50:272 - yes xP sorry was bored ;w;w;w;w;w;
and so on to every long vocal sound in my point of view it looks nice and better^^

* 01:03:091 (63091|2) - i think it should stop at 01:03:500 - ok xP
* 01:23:545 (83545|2) - ^ at 01:28:727 - probably not?
* 01:42:363 (102363|1) - ^ at 01:43:181 - hmm ok i guess?
* 02:15:909 (135909|3) - ^ at 02:17:954 - (i hear this LN is for vocal, so it should stop there.) Probably not because I'm following both background and vocal xP
* 03:37:727 (217727|2) - ^ at 03:39:363 - (both cymbal and vocal stop there) ok xP
* 03:51:636 (231636|3) - ^ at 03:52:591 - (vocal stop there^^) ok xP
* 04:04:727 (244727|0) - ^ at 04:05:954 - well ok xP
* 04:17:818 (257818|3) - ^ at 04:18:636 - hmm ok to that too xP
* 01:09:363 (69363|1,69636|1) - move them to different column to avoiding 1 line note ok xP
* 01:39:636 (99636|3,99909|3) - ^ ok
* 01:51:636 - i suggest to add note here for vocal (following your last pattern to follow vocal) hmm idk seems too fast for 1st? And also seems tidier this way xPalso same case with 03:39:909 until 03:41:000 - same reason for 00:57:091 - :P
* 01:51:909 - ^ same xP
* 01:52:863 - ^ also same same xP
* 01:56:818 - ^ same same xP
* 01:58:454 - ^ same xP
* 02:13:181 - ^ wow same xD
* 02:14:000 - ^ ok same same xD
* 02:28:181 - ^ you miss a bass sound here~ yea I guess I heard it too xP
* 03:14:818 - ^ for cymbal ok
* 03:21:363 - ^ ok to that too
* 03:27:909 - ^ ok xP
* 03:34:454 - ^ yep xP
* 03:35:272 - ^ yes and....
* 03:36:091 - ^ yes xD

10th Twilight

* 00:05:818 (5818|1) - how about to long-er this LN until 00:06:636 - ? ^^ That's so evillish hard xD
* 00:20:545 (20545|2) - i hear this LN is for vocal, so i think it should stop at 00:20:954 - hmm ok xP
* 00:24:091 (24091|1) - ^ at 00:25:318 - ok xP
* 00:28:727 (28727|1) - ^ at 00:28:863 - never knew it's that short xD
* 00:32:000 (32000|2) - ^ at 00:32:409 - well ok xD
* i think the rest are okay~ maybe some LN stop timing for vocal. You could playback it around 30% to make it clear ^^ I'll try xP

how2pass ;w; it is beyond my imagination xD There's one way : Magic! jkjk xD
i think that's all from us, hope could helpful~
GOOD LUCK ｡◕‿◕｡

Muu-chan wrote:

also a little recheck for 'General' thing.
I'm still not sure if this song is from Umineko no Naku Koro ni. I can't find any source that state it, MAL said it has different song. But it is okay if you've any source that state this song is from there
u said earlier that you make 9 difficulties and 1 GD. Which one is it? Also please put the name who make that GD in your tags.
Lastly, please delete "," from your tags if it is for spacing between 2 words. I think space is enough ^^

no kds.
good luck~

schwarzvgrune wrote:

Hi Awang411~~ ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii ~~ xD

Mod as requested from Grune's modding queue

Feel free to implement or rejecti if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~
"rejecti" xD


General : ( √ )
Mapset : ( ? ) 10 diffs and are all 4k? make sure you're not self-plagiarising the map~~ need to make sure that each diff is unique enough to stand alone as a diff, or else you might encounter problems when you submit for rank o(>﹏<)o I'll trY xP
Metadata : ( √ )
Timing : ( √ )
Audio : ( X ) make sure bitrate is not higher than 192kbps o(>﹏<)o ExactlY ;w;w;w; searching for different mp3 xD
Background : ( √ )

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4K = |1|2|3|4|

for example,
3rd twilight
00:13:181 - until 00:39:363 -
from 3rd twilight - 10th twilight, it's completely the same, this section self-plagiarises one another. please make sure you don't have too many sections like this.
if you cannot differentiate them enough then it means you don't need to have too many diffs o(>﹏<)o It's different xP
but Yea seems too similiar ;w;w;w;w; i'll trY to fix it xD

Nice Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O

schwarzvgrune wrote:

no kudosu o(>﹏<)o
you can use audacity or format factory to decrease the 'bitrate" to 192kbps without actually affecting the actual audio quality that much.! so have a try!

i can mod once you've made adjustment on your diffs o(≧v≦)o~~