* 00:02:000 - i suggest to add LN here until 00:05:000 for the long piano or what is that stuff sound xD maybe guitar~
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u mean.. until 00:04:250 right? * 00:04:250 (4250|4,4250|1) - um listen again in this part, you should move 1 of them to the blue line here 00:04:156 - it has different drum sound timing.
yea i knew there is drum sound. for easy map, not added it.. but cause u pointed it, i'll add * 00:04:531 (4531|5) - change or add LN until 00:05:000 for the guitar sound too.
00:04:531 (4531|5) is drum 'Tom' sound not guitar sound :3
there is guitar sound at 00:04:625
so i added LN at 00:04:625* 00:04:812 (4812|4) - i suggest to delete it, no beat here^^
there has drum 'Tom' sound (but very low)
but if u cannot feel the sound, then i'll delete * 00:05:000 - same here, i sugget to add LN to continuing guitar sound until 00:07:250 -
applied* 00:07:250 (7250|3) - i suggest to split this LN into two parts ^^ first part from 00:07:250 - until 00:07:625 - 2nd part from 00:07:625 - until 00:08:000 - (guitar changing sound^^)
ok splited !* 00:13:250 (13250|3) - i suggest to split this LN into 2 parts too :> or maybe adding 1 more LN from 00:13:625 - until 00:14:000 - (no need to split ^^)
i think.. no longer need to change here * 00:26:000 (26000|1,26750|3,27500|5) - I suggest those LN's stop at 00:28:625 - and delete this LN's 00:28:250 (28250|2,28250|4) - ( i think there's no guitar changing sound, so no need to change the LN)
ok applied *Important* 00:38:000 (38000|0,38750|2,39500|4) - sorry maybe i suggest to delete those LN's and change to the notes because at this timing area has a lot of beat tempo (not a long sound, guitar, piano, etc) mostly drums. You could follow your pattern before (or following drum beats / guitar melody sound in this area). Beside that those LN's doesn't match with the song in this timing area D: but it's okay for this LN 00:40:250 (40250|6) - since it has a guitar song in there.
YEAH i'm waiting dat advice!! i changed at 00:38:000 ~ 00:40:250(drum pattern) but maybe it is hard in normal map.. right? notice it if it is too hard. * 00:41:000 - add note in 5
added note in 3* 00:41:187 (41187|3,41281|2,41281|4,41562|2) - i suggest to delete them :> it is unnecessary, beside that this pattern is too hard in normal.
* 00:41:375 (41375|1) - move to blue line :> 00:41:281 -
umm...there is nothing in 00:41:187, 00:41:375.. maybe ur miss.. right? * 00:53:281 (53281|2) - move to 1
ok applied* 00:53:750 (53750|2) - move to 00:53:656 - column 5 (following your pattern^^)
not move but delete it * 00:56:750 (56750|5) - ^ to 00:56:656 -
same thing* 00:55:156 - maybe add a note here ? :>
* 00:58:156 - ^
good suggest* 00:55:625 (55625|5) - i suggest to change this LN into note, add a note here 00:55:531 - and this LN 00:55:250 (55250|1) - stop here 00:56:000 - (if you do that, move this note 00:56:000 (56000|1) - to other column :>)
umm..i think.. no longer need to change here* 00:58:250 (58250|5,58250|2) - delete 1 of them, i think 1 LN is enough :>
ok applied* 00:59:000 (59000|0) - move to blue line 00:58:906 - (i heard it have different time sound with 00:59:000 (59000|4) - :3)
yea there has sound at 00:58:906 but need not to add note* 01:12:500 (72500|4) - i suggest to move it, because have different pitch with the above.
move 01:12:687 (72687|4) to 3* 01:21:687 (81687|0,81687|2,81875|3,81875|5,82062|2,82062|0,82250|4,82250|5,82437|1,82437|2,82625|4,82625|3,82812|6,82812|5) - no need to overmap it in Normal diffs :> i suggest just follow the beat and re-pattern it~
umm.. it is not overmap but there need to change pattern..i'll consider new pattern* 01:23:750 (83750|2,83750|6) - i suggest to delete 1 of them, 1 note is enough since has a same pitch with the other :>
ok applied~Well the rest is okay in this diff. Maybe just fixing some hand balance but i'm not good at that since this is 7K xD sorry :<~
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