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D.J.Amuro - ZZ [OsuMania]

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Nanatsu
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Nanatsu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016년 12월 3일 토요일 at 오후 10:57:02

Artist: D.J.Amuro
Title: ZZ
Source: jubeat saucer
Tags: reflec beat lordraika
BPM: 154
Filesize: 3218kb
Play Time: 01:43
Difficulties Available:
  1. Black Another - 7Key (5.92 stars, 1983 notes)
  2. LordRaika's EZ - 7Key (1.29 stars, 290 notes)
  3. LordRaika's HD - 7Key (2.99 stars, 1029 notes)
  4. MX - 7Key (3.62 stars, 1298 notes)
  5. NM - 7Key (1.94 stars, 540 notes)
  6. SC - 7Key (4.99 stars, 1767 notes)
Download: D.J.Amuro - ZZ
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Last edited by Nanatsu , edited 60 times in total.
HOST_old
338 posts
Joined August 2009
HOST_old
너무쉽네여 케헤케게켁
Nanatsu
1,138 posts
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Topic Starter
Nanatsu

HOST wrote:

너무쉽네여 케헤케게켁
ㄹㅇ ㅎㅎ
Starry-
osu! Alumni
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Joined December 2012
Starry-
take my ~*/>3</*~
Nanatsu
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Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Nanatsu

Starry- wrote:

take my ~*/>3</*~
thanks! <3
arviejhay
1,413 posts
Joined August 2009
arviejhay
Hello sorry for the delay
School days
Mod req from "Mania New Modding Team" Queue

Column
1,2,3,4,5,6,7

[General]
Check AIMod
Audio bitrate 190kbps above

So i change the bitrate
https://www.dropbox.com/s/w1cxcx2s5hk8378/ZZ.mp3?dl=0
See if it works


[Lv,8]
00:39:350 - add a note on 3?
00:54:350 (54350|5) - move to 3
01:31:557 (91557|0,91557|6) - i think the pitch sound getting low (lol i can't explain it clearly) so 3 and 5

[Lv.26]
Seems fine

[Lv.35]
This diff is great!!
except aimod more that 6 notes simultaneously

[Black Another]

You should ask 17VA to mod this

That's all
It's too good lol

Good luck for ranking it!
and maybe when this is bubbled make Lv.71 and Lv.83 a external diff (Link)

Tried playing Lv.81 XD
But got D at the end
Ichigaki
1,767 posts
Joined February 2013
Ichigaki
Black Another? Why you use it while the other diff is just put the Lv. ? Please consider/change it ><)b
Harbyter
Beatmap Nominator
1,367 posts
Joined October 2011
Harbyter
hi suwako~ here the mod req from ▣▣▣No.1 Team Modding Queue OPEN [Mania]▣▣▣

[GENERAL]

i think it needs a difficulty between Lv.8 and Lv.26 around 3.1 stars , the gap is really high and you should nerf something in the Lv.8 if this is the easier difficulty in this mapset ,
easier difficulty abore 2.00 are unrankable so how about just deleting those notes at the end 01:42:953 (102953|6,103246|4) - ,it will drop the the star rating to 1.98 ,but i think you should rearrange that pattern then lol

then suggest to increase by 0.15 the star rating of the Lv.26 for a nice difficulty spread
------



[MOD]

i'm not really good modding 7k or the placement of the note in this keymode so i try figure out what i can :?

Column-1-2-3-4-5-6-7-

Black Another
00:13:246 - why only here 3 notes ?would be better put 3 notes here 00:12:856 - where the sound is much stronger?

00:19:090 - add a note here?

00:24:837 - suggest to add a note here in col 5 for the sequence of the 3 drums that we can hear

00:25:226 - ^

00:30:486 (30486|6) - how about to move in col 3,so it will follow the flow's music

-------

ok from here 00:39:350 - for what i can understand you put notes on drum,pich and the pianoes notes right? ---->


00:40:226 - missing note

00:43:538 (43538|3) - delete,the sound is the same as here 00:42:759 -

00:43:927 (43927|2) - ^

00:48:408 - missing note

00:51:135 - ^

00:56:492 - to here 00:57:661 - in the lv 35 is a 1/8 bit and is correct

00:58:051 - add a not here too??Feel strange only 2 notes here lol

00:58:343 - missing note

01:01:817 (61817|3) - i'm not sure cause the sound is hard to listen here but i think this note should be here 01:01:850 - ,normal 1/4 and here 01:01:882 (61882|5) - nothing

01:02:207 (62207|3,62272|5) - same here

for the incoming pattern starting from here 01:02:726 - where you followed the piano i suggest to change the previous one 01:02:466 (62466|2,62531|3,62596|4,62661|5) - ,just a simple 1/4??

01:03:895 - how about this? lol

01:23:570 - why 4 notes here?

----
01:35:453 - ok from here i'm out,don't know what to say xD but-->

01:38:863 (98863|5) - uhm.. delete?Is strange that in this pattern here 01:38:570 - to here 01:39:252 - only here there's 4 notes

Lv.35
like in the Black another why no add here? 00:39:447 - 00:39:544 -

00:48:408 - 00:48:603 - add?

00:57:661 - to here 00:58:051 - in the Black Another is 1/6 bit and is correct

00:59:609 - uhm... what you followed o,o ?? here some suggestion ----->

if following drums and pitch then ---->

00:59:707 (59707|6,59707|1) - remove and add here 00:59:804 -
01:00:389 - add here
01:00:486 (60486|1) - remove
01:00:681 - add

---
otherside you can add notes on the missing snap in this section to fill the pianoes sound.. the way you mapped here is really chaotic lol


01:09:788 (69788|1,69885|3,69983|1,70080|3,70177|5,70275|3,70372|5,70470|3) - i can't hear nothing here in 1/8

01:23:570 - delete one?? in the next pattern like this here 01:25:129 - and here 01:26:687 - you haven't put 4 notes

01:24:739 - delete one?? like in the other pattern here 01:23:181 - and here 01:26:298 -

01:25:811 - add? like here in the previous pattern 01:24:252 -

01:27:369 - here too ^ but i think it's oky too without adding cause for the incoming double stairs,this is youre choice xD

01:43:830 - delete one ,7 notes are unrankable lol


that's all,hope i'll be helpfull :) :) here a star~
Nanatsu
1,138 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Nanatsu

arviejhay wrote:

Hello sorry for the delay
School days
Mod req from "Mania New Modding Team" Queue

Column
1,2,3,4,5,6,7

[General]
Check AIMod
Audio bitrate 190kbps above

So i change the bitrate
https://www.dropbox.com/s/w1cxcx2s5hk8378/ZZ.mp3?dl=0
See if it works

Thank you! i appiled it.


[Lv,8]
00:39:350 - add a note on 3? 4
00:54:350 (54350|5) - move to 3 OK
01:31:557 (91557|0,91557|6) - i think the pitch sound getting low (lol i can't explain it clearly) so 3 and 5 I got your point, OK

[Lv.26]
Seems fine LOL

[Lv.35]
This diff is great!!
except aimod more that 6 notes simultaneously Hmm, i will consider.

[Black Another]

You should ask 17VA to mod this

LOL He is Noodle Poet kk

That's all
It's too good lol

Good luck for ranking it!
and maybe when this is bubbled make Lv.71 and Lv.83 a external diff (Link)


yea, probably i will do.. kk

Tried playing Lv.81 XD
But got D at the end

Thanks to modify my map!
Last edited by Nanatsu , edited 1 time in total.
Nanatsu
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Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Nanatsu

Harbyter wrote:

hi suwako~ here the mod req from ▣▣▣No.1 Team Modding Queue OPEN [Mania]▣▣▣

[GENERAL]

i think it needs a difficulty between Lv.8 and Lv.26 around 3.1 stars , the gap is really high and you should nerf something in the Lv.8 if this is the easier difficulty in this mapset ,
easier difficulty abore 2.00 are unrankable so how about just deleting those notes at the end 01:42:953 (102953|6,103246|4) - ,it will drop the the star rating to 1.98 ,but i think you should rearrange that pattern then lol yea, i will do.

then suggest to increase by 0.15 the star rating of the Lv.26 for a nice difficulty spread
------



[MOD]

i'm not really good modding 7k or the placement of the note in this keymode so i try figure out what i can :?

Column-1-2-3-4-5-6-7-

Black Another
00:13:246 - why only here 3 notes ?would be better put 3 notes here 00:12:856 - where the sound is much stronger?

added

00:19:090 - add a note here?

^

00:24:837 - suggest to add a note here in col 5 for the sequence of the 3 drums that we can hear

^

00:25:226 - ^

^

00:30:486 (30486|6) - how about to move in col 3,so it will follow the flow's music

no, i intended.

-------

ok from here 00:39:350 - for what i can understand you put notes on drum,pich and the pianoes notes right? ---->

hmm? i put them for star raiting LOL



00:40:226 - missing note

nope.

00:43:538 (43538|3) - delete,the sound is the same as here 00:42:759 -

i following piano sound u know lol.

00:43:927 (43927|2) - ^

^
00:48:408 - missing note

not bad at all, ok.

00:51:135 - ^

^

00:56:492 - to here 00:57:661 - in the lv 35 is a 1/8 bit and is correct

hmm.. i think 1/6 is correct here

00:58:051 - add a not here too??Feel strange only 2 notes here lol

7

00:58:343 - missing note

nope.

01:01:817 (61817|3) - i'm not sure cause the sound is hard to listen here but i think this note should be here 01:01:850 - ,normal 1/4 and here 01:01:882 (61882|5) - nothing

it's piano sound, consider about it plz :D

01:02:207 (62207|3,62272|5) - same here

^

for the incoming pattern starting from here 01:02:726 - where you followed the piano i suggest to change the previous one 01:02:466 (62466|2,62531|3,62596|4,62661|5) - ,just a simple 1/4??

i need to consider cuz these are piano sound exactly, i should keep for now..

01:03:895 - how about this? lol Image

great kk

01:23:570 - why 4 notes here?

hmm, nvm.. i keep

----
01:35:453 - ok from here i'm out,don't know what to say xD but-->

01:38:863 (98863|5) - uhm.. delete?Is strange that in this pattern here 01:38:570 - to here 01:39:252 - only here there's 4 notes

not really, i considered about pattern density about here.

Lv.35
like in the Black another why no add here? 00:39:447 - 00:39:544 -

umm.. i intended differnt sound.. so i didn't added

00:48:408 - 00:48:603 - add?

i following piano sound here..

00:57:661 - to here 00:58:051 - in the Black Another is 1/6 bit and is correct

exactly, thank you.

00:59:609 - uhm... what you followed o,o ?? here some suggestion ----->

if following drums and pitch then ---->

00:59:707 (59707|6,59707|1) - remove and add here 00:59:804 -

00:59:609 - 00:59:999 -

01:00:389 - add here
01:00:486 (60486|1) - remove
01:00:681 - add



---
otherside you can add notes on the missing snap in this section to fill the pianoes sound.. the way you mapped here is really chaotic lol


i noticed what do you want to say finally xD..

so i added some notes to follow piano sounds in my way.. thank you~

btw, i will not follow drum sound on here.



01:09:788 (69788|1,69885|3,69983|1,70080|3,70177|5,70275|3,70372|5,70470|3) - i can't hear nothing here in 1/8

will re-arrange xD

01:23:570 - delete one?? in the next pattern like this here 01:25:129 - and here 01:26:687 - you haven't put 4 notes

i'm going to add 4 notes if so, lol

01:24:739 - delete one?? like in the other pattern here 01:23:181 - and here 01:26:298 -

umm.. no..

01:25:811 - add? like here in the previous pattern 01:24:252 -

ok

01:27:369 - here too ^ but i think it's oky too without adding cause for the incoming double stairs,this is youre choice xD

then.. keep lol

01:43:830 - delete one ,7 notes are unrankable lol

it's not unrankable at all, you can read 7k mania ranking rule further lol


that's all,hope i'll be helpfull :) :) here a star~

Thanks to your modding :D
Nanatsu
1,138 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Nanatsu

Ichigaki wrote:

Black Another? Why you use it while the other diff is just put the Lv. ? Please consider/change it ><)b


Do you have some great difficulty name idea? i can't imagine except Black Another :)
Takane6
978 posts
Joined June 2014
Takane6
Hi suwako :D
Mod from queue

column: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

Always Check the AI mod in every diff :D
Black Another
00:01:557 - add note for consistency
00:03:505 - delete 1 note for consistency
00:13:246 - ^
00:28:051 - ^
00:29:999 - ^
00:34:479 - ^
00:04:674 - add note for consistency
00:12:856 - ^
00:23:765 - too much for 4 note?
00:30:778 - too much for 5 note?
01:33:505 - ^
01:32:921 - ^
01:30:778 - too much for 6 note?
01:32:337 - ^
00:39:057 (39057|3,39057|4,39057|2) - the sound here is too loud for 3 note
01:42:953 (102953|1,102953|3,102953|5) - ^
00:44:804 - kick sound, add note
00:46:363 - ^
00:49:479 - ^
00:54:155 - ^
00:55:713 - ^
01:00:389 - ^
01:03:505 - theres a sound here, add 1 or 2 note
01:03:213 - ^
01:02:921 - ^
01:03:798 - ^

Lv.35
00:06:622 - add note for consistency
00:09:739 - ^
00:10:908 - ^
00:19:479 - kick sound,add note
00:21:038 - ^
00:22:596 - ^
00:24:057 - ^
00:24:447 - ^
00:30:389 - delete 1 note for consistency
01:42:953 (102953|0,102953|6) - no sound, delete

Lv.26
00:13:635 - add note for consistency
00:15:194 - ^
00:16:752 - ^
00:19:869 - ^
00:21:427 - ^
00:22:986 - ^
00:39:544 - theresa sound here,add note
00:48:164 (48164|4,48213|3) - try to use 1/6

Lv.8
look good in every angle! xD


Another Epic map!! xD
good luck with this map :D
Nanatsu
1,138 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Nanatsu

Takane6 wrote:

Hi suwako :D
Mod from queue

column: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

Always Check the AI mod in every diff :D
Black Another
00:01:557 - add note for consistency

ok

00:03:505 - delete 1 note for consistency

nope.

00:13:246 - ^
00:28:051 - ^
00:29:999 - ^
00:34:479 - ^

^ nope. i will not consider much about detail consistency density since it's kinda expert level.

00:04:674 - add note for consistency

nope.


00:12:856 - ^

ok

00:23:765 - too much for 4 note?
00:30:778 - too much for 5 note?
01:33:505 - ^
01:32:921 - ^
01:30:778 - too much for 6 note?
01:32:337 - ^

^ all nope

00:39:057 (39057|3,39057|4,39057|2) - the sound here is too loud for 3 note

kinda for pattern, it's not overmapping at all.

01:42:953 (102953|1,102953|3,102953|5) - ^

^

00:44:804 - kick sound, add note
00:46:363 - ^
00:49:479 - ^
00:54:155 - ^
00:55:713 - ^
01:00:389 - ^

^ seems fine, all ok

01:03:505 - theres a sound here, add 1 or 2 note
01:03:213 - ^
01:02:921 - ^
01:03:798 - ^

^ i intended.

Lv.35
00:06:622 - add note for consistency

? there is already so many notes

00:09:739 - ^
00:10:908 - ^

^ ok

00:19:479 - kick sound,add note
00:21:038 - ^
00:22:596 - ^

^ all nope

00:24:057 - ^
00:24:447 - ^

^ seems fine.

00:30:389 - delete 1 note for consistency

nope.

01:42:953 (102953|0,102953|6) - no sound, delete

it has sound exactly, but lower than other sounds.

Lv.26
00:13:635 - add note for consistency
00:15:194 - ^
00:16:752 - ^
00:19:869 - ^
00:21:427 - ^
00:22:986 - ^
00:39:544 - theresa sound here,add note
00:48:164 (48164|4,48213|3) - try to use 1/6

^ all accept

Lv.8
look good in every angle! xD XD


Another Epic map!! xD
good luck with this map :D

Thanks to modding my map!
Kawawa
Kawawa
안녕하세요~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

:)
모딩에 앞서, 제 경우힛사가 100% 적용되지 않은 맵에서는 이것이 어떤 의도로 넣은 노트인지 알 수 없기에 정확한 모드가 힘들 수도 있으니
사전에 양해 부탁드립니다 :O 또한 모든 파트를 세부적으로는 볼 수는 없었습니다 ㅠㅠ.


소리가 약간 밀리는 느낌이 들었어요.
오프셋 400~404? 부근으로 한번 확인해보세요. 제 감이 틀릴 수도 있습니다 :33333333333333333333333333333333333 !!!!!!

Column 1234567
NM
00:17:531 (17531|1,17726|1,18311|0,18505|0,18895|6,19090|6) - 00:23:765 (23765|5,23960|5,24544|6,24739|6) - 저는 이 해머 패턴이 어울리지 않다고 생각하며,
00:17:531 - 00:18:311 - 00:23:765 - 00:24:544 - 갠적으로 오버노트라고 생각합니다. 1개씩
만약 유지하신다면, 첫번째의 이미지의 경우는 위쪽을 Ctrl+H 대칭시켰어요.
이 두번째 이미지 같은 경우 00:17:531 - 노트를 2개로 변경하실 경우에요.
23초쪽은 생략하겠습니당.

00:39:350 (39350|3) - 개인적으로 저도 이부분의 col4부터 시작하는 것을 선호하나 좀 더 대칭있게 만드자면
00:39:350 (39350|3) - 이동5 00:39:544 (39544|0) - 이동3 이것만으로 유지하시거나
00:40:129 (40129|4,40324|2) - 이걸 각각 7,1로 이동시켜키는것도 괜찮은것 같아요.
00:45:583 - 힛사 finish를 사용하실 경우라면 노트1개 추가? //
00:51:817 - ^same
히트사운드 soft-hitfinish2 밑라인에도 이것이 필요한 부분이 있긴했으나, 그 라인은 다른음을 따라갔다고 생각하여 넘겼습니다.
00:52:207 (52207|3) - 이동4
00:53:376 (53376|1,53570|3,53765|5,53960|3) - Ctrl + H 아래와 밸런스?
00:54:350 (54350|2,54739|3) - 오른쪽으로 2칸
00:55:908 (55908|4,56103|6,56298|2) - 왼쪽으로 1칸씩
52:207 ~ 55:908 ^위 4줄 모드 경우엔 1묶음이니, 전부 변경해보신다음에 보셔야해요. 단지 제안입니다.
01:29:804 (89804|6,89804|2) - 이동 2,5 그리고 01:30:389 (90389|1,90389|5) - 이동 1,7 후자가 높은음이라 생각하기때문.
01:32:921 (92921|2,92921|4) - 이동 1,7

HD
00:00:389 (389|0,389|2) - SC와 비슷하게 롱놋을 사용하셨는데, 사용하신다면 길이는 동일하게 맞추셔야 한다고 생각합니다. 갠적으로 SC길이가 더 나은.
00:08:181 (8181|2,8181|3,8473|1,8473|2,8765|0,8765|1) - Ctrl + G?
00:11:103 (11103|4) - 이동6
00:12:856 - 00:19:090 - 힛사를 아직 안된 곡이기에 정확하진 않으나, 혹 finish를 넣을걸 생각하셨다면 노트를 추가 하시는걸 선호합니다.
00:25:324 - 00:31:557 - 이 부분또한 위와 같으나, 노트가 1개인걸로 봐서 안넣으시는걸 의도하지 않았나 싶네요.
00:42:856 (42856|3) - 이동5?
00:48:700 - 이부분 같은 경우엔 오른쪽에 깔린 스테어 패턴이 만약 피아노음을 표현하신거라면,
00:48:700 (48700|6,48798|5,48895|4,48992|6) - 00:49:090 (49090|5,49187|4,49285|3,49382|5) - 이렇게 4개씩텀을 끊는게 나은 것 같네요.

SC
00:06:720 (6720|2,6817|1,6914|0,7109|3,7207|2,7304|1,7499|4,7596|3,7694|2) - 스테어 패턴을 봤을때 00:06:622 (6622|4) - 이것이 4로 가는게 맞다고 생각합니다만, 아마 밑에 숏롱 배치떄문에 두신것 같아요.
그래서 이렇게 두시는게 나을거같아요. 파란색으로 표시해둔 노트가 쭉올라가는 음이 되기때문에 정렬도 할겸 괜찮은 것 같네요. 그 바로 밑으로 이어지는 숏롱 배치에 관하여는 넘어가겠습니다.

00:25:324 - 매우 좋아하는 패턴 <3<3
이건 제안입입니다ㅏㅏ 깔끔하게?
00:26:687 (26687|6,26785|5) - CTRL+G
00:27:272 (27272|1,27369|0) - CTRL+G
^이 두개를 리버스하면
이렇게 좀 더 깔끔하지 않나 싶네요.
00:31:557 - 추가 1,3 다른부분 피니시라인은 모르겠지만 여기는 제안하겠습니당 1,3추가하는게 더 나을것 같아요.
00:31:655 (31655|0) - 만약 동의하시면 이동2

00:37:791 (37791|5,37791|6,37889|3,37889|4,37986|6,37986|5,38083|3,38083|4,38181|6,38181|5,38376|0,38376|1,38473|3,38473|2,38570|0,38570|1,38668|2,38668|3,38765|1,38765|0) - 만약 의도하신게 아니라면 이부분은 개인적으로 좌우로 번갈아 내는게 좋을 것 같아요.
00:38:376 (38376|0,38376|1,38473|3,38473|2,38570|0,38570|1,38668|3,38668|2,38765|1,38765|0) - 이 경우 왼손으로 전부 쳐내야 하기때문에..
이런식으로..?

00:38:960 (38960|2,38960|4,38960|0,38960|6,39155|1,39155|2,39155|4,39155|5,39252|3,39350|0,39350|5,39350|1,39350|6) - 그리고 이부분은 아래 비트 그대로 따라가는게 더 어울리지 않나싶습니다.

00:48:700 - 이부분의 계단은 하드와 같은 의견입니당
00:58:051 - 1에추가 finish
00:58:440 (58440|1) - ^1추가하신다면 이동7
01:01:168 - 2에추가
01:01:557 - 4에추가
01:01:655 - 5에추가
01:01:752 - 6에추가
01:01:850 - 7에추가
01:02:337 (62337|4,62337|0,62337|2,62434|3,62434|5,62434|1,62531|2,62531|6,62531|4,62629|5,62629|1,62629|3) - 이 라인에 노트를 3개씩 주셨는데
2개가 적당합니다. 랭크에 적합한가를 생각하자면 이부분은 적합하지 않다고 생각해요. 왜냐하면 01:01:557 - 이라인부터 같은 코드를 따라가셨다고 생각하기 떄문이에요.
01:33:895 (93895|2,94285|3,94674|4) - 노트 1개씩 추가? finish라인
01:43:830 (103830|3) - 1개 제거

Black Another
00:02:239 (2239|5) -1로이동. 제안입니다. 아마 아래 노트보다 음이높고, 윗 노트보다 음이 낮아서 저리 배치하셨을거라 생각합니다.
그러나 반드시 모든 음에 맞게 배치할 수는 없고, 더 나은 노트 배치가 있다면 변경 할 수 있습니다.
1로 이동한다면 00:01:947 (1947|2,1947|5) - 이것과 대칭을 이룰 수 있고, 바로 이어지는 노트와의 연결도 더 자연스럽지 않나 싶습니다.
00:03:505 (3505|3) - 이거는 굳이 필요 없다고 생각합니다. 저 노트를 넣음으로써 00:03:311 (3311|5,3311|1) - 이것의 배치를 2,5로 하신지는 모르겠지만,
저 노트를 지운후에 재 배치를 고려해보시는 것도 좋을것 같아용

00:06:233 (6233|6,6330|5,6427|4,6525|5) - SC의 마지막 모딩과 비슷한 이유로 지우는게 적합하다고 생각해요

도움이 되지 않을수도 있습니다 T^T
Deep Sea
1,947 posts
Joined June 2013
Deep Sea
Hello Suwako
mod ready

[General]
rename diff NM in Normal, HD in Hyper, SC in Another
big difference between NM, HD and SC
delete from tags ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ and add reflec beat

[Normal]
NM over 2.00 star diff

00:01:557 (1557|6) - delete
00:03:505 (3505|2) - ^
00:06:622 (6622|0) - ^
00:07:791 (7791|4) - ^
00:09:350 (9350|1,9739|4) - ^
00:13:148 (13148|1,13440|2) - ^
00:14:707 (14707|5,14999|4) - ^
00:16:265 (16265|1,16557|2) - ^
00:19:382 (19382|5,19674|4) - ^
00:20:940 (20940|1,21233|2) - ^
00:22:499 (22499|5,22791|4) - ^
00:23:765 (23765|1,23765|5) - delete, here is no strong sound
01:04:577 (64577|4,64869|6) - delete
01:06:135 (66135|3,66427|5) - ^
01:07:694 (67694|2,67986|0) - ^
01:10:811 (70811|2,71103|0) - ^
01:12:369 (72369|3,72661|5) - ^
01:13:927 (73927|4,74220|6) - ^

there are many moments that will be hard to play for beginners, make it easier to

[HD]

00:14:025 - add note
00:15:583 - ^
00:17:142 - ^
00:20:259 - ^
00:21:817 - ^
00:23:376 - ^
00:26:103 - ^
00:26:882 - ^
00:27:661 - ^
00:28:440 - ^
00:29:220 - ^
00:29:999 - ^
00:30:389 - ^
00:30:778 - ^
00:31:557 - ^
00:32:337 - ^
00:33:116 - ^
00:33:895 - ^
00:34:674 - ^
00:35:453 - ^
00:36:233 - ^
00:36:622 - ^
00:37:012 - ^
00:39:739 - ^
00:48:408 - add note to 1
00:48:505 (48505|0) - delete
00:58:051 - add note
01:00:291 - ^
01:00:681 - ^
01:01:070 - ^
01:29:220 - ^
Mwallx
222 posts
Joined April 2014
Mwallx
Feel bored now ,So i'm here lol.Always free to reject.True reason:I want kudosu
Btw,nice bg :P.About the tags:ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
SC
00:11:298 to 00:12:759 I think single notes dont fits the sound well ,i prefer LN.
Also here 00:29:999 and here 00:36:233 you can see from 00:25:324 to 01:01:168
there are all single notes,I think it's kinda of dull since it's not the black another diff.

00:24:057 (24057|1,24447|2) - ??,compared to here 00:17:531 what're they used for?

00:38:960 I know you're not like me always catch the sound,but I still think add one
here in 4 feels betetr 00:39:057.

00:39:447 three sound here just a remind,if you did a pause on purpose then fine :),your choice.

00:43:343 Remove this feels better,you can test.

00:47:921 (47921|0,47921|1) - Remove them to make a pause,this emphasizes the (piano?)
sound.

Also a remind, 00:48:408 here some sound.

00:51:622 (51622|1,51817|2) - Delete for same pause reason to emphasize the piano sound

I'm confused to see 01:01:561 to 01:02:239 sounds the same with 00:56:492 this in 100% playback
rate. But sounds different in 25% playback rate.So strange lol,therefore I think you should do
01:01:561 to 01:02:239 to 1/8 maybe.

01:09:252 (69252|3) - A little unharmonious this LN,but still your choice it short or not.

01:09:739 (69739|0,69788|1,69837|2,69885|3,69934|0,69983|1,70031|2,70080|3) -
Maybe overed?

(01:15:194 beautiful LN wall pattern than 17VA /me die)

01:33:895 This drumbeat should be emphasized.My idea http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2484347
(And I'm so glad that you didnt make a jackhammer here 01:35:259 I hate jacks)

You can consider to make the last kiai time harder by adding 2 note streams lol.

(01:43:246 Damn I should practice patterns like this,break combo every time O_O)
Your patterns so great and creative.I love this than Romancing Layer acutually. :) Since it has Lv71 and 83
Good Luck~(Have my babies star)
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Mwallx
222 posts
Joined April 2014
Mwallx
Hmm.my problem already fixed
Thanks much for modding~
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-Kousei-_old
9 posts
Joined January 2015
-Kousei-_old
Hi! From My Queue.

Layout
7k: |0|1|2|3|4|5|6|

Black Another
  1. 00:01:557 (1557|0) - Make it LN until 00:01:850 -
  2. 00:03:116 (3116|3) - Same ^
  3. 00:04:297 - You need other 2 LNs in 1 & 5 until 00:04:674 -
  4. 00:22:986 - You need a note in 6, you can reverse this group 00:22:791 (22791|6,22889|5,22986|4) -
  5. 01:01:363 (61363|2) - Delete
  6. 01:04:114 (64114|0,64139|6,64163|5,64187|4,64212|3,64236|2,64260|1,64285|0) - Delete them you don't need
17VA
1,007 posts
Joined September 2012
17VA
[5C]

00:09:739 - dddzzzzzz http://puu.sh/ei3yF/1233144f77.jpg

00:19:090 - 여기 노트 하나 추가되야됨. 뒤에는 있는데 여긴 없음 http://puu.sh/ei3Ln/dca3b5d847.jpg

01:01:168 - 1 추가

01:01:557 - http://puu.sh/ei40z/68c1c38ebc.jpg ?

01:16:168 - http://puu.sh/ei471/f8ebe6f61a.jpg 끝을 이리하면 더 자연스러움

[HD]

00:10:908 (10908|0,10908|2) - 여기만 1/4 짧으면 ㅇ섹함

00:23:376 - 이게 더 나을듯함 http://puu.sh/ei4JJ/a3c203b72e.png

00:56:492 - 이부분 그냥 1/6 단놋배치 어떰

01:35:453 - 하나 추가

[흑어나더는볼거없음]

ㅇㅇ
Nanatsu
1,138 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Nanatsu

KawaEE wrote:

안녕하세요~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

:)
모딩에 앞서, 제 경우힛사가 100% 적용되지 않은 맵에서는 이것이 어떤 의도로 넣은 노트인지 알 수 없기에 정확한 모드가 힘들 수도 있으니
사전에 양해 부탁드립니다 :O 또한 모든 파트를 세부적으로는 볼 수는 없었습니다 ㅠㅠ.


소리가 약간 밀리는 느낌이 들었어요.
오프셋 400~404? 부근으로 한번 확인해보세요. 제 감이 틀릴 수도 있습니다 :33333333333333333333333333333333333 !!!!!!

Column 1234567
NM
00:17:531 (17531|1,17726|1,18311|0,18505|0,18895|6,19090|6) - 00:23:765 (23765|5,23960|5,24544|6,24739|6) - 저는 이 해머 패턴이 어울리지 않다고 생각하며,
00:17:531 - 00:18:311 - 00:23:765 - 00:24:544 - 갠적으로 오버노트라고 생각합니다. 1개씩
만약 유지하신다면, Image첫번째의 이미지의 경우는 위쪽을 Ctrl+H 대칭시켰어요.
Image이 두번째 이미지 같은 경우 00:17:531 - 노트를 2개로 변경하실 경우에요.
23초쪽은 생략하겠습니당.


죄송합니다, 이건 개인적으로 좋아하는 패턴이기 때문에 킵하겠습니다.

00:39:350 (39350|3) - 개인적으로 저도 이부분의 col4부터 시작하는 것을 선호하나 좀 더 대칭있게 만드자면
00:39:350 (39350|3) - 이동5 00:39:544 (39544|0) - 이동3 이것만으로 유지하시거나
00:40:129 (40129|4,40324|2) - 이걸 각각 7,1로 이동시켜키는것도 괜찮은것 같아요.
00:45:583 - 힛사 finish를 사용하실 경우라면 노트1개 추가? //
00:51:817 - ^same
히트사운드 soft-hitfinish2 밑라인에도 이것이 필요한 부분이 있긴했으나, 그 라인은 다른음을 따라갔다고 생각하여 넘겼습니다.
00:52:207 (52207|3) - 이동4
00:53:376 (53376|1,53570|3,53765|5,53960|3) - Ctrl + H 아래와 밸런스?
00:54:350 (54350|2,54739|3) - 오른쪽으로 2칸
00:55:908 (55908|4,56103|6,56298|2) - 왼쪽으로 1칸씩
52:207 ~ 55:908 ^위 4줄 모드 경우엔 1묶음이니, 전부 변경해보신다음에 보셔야해요. 단지 제안입니다.
01:29:804 (89804|6,89804|2) - 이동 2,5 그리고 01:30:389 (90389|1,90389|5) - 이동 1,7 후자가 높은음이라 생각하기때문.
01:32:921 (92921|2,92921|4) - 이동 1,7

^ all accept

HD
00:00:389 (389|0,389|2) - SC와 비슷하게 롱놋을 사용하셨는데, 사용하신다면 길이는 동일하게 맞추셔야 한다고 생각합니다. 갠적으로 SC길이가 더 나은

패턴 상의 문제도 있다보니 킵 해보겠습니다.
.
00:08:181 (8181|2,8181|3,8473|1,8473|2,8765|0,8765|1) - Ctrl + G?
00:11:103 (11103|4) - 이동6

^ all accept

00:12:856 - 00:19:090 - 힛사를 아직 안된 곡이기에 정확하진 않으나, 혹 finish를 넣을걸 생각하셨다면 노트를 추가 하시는걸 선호합니다.
00:25:324 - 00:31:557 - 이 부분또한 위와 같으나, 노트가 1개인걸로 봐서 안넣으시는걸 의도하지 않았나 싶네요.

일단 히트사운드만 넣어두고 노트 추가는 안하겠습니다.

00:42:856 (42856|3) - 이동5?

accept

00:48:700 - 이부분 같은 경우엔 오른쪽에 깔린 스테어 패턴이 만약 피아노음을 표현하신거라면,
00:48:700 (48700|6,48798|5,48895|4,48992|6) - 00:49:090 (49090|5,49187|4,49285|3,49382|5) - 이렇게 4개씩텀을 끊는게 나은 것 같네요.

좋은 느낌입니다.

00:06:720 (6720|2,6817|1,6914|0,7109|3,7207|2,7304|1,7499|4,7596|3,7694|2) - 스테어 패턴을 봤을때 00:06:622 (6622|4) - 이것이 4로 가는게 맞다고 생각합니다만, 아마 밑에 숏롱 배치떄문에 두신것 같아요.
Image 그래서 이렇게 두시는게 나을거같아요. 파란색으로 표시해둔 노트가 쭉올라가는 음이 되기때문에 정렬도 할겸 괜찮은 것 같네요. 그 바로 밑으로 이어지는 숏롱 배치에 관하여는 넘어가겠습니다.

accept

00:25:324 - 매우 좋아하는 패턴 <3<3
이건 제안입입니다ㅏㅏ 깔끔하게?
00:26:687 (26687|6,26785|5) - CTRL+G

no

00:27:272 (27272|1,27369|0) - CTRL+G

accept

^이 두개를 리버스하면 Image
이렇게 좀 더 깔끔하지 않나 싶네요.
00:31:557 - 추가 1,3 다른부분 피니시라인은 모르겠지만 여기는 제안하겠습니당 1,3추가하는게 더 나을것 같아요.
00:31:655 (31655|0) - 만약 동의하시면 이동2

accept

00:37:791 (37791|5,37791|6,37889|3,37889|4,37986|6,37986|5,38083|3,38083|4,38181|6,38181|5,38376|0,38376|1,38473|3,38473|2,38570|0,38570|1,38668|2,38668|3,38765|1,38765|0) - 만약 의도하신게 아니라면 이부분은 개인적으로 좌우로 번갈아 내는게 좋을 것 같아요.
00:38:376 (38376|0,38376|1,38473|3,38473|2,38570|0,38570|1,38668|3,38668|2,38765|1,38765|0) - 이 경우 왼손으로 전부 쳐내야 하기때문에..
Image 이런식으로..?

역설적으로, 앞부분은 전부 오른손으로 치게 되있습니다. 손의 밸런스를 위해서 의도한 부분이기도 합니다.

00:38:960 (38960|2,38960|4,38960|0,38960|6,39155|1,39155|2,39155|4,39155|5,39252|3,39350|0,39350|5,39350|1,39350|6) - 그리고 이부분은 아래 비트 그대로 따라가는게 더 어울리지 않나싶습니다.
Image

이것은 드럼 비트를 따르는 의도입니다.. 개인적으로 상당히 좋아하는 부분..

00:48:700 - 이부분의 계단은 하드와 같은 의견입니당

이거.. SC에 적용하기엔 약간 치기가 애매해지는 느낌이 드네요.. 일단 킵..

00:58:051 - 1에추가 finish

accept

00:58:440 (58440|1) - ^1추가하신다면 이동7
01:01:168 - 2에추가
01:01:557 - 4에추가
01:01:655 - 5에추가
01:01:752 - 6에추가
01:01:850 - 7에추가

^ all accept

01:02:337 (62337|4,62337|0,62337|2,62434|3,62434|5,62434|1,62531|2,62531|6,62531|4,62629|5,62629|1,62629|3) - 이 라인에 노트를 3개씩 주셨는데
2개가 적당합니다. 랭크에 적합한가를 생각하자면 이부분은 적합하지 않다고 생각해요. 왜냐하면 01:01:557 - 이라인부터 같은 코드를 따라가셨다고 생각하기 떄문이에요.

이건 스타 레이팅을 의도한 부분이기도 합니다. 일단 킵.

01:33:895 (93895|2,94285|3,94674|4) - 노트 1개씩 추가? finish라인

좋은 느낌입니다. 약간 리어레인지도 해봤습니다.

01:43:830 (103830|3) - 1개 제거

완료

00:02:239 (2239|5) -1로이동. 제안입니다. 아마 아래 노트보다 음이높고, 윗 노트보다 음이 낮아서 저리 배치하셨을거라 생각합니다.
그러나 반드시 모든 음에 맞게 배치할 수는 없고, 더 나은 노트 배치가 있다면 변경 할 수 있습니다.
1로 이동한다면 00:01:947 (1947|2,1947|5) - 이것과 대칭을 이룰 수 있고, 바로 이어지는 노트와의 연결도 더 자연스럽지 않나 싶습니다.

accept

00:03:505 (3505|3) - 이거는 굳이 필요 없다고 생각합니다. 저 노트를 넣음으로써 00:03:311 (3311|5,3311|1) - 이것의 배치를 2,5로 하신지는 모르겠지만,
저 노트를 지운후에 재 배치를 고려해보시는 것도 좋을것 같아용

문제가 될 정도는 아니라고 보기 때문에 일단 킵..

00:06:233 (6233|6,6330|5,6427|4,6525|5) - SC의 마지막 모딩과 비슷한 이유로 지우는게 적합하다고 생각해요

스타 레이팅입니다.

도움이 되지 않을수도 있습니다 T^T
훌륭한 모딩 감사합니다 :)
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