Sakakibara Yui - Gensou no Shiro · forum

Aenna

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

Aenna 2010-04-24T13:20:26+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年5月6日 at 19:59:50

Artist: Sakakibara Yui
Title: Gensou no Shiro
Source: Akatsuki no Goei ~Tsumi Bukaki Shumaturon~
Tags: syangrila
BPM: 145
Filesize: 15466kb
Play Time: 02:03
Difficulties Available:

Hard (4.96 stars, 335 notes)
Insane (5 stars, 440 notes)
Normal (2.99 stars, 122 notes)

Download: Sakakibara Yui - Gensou no Shiro
Download: Sakakibara Yui - Gensou no Shiro (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#13

I like this game

Last edited by Aenna 2010-05-06T10:59:34+00:00, edited 9 times in total.

Sure

4,219 posts

Joined February 2009

Sure 2010-04-24T15:48:18+00:00

Hi~! ^_^

I couldn't find anything wrong. These are just hitsound suggestions.

[Normal]
01:19:011 (1) - finish at 01:19:631 instead of whistle
01:20:045 (2) - finish instead of whistle
01:25:631 (1,2) - same suggestion likes ^
01:32:252 (1,2) - same suggestion likes ^

[Hard]
01:19:631 (4,5) - finish instead of whistle
01:26:252 (5,8) - ^
01:32:873 (4,7) - ^

STAR~*

momoco

64 posts

Joined April 2009

momoco 2010-04-24T17:03:39+00:00

reika　is mine.

ponsaku

133 posts

Joined February 2009

ponsaku 2010-04-25T18:12:10+00:00

so cute

Shulin

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Joined August 2009

Shulin 2010-04-25T21:15:37+00:00

General:

-- The score is unbalanced, 423,000 for Normal and 7,446,000 for Hard. Imo you should add another difficulty (A Normal + or maybe an easier Hard difficulty.)

Normal:

-- Raise hitsound volume at louder parts of the song?

00:43:631 (x) - Add note?
01:59:769 (6) - Remove return and start spinner earlier?
02:03:494 (1) - Silence. ~ Add silent spinnerbonus?

Hard:

-- Raise hitsound volume imo, especially at louder parts of the song.
-- Hmm... maybe rename this "Insane".

00:20:769 (x) - Add note?
02:03:494 (1) - Silence. ~ Also add a silent spinnerbonus?

Nice maps

Shinxyn

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Shinxyn 2010-04-26T23:52:59+00:00

Streamy as always

Normal-
Felt claps would fit, but no matter
Fine.

Hard-
00:45:700 (1) - .... just remove new combo.. (or remove 7..)
00:55:425 (1,2) - don't like this on this diff, its the only part with 1/4 sliders like this, kinda uncomfortable.
02:00:597 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - hitsounds please~ (soft whistles fit well here... simple way would be add to start of 1,3,5)

Insane-
00:19:631 - imo, remove this whistle
00:44:873 - add finish? or maybe clap? (no big deal, just trying to make it sound different here)
01:43:425 - add note to match 01:41:769 (14)?
01:59:976 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - also could use some hitsounds, just to bring it out a bit more

Clean map is clean :x
that little sound at the very end of the mp3 is odd, uhh... shh, hope no one else minds

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-04-27T09:16:08+00:00

いぇーい　

masuo_old

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Joined July 2009

masuo_old 2010-04-28T05:54:36+00:00

star~ ＝ω＝

SamiPale

766 posts

Joined October 2009

SamiPale 2010-04-28T14:07:15+00:00

support for eroge song

DeadAlready

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Joined August 2008

DeadAlready 2010-04-29T11:30:19+00:00

~~yuinyan~~ cyborg nice map~>w</

star~ <3

dvorak_old

294 posts

Joined February 2010

dvorak_old 2010-04-29T12:48:17+00:00

song is good

ゲームは地雷でもなく良作でもないきれいな凡作って線は譲れない

MeLLoN

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Joined July 2009

MeLLoN 2010-04-29T15:46:39+00:00

ya-!

PSPDS Eddie

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Joined November 2009

PSPDS Eddie 2010-04-30T16:55:45+00:00

☆⌒ ヽ(´ー^ ) star

Diasios

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Joined August 2008

Diasios 2010-04-30T17:06:25+00:00

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]

• Your difficulties are N I I (see beatmap listening): you MUST make an easier difficulty

[Normal]

• 02:03:494 (1) - Delete this spinner

[Hard]

• 02:03:494 (1) - Delete this spinner

[Insane]

• 02:03:494 (1) - Delete this spinner

Aenna

724 posts

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

Aenna 2010-05-01T05:29:28+00:00

Mafiamaster wrote:
You'll need an easier difficulty. Preferably below a 3.00 star rating.

no. sorry.

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2010-05-05T14:02:34+00:00

With "?" - suggestion

[insane]
0:23:149 (4) left 1 grid makes spacing more even?
1:29:149 (2) up 2 grid left 1 grid for the same reason?
1:37:425 (3) left 1 grid

[hard]
1:48:988 (6) up 1 grid
2:02:666 (6,7) remain the same spacing within this combo?

[normal]
good

nice song, star~

orioncomet

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orioncomet 2010-05-06T10:40:27+00:00

I'm not gonna Nazi-ing!

Nice map, Star ☆

azuki

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Joined January 2009

azuki 2010-05-06T10:59:02+00:00

gakkari game

Mafiamaster