1. Easy (0.98 stars, 67 notes)
2. Extra (4.71 stars, 175 notes)
3. Hard (4.3 stars, 155 notes)
4. Normal Sallad (3.03 stars, 115 notes)

Sallad4ever wrote:

Yeah good song from IOSYS
I'd be glad to make a diff, please wait for it m(_ _)m

Star for now~

Sallad4ever wrote:

HaLo

she's all yours
hope you like it
[attachment=0:ed46d]IOSYS - star river (thepianist) [Normal Sallad].osu[/attachment:ed46d]

the timing in the end is kinda hard to tell

KoromoAmae wrote:

Random acts of modding

General:
The video is all black and white, maybe change the combo colors to match it? It's up to your tastes, but it worked for Bad Apple.
Nah. I have yet to pick combo colors, but I found that a lot of people raged about how the black/grey/white approach circles blend into the background. Personally, I find it looks nice, but it doesn't play well.
The timing seems off on the retard near the end of each difficulty, have you tried the 1/8th beat snap divisor for more accuracy?
Yeah, I hope I'll get better timing though.

Easy:
01:37:711 - I think this slider ends too far off the grid. Maybe lengthen the curves vertically to make up the time you would need to shift the end left a few spaces.
Moved!


I didn't notice any glaring spacing problems, this seems very polished.

H-boy wrote:

First of all
kill .osb file - -,and full submit Forgot to add a credit SB thing...

Easy
fine

Normal Sallad
00:10:957(5) - use whistle replace finish at end
00:14:707(5) - ^
00:25:957(4) - ^
00:40:957(x) - note?

Hard
01:10:019(x) - note
01:25:019(x) - note?
01:25:488(x) - ^?
01:25:722(x) - ^?
Haha no thanks...I don't think it calls for it


Lunatic
fine

starrr

no-7 wrote:

I really love this beautiful song,just use bpm 128 all over the song?

thepianist wrote:

no-7 wrote:

I really love this beautiful song,just use bpm 128 all over the song?

Already does, except the end...

Sakura301 wrote:

[General]
64 BPM is 1/2 of 128 BPM why not base it off 128 BPM and make a 1/2 section instead?
When I tried that (as the offset is when it starts) it still plays at 1x speed...I might mess with it again over the weekend...
Your background file name is kind of long...
Err...
There are 2 .osb files
Artist change does that. Removed.
Add emotional skyscrapper cosmic mind and Byakuren Hijiri to tags
Yes, found that out last night as well. Added.
You dont need that many red lines at the end, just try another 1/2 section.
This I entirely disagree. The timing isn't that simple.
So... what's the point of SBing hitsounds again?, just to let you know hitsounds are supposed to sound exactly when the player hits the note, instead of being fixed, if you want to add hitsounds to slider ticks and stuff i recommend you add them to each difficulty separately. But remember they are called HITsounds for a reason. (And yes im aware many ppl SB hitsounds but it doesnt look good when you dont hit the note at the exact milisecond it was SBed at, slider ticks are another story tho)
They're mostly in blank spaces that I cannot hitsound (ie during spinners). Ticks, I take care with a custom soundset... ...I'll run through the difficulties again...
You should put your name on your diffs and the guest mapper on the guest diff imo, also something someone told me some time ago "what's the point of SBing the mapper's name if you see it on the song select anyways?" Because I can. jk. It's a placeholder so I can SB the lyrics before someone says REMOVE OSB FILE.

[Easy]
01:33:925 (1) - Dont change BPM in middle of a slider please... Oops

[Normal Sallad]
00:59:472 (1,2,3) - Spacing
01:03:457 (2,3,4) - Spacing
01:18:457 (2,3,4) - Spacing

[Hard]
00:18:925 (1) - Make more symmetric? Okay
00:51:738 (1) - ^ But this one I like D: Like a bass cleft-ish thing...
01:18:925 (3) - ^ Okay
01:20:097 (4) - Looks ugly with the waypoints like that, try: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9305 more smooth curve Not your suggestion, but reshaped.
01:26:425 (3) - Once again try something more smooth? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9307 I guess...
01:30:175 (1,2,3,4) - All of theese could use smoother curves. Personally, I think it's fine...

[Lunatic]
The 64 BPM section doesnt hint you in any way it's going to be that slow, the slider speed throws off and the distance doesnt look like it's hinting at all, also why so many streams?

LKs wrote:

No need a Enable countdown
Okay~

Easy

[00:48:926] why not use whistle? Forgot

Normal Sallad

[00:40:019] (4,5) move a bit , i think the spacing is too close
[00:56:543] kiai part should be started at [00:56:426]

Hard

[01:34:719] spacing? Yesh

Lunatic

[00:28:769] new combo Okay

star~

no-7 wrote:

[EASY]
I think that 0.4x spacing may be too close , next note is half covered by previous hit300 etc.,but if you change this you may remap this diff totally it's up to you.
Combobursts will be changed in the near future to make up for this~

Other diffs seem fine, hold on~!

H-boy wrote:

Normal Sallad
00:10:957(5) - use whistle replace finish at end No thanks
00:14:707(5) - ^ ^
00:25:957(4) - ^ ^
00:40:957(x) - note? ^

Sakura301 wrote:

[General]
[Normal Sallad]
00:59:472 (1,2,3) - Spacing ? No spacing problems...
01:03:457 (2,3,4) - Spacing ^
01:18:457 (2,3,4) - Spacing ^

LKs wrote:

Normal Sallad

[00:40:019] (4,5) move a bit , i think the spacing is too close Wait, there isn't a spacing problem...though...
[00:56:543] kiai part should be started at [00:56:426] Yes, changed

Blazevoir wrote:

Heya~ Modding in place of I_Tatsuo_I, so here's my mod:

Blue = suggestions/minor issues
Green = might wanna fix this
Red = you MUST fix this

[Easy]
00:02:754 (2) - Wouldn't this note be a bit confusing to hit for beginners?Moved to be a slider? :3
00:40:019 (3) - I keep wanting to hit this early (Btw, this isn't in green because this was just a personal issue. I don't know if others did the same.)Yeah, the vocal comes in 1 and 1/2 beats early. Made a fix, but it looks soso at the moment. Want a second opinion on the new slider.

[Normal Sallad]
01:12:597 (3,4) - Make these into a slider? Both the spacing and timing threw me off.Added
01:27:597 (4,5) - ^^

[Hard]
00:21:503 (5,6,7) - Make into a repeating slider instead?Hm, Iono...I kinda like it this way...
01:36:153 (6) - Why is this the only one out of the last notes with nearly no volume?Trying to avoid the tick sounds until I get a good timing.
01:37:711 (7) - This sounds weird where it ends... Fix it?Fixed hopefully

[Lunatic]
00:42:832 (1) - This practically seems out of place, maybe because of where it starts.
00:48:105 (5) - Make this start a red tick later?
01:19:746 (10) - Make this start a red tick earlier?
01:22:090 (4) - ^

This is very well-mapped aside from what I pointed out. ★~

P.S. For some odd reason, this map excites me more than the SB version... I dunno why...