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Akiko Shikata - Chouwa ~Fuurai no Shirabe~

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Dusty
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Dusty
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, November 15, 2010 at 4:37:58 PM

Artist: Akiko Shikata
Title: Chouwa ~Fuurai no Shirabe~
Tags: harmonia harmony melody wind
BPM: 60
Filesize: 3899kb
Play Time: 01:11
Difficulties Available:
  1. Breezy (3.34 stars, 105 notes)
  2. Calm (1.89 stars, 96 notes)
Download: Akiko Shikata - Chouwa ~Fuurai no Shirabe~
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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The title translates to "Harmony ~Melody of the Wind~" or something similar.
Last edited by Dusty , edited 20 times in total.
Torran
724 posts
Joined November 2008
Torran
OSU! Timing Help!
  • Nonsense, you don't suck at timing at all; you're BPM is spot on.
    This timing is for the middle of the song since the beginning and end have no distinguishable beat.
    1. BPM 180 , Offset 21900
Starred~!
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Dusty

soradg123 wrote:

OSU! Timing Help!
  • Nonsense, you don't suck at timing at all; you're BPM is spot on.
    This timing is for the middle of the song since the beginning and end have no distinguishable beat.
    1. BPM 180 , Offset 21900
Starred~!
Awesome, thanks.
Colin Hou
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Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. I'm not very sure for the offset, but the bpm should be 180.020, I got a offset 2,940.
  2. of course the not inherited in the middle of the song is useless.
  3. try to get a pro-timing help.
  4. remove the .osb file from the folder and do a full submit.
[Normal]:
  1. OA is a little high. -1 or -2
  2. 00:07:606 (1,2,3) - feels quite strange
  3. 00:11:605 (1,2,3) - maybe you should use 1/3 beat snap here?
  4. 00:48:267 (8,9) - these 2 notes just covers some parts of the HP bar. you should do some changes.
[Hard]:
  1. seems fine now
this song was nice, hope you can get it ranked :3

star~
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
Yay a pending Dusty map ^_^

General:

-- Ahh the timing... well I got BPM: 180.00 Offset: 2,905 (much better at the end imo) ~ not confident about it. I'm not sure how you would time the beginning accurately because there's no beats.

Normal:

00:02:953 (1) - Silence?
00:04:786 (1) - Make it longer for normal?
00:45:281 (1,2) - Bit too low imo, the hit300s get cut off slightly.
01:06:612 (2,3) - Bit too high maybe?
01:09:945 (10) - End on the white tick (01:10:278) imo.
01:11:612 (1,2,3) - Awesome <3

Hard:

00:02:953 (1) - Silence this?
01:03:279 (2) - Whistle > clap?

Nice, not much I can add. Star.
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
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Dusty

Shulin wrote:

Yay a pending Dusty map ^_^

General:

-- Ahh the timing... well I got BPM: 180.00 Offset: 2,905 (much better at the end imo) ~ not confident about it. I'm not sure how you would time the beginning accurately because there's no beats.

Normal:

00:02:953 (1) - Silence?
00:04:786 (1) - Make it longer for normal?
00:45:281 (1,2) - Bit too low imo, the hit300s get cut off slightly.
01:06:612 (2,3) - Bit too high maybe?
01:09:945 (10) - End on the white tick (01:10:278) imo.
01:11:612 (1,2,3) - Awesome <3

Hard:

00:02:953 (1) - Silence this?
01:03:279 (2) - Whistle > clap?

Nice, not much I can add. Star.
all fixed, thanks for modding! :)
Krisom
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2,867 posts
Joined April 2009
Krisom
Where have I seen that background before?? I know I have, maybe in a movie <_<" Well...

HiHi!

->Normal
Looks normal to me (Lol, you get it? Normal to me, 'cuz it's a normal diff :D!! Oh, I'm so funny sometimes...)

->Hard
Those sliders are pretty o_o

I can't say anything, I suppose I just separated the diffs to make a silly pun about the normal diff -_-"

Yeah, I'm just wasting your time, go map something else instead of wasting your time reading this D:<!

Star ^^!
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Dusty

Krisom wrote:

Where have I seen that background before?? I know I have, maybe in a movie <_<" Well...
it's from Ar tonelico 2

Krisom wrote:

->Normal
Looks normal to me (Lol, you get it? Normal to me, 'cuz it's a normal diff :D!! Oh, I'm so funny sometimes...)

->Hard
Those sliders are pretty o_o

I can't say anything, I suppose I just separated the diffs to make a silly pun about the normal diff -_-"

Yeah, I'm just wasting your time, go map something else instead of wasting your time reading this D:<!

Star ^^!
lol, thanks :D
Garven
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Joined January 2010
Garven
[General]
The spinnerspin.wav sounds really funky when in use. I don't know if you really want to use it or not...
The timing feels a little late during the beginning when you focus really hard on when the beats hit compared to the vocals during the beginning, if only because of the singing style.

[Normal]
00:45:238 (1) - This combo is pretty long for the difficulty level, though I dunno where a good spot to split it would be. :/
01:08:571 (6) - I'd split this combo up at the 6 or 8.

[Hard]
01:01:905 (3) - This is sticking into the hp bar a little bit.

Neat song to map. G'jorb!
Dusty
870 posts
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Topic Starter
Dusty

Garven wrote:

[General]
The spinnerspin.wav sounds really funky when in use. I don't know if you really want to use it or not... doesn't matter to me, changed to default
The timing feels a little late during the beginning when you focus really hard on when the beats hit compared to the vocals during the beginning, if only because of the singing style. I'm kinda bad at timing so unless people give me numbers I can't really do anything >_>

[Normal]
00:45:238 (1) - This combo is pretty long for the difficulty level, though I dunno where a good spot to split it would be. :/ split at 6
01:08:571 (6) - I'd split this combo up at the 6 or 8. split at 6

[Hard]
01:01:905 (3) - This is sticking into the hp bar a little bit. and moved down

Neat song to map. G'jorb!
Thanks for modding!
thepianist
544 posts
Joined March 2009
thepianist
Hello~

Hey this song is cool x) and relaxing too~

Anyways

[Normal]
00:03:238 (1) - I would think this could start on the 2nd white tick to match the vocals, but it still feels strange. *shrugs* (I would give better timing, but I can't do it. The end sounds right though.) Same with [Hard].
00:04:738 (1) - Have this spinner be gradually silenced (ie completely silent 1 or 1/2 beat before the end.) You can tell the stratification of the volume right now. Same with [Hard].
00:17:071 (1) - ^
00:38:071 (1) - How come this suddenly becomes a bit louder in the end.
01:08:571 (1) - Align with (2)
01:11:905 (2) - This is awesome. x)

[Hard]
(see above)
00:31:071 (1) - Should start on the red tick

Yep~ Great job! *star
YGOkid8
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Joined February 2009
YGOkid8
Star for the awesome slider in Normal :D
Sakura
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Sakura
--General----
Source = Ar Tonelico III [Suggestion]

---Normal----
00:04:738 (1) - Could be shortened to 00:05:904 to match up the song, however then it would be too short, i still recommend you shorten it 1 or 2 white ticks
00:12:571 (3) - Sounds better on the red tick behind imo.
00:37:905 (5,1) - Im not sure if it's good to do this only for the hitsound, but i think that 5 should go poof and the spinner should start there.

----Hard-----
00:12:571 (3) - Once again i think this should be on the red tick behind.
00:32:238 (2,1) - Switch new combo?

Ok that shouldnt be too hard, so i'll give the star now
Dusty
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Topic Starter
Dusty

Sakura301 wrote:

Source = Ar Tonelico III [Suggestion]
It isn't from Ar tonelico III (it's just from an album called Harmonia) so didn't change it

I changed most of the other stuff in your and pianist's mod posts but I don't remember which stuff ._.
Soaprman
1,392 posts
Joined January 2008
Soaprman
There were a few minor parts that tripped me up a bit but I think it's more because it's a quiet song at the beginning than anything else. Your mapping is fine.

No modding to be done here~
Dusty
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Dusty

Soaprman wrote:

There were a few minor parts that tripped me up a bit but I think it's more because it's a quiet song at the beginning than anything else. Your mapping is fine.

No modding to be done here~
It's not the quietness, it's more like there's no beat, I don't know what the timing at the beginning is supposed to be, and some of the notes might be on the wrong ticks and I have no way of knowing because I can't tell. :p

Thanks for looking, though.
Beuchi
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Beuchi
Revived!!
Krisom
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Krisom
General-

· Beep! I see 320 kbps. Max allowed is 192 now. You'll have to (sadly) reduce the vibrate.
· Sure Ar tonelico III should not go in tags (at least)?
· Everything else seems fine.

Calm-
I'd like if you used the same timing sections for the spinner volumes in this one as the ones you did in Breezy
00:43:238 (1,2,1,2) - A jump huge spacing in the easiest diff? your call though.
01:11:905 (2) - You, sir, are awesome and I hope one day I'm as awesome as you are.

Breezy-
00:02:905 (1,1) - Make these the same as calm? I'm in fact really annoyed by the slider's end hitsound being that loud, but extending it would be nice too.
00:21:905 (1) - I don't know wich one I like more, the slider or the sliderbody.
00:31:071 (1) - Silence the sliderend?
00:34:905 (1) - I'm just asking this because I know that you can. So, can you try something prettier for this slider *w*?
01:01:905 (3) - End at 01:02:405 - and add a note at 01:02:571?
01:11:905 (1) - Make the volume of this spinner slow at the start and then increase it until it ends to add more epic-ness to the end~


That is all, just suggestions as always, so, yeah, you tell me qhat you fix and I'll gladly come back
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Dusty

Krisom wrote:

General-

· Beep! I see 320 kbps. Max allowed is 192 now. You'll have to (sadly) reduce the vibrate. :x
· Sure Ar tonelico III should not go in tags (at least)? The song isn't from that game, though? I just stole the BG from Ar tonelico :D
· Everything else seems fine.

Calm-
I'd like if you used the same timing sections for the spinner volumes in this one as the ones you did in Breezy
00:43:238 (1,2,1,2) - A jump huge spacing in the easiest diff? your call though.
01:11:905 (2) - You, sir, are awesome and I hope one day I'm as awesome as you are.

Breezy-
00:02:905 (1,1) - Make these the same as calm? I'm in fact really annoyed by the slider's end hitsound being that loud, but extending it would be nice too.
00:21:905 (1) - I don't know wich one I like more, the slider or the sliderbody.
00:31:071 (1) - Silence the sliderend?
00:34:905 (1) - I'm just asking this because I know that you can. So, can you try something prettier for this slider *w* Mmm. :|
01:01:905 (3) - End at 01:02:405 - and add a note at 01:02:571?
01:11:905 (1) - Make the volume of this spinner slow at the start and then increase it until it ends to add more epic-ness to the end~


That is all, just suggestions as always, so, yeah, you tell me qhat you fix and I'll gladly come back
thanks for the mod!
YGOkid8
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YGOkid8
forgive me if i'm wrong, but wasn't 256kbps the maximum?
192kbps is the ideal one, but not maximum
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