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Expander - aura

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Midge
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, January 2, 2016 at 2:56:20 AM

Artist: Expander
Title: aura
Source: jubeat saucer fulfill
Tags: 藤森崇多 dubstep glitch hop sota fujimori mel sionkotori
BPM: 175
Filesize: 7371kb
Play Time: 01:47
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced (3.41 stars, 294 notes)
  2. Basic (1.9 stars, 147 notes)
  3. Beginner (1.08 stars, 97 notes)
  4. Beyond Extreme (5.55 stars, 584 notes)
  5. hs (2.56 stars, 347 notes)
  6. Kotori's Extreme (5.05 stars, 455 notes)
  7. Mel's Another (4.45 stars, 421 notes)
Download: Expander - aura
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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still looking for a bn :I
thanks for gd: mel, sionkotori
special thanks to pomuta for providing a higher quality mp3


play 5eania's diff

gds included so that people irritated by my mapping style can still enjoy the map
target audience is sub 1k, it is sight readable by people at that level. also bj bj is now sub 1k so this is redundant
sionKotori
no hitsound. I'll update soon


Kotori's Another
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Expander - aura.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 45649
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 109935
DistanceSpacing: 0.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.7000052

[Metadata]
Title:aura
TitleUnicode:aura
Artist:Expander
ArtistUnicode:Expander
Creator:Midge
Version:Kotori's Another
Source:jubeat saucer fulfill
Tags:dubstep glitch hop sota fujimori
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"booty.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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I hope you like it.
hehe
foot fetish gif why
Topic Starter
Midge
when i'm 80, she'll be 92 so that's when it'll be ok
Nerova Riuz GX
Hi, From my Queue
good song, isn't it?

General
Maybe you can set 01:13:163 - as the preview point?
add GD mappers in tags
Check the AIMod pls.
And, pay more attention about hitsounds. I can't even hear any hitsounds except normal-hit. Add some custom sampleset, or try to make them louder.

Beyond Extreme
I have to say that there are a lot of strange parts in this diff. Those objects are all crowded together in a small space, so it can't be "read" normally.
(like 00:12:478 (1,1,2,3,1) - 00:28:763 (1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,1) - 00:33:392 (1,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,1) - 00:35:449 (1,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1) - etc.)
and this situation becomes worse and worse. You have to expand them into the whole grid, and then it will be awesome.

00:01:506 (2) - Why you put a slider here? There's nothing heard in 00:01:506 (2) - .
00:04:078 (4) - ^
00:06:135 (2) - ^
00:10:249 (2) - ^
00:14:535 (2) - ^
00:24:478 (1) - obviously, this should not in the same set with 00:24:649 (1,1,2) - , they are different sounds.
00:29:963 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,1,2) - That's a kind of weird. Please take a look in 1/6 or 1/12.
00:31:163 (2) - Maybe this should be replaced with a slider?
00:38:963 - There's a clear beat here.
00:45:049 (1,2,3) - Change it into a reverse slider, and replace 00:45:392 (1) - with a no-reverse slider(?)
(I know you will understand what I'm talking about, whatever.) the same in 01:46:763 (1,2,3,1) -
00:48:478 (1) - replace it with a 1/4 slider-HC?
00:49:849 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Strange connection between 4 and 1 (the same as 00:50:535 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 00:54:649 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - )
00:58:078 (1,1) - These two are almost like a reverse slider. It should be fixed.
00:59:792 (1) - Is it rankable or not?
01:02:192 (1,2,1,1) - Maybe it can be solved like this

01:25:849 (2) - why you put a slider here? There's nothing heard at the end of this slider.
01:28:078 (1) - you can make this slider ends in 01:28:592
01:42:649 (1) - IS THAT RANKABLE!?? That's nonsense!

I can't help you fix most of the arrangement because they are too complicated and need to be expand.

Kotori's Extreme
Actually, you can change the combo colour.

00:01:335 (1,2) - Change it from HC-Slider to Slider-HC?
00:02:878 (5) - move its head under 00:02:363 (2) - ?
00:13:849 (5) - ^
00:17:878 (4,5) - make it a little bit right.
00:18:820 (2) - make it a little bit down to make the blanket better. suggest x=92 y=60.
00:47:106 (1,2,3,4) - They are crowded together. Can you expand them.
00:53:278 (1,2) - Make them all inside the grid?
01:33:049 (3) - move its head under 01:32:020 (5) - ?
01:38:192 (2) - make it all inside the grid?

Nice diff!

5eania's Extreme
00:02:878 (7) - Here should be a HC, not a slider.
00:04:078 (4) - ^
00:05:449 (2) - ^
00:13:678 (4) - ^
00:16:421 (5) - ^
00:16:421 (5) - Try to balance their distance. It can't be read normally.
00:56:278 (2) - Why you use a slider here?
01:09:392 (4,5,6) - Nice idea, but not in good arrangement. fix this pls.
01:34:249 (2) - Change it to HC

00:03:049 (8) - NC
00:03:564 (1) - continue combo
00:32:021 (6) - NC?

mel's Extreme
00:24:478 (1) - I don't heard anything at the end of the slider.
00:34:078 (3,4,5) - This set should not be in 1/4. 1/3 is better.
00:35:449 (1) - I don't heard anything at the end of the slider.
01:35:792 (2) - There are still some other sounds in this slider. Change it to a reverse slider or something more.
01:36:135 (1) - I don't heard anything at the end of this slider.

00:11:278 (1) - continue combo
00:12:478 (1) - ^
01:12:135 (1,1) - ^
01:23:792 (1) - ^

Advanced
Still, the notes are crowded together. Expand them as much as you can.
(for example, 00:06:649 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 00:39:049 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 00:46:420 (5,6,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - )
You can put more notes in the corner of the grid.
More basic sliders required.

00:10:249 (1,1,1) - continue combo?
00:21:735 (1) - ^
00:25:506 (1) - ^
00:30:306 (1) - ^
00:30:992 (1) - ^
00:32:020 (2) - NC?
00:33:392 (1) - continue?
00:33:735 (2) - NC?
00:34:078 (1) - continue?
00:38:363 (1,1) - ^
00:43:678 (1) - ^
00:48:135 (1) - ^
00:54:649 (1,1) - ^
01:06:649 (1,1,1) - ^
01:10:763 (1,1,1) - ^
01:42:992 (2) - NC?
01:43:335 (1) - continue?
01:47:106 (1) - ^

There's A LOT OF Extreme diffs in this mapset, and I'm a little scared because of this.
Hope it can be ranked, good luck
and, have a nice day.
Mel

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:

mel's Extreme
00:24:478 (1) - I don't heard anything at the end of the slider. not sure if a slider silenced at the end is rankable but I'll keep it like that for the moment*
00:34:078 (3,4,5) - This set should not be in 1/4. 1/3 is better. Changed
00:35:449 (1) - I don't heard anything at the end of the slider. *
01:35:792 (2) - There are still some other sounds in this slider. Change it to a reverse slider or something more. I like it the way it is sorry
01:36:135 (1) - I don't heard anything at the end of this slider. *

00:11:278 (1) - continue combo sv change > new combo
00:12:478 (1) - ^ ^
01:12:135 (1,1) - ^ sure
01:23:792 (1) - ^ sv change
thanks
http://puu.sh/gmdtK/760fe4222f.osu
Nerova Riuz GX
Sorry That's my fault

mel wrote:

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:

mel's Extreme
00:24:478 (1) - I don't heard anything at the end of the slider. not sure if a slider silenced at the end is rankable but I'll keep it like that for the moment*
00:34:078 (3,4,5) - This set should not be in 1/4. 1/3 is better. Changed
00:35:449 (1) - I don't heard anything at the end of the slider. *
01:35:792 (2) - There are still some other sounds in this slider. Change it to a reverse slider or something more. I like it the way it is sorry
01:36:135 (1) - I don't heard anything at the end of this slider. *

00:11:278 (1) - continue combo sv change > new combo
00:12:478 (1) - ^ ^
01:12:135 (1,1) - ^ sure
01:23:792 (1) - ^ sv change
thanks
http://puu.sh/gmdtK/760fe4222f.osu
"I don't heard anything at the end of the slider." means "you can change it from a slider to HC"
Sorry I make your misunderstanding
Topic Starter
Midge

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:

Hi, From my Queue
good song, isn't it?

General
Maybe you can set 01:13:163 - as the preview point? done
add GD mappers in tags done
Check the AIMod pls.
And, pay more attention about hitsounds. I can't even hear any hitsounds except normal-hit. Add some custom sampleset, or try to make them louder.

Beyond Extreme
I have to say that there are a lot of strange parts in this diff. Those objects are all crowded together in a small space, so it can't be "read" normally.
(like 00:12:478 (1,1,2,3,1) - 00:28:763 (1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,1) - 00:33:392 (1,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,1) - 00:35:449 (1,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1) - etc.)
and this situation becomes worse and worse. You have to expand them into the whole grid, and then it will be awesome.

00:01:506 (2) - Why you put a slider here? There's nothing heard in 00:01:506 (2) - .emphasizes the snare
00:04:078 (4) - ^
00:06:135 (2) - ^
00:10:249 (2) - ^
00:14:535 (2) - ^ hey man, if people can put random triplets in their map that literally go to nothing, i can do that with kick sliders
00:24:478 (1) - obviously, this should not in the same set with 00:24:649 (1,1,2) - , they are different sounds. fixed
00:29:963 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,1,2) - That's a kind of weird. Please take a look in 1/6 or 1/12. it's weird, but 1/6 is too fast to stream and i don't want to use sliders. keeping for now
00:31:163 (2) - Maybe this should be replaced with a slider? fixed
00:38:963 - There's a clear beat here. but putting a circle there would be awkward
00:45:049 (1,2,3) - Change it into a reverse slider, and replace 00:45:392 (1) - with a no-reverse slider(?) fine imo, changed ds indicates 1/3
(I know you will understand what I'm talking about, whatever.) the same in 01:46:763 (1,2,3,1) -
00:48:478 (1) - replace it with a 1/4 slider-HC? nah, wub extends to the red tick
00:49:849 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Strange connection between 4 and 1 (the same as 00:50:535 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 00:54:649 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ) intentional
00:58:078 (1,1) - These two are almost like a reverse slider. It should be fixed. fine imo: there's a clear path
00:59:792 (1) - Is it rankable or not? same as above
01:02:192 (1,2,1,1) - Maybe it can be solved like this fine imo, the first sputter wouldnt be mapped and that'd be awkward

01:25:849 (2) - why you put a slider here? There's nothing heard at the end of this slider. same
01:28:078 (1) - you can make this slider ends in 01:28:592 fixed
01:42:649 (1) - IS THAT RANKABLE!?? That's nonsense! yea i wonder about this. we'll see how it holds up, so im keeping for now

I can't help you fix most of the arrangement because they are too complicated and need to be expand. YE BOY


Advanced
Still, the notes are crowded together. Expand them as much as you can.
(for example, 00:06:649 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 00:39:049 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 00:46:420 (5,6,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - )
You can put more notes in the corner of the grid.
More basic sliders required.

00:10:249 (1,1,1) - continue combo? sv change
00:21:735 (1) - ^ fixed
00:25:506 (1) - ^ fixed
00:30:306 (1) - ^ fixed
00:30:992 (1) - ^ fixed
00:32:020 (2) - NC? fixed
00:33:392 (1) - continue? nop
00:33:735 (2) - NC? nop
00:34:078 (1) - continue? fixed
00:38:363 (1,1) - ^ nope, indicates that it's not a triplet
00:43:678 (1) - ^ nope, different twin sliders
00:48:135 (1) - ^ nope, wanna indicate antijumo
00:54:649 (1,1) - ^ fixed
01:06:649 (1,1,1) - ^ ehh, i wanna keep these
01:10:763 (1,1,1) - ^ sv changes
01:42:992 (2) - NC? nah
01:43:335 (1) - continue? nop
01:47:106 (1) - ^ nah, i wanna keep it like this

There's A LOT OF Extreme diffs in this mapset, and I'm a little scared because of this.
Hope it can be ranked, good luck
and, have a nice day.
thanks for mod

updated~
sionKotori
thanks for your mod!!
I'll add hitsound orz

EXT
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 45649
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
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Artist:Expander
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Creator:Midge
Version:Kotori's Extreme
Source:jubeat saucer fulfill
Tags:dubstep glitch hop sota fujimori
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CircleSize:4
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145,218,78992,1,0,0:0:0:0:
378,116,79163,2,0,P|406:178|391:286,1,180
260,360,79678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
249,215,79849,1,0,0:0:0:0:
393,296,80020,6,0,L|292:296,1,90
96,237,80363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,281,80535,2,0,B|219:238|219:238|207:189,1,90
97,20,80878,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,38,80963,1,0,0:0:0:0:
87,59,81049,2,0,L|102:106,1,45
35,136,81220,6,0,P|111:111|204:147,1,180
316,216,81735,2,0,L|337:116,1,90
289,5,82078,1,0,0:0:0:0:
251,153,82249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
407,111,82420,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,60,82592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,60,82678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,60,82763,6,0,L|230:148,1,90
372,221,83106,1,0,0:0:0:0:
231,248,83278,2,0,P|219:334|291:376,1,180
423,291,83792,2,0,L|270:300,1,135
263,313,84135,6,0,B|286:265|286:265|276:170,1,135
272,151,84478,1,0,0:0:0:0:
169,247,84649,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,234,84820,2,0,L|358:137,1,90
203,60,85163,2,0,L|193:157,1,90
264,312,85506,5,0,0:0:0:0:
64,298,85678,2,0,L|258:311,1,180
405,244,86192,1,0,0:0:0:0:
335,363,86363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
410,255,86535,2,0,P|393:210|401:160,1,90
305,29,86878,6,0,P|314:86|287:164,1,135
270,178,87220,1,0,0:0:0:0:
114,221,87392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
157,70,87563,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,250,87735,1,0,0:0:0:0:
193,275,87820,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,298,87906,1,0,0:0:0:0:
71,341,88078,5,0,0:0:0:0:
441,43,88592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,88935,1,0,0:0:0:0:
418,114,89106,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,140,89192,1,0,0:0:0:0:
413,165,89278,1,0,0:0:0:0:
355,296,89449,1,0,0:0:0:0:
179,222,89620,6,0,P|172:179|191:139,1,90
360,195,89963,1,0,0:0:0:0:
114,263,90135,2,0,P|95:176|126:90,1,180
280,49,90649,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,90820,1,0,0:0:0:0:
121,81,90992,6,0,L|216:71,1,90
347,172,91335,1,0,0:0:0:0:
241,283,91506,2,0,L|231:188,1,90
333,53,91849,1,0,0:0:0:0:
158,155,92020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
401,103,92192,6,0,P|431:158|353:261,1,180
255,370,92706,2,0,B|242:328|242:328|252:283,1,90
205,159,93049,2,0,B|232:153|232:153|257:168|257:168|286:160|286:160|310:179|310:179|350:171,2,153.000002918243
81,209,93563,1,0,0:0:0:0:
81,209,93649,1,0,0:0:0:0:
81,209,93735,6,0,P|67:164|79:116,1,90
303,12,94078,2,0,P|317:57|305:105,1,90
211,248,94420,1,0,0:0:0:0:
211,86,94592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
367,172,94763,1,0,0:0:0:0:
367,172,95106,6,0,L|369:216,1,36
448,191,95278,2,0,L|450:235,1,36
398,332,95449,1,0,0:0:0:0:
390,314,95535,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,307,95621,1,0,0:0:0:0:
419,317,95706,1,0,0:0:0:0:
411,338,95792,6,0,P|383:335|357:312,1,36
478,273,95963,2,0,P|489:298|482:332,1,36
396,270,96135,6,0,B|398:234|411:212|431:198|446:193|446:193|461:178|473:160|468:131|457:118,1,175.499991966248
373,42,96478,6,0,B|322:51|322:51|298:40|298:40|241:47,2,135
476,153,97163,6,0,P|426:214|343:174,1,175.499991966248
273,145,97506,2,0,L|276:114,1,29.2499986610413
198,178,97592,2,0,L|195:209,1,29.2499986610413
134,130,97678,2,0,L|137:99,1,29.2499986610413
23,191,97849,6,0,P|45:229|41:287,1,90
8,372,98192,2,0,L|111:365,1,90
121,372,98449,1,0,0:0:0:0:
143,376,98535,2,0,B|160:334|160:334|146:283,1,90
254,297,98878,2,0,B|237:255|237:255|251:204,1,90
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314,143,99563,6,0,B|298:143|298:143|285:112|302:77,1,80.9999975280763
401,27,99906,1,0,0:0:0:0:
377,214,100078,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,98,100249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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508,281,100592,2,0,P|486:272|447:273,1,58.4999973220826
346,363,100763,2,0,P|364:348|383:314,1,58.4999973220826
296,250,100935,1,0,0:0:0:0:
294,273,101020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
203,255,101106,1,0,0:0:0:0:
201,278,101191,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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116,278,101620,2,0,P|74:296|99:219,1,175.499991966248
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157,220,102306,2,0,P|202:217|240:228,1,80.9999975280763
371,286,102649,2,0,B|360:294|360:294|340:290|340:290|323:300|323:300|306:296|306:296|293:306|293:306|263:303|263:303|289:294|311:265,1,175.499991966248
356,210,102992,2,0,L|380:169,1,29.2499986610413
349,185,103078,2,0,L|373:144,1,29.2499986610413
338,161,103163,2,0,L|362:120,1,29.2499986610413
331,136,103249,2,0,L|355:95,1,29.2499986610413
262,89,103335,6,0,P|236:98|199:93,1,58.4999973220826
58,48,103506,2,0,P|84:39|121:44,1,58.4999973220826
215,172,103678,6,0,P|199:225|139:247,1,121.499996292114
31,193,104020,6,0,B|61:172|73:121|73:121|96:164|147:173,1,175.499991966248
238,267,104363,2,0,B|208:288|196:339|196:339|173:296|122:287,1,175.499991966248,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,247,104706,6,0,L|42:154,1,90
262,41,105049,2,0,L|256:134,1,90
98,104,105392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,202,105563,1,0,0:0:0:0:
31,165,105734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,119,105906,1,0,0:0:0:0:
161,273,106078,6,0,P|230:291|294:188,1,202.500007724762
271,104,106420,2,0,L|177:106,1,67.5000025749208
356,136,106592,2,0,L|450:134,1,67.5000025749208
337,51,106763,6,0,L|331:3,1,45.0000017166138
418,61,106878,2,0,L|412:13,1,45.0000017166138
500,74,106992,2,0,L|494:26,1,45.0000017166138
478,206,107106,6,0,L|472:254,1,45.0000017166138
396,219,107220,2,0,L|390:267,1,45.0000017166138
315,229,107335,2,0,L|309:277,1,45.0000017166138
181,216,107449,6,0,P|237:271|197:144,1,409.499981254578
257,194,108135,5,0,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Midge
forgot to apply 5eania's mods

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:

5eania's Extreme
00:02:878 (7) - Here should be a HC, not a slider.
00:04:078 (4) - ^
00:05:449 (2) - ^
00:13:678 (4) - ^
00:16:421 (5) - ^ all these are fine
00:16:421 (5) - Try to balance their distance. It can't be read normally. fixed
00:56:278 (2) - Why you use a slider here? fixed
01:09:392 (4,5,6) - Nice idea, but not in good arrangement. fix this pls. i disagree. this pattern is definitely sightreadable and it's one of my favorite in this map
01:34:249 (2) - Change it to HC fine imo, but changed the pattern after a little

00:03:049 (8) - NC
00:03:564 (1) - continue combo
00:32:021 (6) - NC? **i'll run through and fix a bunch of the wonky combos
updated~
fanzhen0019
woo
RikiH_
First mod after 5 months of inactivity so sorry if I say bullshit.
Also, sorry for my english, if you don't understand something just ask.
PS: 2015 mapping style at its finest.

General

I think you should change the name of the 2 easier "Extreme" diffs, since they look more like Insane diffs than Expert diffs, but I'm not totally sure about this, so ask some BN or stuff.

Beyond Extreme

Okay, I know only pro players can read it, but I wanted to mod it anyway ang try to give suggestions, feel free to ignore everything lol

00:12:478 (1,1,2) - In my opinion the flow here is quite weird, because as you finish the slider you immediately have to reverse in order to hit the round slider, the same applies between the round sliders.
00:25:506 (1) - I understand what shape you wanted to give to this slider, but I think you should just make a standard curved one, or maybe something like 00:25:335 (2) - Copypasting that slider is a possibility. Currently this looks a bit ugly to me.
00:30:220 (4,1) - Well, this is really weird, it looks like a 1/8 slider because of the stack and so it's really confusing and unreadable! Unstacking these elemends should do.
00:34:078 (1,2,3) - Probably it's just me but I couldn't figure out this was 1/3 during the testplay. By the way, ask for more opinions.
00:36:478 (1) - Pretty similar to 00:25:506 (1)
00:43:849 (2,3) - Maybe create a jump here, there are jumps between the whole pattern and nothing between these notes. My suggestion is to apply a ctrl+g on 00:44:020 (3,4)
00:45:278 (3,1) - Weird overlap, move the note just a little bit.
00:51:563 (1) - For some reason, I was convinced this slider followed the opposite path. The current path is anticlockwise, I was convinced it was clockwise. But it's probably just me, again. I wanted to point it out because it happened during testplay and also while I was checking in the editor.
00:56:706 (1) - It was really hard to me to determine its direction.
01:40:763 (2) - Really hard to read since it's almost completely covered by the other slider, just move it a bit down and a bit right.

Kotori's Extreme

01:12:392 (8,1) - I don't like the way it flows because after the stream you have to come back in order to follow the slider path. I suggest that you rotate it like this (the spacing is not perfect, I just needed to show you what I meant), in order to create a circular flow. I know it will destroy the symmetry but I think it worths it.


Nothing more to say. This diff is really neat and plays well!

seania's Extreme

00:01:849 (2) - NC here for consistancy with other diffs maybe?
00:30:820 (1) - This slider was a bit confusing to me, you should delete the lst repeate and place a note here: 00:30:992 - So it will make where the next pattern begins clear. During testplay I had some difficulties in this part because I was really confused by that slider and it made me miss all the following pattern.
00:40:935 (3) - 1/6 stream. There's nothing wrong with it but I think it's a bit difficult, considering that in the other Extreme diffs there isn't any, and they are harder than yours. This applies also on 00:30:306 (4,5,6) - But this is just my opinion, ask someone else if they agree.
00:45:049 (1,2,3) - This was completely unreadable to me. You used a 1/4 rhythm and suddently 1/3. Try to unstack them to make the pattern clearer, and if it doesn't work I think you will have to replace it with a slider.

mel'Extreme

Still no HS?
01:02:192 (1,2) - I didn't menage to read this during the testplay, but probably it's just me, so ask someone else for opinions.
01:47:106 (1,2,1,2) - This is clearly 1/3, even if you listen with 25%. Same here: 00:45:049 (3,4) - It's a bit weird to play 1/4 on 1/3 parts so I wanted to point it out.

Nothing more to add, this diff is awesome. Just this: check the whole diff because some stacks are not perfect (eg 00:30:478 (6,1)) but this is just nazi stuff, you don't really need to fix it, I just wanted to be as exhaustive as possible lol

Advanced

00:38:192 (1,1,1) - During testplay I said wtf. I don't think "hard" players can read something like this, honestly.

Basic

Still no HS, ok. Btw, can't find any mistake.

Beginner

Same as Basic.
Also, I don't like this slider 01:10:420 (3) -

The end. Good luck for ranking. The hardest diff is a bit weird in some parts, but overall it's awesome.
sionKotori

RikiH_ wrote:

Kotori's Extreme

01:12:392 (8,1) - I don't like the way it flows because after the stream you have to come back in order to follow the slider path. I suggest that you rotate it like this (the spacing is not perfect, I just needed to show you what I meant), in order to create a circular flow. I know it will destroy the symmetry but I think it worths it.


ah, sorry but no change. cuz that slider made like "S", and Artist is Expander = Sota Fujimori. yes "S" means Sota Fujimori :p

Nothing more to say. This diff is really neat and plays well!
thanks for modding!
RikiH_

sionKotori wrote:

ah, sorry but no change. cuz that slider made like "S", and Artist is Expander = Sota Fujimori. yes "S" means Sota Fujimori :p

thanks for modding!
Ah lol that's why
Topic Starter
Midge

RikiH_ wrote:

First mod after 5 months of inactivity so sorry if I say bullshit.
Also, sorry for my english, if you don't understand something just ask.
PS: 2015 mapping style at its finest.

General

I think you should change the name of the 2 easier "Extreme" diffs, since they look more like Insane diffs than Expert diffs, but I'm not totally sure about this, so ask some BN or stuff. eh, i think it's fine

Beyond Extreme

Okay, I know only pro players can read it, but I wanted to mod it anyway ang try to give suggestions, feel free to ignore everything lol

00:12:478 (1,1,2) - In my opinion the flow here is quite weird, because as you finish the slider you immediately have to reverse in order to hit the round slider, the same applies between the round sliders. yea, it's intentional. it's the start of a new measure, so i want that to be emphasized through the sudden change of flow
00:25:506 (1) - I understand what shape you wanted to give to this slider, but I think you should just make a standard curved one, or maybe something like 00:25:335 (2) - Copypasting that slider is a possibility. Currently this looks a bit ugly to me. eh, yea, changed
00:30:220 (4,1) - Well, this is really weird, it looks like a 1/8 slider because of the stack and so it's really confusing and unreadable! Unstacking these elemends should do. fixed? i changed the slider shape too
00:34:078 (1,2,3) - Probably it's just me but I couldn't figure out this was 1/3 during the testplay. By the way, ask for more opinions. yea, keeping for now. it's hard to read, but the pattern looks like a triangle and is spaced differently, so i think the player can deduce that it's 1/3 from that
00:36:478 (1) - Pretty similar to 00:25:506 (1) fixed
00:43:849 (2,3) - Maybe create a jump here, there are jumps between the whole pattern and nothing between these notes. My suggestion is to apply a ctrl+g on 00:44:020 (3,4) changed the jumps entirely
00:45:278 (3,1) - Weird overlap, move the note just a little bit. done
00:51:563 (1) - For some reason, I was convinced this slider followed the opposite path. The current path is anticlockwise, I was convinced it was clockwise. But it's probably just me, again. I wanted to point it out because it happened during testplay and also while I was checking in the editor. yea i tried both ways, but this felt better
00:56:706 (1) - It was really hard to me to determine its direction. fine imo
01:40:763 (2) - Really hard to read since it's almost completely covered by the other slider, just move it a bit down and a bit right. yea fixed

seania's Extreme

00:01:849 (2) - NC here for consistancy with other diffs maybe? done
00:30:820 (1) - This slider was a bit confusing to me, you should delete the lst repeate and place a note here: 00:30:992 - So it will make where the next pattern begins clear. During testplay I had some difficulties in this part because I was really confused by that slider and it made me miss all the following pattern. done
00:40:935 (3) - 1/6 stream. There's nothing wrong with it but I think it's a bit difficult, considering that in the other Extreme diffs there isn't any, and they are harder than yours. This applies also on 00:30:306 (4,5,6) - But this is just my opinion, ask someone else if they agree. fixed both
00:45:049 (1,2,3) - This was completely unreadable to me. You used a 1/4 rhythm and suddently 1/3. Try to unstack them to make the pattern clearer, and if it doesn't work I think you will have to replace it with a slider. fixed

Advanced

00:38:192 (1,1,1) - During testplay I said wtf. I don't think "hard" players can read something like this, honestly.figures, yea. fixed

Basic

Still no HS, ok. Btw, can't find any mistake.

Beginner

Same as Basic.
Also, I don't like this slider 01:10:420 (3) - actually yea, changed to a spinner

The end. Good luck for ranking. The hardest diff is a bit weird in some parts, but overall it's awesome.
thanks o/
Mel

RikiH_ wrote:

mel'Extreme

Still no HS?
01:02:192 (1,2) - I didn't menage to read this during the testplay, but probably it's just me, so ask someone else for opinions. I've asked a friend for testplay and he didn't have any problem with this part whatsoever.I never thought this part would be an issue for anybody so thanks for pointing it out,if someone mentions it in a later mod I'll probably have it changed to something easier
01:47:106 (1,2,1,2) - This is clearly 1/3, even if you listen with 25%. Same here: 00:45:049 (3,4) - It's a bit weird to play 1/4 on 1/3 parts so I wanted to point it out. fixed everything

Nothing more to add, this diff is awesome. Just this: check the whole diff because some stacks are not perfect (eg 00:30:478 (6,1)) but this is just nazi stuff, you don't really need to fix it, I just wanted to be as exhaustive as possible lol ahah i'm way too lazy for that sorry but thanks for mentioning it
thanks for the mod !
http://puu.sh/gBx73/4002fe09fd.osu
Fookiz
just my opinion :d feel free to not take mod for anything lel

General
realy good mapset :D
but one thing - im not sure if these high SV's on the easier Midge difficulties are acceptable for ranked. you need to ask
Begginer
nothing
Basic
nothing
Advanced
try making some bursts instead of some sliders, or in between the sliders that you skipped. this level of hard can contain small bursts.
mel's Extreme
found nothing ! :P
seania's Extreme
00:28:763 (8) - move to around x:20 y:344
00:28:935 (9) - NC
00:29:278 (10) - ^
00:30:992 - no note?
00:31:335 (2) - 1/4 slider ?
Kotori's Extreme
00:25:163 (1,1) - i think will be better if you just put the slider a little down and right so the circle will be on the slider end
also just generaly there are some parts will sliders that are kinda round and realy easy to slider break on so try seeing them
Beyond Extreme
00:26:192 (1,2,1,2) - i feel like it would be better if it will be 1/4 sliders because it can still follow the drums but also emphisize the beeps and wubz
00:45:049 (1,2,3) - maybe try switching for 1/8 sliders streams? like this
im preety sure its bad but idk try it out
01:46:763 (1,2,3) - ^
00:49:163 (1,2,1,2) - im not sure if that works >.>
00:49:763 (2,1) - i dont think this transition works :/
00:50:106 (4,1) - ^
00:50:449 (4,1) - ^
01:35:449 (1,2,1,2,1,1,1) - try figuring something here, realy hard to keep the rythm

love this song and map <3 :D
P o M u T a
(m '4' m)
[General]
  1. 128kbps now. try use 192kbps. converted. http://puu.sh/gRrBI/a83f9e85ee.zip
  2. why 1365x766!? try use 1366x768 haha. http://puu.sh/gRrI4/444552f4d7.jpg
  3. remove widescreen support Beginner,Basic,Kotori's Extreme diffs.
[Beginner]
  1. 00:58:078 (1) - Actually unnecessary newcombo. so, really short NC.
  2. 01:13:163 (1) - It's easy diff. spinner end and this object between is too short. so, remove this note better. Please check BN. I think unrankable.
  3. 00:08:020 (2) - HP bar touching. should move more under. it's easy diff.
[Basic]
  1. 00:10:420 (1) - I like this. but, it's Normal diff. beginner player confuse I guess. so, perfect stack better imo.
  2. 00:14:535 (3) - forget clap here.
  3. 00:18:992 (2) - ugh, overlaps here. seems bad imo. try more move up.
  4. 00:23:106 (2,3,1) - distance confuse. x:0.80 better.
  5. 00:51:563 (1) - again, maybe confuse, perfect stack better imo.
  6. 01:28:935 (5) - missing clap slider end?
  7. 01:35:792 (1) - unnecessary newcombo again. same reason.
[Hard]
  1. sorry, i don't like this diff, because many ugly overlaps. you try decrease some overlaps.
  2. 00:15:563 (1) - try slider end move (x:236 y:280) more seems cool. if fix next (2) fix spacing please.
  3. 00:25:335 (2) - move (x:213 y:285). can fix overlaps.
  4. 01:06:649 (1,1,1) - unnecessary new combo. 01:10:420 (1,1,1) - it's cool because change sv.
  5. 01:29:278 (4) - add claps slider head. it's really fit.
  6. 01:33:735 (1) - move (x:196 y:292). perfect stack.
[mel's Extreme]
  1. 00:08:878 (1) - it's really cofusing. so, move really bit down. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2937014
  2. 00:14:363 (1) - same reason.
  3. 00:25:335 (1) - move (x:364 y:124). perfect stack more seems good.
  4. 00:30:992 (1) - move (x:236 y:136). same reason.
  5. 00:34:592 (3) - rhythm change part. so, Add NC. more readable.
  6. 01:14:706 (1) - add clap slider end. maybe missing.
  7. 01:19:506 (1) - move bit. don't perfect stacking. It's slider.
  8. 01:25:678 (1) - again.
  9. 01:29:278 (4) - add clap.
[5eania's Extreme]
  1. 00:03:563 (1) - add clap. fit imo.
  2. 00:14:535 (7) - ^ slider head.
  3. 01:09:563 (6) - try this, i think more fun and fit sound imo. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2937033
  4. 01:25:849 (7) - missing clap.
  5. 01:29:278 (4) - ^ slider head.
[Kotori's Extreme]
  1. 00:49:506 (1) - 個人的に不必要なNCだと思ったかな。理由が無ければ要らないかも。
  2. 01:29:278 (6) - clapの付け忘れかもな。
    GOD DIFF.
[Beyond Extreme]
  1. 01:14:878 (2) - missing clap.
  2. 01:25:849 (2) - ^ slider head.
  3. 01:29:278 (3) - ^
  4. 01:42:649 (1) - Can't look orbital this slider. It's confuse play.
Expander!! so, shoot star.
good luck 8-)
Seijiro
Alright, here's my M4M :3

[General]
  1. You should increase the difficulty of your Basic diff. There is a gap of almost 1.5 stars between Basic and Advanced
  2. Why there are 4 Extremes and there's no Insane? ...
[Beginner]
  1. 01:10:420 (1,1) - You need at least 4 full beats of rest after every spinner on Easy diffs
[Basic]
  1. 00:22:420 (1,2) - I think you should move the NC to 2, because you use a different spacing from there on
[Advanced]
  1. 00:05:620 (5,6) - God...2.67 DS between these. Anyway, I won't point out things like this, but be careful: these DS are a bit too much for Hard diffs
  2. 00:33:049 (2,1) - The NC shouldn't be on 2?
  3. 00:52:592 (1,2) - If you don't put a NC here you'll need to move 1 because the DS is misleading (compared to the whole combo)
  4. 00:59:792 (3) - NC? Otherwise is confusing imo
  5. 01:06:306 (1,1,1,1) - Do you need these many NCs? I don't think so...
  6. 01:28:935 (3) - NC here too
  7. 01:36:135 (1) - Maybe a Ctrl + G? The DS with the next note is terrible...
[mel's Extreme]
  1. I don't know if it's just me, but this diff has the default combo colors. Please fix this
  2. 00:08:363 (4,1) - You can't properly see all the second slider. Please move it a bit on the left or right because it's a problem
  3. 00:13:849 (4,1) - Same ^
  4. 00:27:992 (2) - I can't hear this note in the music ... o.O
  5. 01:02:649 (3) - Maybe a NC?
  6. 01:07:678 (1,2) - These 2 sliders look like normal slider with 1/2 of pause between them, yet they're not. Try to make it more understandable
  7. 01:11:449 (1) - I think you don't need this NC
  8. 01:14:020 (4,1) - I'm not sure 100% about this, but better moving the second slider a bit from there, for the same reason I told you above
  9. 01:18:992 (2,1) - Same ^ But I'm sure about this
  10. 01:25:163 (4,1) - Same ^
  11. AIBat:
    1. 00:32:020 (1) - Object isn't snapped
    2. 01:42:992 (5) - Obkect isn't snapped (slider end)
    3. 01:43:164 (6) - Object isn't snapped (slider end)
[5eania's Extreme]
  1. Check AIBat (Ctrl + Shift + A). You have some unsnapped objects and kiai
  2. DO NOT MANIPULATE THE .OSU MANUALLY. You have a stack leniency of 0.2 which is less than the minimum allowed (0.3)
  3. 00:01:849 (2) - Forgot an NC maybe? xD
  4. 00:07:335 (4) - Same ^
  5. 00:12:478 (8) - Same ^ (You have a drastic change of SV here)
  6. 00:24:478 (2,3,4,5,6) - What's with this inconsistency in spacing between these notes o.O? Please, Put NCs where you change DS or make the stream with the same DS
  7. 00:28:935 (9,10) - NC on both because you change SV
  8. 00:31:678 (4) - NC (This is starting to be too repetitive, I guess you can find the other NCs because you should be able to do so at this level of mapping =3=)
  9. 00:37:506 (4,5) - Alright, I can't resist. Again NC on both
  10. 00:40:935 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think this is the right way to use an increasing DS imo... If you want to keep this DS you know what to do Place NCs where you change DS
  11. 01:18:992 (2) - Placing here that strong kick ruins every meaning behind all this 01:18:821 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -. Please change pattern or hitsound
  12. 01:28:078 (5) - I guess you need another NC
  13. 01:35:106 (4) - Same ^
  14. 01:35:449 (6) - Same ^
  15. 01:46:078 (5,6,7) - DS inconsistency because these notes are in the same combo, yet the DS between 5 & 6 is different from the DS between 6 & 7 (& 1)
[Kotori's Extreme]
  1. I'd suggest reducing the HP Drain to something like 6.5 at least because 7 is really too harsh imo. (Maybe increase a bit OD to compensate this...)
  2. 00:01:335 (1,2) - I think these 2 objects are in the wrong order: slider-circle, not circle-slider
  3. Beside that I really liked this diff, neat and polished. Very good job :)
[Beyond Extreme]
  1. 00:13:849 (3) - Putting just a circle here ruins the movement you create with the 1/4 sliders. Add a 1/4 slider instead of this circle or remove the other 1/4 sliders
  2. 00:22:420 (3,4) - I think you should add a repeat to the slider and remove the circle. You do the same movement anyway so why making it more complicated?
  3. 00:24:478 (1) - I can't hear the second note of this slider so probably you need only a circle here
  4. 00:26:020 (2,1,2,1,2) - Due to the "alarm clock sound" the first note I linked here is kinda weird because there should be a similar pattern like the other notes I linked too
  5. 00:30:649 (1,2) - These are to hard to catch both in that direction. Change the second one if you can
  6. The sound covered by 00:31:335 (1,2,1,2) - and by 00:30:649 (1,2) - are really similar so you should use a cimilar pattern for all of them imo
  7. 00:34:078 (1,2,3,1) - You need to move these notes 1/6 later (all of them. Hear the song at 25% speed to understand why)
  8. 00:38:963 - There's a kick sound I can hear here but the note is missing. Is it a problem adding it? xD
  9. 00:51:563 (1) - Please no, this slider isn't necessary at all. At least do a Ctrl + G on it...
  10. 00:55:506 (2) - Maybe a Ctrl + G once again?
  11. 00:56:706 (1) - Same ^
  12. 01:21:049 (2,1) - The second slider is a bit too hidden behind this and there isn't enough time to see it arriving. Even if it isn't unrankable I highly suggest to move the second slider somewhere else
  13. 01:37:678 (1,2) - Use a slider instead of these 2 circles because the sound you were following with 01:37:506 (1,2) - ended with 01:37:592 (2) - so you need to change pattern from here on if you want to make it understandable
  14. 01:40:649 - You need a 1/3 slider here (It should be also a NC once you add it)
Alright, that's all from me.

I'll tell you the truth, I'm a bit upset about various aspects of this mapset.
First, the diff spread isn't really linear, so try to improve that aspect by modifying the star rating of a couple of diffs.
Second, as you can see from my mod there are a lot of inconsistencies in some diffs regarding the NCs and the DS

Well...good luck with this. It looks like a hard mapset so keep it up :)
Mel

P o M u T a wrote:

(m '4' m)

[mel's Extreme]
  1. 00:08:878 (1) - it's really cofusing. so, move really bit down. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2937014
  2. 00:14:363 (1) - same reason.
  3. 00:25:335 (1) - move (x:364 y:124). perfect stack more seems good.
  4. 00:30:992 (1) - move (x:236 y:136). same reason.
  5. 00:34:592 (3) - rhythm change part. so, Add NC. more readable.
  6. 01:14:706 (1) - add clap slider end. maybe missing.
  7. 01:19:506 (1) - move bit. don't perfect stacking. It's slider.
  8. 01:25:678 (1) - again.
  9. 01:29:278 (4) - add clap.
Expander!! so, shoot star.
good luck 8-)
fixed everything thanks !

[-MrSergio-] wrote:

Alright, here's my M4M :3

[General]
  1. Why there are 4 Extremes and there's no Insane? ... My diff (which is the easier of the "Extreme" ones) is supposed to be an Insane one (originally named "mel's Another") but when I gave it to Midge he renamed it to "mel's Extreme" so idk
[mel's Extreme]
  1. I don't know if it's just me, but this diff has the default combo colors. Please fix this
  2. 00:08:363 (4,1) - You can't properly see all the second slider. Please move it a bit on the left or right because it's a problem Pomuta already pointed it out
  3. 00:13:849 (4,1) - Same ^ ^
  4. 00:27:992 (2) - I can't hear this note in the music ... o.O uhhh idk nothing seems wrong to me
  5. 01:02:649 (3) - Maybe a NC? It follows the 2 previous beats so nope
  6. 01:07:678 (1,2) - These 2 sliders look like normal slider with 1/2 of pause between them, yet they're not. Try to make it more understandable I get your point but leaving a 1/2 gap between them doesn't feel quite right
  7. 01:11:449 (1) - I think you don't need this NC removed
  8. 01:14:020 (4,1) - I'm not sure 100% about this, but better moving the second slider a bit from there, for the same reason I told you above I moved it a bit
  9. 01:18:992 (2,1) - Same ^ But I'm sure about this Pomuta's mod
  10. 01:25:163 (4,1) - Same ^ ^
  11. AIBat:
    1. 00:32:020 (1) - Object isn't snapped wow I have no clue how that happened
    2. 01:42:992 (5) - Obkect isn't snapped (slider end) fixed
    3. 01:43:164 (6) - Object isn't snapped (slider end) ^
thank you for the mod

http://puu.sh/gSPSC/25d0ae4402.osu
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