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Super Junior-M - Super Girl (Chinese Version)

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JauiPlaY
1,287 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年5月13日 at 16:26:50

Artist: Super Junior-M
Title: Super Girl (Chinese Version)
Tags: sj sjm k-pop
BPM: 125
Filesize: 4600kb
Play Time: 03:15
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.88 stars, 143 notes)
  2. Hard (5 stars, 459 notes)
  3. Normal (4.04 stars, 221 notes)
Download: Super Junior-M - Super Girl (Chinese Version)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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0th beatmap, graveyard for nearly 1 year.
Now returned.
Last edited by JauiPlaY , edited 36 times in total.
Derekku
COOL DUDE
7,270 posts
Joined March 2009
Derekku
Revived!
JauiPlaY
1,287 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
thx a lot XD
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
star
The 08 team_Bourdon
710 posts
Joined February 2010
The 08 team_Bourdon
:D
taNa_Coppola
169 posts
Joined August 2009
taNa_Coppola
star
Shinki
141 posts
Joined May 2010
Shinki
star ww
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Nymph
我推~
Lanttu
860 posts
Joined December 2008
Lanttu
[General]
I'd like to hear more claps, not only during kai-time~ :3

[Hard]
01:27:545 (5) - Maybe use new combo here and delete it from 01:28:025?
01:58:265 (5) - New combo?
02:18:425 (1) - These sliders don't really fit the rhythm here in my opinion. Try something else?
02:59:705 (6,7) - Ahhh, I see why you did this, but this spacing just doesn't play or look good~ ;u; Maybe stack the (7) under (4,5,6) and then center them all?
03:07:385 (5) - Maybe new combo?

Nothing worth of mentioning found in other diffs, good job~ *star*
Aleks719
osu! Alumni
2,436 posts
Joined May 2010
Aleks719
Easy
Hm, why you use claps on slidesticks only in kiai time?
Too little hitsounds. add more.
as example :
02:15:065 (1) - add clap
02:15:545 (2) - add clap at the end of slider
02:16:985 (2) - add clap
02:17:465 (3) - add clap at the end of slider
etc.

Normal
oh, hitsounds...
I add some of them at first 2 combos. I think it sounds better then nothing))
Recheck you 1/4 reverses. They are not always fit the music.
01:00:665 (6) - replace 1/2 early
01:10:265 (3) - 1 grid down
02:06:185 (7) - 1 grid down, 1 grid left
02:06:905 (1) - 1 grid up
02:48:185 (5) - replace 1/2 early

Hard
I want to see more interesting hitsound(!) patterns. You can make it, really =Ъ
01:58:265 (5) - add nc
02:59:465 (4,5,6,7) - unintuitive anti-jump

That's all, star. Very nice map.

Lanttu is ninja D: ~50sec early than me.

Download: Super Junior-M - Super Girl (JauiPlaY) [Normal].osu
Axey
1,216 posts
Joined October 2009
Axey
i have no suggestion for you

only one thing you must fix is :
设立一个视听的时间点
Timing>>set current position as preview point
三个难度都要设置在同一点上

no kds thanks

perfect ! go ahead!
Samah
423 posts
Joined May 2010
Samah
Great use of hitsounds in these maps, and some very nice closely hugging sliders.

[General]
Might want a source and some tags.

[Easy]
00:56:825 (4,1,2) - 1-2 is slightly wider than 4-1. Moving (1) will mess up your symmetry with (3), so drop the end of slider (4) down one grid.
02:02:585 (2) - Up one grid.
02:19:385 (2) - Down one grid.
03:01:145 (2) - Down one grid.
03:04:985 (2) - Down and right one grid.

[Normal]
00:40:745 (1) - Finish?

[Hard]
01:25:625 (6) - From here on you've changed the spacing for streams (nice), but it starts halfway through a combo (confusing). You may want to shuffle the combos around a bit to show the change in pace.
01:52:985 (7) - One grid up.
01:58:265 (5,9) - New combos?

Star.
Tony
1,510 posts
Joined July 2010
Tony
[General]
too few hitsounds, adding more will be more fun to play. I suggest adding whistles and some finishes :)
too long break periods, i suggest you should map there from the second half of each break time...

[Easy]
03:10:745 (1) - 1 grid left
looks fine~

[Normal]
good :)

[Hard]
HP Drain +1
Overall Difficulty +1
AR +1
Change Hard into Insane
nice diff :)

star ;p
Gomo Psivarh
584 posts
Joined December 2009
Gomo Psivarh
没发现什么问题 我太弱了 :(

我觉得你还缺个H... 那个H太I了...

BONUS 80000!
eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
eveless
[Hard]
这Insane啊
00:34:265 (7) - 我觉得用2连比较好 前移1/4?
01:09:305 (1,2,3,4) - 到3和4
01:58:745 (9) - new combo
02:59:945 (7) - 如果只是为了对称的话我劝你还是改掉比较
03:01:025 (1,2) - 改成1/4note+1/2slider比较好吧

[Normal]
00:54:905 (3,4,5) - 听上去有点奇怪
01:56:345 (3,4,5) - ^

没什么大问题 同样的部分用太多了 再加上电波 看上去比较无聊
JauiPlaY
1,287 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
all done, thx! :D

eveless wrote:

这Insane啊
我這種弱B都能pass的沒資格叫insane吧XD
lolcubes
osu! Alumni
4,437 posts
Joined November 2010
lolcubes
[Normal]:
  1. This difficulty needs AR -1.
[Hard]:
  1. This difficulty seems more like an insane, but that's alright. If you wish to make an insane later and leave this as hard, then reduce OD and AR by 1. Else just leave it as it is.
  2. 01:27:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This looks wrong/too hard. Change them to a regular stream, they are too fast to singletap. Something like this. They follow the flow from the previous slider.
Sorry if i wasn't much of a help, your map seems quite alright to me, no errors that I could find.
Star.
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Hijiri Tezuka
Hello there~ Not much to say about this mapset really, it's mapped pretty good. Just there's something off about Normal for me. Also, add some tags to get some people in here.
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Snowy Dream
[Easy]
00:44:825 (3) - add a note . (突然少一个note会感觉怪怪的。)
00:48:665 (3) - ^
00:52:505 (4) - ^
01:25:146 (2) - slider中间的一个转折点往左移1格
01:46:265 (3) - add a note.
01:50:105 (3) - ^
01:53:945 (4) - ^

这些note当然不加也可以>.> 你觉得好听就行。

[Hard]
00:44:825 (8) - add a note.
01:27:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这里偏难了>.> 试着使用0.8x的spacing。
01:46:265 (7) - add a note.
01:50:105 (7) - ^
01:53:945 (11) - ^
03:01:025 (1) - 可以再远点。。
03:04:865 (2) - ^

这里的加note感觉好听多了>.> 当然还是觉得好不好听随便你。
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normal没什么大问题。。
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贴吧里还说自己是新人mapper。。尽口胡。
明明这么神的。。
star~☆了
Hellzero
687 posts
Joined April 2010
Hellzero
Overall
00:57:785 - Add preview point
03:00:545 - remove timing point
03:00:665 - ^
03:15:905 - ^
03:16:025 - disable kiai
03:16:145 - ^


Easy/Normal/Hard
03:04:505 (1) - add finish?
03:12:185 (1) - ^

Nice map. Good Job.
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