Kagetsu wrote:

hi

[lolis]

1. 00:42:847 (3) - cambialo a 1/2 quizas xd se siente raro que no mapees 00:43:034 - cuando estas siguiendo la voz en vez de los instrumentos (por ejemplo en 00:44:909 (1,2) - ) es que no quiero espamear 1/2, hice lo mismo aca porejemplo 00:39:847 (4) -
2. 00:50:722 (3) - no le encuentro mucho sentido a extender esto, supongo que estas siguiendo la guitarra (por eso no agregaste una nota en 00:49:972 - ) entonces es raro que ignores 00:50:909 - que tiene guitarra+voz cuando en 00:51:003 - no hay nada. es diferente aqui 00:52:222 (3) - por que en ese tick rojo no hay nada. (diria lo mismo para los siguientes 00:53:722 (3) - 00:56:722 (3) - ) entiendo lo que dices, pero queria mantener el ritmo en toda la seccion ;;
3. 01:08:347 (4) - encuentro que siente raro este slider... con los 2 circulos anteriores daba la impresion de que aumentaba la intensidad aqui pero en vez decidiste usar 1/1 no encaja muy bien a mi gusto xd quizas ahora con hitsounds tiene mas sentidoxd
4. 03:24:097 (1,2,3,4) - quizas usar 1/4 sliders para que siga la guitarra como venias haciendo anteriormente moriria por eso ;; quiero pasar mi propio mapa pls
5. 03:29:628 - nota? es lo mismo q esta 03:32:628 (5) - uhm la idea es que no repita el mismo ritmo 4 veces, deja pensarlo ><
6. 03:35:628 - aqui es incluso mas notorio
7. 04:10:784 (2,3,4) - podrias arreglar este stack, se ve como si el 2 estuviera mas lejos que del 3 y el 4 bueno
8. 04:50:909 (1,2,3) - la verdad no apoyo mucho la idea de estos triples xd el 04:51:003 (2) - se escucha raro quizas sea mejor idea o incluso sin el repetidor, aunq seria un poco raro de jugar quizas pero es la misma idea de 01:18:097 - y todo el mapa xd
9. 05:01:597 - creo que agregar un circulo no haria mal, es mas intuitivo bueno

gl

Rohit6 wrote:

nice

01:12:847 - why not move preview point here xd most people wont like it cuz it's too loud xd

[i lov lolis]
00:03:284 (4,5,6) - move somewhere around 236|233 so it makes a coll pattern like this o cool, but i was actually doing a parallel thing with 00:02:534 (8,9,10,1,2,3) - and moving it would destroy my blanket and aaaa better not
01:22:972 (5,6,7) - white tick triples feel kinda bad while playing maybe i like to vary the rhythm a bit
01:32:347 (3) - should make this 3/4 and add circle on white tick for vocal emphasis tbh would lose emphasis on the next slider tbh
03:21:097 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - no need for so many ncs tbh , 03:21:472 (1,1,1,1) - could remove these so you can get a low-high sv pairing looks good to me xd

hitsounds pls aaaa

kunkakunkakunkakunka wrote:

Hi.
General

1. BG: Is the "a.jpg" necessary? In addition, I recommend a size correction of the "loli1.jpg" (1366*768) http://puu.sh/omuLB.png changed to anothe one xd
2. You use "S:C3" in all setting. However, .wave is clearly strange wave name. http://puu.sh/omuXE.png not sure what u mean here, these are .wav, not .wave. maybe it's some language translation i dunno

lolis

1. 00:07:597 (1) - finish to head. 00:13:597 (1) - same
2. 00:12:847 (1) - I think that NC is not necessary. 00:22:972 (1) - 00:24:472 (1) - 00:36:284 (1) - same did the first one, the others are there for readability matter
3. 00:14:253 - You pick up a sound of the 00:13:878 - . Therefore, I recommend the addition of the circle to the 00:14:253 - of the same rhythm sound. you mean, that i should extend the second slider too? i think that plays bad in general ;;
4. 00:17:253 - ^
5. 00:31:597 (3) - Would you add a whistle? 00:33:097 (1) - 00:33:659 (3) - 00:34:597 (1) - same
6. 00:37:972 (3) - NC it's already nc 00:37:784 (1) - so no need i think
7. 00:38:909 (1) - I think that 2 circles are good. It can add the NC, too. 00:44:909 (1) - same i did it this way cuz vocals, 2 circles are ok too but i prefer sliders here
8. 00:43:597 (1) - Would you add a whistle to head?
9. 00:44:909 (1) - Would you add a whistle to whistle?
10. 01:00:097 (4) - NC? 00:59:722 (1) - is nc'd so no need here
11. 01:01:597 (1) - finish to head. 01:04:597 (1) - 01:07:597 (1) - 01:09:097 (1) - same
12. 01:13:597 (1) - Would you add a whistle to head? 01:16:597 (1) - 01:19:597 (1) - 01:25:597 (1) - same
13. 01:30:847 (6) - I think that NC is necessary according to consistency. 02:56:347 (6) - same true
14. 01:22:409 (1,3) - fmm,,The NC thinks reversely. 02:47:909 (1,3) - 04:05:909 (1,3) - sameuhm ok
15. 01:28:597 (1) - Would you add a finish to head? 01:30:097 (1) - same
16. 01:37:128 - Would you add a circle? 1/8 rhythm exists. Probably it is not necessary to pick all up. no need tbh
17. 01:37:597 (1) - finish to head.
18. 01:41:253 - Would you add a circle? no need imo
19. 01:42:565 (4) - I recommend this to placement of the 01:42:378 - boths should be fine imo, the song is quite permissive xd
20. 01:42:940 - Would you add a circle? these would make the section harder than i wanted ;;
21. 01:44:253 - ^
22. 01:45:940 - ^
23. 01:46:972 (1) - I think that NC is not necessary. 02:12:472 (1) - 02:24:847 (1) - same these are there for readability, mostly
24. 01:49:597 (5) - NC ok
25. 01:55:597 (1) - Would you add a whistle to head? 01:57:097 (1) - 02:07:597 (1) -
26. 02:13:597 (1) - finish
27. 02:16:409 (3) - The 02:16:597 - recommends a circle. In addition, please add the finish. ok
28. 02:19:597 (1) - finish. 02:22:597 (1) - 02:23:347 (3) - same
29. 02:35:347 (6) - I think that NC is necessary according to consistency. mm ok
30. 02:35:909 (10) - finish
31. Please refer to the above for hitosounds of kiai time.
32. 03:10:597 (1) - finish. 03:12:097 (1,1) - same
33. 03:15:097 (1) - finish to head.
34. 03:16:128 - Would you add a circle? i wanted 1/2 circles in this part tbh
35. 03:16:597 (1) - Would you add a whistle to head?
36. 03:20:347 (3) - ^
37. 03:24:847 (5) - ^ to head
38. 03:25:597 (1,1) - finish to head.
39. 03:39:097 (1) - ^ 03:42:097 (1) - 03:45:097 (1) - 03:48:097 (1) - same
40. 03:40:597 (3) - ^ 03:43:597 (3) - same
41. 03:46:597 (3) - ^ ??
42. 03:51:096 (1) - ^
43. 03:54:472 (1) - I think that NC is not necessary. true
44. 03:57:097 (1) - finish
45. 04:37:597 (1) - finish to head.
46. 04:42:378 - Would you add a circle? better not xd
47. 05:02:909 (2) - finish
48. 05:03:003 (1) - I think the end point to be 05:04:972 - . A sound is prolonged. did 1/3 instead

I still feel need a correction of the hitsounds. about hitsounds, i finished them today xd but seems like i did most of your suggestions except some whistles, thank you!
GL

pishifat wrote:

i have homework to do but i'd rather let nameless destroy my eardrums

01:07:503 (9,1) - 02:31:503 (9,1) - 03:25:503 (9,1) - spacing same as stream tho
01:24:847 (2,4) - tbh copying the 1 and 3 manual thing
01:49:597 (5) - nc new section do it
02:11:628 (7) - 1/3 somehow i dont know why the first one was 1/4 and this one isnt your double nonexistent too
02:16:409 (3) - so gross
05:03:003 (1) - ending on 1/3 waybetter since instruments actually end there z

z all done!!!

Pata-Mon wrote:

M4M from ur q
My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/451830

1. turn off widescreen support? ok
   
2. 00:12:847 (4) - a slider instead there's nothing there to map tho
   
3. 00:32:065 (1) - 00:32:628 (2) - 00:34:128 (4) - feels a bit too overdone for my taste xd
   
   SPOILER

   [img]http://r6.loli.io/emmaQr.jpg
   [/img]
4. 01:08:909 (5) - a short slider instead circle is fine too
   
5. 02:27:097 (1,2,3) - use notes want to use sliders for this part
   
6. 03:09:847 (1) - 03:11:347 (1) - delete hp drain tho

good map, i didn't find much things. shoot a star
GL~

Breezy wrote:

Hey, M4M from your queue.

lolis

00:05:534 (7,8,9) - You could CTRL + G these for a back and forth motion with the triplets in this section. that sounds just like 00:05:909 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ,i wanted to vary a bit so did both

00:14:347 (3) - You could angle this more slightly down for a better looking blanket, it looks like it's towards the side a little bit. tried

00:21:097 (1,3) - You could adjust the (3) to blanket better with (1). ok

00:56:159 (1,3) - You could position the (1) for a better blanket with (3). ok

01:14:159 - You could possibly consider adding triplets at these sections to go with the vocals, but the rhythm you have here is fine still. i like 1/1 more here

01:52:222 (6) - CTRL + G? It plays nicer to me in my opinion. sure

01:59:909 (1) - To me, this sounds really weird having this note here, I think it plays much better if you just end the slider here instead. uhm let me keep it and see what others say

02:01:784 (1,1) - You could make these the same curvature since 02:03:284 (1,1) is like this. tried

02:31:597 (1) - Maybe it's me, but this slider seems a bit uneven with the symmetrical stream pattern before this. checked the distance but seems fine ;;

03:30:659 (3,4) - You could CTRL + G either one of these in order to go with the pattern you have in this section with the reverse sliders. this work too i think

Overall, this map is really good! I wanted to mention more blankets that looked slightly uneven, but I don't know if that's just your style. The map looks already polished and good to me. im bad with blankets i guess xd

Have a star!

Neoskylove wrote:

Hiiii~
m4m.

[lolis]
00:09:284 (4,5,6,13) - I think you can avoid this overlap. Could you avoid this? chekced on gameplay, and it'snot visible tho
00:21:097 (1,2) - It looks bad. I think this is better. let me be weird a bit xd
00:58:597 (1) - why this note is here? I think 342,45 is better. cuz emphasis and why not
02:13:972 (1,1,2,1) - I think this pattern is little bit hard to read. ar helps a lot to read it i think
02:37:972 (1,1) - bad overlap. let me be weird again pls xd
05:01:597 (6) - I prefer It is slider to 05:01:597 (6) - here. do you mean like a long long slider? it'd not be too fitting i think

Good map, Good luck!!