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Annyy - Pick Me Up In The Dance Hall

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lovhin456
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, April 08, 2011 at 9:10:50 PM

Artist: Annyy
Title: Pick Me Up In The Dance Hall
Source: Touhou
Tags: Rumia Embodiment of Scarlet Devil Setsuna Light TaNaBaTa Momentaneous chamelepeace710 Dragvon
BPM: 136
Filesize: 6967kb
Play Time: 02:32
Difficulties Available:
  1. Dragvon's Mix (4.95 stars, 340 notes)
  2. Easy (1.69 stars, 149 notes)
  3. Hard (4.47 stars, 295 notes)
  4. Mix710 (4.99 stars, 490 notes)
  5. Normal (3.18 stars, 225 notes)
Download: Annyy - Pick Me Up In The Dance Hall
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Setsuna Light

* Well, I really like this song and osu too, so I wanted to do a beatmap with it (: Is my second beatmap, Enjoy ~
* Changed the mp3 due to new rule on October 25, 2010
* This map has a skin, enjoy it ~
* This map has a SB, enjoy it ~
Last edited by lovhin456 , edited 131 times in total.
Torran
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Torran
Please do a full submit. Your map is missing its mp3.
lovhin456
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lovhin456

soradg123 wrote:

Please do a full submit. Your map is missing its mp3. Done
Torran
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Torran
OSU! Timing Help!
  • 1. BPM 136 , Offset -30
Good Luck!
lovhin456
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lovhin456

soradg123 wrote:

OSU! Timing Help!
  • 1. BPM 136 , Offset -30
Good Luck!
Thanks !!
Pokie
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Pokie
;)
lovhin456
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Pokie wrote:

;)
Thanks for the star ~~ :) !!
Vikon
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Vikon
[General]
1) seems you need a harder difficulty, [Hard] is too easy... ( osu rating shows it is still a [E] ....)
2) the size of your BG is 1120 X 768 , try to use a 1024 x 768 instead ? (to get a better resolution)
3) delete the .osb file and full submittion
4) kiai time should start and end with a hitobject (e.g. start at 01:14:087 (1) and end at 01:32:837 in [Easy] )

[Easy]
00:01:734 (1,2,3) Check spacing
00:08 :793 (1,2,3,4) ^
00:19:381 (2,3,4) ^
better to recheck the spacing of the whole map using distance snap, I can't point out all of them.
00:29:969 (1) this spinner i9s a bit short for a [Easy]
00:38:793 (4) new combo
00:52:690 (1) move to 00:52:911 ?
00:54:014 (3) move to 00:53:793 ?
01:39:234 (1) end at 01:44:087 ?
01:47:837 (1) end at 01:54 :675 ?

[Normal]
..ah, seems you made some changes when I am modding, the star rating of Normal (2.45) is higher then Hard (2.37) now 0_0; .
00:00:852 (1) too short for a [Normal]
00:26:220 (1) end at 00:29:528 ?
01:29:087 (4,5,6,7) spacing?
01:39:896 (1) end at 01:44:969 ?

[Hard]
00:07:911 (9) end at 00:08:352
00:26:220 (1) end at 00:29:528 ?
00:56:661 (1) end at 00:59:087 ?
lovhin456
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lovhin456

Vikon wrote:

General
1) seems you need a harder difficulty, [Hard] is too easy... ( osu rating shows it is still a [E] ....)I know ~ I'm working on it xD
2) the size of your BG is 1120 X 768 , try to use a 1024 x 768 instead ? (to get a better resolution) Done
3) delete the .osb file and full submittion Done
4) kiai time should start and end with a hitobject (e.g. start at 01:14:087 (1) and end at 01:32:837 in [Easy] ) Done
I didn't count your suggestions for hard because is still in progress and I forgot to say that I just wanted a mod for easy and normal :?
Easy
I'm using 0.9x distance snap now
00:01:734 (1,2,3) Check spacing
00:08 :793 (1,2,3,4) ^
00:19:381 (2,3,4) ^
better to recheck the spacing of the whole map using distance snap, I can't point out all of them.
00:29:969 (1) this spinner i9s a bit short for a [Easy] Done, I took it out and put a break there
00:38:793 (4) new combo Done
00:52:690 (1) move to 00:52:911 ? Done
00:54:014 (3) move to 00:53:793 ? Done
01:39:234 (1) end at 01:44:087 ? Done
01:47:837 (1) end at 01:54 :675 ? Done

Normal
..ah, seems you made some changes when I am modding, the star rating of Normal (2.45) is higher then Hard (2.37) now 0_0; . I already told you why... ;)
00:00:852 (1) too short for a [Normal] Took it out
00:26:220 (1) end at 00:29:528 ? Done
01:29:087 (4,5,6,7) spacing? I'm using the distance snap (0.9x) but I changed the notes manually...
01:39:896 (1) end at 01:44:969 ? Done
Thanks for the advice I'm working on hard right now :)
Colin Hou
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[Easy]:
  1. 00:29:969 (T) - too short break, cancel it
  2. 01:27:764 (1) - end it at 01:29:528
  3. 01:30:190 (2) - move it to 01:29:969
  4. 01:30:411 (T) - add a note here
  5. 01:30:631 (1) - start at 01:30:852 and end at 01:33:058
  6. 02:32:175 (1) - end it at 02:35:043
[Normal]:
  1. 00:18:720 (3,4,5,6) - place them with the shift button pressed
  2. 01:14:087 (T) - start KIAI here
  3. 01:17:175 (T) - add a note here
  4. 01:16:955 (1) - start at 01:17:617 and end at 01:19:161
  5. 01:20:925 (2) - start at 01:21:146 and end at 01:22:028
  6. 01:22:249 (3,4) - move to 01:22:469
  7. 01:23:793 (T) - add a note here
  8. 02:15:411 (1) - end it at 02:16:734
  9. 02:30:190 (7) - start it at 02:29:969 and end at 02:30:852
  10. 02:32:617 (1) - end it at 02:35:043
[Hard]:
  1. ...I can't mod further, I don't think this song need so many 'blue line' sliders or something like that :( sorry.
don't forget Vikon's kds.
lovhin456
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lovhin456

Colin Hou wrote:

[Easy]:
  1. 00:29:969 (T) - too short break, cancel it
  2. 01:27:764 (1) - end it at 01:29:528
  3. 01:30:190 (2) - move it to 01:29:969
  4. 01:30:411 (T) - add a note here
  5. 01:30:631 (1) - start at 01:30:852 and end at 01:33:058
  6. 02:32:175 (1) - end it at 02:35:043
Done everything

[Normal]:
  1. 00:18:720 (3,4,5,6) - place them with the shift button pressed
  2. 01:14:087 (T) - start KIAI here
  3. 01:17:175 (T) - add a note here
  4. 01:16:955 (1) - start at 01:17:617 and end at 01:19:161
  5. 01:20:925 (2) - start at 01:21:146 and end at 01:22:028
  6. 01:22:249 (3,4) - move to 01:22:469
  7. 01:23:793 (T) - add a note here
  8. 02:15:411 (1) - end it at 02:16:734
  9. 02:30:190 (7) - start it at 02:29:969 and end at 02:30:852
  10. 02:32:617 (1) - end it at 02:35:043
Done everything

[Hard]:
  1. ...I can't mod further, I don't think this song need so many 'blue line' sliders or something like that :( sorry.
Is okk, thanks :)

don't forget Vikon's kds. Oh yeah, thanks for reminding me !! Have your kudos too and thanks :D
Zetsubou Sensei
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Zetsubou Sensei
[Easy]
00:49:381 (1) - extend this spinner to end at 00:52:469
00:56:219 (1) - extend this spinner to end at 00:59:528
01:12:874 (6) - move back 1 tick? donno...sounds better to me :P
01:30:852 (1) - extend this spiner to end at 01:33:168
01:47:837 (1) - start this spinner at 01:47:617, and end it at 01:54:565 (where you had ended it before)
02:03:940 (2) - move back 1 tick?
02:05:043 (x) - add a note here...sounds alot better :P
02:08:572 (6) - move slider forward to start at 02:08:793 and end it at 02:10:778 (where you had it before)

[Normal]
Check AIMOD...detects spacing errors
00:08:352 (x) - add a note here (sounds better)
00:29:308 (7) - shorten slider to end at 00:29:528
00:42:102 (3,4,5,6) - move forward 1 tick? sounds better (if so, also add a note at 00:43:756?)
00:48:058 (5) - move back 2 ticks to start at 00:47:837
00:48:719 & 00:48:940 (x) - add a note? (once doing the one above, adding these 2 notes makes it sound better)
00:55:778 (3) - move back to start at 00:55:558 and shorten it to end at 00:55:999
00:56:440 (x) - add a note here
00:56:661 (5) - move this note to 00:56:881
00:57:102 (6) - move this note to 00:57:212
01:01:293 (3) - move back 1 tick
01:01:734 (4) - move back to 01:01:514
01:02:175 (5) - move back to 01:01:955
02:03:278 (x) - add a note here
02:03:499 (5) - move forward 1 tick
02:24:014 (4) - move forward 1 tick

[Hard]
00:52:469 (x) - add a note here
01:01:293 (3) - remove this note
01:01:734 (4) - move this note forward 1 tick
01:04:822 (5) - move this note forward 1 tick
01:08:793 (7) - move this note to 01:09:014
01:10:889 (4,5,6) - move these notes forward 1 tick
01:27:102 (5) - move this back 1 tick
01:27:433 (6) - move this back 1 tick
02:03:499 (5) - move this forward 1 tick

Overall its an interesting map :)
Double check some parts...it sounds good, but some parts did sound off that i didnt mention above...i donno if its just be or not :P

~STAR
lovhin456
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Zetsubou Sensei wrote:

REALLY LONG MOD AND
~STAR
I done everything ~ Thanks !! :D
aRiskOfRain
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aRiskOfRain
General;

Please use grid level 3 from now on for all your diffs, it makes everything much neater.
It is highly recommended you have plenty of breaks, please add some to Normal and Hard, 2 evenly spread ones should be fine.

Easy;

00:59:970 (1) - This repeat doesn't fall on anything.
01:10:117 (4) - New combo.
01:12:764 (6,1) - Spacing.
01:30:852 (1) - Finish on the next white tick.
02:08:793 (6) - New combo.
02:03:830 (2) - On the white tick, or the red tick.
02:29:969 (5) - New combo.

Normal;

00:15:631 (1) - This isn't following anything.
00:19:161 (4) - ^, and new combo.
Nothing in the first section follows anything.
00:38:793 (2) - New combo.
00:41:992 (2,3,4,5,6) - Move to the white ticks.
00:56:881 (5,6,7) - This doesn't follow anything.
01:12:322 (6) - Snap this to 1/3 and remove a repeat.
01:22:469 (3,4,5) - This doesn't follow anything.
01:38:793 (5) - Make it end on the white tick.

Stopped here. Make sure you go through your map carefully and check that all your rhythms match the music.

Hard;

Where's the hitsounds?
00:44:308 (8) - End on the white tick.
00:46:955 (5) - ^
01:05:264 (6) - Start on the next red tick.
01:08:903 (7) - This doesn't follow the lyrics.
01:13:425 (1) - End on the white tick.
01:15:521 (1) - The start doesn't fall on anything.

Stopped here. Make sure you go through your map carefully and check that all your rhythms match the music.
lovhin456
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lovhin456

DiamondCrash wrote:

General;

Please use grid level 3 from now on for all your diffs, it makes everything much neater.
It is highly recommended you have plenty of breaks, please add some to Normal and Hard, 2 evenly spread ones should be fine.

Easy;

00:59:970 (1) - This repeat doesn't fall on anything.
01:10:117 (4) - New combo.
01:12:764 (6,1) - Spacing.
01:30:852 (1) - Finish on the next white tick.
02:08:793 (6) - New combo.
02:03:830 (2) - On the white tick, or the red tick.
02:29:969 (5) - New combo.

Normal;

00:15:631 (1) - This isn't following anything.
00:19:161 (4) - ^, and new combo.
Nothing in the first section follows anything.
00:38:793 (2) - New combo.
00:41:992 (2,3,4,5,6) - Move to the white ticks.
00:56:881 (5,6,7) - This doesn't follow anything.
01:12:322 (6) - Snap this to 1/3 and remove a repeat.
01:22:469 (3,4,5) - This doesn't follow anything.
01:38:793 (5) - Make it end on the white tick.

Stopped here. Make sure you go through your map carefully and check that all your rhythms match the music.

Hard;

Where's the hitsounds?
00:44:308 (8) - End on the white tick.
00:46:955 (5) - ^
01:05:264 (6) - Start on the next red tick.
01:08:903 (7) - This doesn't follow the lyrics.
01:13:425 (1) - End on the white tick.
01:15:521 (1) - The start doesn't fall on anything.

Stopped here. Make sure you go through your map carefully and check that all your rhythms match the music.
Thanks for everything I'll change everything later on...
Daerren
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Daerren
Goku Modding!

[Easy]:
00:54:675 (4): spacing
01:03:058 (2): ^
01:12:764 (6): ^
01:59:969 (b): break not really needed.

[Normal]:
00:48:719 (6): new combo

[Hard]:
everything looks good.

this guy can barely sing xD
star~
lovhin456
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Daerren wrote:

Goku Modding!

[Easy]:
00:54:675 (4): spacing Done~
01:03:058 (2): ^ Done~
01:12:764 (6): ^ Done~
01:59:969 (b): break not really needed. Done~

[Normal]:
00:48:719 (6): new combo Done~

[Hard]:
everything looks good. Yayy~ although I rechecked it in case ;)

this guy can barely sing xD
star~ Hehehe :) Thanks~ :D
Eddotan
73 posts
Joined April 2010
Eddotan
Cosas que debes arreglar

aqui va mi modding en español :P

[Overall]
- comboburst.png excede el limite permitido, intenta reducirlo a 500x500
- elimina el archivo .osb y haz un full submit

[Easy]
Timming Point:
14. Offset: 155.263ms BPM: Inhereted (1x) Este timming point no esta haciendo nada.

01:27:764 (1) - se podria alinear mejor este slider


[Normal]
7. Offset: 155.153ms BPM: Inhereted (1x) Este timming point no esta haciendo nada.

01:03:499 (2) - se puede alinear mejor este slider
02:12:543 (4) - comienza este slider en 02:12:322 y terminalo donde está actualmente


[Hard]
7. Offset: 157.248ms BPM: Inhereted (1x) Este timming point no esta haciendo nada.

puedes subir 1 tick el hp drain talvez?
01:22:249 (1,2) - suena mejor con un slider
02:03:609 (5) - alinea mejor este slider
02:12:543 (4) - comienza este slider en el tick blanco (02:12:322) y terminalo donde esta actualmente.


buena suerte con tu mapa
y aqui tienes una estrellita :3
lovhin456
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lovhin456

Eddotan wrote:

Cosas que debes arreglar

aqui va mi modding en español :P

[Overall]
- comboburst.png excede el limite permitido, intenta reducirlo a 500x500
- elimina el archivo .osb y haz un full submit

[Easy]
Timming Point:
14. Offset: 155.263ms BPM: Inhereted (1x) Este timming point no esta haciendo nada.

01:27:764 (1) - se podria alinear mejor este slider


[Normal]
7. Offset: 155.153ms BPM: Inhereted (1x) Este timming point no esta haciendo nada.

01:03:499 (2) - se puede alinear mejor este slider
02:12:543 (4) - comienza este slider en 02:12:322 y terminalo donde está actualmente


[Hard]
7. Offset: 157.248ms BPM: Inhereted (1x) Este timming point no esta haciendo nada.

puedes subir 1 tick el hp drain talvez?
01:22:249 (1,2) - suena mejor con un slider
02:03:609 (5) - alinea mejor este slider
02:12:543 (4) - comienza este slider en el tick blanco (02:12:322) y terminalo donde esta actualmente.


buena suerte con tu mapa
y aqui tienes una estrellita :3
Todo listo y gracias !! :D
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NaomiMinette
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NaomiMinette
Hi :) It's me again ^^

Blue = suggestions/minor issues
Green = might want to fix this
Red = you MUST fix this

[General]


[Easy]
01:14:087 (1,2,3) - These three aren't spaced out evenly even though you're using the same distance spacing multiplier... :?
02:04:822 (3,4) - I think you should make these into a slider instead... I doubt beginners will be able to hit these easily.
02:14:528 (4) - I don't know... Wouldn't this be better if this slider looked the same as the one at 02:13:646 (3)?

[Normal]
01:00:852 (2,3,4) - These confused me when I first came across them because of how they're spaced. I'd say change them into a repeating slider, but it's up to you.
01:07:028 (6) - Split into two?
01:22:800 (4) - This feels weird where it's placed... Maybe move it back to 01:22:690 then add a note at 01:22:911?
---
02:02:506 (2) - Shouldn't this be at 02:02:617 instead?
02:03:058 (3) - Shouldn't this be at 02:02:947 instead?
02:03:499 (5) - This sounds better if it started at 02:03:719 and ended at 02:04:602 instead.

If you do all the above, you'll have to fix the spacing.
--
02:12:543 (4) - Wouldn't this sound better if it started at 02:12:322 and ended at 02:13:205 instead? (You'll have to fix the spacing if you do decide to move this.)
02:14:639 (6) - Move to 02:14:749.
02:14:859 (7) - Move to 02:14:969.
02:24:124 (4) - Isn't this supposed to start (and end) on a white tick?

[Hard]
00:00:852 (1) - This seems kinda random, especially considering the guitar doesn't actually play till the middle of the spinner...
00:02:175 - Add a note here?
00:22:690 (1) - I keep wanting to hit this note immediately after reaching the previous slider's end...
00:28:867 (2) - Add one more repeat?
01:01:072 (2) - Shouldn't this be at 01:01:183 instead?
01:04:602 (4) - Shouldn't this be at 01:04:712 instead?
01:04:933 (5) - Shouldn't this be at 01:05:043 instead?
01:08:131 (6) - This sounds weird both when you first hit it and when it hits the reverse arrow...
01:13:205 - This song is playing tricks with my ears :o Anyway... maybe add a note here?
01:16:183 (2) - Shouldn't this be at 01:16:293 instead?
01:26:771 (4) - Shouldn't this be at 01:26:881 instead?
01:26:992 (5) - Shouldn't this be at 01:27:102 instead?
01:29:418 (6) - Shouldn't this start (and end) on a white tick instead?
01:59:528 (2,3) - Aren't these spaced too close to (1)'s slider's end?
02:03:058 (3) - Yeah... This song is totally messing around with my ears... Anyway, shouldn't this be at 02:02:947 instead?
02:03:609 (5) - Shouldn't this start (and end) on a red tick?
02:06:697 (6) - I didn't even hear this note at all... Remove it?
02:09:896 (5,6,7,8) - The notes here don't follow the vocals/instruments well...
02:11:440 - Add a note here?
02:14:639 (8) - Move this to 02:14:749.
02:14:859 (9) - Move this to 02:14:969.
02:24:014 (1) - Shouldn't this start on an earlier white tick instead?
02:25:337 (1,2) - I think these notes are too close anyway whether or not you decide to move the slider at 02:24:014 (1).
02:32:617 (1) - Why does this spinner end at a different point than the other difficulties'?

I'll do a recheck later~
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