Fock, i don't rember what map you wanted me to mod. But well let's mod.
From sandwych's queue, sorry for the huge delay.
[General]
Kawaii kawaii
[Kantan]
00:30:400 : Dunno if 3 * 1/2 is allowed in kantan. But that's not safe. Maybe delete the first two one. It's more logic to see this on kantan.
00:34:685 : kkd? It will make the last d more suitable with the music.
00:43:257 : Well same for all those 3 * 1/2 i'm really hesitating about if it's really legit on kantan. But if you plan to delete this one. The last 2 are ok.
00:50:757 : If you changed those triplets, this one goes to k. It's quite nice with the next k and follows the music.
00:57:096 : Well... no xD The timing is correct but not suitable for kantan. You can do this on muzuakashii+.
The next part of the kiai is copy paste so the argues will be the same.
[Futsuu]
00:13:257 : Lul those doublets. /me kill Tasuke. You really should make singles too.
00:20:667 : Make it simple. You don't need this on futsuu. Plus it will give a break for the player which is nice.
00:22:810 : Here this is the same, but it's more relevant. Do you think that new player will play this correctly. It's quite confusing to follow.
Well this will be the same for all of these 1/3. That could be correct. But the problem is that you're alterning 1/3 and 1/2. This is really confuse for new players and not adapted of futsuu.
00:34:685 : kkd? It fits better the music.
00:36:292 : d?
00:44:864 : Imo, no need for a note here, the vocals are 1/3 before and the battery 1/2 before, so yeah, delete?
00:55:042 : How about moving 1/2 before? It seems interesting to hear and play.
01:21:025 : Quints patterns should be use rarerly and imo with good breaks between (or before) those which is not the case. If more people that this pattern is too long, then you can delete this one.
Do not forget to delete all the 1/3 - 1/6 circles. :>
[Muzukashii]
So now we can try the 1/6 but sometimes (i mean not full patterns of 1/6 but use them like 3/4 DS pattern on regular maps).
00:05:221 : Here you can move 1/6 before, it fits better the music.
00:07:364 : Here you've also an 1/6 that you can move before, but that would be a bit repetitive while we can do something different which is obviously use the 1/2. But right now they are no as logic as we can so you can add a d 1/2 before if you feel that the pattern is not so technical to play. This note added will make the 1/2 all sense and shows what you're following.
00:09:507 : THis one should be 1/6 before, but you also can delete too, this will make a short break which is nice and follows better the melody you did before.
00:21:025 : While you're following the voccals during this section, here the notes are for the battery (or the melody too), so maybe delete the (1) and (2)?
00:29:507 : No need of 1/6 doublets on the muzukashii right now, yours is enoght technical with the 1/6.
00:32:185 : ^
00:45:042 : ^
And same for the others ofc.
01:15:400++ : This section seems to be a copy past of the first one, so all of the first argues also count here. :>
I like this muzukashii.
[Oni]
00:21:828 : Better with kkkd imo.
01:02:453 : Maybe move it 1/6 before it follows better the vocals.
01:09:775 : D? When playing i was baited by the void. xd
The only chalenge of this oni is the lecture between 1/2 1/3 and 1/6 which is not so easy to do. But quite funny Oni, i enjoyed playing it.
[Inner Oni]
00:17:275 : Add k? This will follow the next pattern logic.
00:44:596 : Hmmm i don't find logic your pattern here. For me it should be dk k kd (the doublets are on 1/6 and split with 1/6 blank space ofc).
00:56:383 : No need to k here. Just let's enjoys those D and finishers.
00:56:828 : ^
00:57:096 : On the others diff you did K so why D here?
Interesting Inner Oni to play. Remind me kind of barbra streisand Oni by sushi.
That's all for me. Gl hf for rank.
Kantan
Futsuu
Muzukashii
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