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Eri Sasaki - Ring of Fortune

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Oyatsu
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Topic Starter
Oyatsu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, August 25, 2016 at 2:46:15 PM

Artist: Eri Sasaki
Title: Ring of Fortune
Source: プラスティック・メモリーズ
Tags: Plastic Memories Dogakobo opening tv size Momochikun Sekai-nyan Sekaii
BPM: 145
Filesize: 18745kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Memories (4.3 stars, 313 notes)
  2. Mochi's Hard (3.19 stars, 247 notes)
  3. Normal (1.87 stars, 144 notes)
  4. Sekai's Easy (1.47 stars, 89 notes)
Download: Eri Sasaki - Ring of Fortune
Download: Eri Sasaki - Ring of Fortune (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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~ My 11th beatmap ~
プラスティック・メモリーズ <3
Mapset:
  1. Easy: by <strong>Sekai-nyan</strong>
  2. Normal: by me
  3. Hard: by <strong>Momochikun</strong>
  4. Memories: by me
Thank you guys for nice diffs and <strong>BeatofIke</strong> for timing help :)
A very late map :3
Enjoy! :D
Last edited by Oyatsu , edited 34 times in total.
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Timing Check o3o

Oyatsu
1,909 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Oyatsu

BeatofIke wrote:

Timing Check o3o

Thank you! :)
Suimya
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
Finally finish the diff, and if it's okay. I also used a custom BG for my diff ></
http://puu.sh/hBfXD/269ce8e724.rar
I hope you'll like it :3
Mint
1,611 posts
Joined February 2013
Mint
I love this song and anime so much!
Star~
Coco44
8 posts
Joined June 2014
Coco44
Plastic Memories, I Love This Song <33
Oyatsu
1,909 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Oyatsu
Ready for mods ! >w<
Coco44
8 posts
Joined June 2014
Coco44
Yeah~ >~< :)
Sacowea
119 posts
Joined September 2014
Sacowea

nelsonxd123 wrote:

Yeah~ >~< :)
Halleluia!!
Adol Christin
875 posts
Joined October 2012
Adol Christin
Greeting. Do you need another light insane? I already finished one, which is currently 3.78 star.
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu
  1. Copy and paste this into F6 window , delete other red link , i timing the song with Crystal before LOL

    -675,405.405405405405,4,2,1,30,1,0
    3378,379.746835443038,4,2,1,30,1,0
    4137,379.746835443038,4,2,2,60,1,0
  2. you need a 44K soft-sliderslide
  3. Hard diff forget add video
sorry i unable mod your map …… i just noob mapper XD

love your amazing hitsound and neat layout ~
-Sh1n1-
3,402 posts
Joined September 2012
-Sh1n1-
Hi Oyatsu~~

[Sekai's Easy]

  1. I strongly recommend to change 00:02:569 (4) - into another pattern for red lines
  2. 00:08:124 (2,3) - move a bit up? looks weird because is not the same distance space between 00:07:174 (1,2) - and 00:08:124 (2,3) -
  3. 00:46:288 (2) - move to the right because there isn't a good blanquet with 00:45:149 (1) -
  4. you want to make a blanquet with 00:57:301 (4,2) - ? I think yes, 00:59:200 (2) - make a better curve
  5. 01:24:643 (1,2) - better blanquet here.
[Normal]

  1. Uncheck "Widescreen support"
  2. 00:09:073 (4) - change to a normal note at 00:09:263 - to add more emphasis to the high pitch at 00:09:263 - and because song becomes quieter
  3. 00:28:440 (4,5,6) - what do you think to make like this, feels more playable
  4. 00:34:516 (4) - aoid stack here. Confusing imo
  5. 00:36:985 (2) - Ctrl+h because the head of the slider is continuing the way of 00:36:035 (1) - and tail is looking to the next note 00:38:124 (3) -
  6. 00:42:111 (1) - move to x:244 y:280
  7. 00:45:909 (2) - This is up to you but 00:45:909 (2) - looks bad, make like 00:45:149 (1) - (Mirrored ♥ xD)
  8. 00:48:187 (1) - same as 00:36:985 (2) -
  9. 01:18:377 (1,2) - make a better blanquet here
  10. 01:21:035 (2,3) - change into only 1 slider
[Mochi's Hard]

  1. 01:03:377 (1,2,3,4) - better blanquet here
  2. 01:25:972 (6,1) - should be only one slider
  3. I'm not sure about distance on 00:16:668 (3,4) -
[Memories]

  1. 00:09:073 (8,1) - Ctrl+G, confusing
  2. 00:22:174 (4,3) - what do you think if you make like this
  3. 00:25:402 (1) - I think that this slider is too closer to 00:25:023 (4) - ,keep consistency with 00:26:542 (4,1) -
  4. 00:31:478 (1,2) - should be only one slider like 00:29:959 (1) - or make the last as 00:31:478 (1,2) -
  5. Will be better if 00:39:833 (3) - is on the middle of 00:39:073 (1,2) -
  6. 00:47:997 (5) - move tail to x:288 y:72 and 00:48:187 (1) - something like this
Nice map, Hope to see it ranked asap *-*/ Take my star~~
Adol Christin
875 posts
Joined October 2012
Adol Christin
Greeting. M4M from your queue this time. (Don't have enough time to open a set myself...... T.T)

Memories

  1. Seems like it's much more complex than your first version. (with another BG. maybe that's my misconception)
  2. 00:06:415 (3,4,5) - This triplet is really, awkward for me. 00:06:415 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - this part has 3 triplets together.... lol.... is that really suitable in this emotional song?
  3. 00:11:637 - Suggest you add a circle here, since the piano sound is so strong that is hard to be ignored.
  4. 00:57:871 (4,5,6) - I feel 2 triplets together would be a bit juggling. Suggest you change this into a reverse.
  5. 01:17:807 (4,5,6) - Unreasonable short sliders for me. Suggest you replace with a circle pattern.

Mochi's Hard

  1. 01:02:428 (4,5) - No sound for this triplet. You may need to add it urself. (cuz Oyatsu's Insane does not have triplet here)
  2. 00:48:472 (4) - feel a bit weird while testplay.
  3. 01:03:377 (1,2,3,4) - lol, don't you feel it looks too untidy?
  4. 01:15:909 (3,4) - Suggest you not use 1/4 slider like this. This would be read as a real 1/4 single tap while playing. A normal triplet would be fine.
  5. 01:22:364 (4,5) - Suggest you swap the order of circle and slider.

Normal

  1. 00:00:946 (2) - this slider curves too much imo.
  2. 00:00:946 (2) - Add a note here?
  3. 00:11:731 (1) - Recommend you extend this slider to 00:11:731 (1) - . That sounds much better.
  4. 00:34:137 (3,4) - As a Normal diff, i feel it's a bit too hard to read this stack.
  5. 00:34:137 (3,4) - Try this:
    SPOILER

Pretty nice set. Good luck for rank.
RL_Tibbar
303 posts
Joined May 2011
RL_Tibbar
hi

Memories

  1. 00:03:757 (5,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3402636
  2. 00:11:637 - Suggest add a note
  3. 01:26:352 (4) - Hard for read , suggest NC
  4. 01:26:731 (3) - remove NC


Mochi's Hard

  1. 00:31:288 (5,2,3) - Unsightly
  2. 00:34:137 (3,1,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3402714
  3. 00:45:529 (2) - Dont blanket it
  4. 01:26:162 (1) - I dont think the slider on beat


Normal

  1. 00:09:453 - break time?
  2. 00:59:580 (3) - End of slider, remove whistle


easy is good for me
Blizs
898 posts
Joined November 2013
Blizs
Hi~~~ >w< ~~~ M4M >w<

General

  1. Okay fine. :3 Let's get going.

Sekai's Easy

  1. 00:57:301 (4,1) - Did you misplaced the NC ? I think consistent 8 beat NC will looks good here.
  2. ^If you do that switch NC on 01:00:339 (4,1) - and add NC at 01:03:377 (4) -
  3. 00:02:569 (4) - The way it reversed make the last point of the slider not snapped (because this part was a multiple timing section). If I can suggest a pattern. I'll suggest this one for 00:02:569 (4,5) - . (4) will follow the vocal and (5) follow the drum. I think it's reasonable.
  4. 00:04:896 (2,3) - isn't think it misplaced ? I think it's not really good to ignore 00:05:466 - that have a big effect emphasis. Just switch their place.
  5. 00:22:364 (4) - This slider reversed at nothing. I didn't hear any point in the song at the slider's repeat. Easiest way to solve this is to make the slider longer to 2 beats, remove the reverse and add a circle at 00:23:504 - . With that we can make it follow the vocal.
  6. 00:32:997 (3) - Since the next note was on the top of this slider, why not we make the slider curved in other way ? That way looks have a better transition to the next circle .
  7. 00:32:902 (3,1,2) - This pattern looks panful to read. you ignore the emphasis at 00:40:402 - so I think you'll ignore 00:40:782 - . But you didn't. But I won't say that you must ignore the emphasis. Otherwise I will say that you musn't ignore those big effect emphasis. The best way I can suggest is to change 00:39:073 (1) - to this pattern. the first slider follow the vocal and the seond slider make a transition from vocal to instrument emphasis.
  8. 01:01:668 - I hear a big emphasis here (vocal and instrument emphasis) that I think it's not a good idea to ignore it. Otherwise you put a note at 01:01:858 - where I didn't hear any effect in the song on it.I'll suggest this pattern for 01:00:339 (4,1,2) - .
  9. 01:14:010 (2,1) - Why didn't you put the notes on the red lines like you did on 01:19:326 (2,3) - . I think it's better to follow the song.

Normal

  1. 00:38:883 (5) - I don't really sure if this circle was necessary. I know there's a vocal on that point, but you followed the instrument before. that's why this points => 00:37:554 - , 00:37:934 - was empty even there's vocals on those points, right ? So this point should ignoore the vocal too. The way thet there's a circle on that point just make it looks overmapped.
  2. 01:06:415 (1,2) - Don't really sure what did you follow for the clicks. Can you explain it ? And I'll reply again after you give your explanation ;)
    Looks doesn't have a big problem for this diff :3 Nice >w<

Mochi's Hard


  • I've played the diff and it looks really enjoyable diff >w<..... But there's just some problem when I play it...
  1. 00:13:061 (4,5) - I didn't see if it was snapped 1/2 T.T . I think it was 1/1. This part was looks something like 00:23:314 (3,4,1) - . And the wa vocal stopped at 00:13:061 - make it stronger to read as 1/1. But I won't suggest a pattern change because I see you follow the drums there. What I want to say was just make it more clearer.
  2. 00:41:637 (5,6) - Isn't it too hard for hard diff ? the clicks was on blue ticks was really killing for hard diff x_x . I have a suggestion to make it easier to read. Try this for 00:41:352 (4,5,6) -
  3. 01:01:099 (3) - Not really big deal but the way it overlapping 2 sliders make it a bit hard to read. How about move it to the other way ?

Memories

  1. 00:22:364 (1,2) - This spacing was similar to antijump and I'm affraid it will read as antijump too. Those circle was snapped 1/2 so at least I can say that you can use a neutral spacing for those circles.
  2. 00:52:554 (1) - How about stack it with 00:52:934 (2) - ? I think since they were snapped 1 beat an antijump will looks cool.
  3. 01:13:061 (4,5) - How about antijump like you did on 01:14:580 (4,5) - . The reason is just for consistency.
    That's it :3

Okay that's all I can found :3
for a great mapset >w</
Hope it help and good luck~~~!!!

oh and for My mapset, I've edit my post : p/4342561#p4342561
10nya
2,746 posts
Joined February 2011
10nya
hiya Oyacchi~ M4M from your Queue~

[General]
  1. clean
[Sekai's Easy]
  1. 00:08:124 (2) - : bring this to 328 320 to make same distance as slider (3) ?
  2. 00:09:263 (3) - : eeeh soft-hitfinish would fit to the song tho ;w; just lowered the volume at least -10%
  3. 00:17:807 (3) - : since you've been following vocal then this slider should end at 00:18:377 - to support the vocal
  4. 00:37:554 (3) - : eeeeh clap is too loud + doesn't support anything tho. well if you'll follow the vocal/piano here then how about add whistle from Soft-Custom1 set?
  5. 00:39:073 (1) - : this slider didn't follow anything tho. loud vocal and loud music is ended at 00:39:453 - so change it like this?
  6. 00:40:782 (2) - : this one is odd too. can't guess the slider start since you took a sound at 00:40:782 - but it isn't very loud so i'm afraid people would miss-read this one. Since music actually starts on 00:40:592 - , how about make this slider start on 00:40:782 - and ends at 00:41:352 - ? ;w;
  7. 01:00:339 (4) - : there's soft cymbal sound here. too bad you ignored it ;w; how about add finish here
  8. 01:25:592 (3) - : eeh since the diff is really neat on blanketing, too bad this one got ignored ;w; move this to 328 164 would be very nice~
[Normal]
  1. I think the gap is pretty far since Sekai's diff didn't use any 1/2 but there's a lot of 1/2 here. Talked with Natsu and yes the gap is too far.
  2. 00:00:553 (1,2) - : I wont suggest to make slider 1 as 1/2, since there's change of offset and bpm at 00:00:946 - here, would make it hard to catch.
  3. 00:06:795 (6) - : non-stop 1/2 would make Normal player hard to catch imo. how about change this into a circle instead?
  4. 00:09:073 (4) - : there's nothing to follow here. change slider 00:08:504 (3) - as reverse slider or just add circle here
  5. 00:14:769 (1) - : change this to soft-whistle would be good
  6. 00:16:288 (3) - : reducing 1/2 would make the spread balanced. how about just follow the first and the last rhythm from piano sound? make this as a slider like this would be great
  7. 00:18:947 (4) - : delete this? too many 1/2 imo. just move slider 00:19:326 (5) - to here. it'll follow music better
  8. 00:22:174 (3) - : there's no sound at here. it'll be hard for Normal player to catch since no loud music to follow with. just let this one empty would be a good choice
  9. 00:25:972 (4) - : nothing to follow here. remove this circle would be great since the vocal actually starts on 00:26:162 - .
  10. 00:27:301 (2) - : change this into a circle instead .-. there's no sound at 00:27:491 -. the vocal started on 00:27:681 -
  11. 00:28:440 (4) - : this should be started on 00:28:250 - since you're following vocals. extend this slider till 00:28:820 - and delete circle on 00:29:010 - would be good.
  12. 00:29:959 (1,2) - : make the slider end at 00:30:339 - and make circle 2 1/2 earlier would be great to follow vocal
  13. 00:32:048 (5) - : make this as a circle would be enough
  14. 00:34:516 (4) - : delete this circle would be great since there's nothing at here. If you want to keep it, then please dont stack it ;w;? people can miss-read this as 1/2
  15. 00:38:124 (3,4,5) - : eeeh I think this rhythm can be simple, like this perhaps?

    there's no sound at 00:38:883 -
  16. 00:41:542 (5) - : remove the repeat? well I guess this one is a bit hard to catch for normal player + the gap rip
  17. 00:47:807 (5) - : make this as a circle would be good imo
  18. 00:50:276 (1) - : stack this one as 00:49:896 (4,5) ? Since it'll be a bit hard to catch this with dt (Normal player aim isn't like pros lol)
  19. 00:51:605 (3,4,1) - : too many 1/2, from 00:49:896 - till here ;w;) the rhythm can be simple, like this
  20. 00:53:883 (6) - : since there'll be nonstop 1/2, just make this one as a circle =-=
  21. 00:56:921 (6) - : ^
  22. 00:59:010 (1,2,3,4) - : too many nonstop 1/2 orz ;w; you can make the rhythm simple like remove 00:59:390 (2) - this one
  23. 01:03:947 (2) - : delete this, too many 1/2
  24. 01:07:174 (2) - : shouldn't this one started on 01:07:364 - ?
  25. 01:10:023 (2) - : delete this one would be good imo, too many 1/2 this isn't hard diff ;w;
  26. 01:12:111 (3) - : delete this. there's nothing to follow here (the music is quiet and the vocal ended at 01:11:921 - . well it's good to delete it or just make this as a circle if you want to follow your clap usage (but the music is quiet here)
  27. 01:13:440 (2) - : remove finish, too loud
  28. 01:16:858 (1) - : delete this one? if you want to follow the violin, this slider should be a circle (but if you make this a circle it'll be a bit crowded) so why don't make 01:16:478 (3) - as repeat slider? :3
  29. 01:21:035 (2) - : enough 1/2 at previous pattern, I guess this one can be simplified like make this one as slider
  30. 01:22:364 (2) - : if you want to follow violin like your next patterns (01:23:504 (4,5,6) - ) then make this as 1/2 slider like this?
  31. 01:24:073 - : make this as reverse 1/2 slider instead?
[Mochi's Hard]
  1. 00:02:775 (2) - : eeh i think there's no need to make this one on normal-sampleset, it'll make the hs odd
  2. 00:30:529 (3,4) - : swap this is good imo, since the vocal is loud and fir for slider rather than circle (just like you did on 00:32:048 (3) -)
  3. 00:32:618 (4) - : make this as a circle on 00:32:807 - would be good imo. there's nothing at here + calm part so I think there's no need for making endless 1/2 at this part. add a little break would be good
  4. 00:41:637 (5,6) - : this one supposed to be like this since there's nothing at 00:41:637 -
  5. 01:11:352 (2) - : i think u can move this to 52 124 to make better blanketing
  6. 01:13:630 (3,4,5) - : eeeh triplet isnt fit at here tho. just make this as 2 1/2 circles or add 2 1/2 circles and add circle on 01:13:915 -
  7. a bit worried about spread there's a lot of 1/4 notes. I think some of them can be as simple 1/2 notes like here 00:06:415 (3) - (there's no supporting music to make this as triplet but I guess you made the variety goodly) , 00:57:871 (2) - (since there's nothing at 00:57:966 - ) , 01:02:428 (4,5,6) - same as here, no sound at blue tick) , 01:07:080 (3) - (nice variety tho but there's no sound at blue tick) , 01:10:023 (2,3,4) - no sound at blue tick
[Memories]
  1. pls rename the diff as Plastic thanks /runs JKJKJKJKJK
  2. 00:04:137 (1) - : the flow is a bit odd for me, I was expecting a jump but its too close compared from 00:03:757 (5,6) - so how about make this slider like this?
    SPOILER
  3. 00:04:516 (2) - : if you do so, this slider would be very strange. ctrl g and rotate for about 20 degrees and put it on 360 324
  4. 00:11:637 - : eeeh add a circle here would be nice imo
  5. 01:02:997 (6) - : this one have a strange flow imo, since previous notes was flowing to left, how about make this flows to right? like this perhaps
    SPOILER
    or make a flow like this? (slider 5 ctrl+g and ctrl+< slider 6
    SPOILER
  6. 01:25:118 - : i'm sure there's a sound here so why dont make this as stream instead on triplet?
good luck oyacchi ;w;/
Oyatsu
1,909 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Oyatsu
Narcissu
  1. Copy and paste this into F6 window , delete other red link , i timing the song with Crystal before LOL :arrow: I used another mp3, so I think it's different

    -675,405.405405405405,4,2,1,30,1,0
    3378,379.746835443038,4,2,1,30,1,0
    4137,379.746835443038,4,2,2,60,1,0
  2. you need a 44K soft-sliderslide :arrow: I don't get ur mean
  3. Hard diff forget add video
sorry i unable mod your map …… i just noob mapper XD

love your amazing hitsound and neat layout ~

-Sh1n1-
Hi Oyatsu~~


[Normal]

  1. Uncheck "Widescreen support"
  2. 00:09:073 (4) - change to a normal note at 00:09:263 - to add more emphasis to the high pitch at 00:09:263 - and because song becomes quieter :arrow: yeah but it is quite difficult for 2 notes ending
  3. 00:28:440 (4,5,6) - what do you think to make like this, feels more playable
  4. 00:34:516 (4) - aoid stack here. Confusing imo
  5. 00:36:985 (2) - Ctrl+h because the head of the slider is continuing the way of 00:36:035 (1) - and tail is looking to the next note 00:38:124 (3) -
  6. 00:42:111 (1) - move to x:244 y:280
  7. 00:45:909 (2) - This is up to you but 00:45:909 (2) - looks bad, make like 00:45:149 (1) - (Mirrored ♥ xD) :arrow: I prefer mine :))
  8. 00:48:187 (1) - same as 00:36:985 (2) -
  9. 01:18:377 (1,2) - make a better blanquet here
  10. 01:21:035 (2,3) - change into only 1 slider :arrow: I wanna keep this beat
[Memories]

  1. 00:09:073 (8,1) - Ctrl+G, confusing :arrow: Non, I'm fine with it
  2. 00:22:174 (4,3) - what do you think if you make like this :arrow: Sorry for long time , link is died now :3
  3. 00:25:402 (1) - I think that this slider is too closer to 00:25:023 (4) - ,keep consistency with 00:26:542 (4,1) -
  4. 00:31:478 (1,2) - should be only one slider like 00:29:959 (1) - or make the last as 00:31:478 (1,2) - :arrow: I want it to be more divertified about rhythm :)) but u're right
  5. Will be better if 00:39:833 (3) - is on the middle of 00:39:073 (1,2) - :arrow: 00:39:833 (3) - did instead
  6. 00:47:997 (5) - move tail to x:288 y:72 and 00:48:187 (1) - something like this
:arrow: it doesn't fit

Nice map, Hope to see it ranked asap *-*/ Take my star~~

Adol Christin
Greeting. M4M from your queue this time. (Don't have enough time to open a set myself...... T.T)

Memories

  1. Seems like it's much more complex than your first version. (with another BG. maybe that's my misconception)
  2. 00:06:415 (3,4,5) - This triplet is really, awkward for me. 00:06:415 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - this part has 3 triplets together.... lol.... is that really suitable in this emotional song? :arrow: but they follow beat though :3
  3. 00:11:637 - Suggest you add a circle here, since the piano sound is so strong that is hard to be ignored. :arrow: yeah but sound is sleazy, i really dont wanna triple here
  4. 00:57:871 (4,5,6) - I feel 2 triplets together would be a bit juggling. Suggest you change this into a reverse.
  5. 01:17:807 (4,5,6) - Unreasonable short sliders for me. Suggest you replace with a circle pattern. I make sure they are, just let u hear carefully

Normal

  1. 00:00:946 (2) - this slider curves too much imo.
  2. 00:00:946 (2) - Add a note here? :arrow: Eh?
  3. 00:11:731 (1) - Recommend you extend this slider to 00:11:731 (1) - . That sounds much better. :arrow: maybe wrong time :3
  4. 00:34:137 (3,4) - As a Normal diff, i feel it's a bit too hard to read this stack.
  5. 00:34:137 (3,4) - Try this:
    SPOILER


Pretty nice set. Good luck for rank.[/quote]

[box="OSUtoto"]hi

Memories

  1. 00:03:757 (5,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3402636
  2. 00:11:637 - Suggest add a note
  3. 01:26:352 (4) - Hard for read , suggest NC :arrow: I see no
  4. 01:26:731 (3) - remove NC :arrow: it's last combo and strongest, I think it should use



Normal

  1. 00:09:453 - break time? :arrow: yeah, easy too
  2. 00:59:580 (3) - End of slider, remove whistle :arrow: it's nicer for me


easy is good for me

"Blizs"
Hi~~~ >w< ~~~ M4M >w<

General

  1. Okay fine. :3 Let's get going.

Normal

  1. 00:38:883 (5) - I don't really sure if this circle was necessary. I know there's a vocal on that point, but you followed the instrument before. that's why this points => 00:37:554 - , 00:37:934 - was empty even there's vocals on those points, right ? So this point should ignoore the vocal too. The way thet there's a circle on that point just make it looks overmapped.
  2. 01:06:415 (1,2) - Don't really sure what did you follow for the clicks. Can you explain it ? And I'll reply again after you give your explanation ;) :arrow: I followed violin sound, we can hear it :))
    Looks doesn't have a big problem for this diff :3 Nice >w<

Memories

  1. 00:22:364 (1,2) - This spacing was similar to antijump and I'm affraid it will read as antijump too. Those circle was snapped 1/2 so at least I can say that you can use a neutral spacing for those circles. :arrow: as 2 sounds are the same, this is called as Jump Art and it makes a specific style, it isn;t a problem
  2. 00:52:554 (1) - How about stack it with 00:52:934 (2) - ? I think since they were snapped 1 beat an antijump will looks cool. :arrow: it belongs to my style :3
  3. 01:13:061 (4,5) - How about antijump like you did on 01:14:580 (4,5) - . The reason is just for consistency. :arrow: It keeps a pattern and flow, but if I do as you, it wont
    That's it :3

Okay that's all I can found :3
for a great mapset >w</
Hope it help and good luck~~~!!!

oh and for My mapset, I've edit my post : p/4342561#p4342561

"10nya"
hiya Oyacchi~ M4M from your Queue~

[General]
  1. clean
[Normal]
  1. I think the gap is pretty far since Sekai's diff didn't use any 1/2 but there's a lot of 1/2 here. Talked with Natsu and yes the gap is too far. :arrow: Yea u right, but I tthink it's 'cause Sekai's Easy is quite simple and it's just over Beginner a little. However I have tried to reduce Normal to 1.9, maybe more but I don't know to which to reduce :3
  2. 00:00:553 (1,2) - : I wont suggest to make slider 1 as 1/2, since there's change of offset and bpm at 00:00:946 - here, would make it hard to catch.
  3. 00:06:795 (6) - : non-stop 1/2 would make Normal player hard to catch imo. how about change this into a circle instead?
  4. 00:09:073 (4) - : there's nothing to follow here. change slider 00:08:504 (3) - as reverse slider or just add circle here :arrow: I think it has, and i wan to make 00:07:744 (2,3) - be consistent
  5. 00:14:769 (1) - : change this to soft-whistle would be good :arrow: Yea but current sound exists in instrumental and soft-w is used before
  6. 00:16:288 (3) - : reducing 1/2 would make the spread balanced. how about just follow the first and the last rhythm from piano sound? make this as a slider like this would be great
  7. 00:18:947 (4) - : delete this? too many 1/2 imo. just move slider 00:19:326 (5) - to here. it'll follow music better
  8. 00:22:174 (3) - : there's no sound at here. it'll be hard for Normal player to catch since no loud music to follow with. just let this one empty would be a good choice :arrow: It's a big piano sound
  9. 00:25:972 (4) - : nothing to follow here. remove this circle would be great since the vocal actually starts on 00:26:162 - .
  10. 00:27:301 (2) - : change this into a circle instead .-. there's no sound at 00:27:491 -. the vocal started on 00:27:681 -
  11. 00:28:440 (4) - : this should be started on 00:28:250 - since you're following vocals. extend this slider till 00:28:820 - and delete circle on 00:29:010 - would be good.
  12. 00:29:959 (1,2) - : make the slider end at 00:30:339 - and make circle 2 1/2 earlier would be great to follow vocal
  13. 00:32:048 (5) - : make this as a circle would be enough :arrow: I want to keep this but if it's really necessary to change I maye do
  14. 00:34:516 (4) - : delete this circle would be great since there's nothing at here. If you want to keep it, then please dont stack it ;w;? people can miss-read this as 1/2
  15. 00:38:124 (3,4,5) - : eeeh I think this rhythm can be simple, like this perhaps?

    there's no sound at 00:38:883 -
  16. 00:41:542 (5) - : remove the repeat? well I guess this one is a bit hard to catch for normal player + the gap rip
  17. 00:47:807 (5) - : make this as a circle would be good imo :arrow: but I see 00:47:997 - is quite strong, difficult to ignore
  18. 00:50:276 (1) - : stack this one as 00:49:896 (4,5) ? Since it'll be a bit hard to catch this with dt (Normal player aim isn't like pros lol)
  19. 00:51:605 (3,4,1) - : too many 1/2, from 00:49:896 - till here ;w;) the rhythm can be simple, like this
  20. 00:53:883 (6) - : since there'll be nonstop 1/2, just make this one as a circle =-=
  21. 00:56:921 (6) - : ^
  22. 00:59:010 (1,2,3,4) - : too many nonstop 1/2 orz ;w; you can make the rhythm simple like remove 00:59:390 (2) - this one
  23. 01:03:947 (2) - : delete this, too many 1/2
  24. 01:07:174 (2) - : shouldn't this one started on 01:07:364 - ? :arrow: I'm not sure ur mean here
  25. 01:10:023 (2) - : delete this one would be good imo, too many 1/2 this isn't hard diff ;w;
  26. 01:12:111 (3) - : delete this. there's nothing to follow here (the music is quiet and the vocal ended at 01:11:921 - . well it's good to delete it or just make this as a circle if you want to follow your clap usage (but the music is quiet here)
  27. 01:13:440 (2) - : remove finish, too loud
  28. 01:16:858 (1) - : delete this one? if you want to follow the violin, this slider should be a circle (but if you make this a circle it'll be a bit crowded) so why don't make 01:16:478 (3) - as repeat slider? :3 :arrow: I prefer mine currently
  29. 01:21:035 (2) - : enough 1/2 at previous pattern, I guess this one can be simplified like make this one as slider
  30. 01:22:364 (2) - : if you want to follow violin like your next patterns (01:23:504 (4,5,6) - ) then make this as 1/2 slider like this?
  31. 01:24:073 - : make this as reverse 1/2 slider instead? :arrow: Fixed my way :3
[Memories]
  1. pls rename the diff as Plastic thanks /runs JKJKJKJKJK :arrow: baka ww
  2. 00:04:137 (1) - : the flow is a bit odd for me, I was expecting a jump but its too close compared from 00:03:757 (5,6) - so how about make this slider like this? :arrow: sorry so long and dead pic. :3
    SPOILER
  3. 00:04:516 (2) - : if you do so, this slider would be very strange. ctrl g and rotate for about 20 degrees and put it on 360 324 :arrow: I wanna keep :3
  4. 00:11:637 - : eeeh add a circle here would be nice imo
  5. 01:02:997 (6) - : this one have a strange flow imo, since previous notes was flowing to left, how about make this flows to right? like this perhaps
    SPOILER
    or make a flow like this? (slider 5 ctrl+g and ctrl+< slider 6
    SPOILER
  6. 01:25:118 - : i'm sure there's a sound here so why dont make this as stream instead on triplet? :arrow: because 01:25:212 - this is a strong finish I think it's more suitable for a jump, also a stream have made before. This will reduce jump for diff generally.
good luck oyacchi ;w;/
Thank you guys for helpful mods. I'm sorry for being long :3 I will keep all of your tickets M4M and u can use it when u need. Sorry again! :D

@Updated Mochi's Hard
Modem
3,013 posts
Joined February 2014
Modem
Waaa another Ring of Fortune ♡♡♡
Good luck in this~ o(^▽^)o
Ipas
806 posts
Joined September 2013
Ipas
Hello! I hope I can mod this map as soon as possible, since my exam has been started...
Anyway, best of luck!
Mazziv
998 posts
Joined July 2013
Mazziv
hi from my queue

what is star2.png for?

[Easy]
check aimod(object not snapped+ds issue)
00:40:782 (2) - move this to 00:40:592 - ?

[Normal]
aimod!
00:41:162 (4,5,1) - form a priti triangle?
01:21:225 (2) - move this to 01:21:035 - ?

[Hard]
00:44:390 (5,3) - stack

[Memories]
looks p solid

sorry for the bad mod but this map is very well done already ;w;
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