18:16 Smokeman: shall i take a look ?
18:17 Riven: if you want
18:17 Smokeman: no combo colours
18:17 Smokeman: lel
18:18 Smokeman: find smth
18:18 Riven: lol
18:22 Smokeman: 02:49:593 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - i still dont like this stream
18:22 Smokeman: since it deosnt follow the lyrics
18:25 Smokeman: 05:22:362 (1) - happy spinners Kappa
18:25 Smokeman: now that you fixed the SV in the beginning
18:25 Smokeman: the maps looks good
18:26 Smokeman: if you think the spacing on all the jumps is fine then this is rdy
18:26 Smokeman: just add more hitsounds
18:26 Smokeman: and combo colours
18:28 Riven: hmmm
18:28 Riven: the hitsounds
18:28 Riven: idk
18:28 Riven: i need custom
18:28 Riven: ill steal from a map or smth
18:28 Smokeman:
http://puu.sh/jvbl8/bbc33b16e9.jpg18:28 Smokeman: yo do that
18:28 Smokeman: find smth light
18:29 Riven: dull
18:29 Smokeman: and mp a chime sound for whistle
18:29 Smokeman: mb*
18:30 Smokeman: care to explain the sv change here 01:10:823 - ?
18:30 Riven: WTF
18:31 Riven: i thought i had changed that
18:31 Riven: wtf
18:31 Smokeman: you can let the x1.0 go till here 01:11:285 -
18:31 Smokeman: looo
18:31 Smokeman: lm2
18:31 Smokeman: lol m2*
18:32 Smokeman: try starting your inherited points on upbeats
18:33 Smokeman: 04:33:093 (2,3,4) - the problem here is that the play acctually plays the blue ticks but i think you intended to go for the lyrics there
18:34 Riven: there is a stream there
18:34 Riven: so i used 1/4th
18:34 Smokeman: but you dont play the stream
18:34 Smokeman: you singletap the blue ticks
18:34 Smokeman: which results in a wierd paus on the last slider
18:35 Smokeman: i woudl suggest you make this 04:32:516 (1) - one shorter and move the slider 1/4 tick u
18:35 Smokeman: then make this 04:33:554 (4) - to a 1/2
18:35 Smokeman: try it out
18:35 Smokeman: the same in the kiai before
18:36 Smokeman: you shoudl rly think about these two parts
18:36 Smokeman: inb4 critique: this is mapped for difficulty
18:37 Smokeman: 05:20:516 - the timing is quite right here
18:37 Smokeman: listen to the 3rd note you placed
18:37 Smokeman: its to olate
18:37 Smokeman: its too late*
18:38 Smokeman: and mb concider this long spinne rin the end since you dont rly need it (your map is long enough)
18:38 Smokeman: reconcider*
18:39 Smokeman: this is IRC mod btw
18:40 Riven: im playing league
18:40 Smokeman: i ll post it as a mod in your map threat
18:40 Smokeman: read it later
18:40 Smokeman: just writing down stuff
18:41 Smokeman: 00:39:900 (1,2,3,4,5) - use drum hitsounds for extra swag
18:41 Riven: k im done
18:42 Riven: lets see
18:42 Smokeman: i deserve some kudosu for the inbetween help .^)
18:43 Riven: idk how to give kudosu
18:43 Riven: kappa
18:43 Smokeman: after i post the chat in your threat
18:44 Smokeman: you will be able to see a button under my name
18:44 Smokeman: smth smth give 1 kodsu or smth
18:44 Smokeman: you ll see it dont worry
18:44 Smokeman: but first lemme finish writing down stuff
18:45 Smokeman: tell me when you are done since i need your attention on some parts
18:46 Riven: im done with league
18:47 Smokeman: you better read what i wrote above later
18:47 Smokeman: about consistency
18:47 Smokeman: 00:39:900 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 02:05:285 (3,4,5) -
18:47 Smokeman: are the same musical patetrn but you mapped the way too different
18:48 Smokeman: 02:17:746 (1,2) - idc if you think these play good
18:48 Smokeman: move 2 a bit down so it looks betetr
18:51 Riven: omg
18:51 Riven: everytime i close chat to change something
18:51 Riven: in map
18:51 Riven: i have to scroll up again
18:51 Smokeman: yo do it later
18:51 Smokeman: when i post it
18:51 Smokeman: we fuckedup
18:51 Smokeman: the part above is important !!!
18:51 Riven: ?
18:52 Riven: what part
18:52 Smokeman: 04:32:516 (1,2,3,4) - these
18:52 Riven: 05:20:516 (1) -
18:52 Riven: lol the timing is not there
18:52 Smokeman: i know
18:53 Smokeman: i was too lazy to find out where it was
18:53 Riven: i got it
18:54 Smokeman: btw 05:20:054 - mute the spinner end
18:54 Riven: oops i forgot
18:55 Smokeman: you should also tune the hitsound volume to appropriate values
18:55 Smokeman: for example
18:56 Smokeman: 00:56:516 - tune it down here since the strong instruments arent there anymore
18:56 Smokeman: in a case like this i would acctually recomnd reducing the sv but i know you dont want that
18:57 Riven: 02:17:746 (1) -
18:57 Riven: the sv is lowered here
18:57 Riven: but it's not lowered 00:56:516 (12) - here
18:57 Riven: omg -_-
18:57 Smokeman: ye D:
18:58 Smokeman: those small things
18:58 Riven: fk me
18:58 Smokeman: thats why i mod this :^)
18:58 Smokeman: fix that part later i need you on some placement questions
18:59 Smokeman: 01:48:669 (9,1,2,3,4) - do you rly think that slider is rly needed that way?
18:59 Riven: mmmm
18:59 Smokeman: 01:48:208 (8) - just go for a simple copy of this 01:48:208 (8) - + ctrl+h + ctrl+j
19:00 Smokeman: wops 2 times boyz
19:00 Riven: ctrl h ctrol j pogchamp never knew
19:00 Smokeman: xD
19:00 Smokeman: ye just mirro it on the 2 axes
19:00 Riven: i need it to flow better
19:00 Smokeman: ok
19:00 Smokeman: a linear one
19:01 Smokeman: facing the triplet wold be best
19:01 Riven: but then
19:01 Riven: 01:48:208 (8) - to 01:48:669 (9) - wont flow well
19:01 Smokeman: oh it does flow well
19:02 Smokeman: it depends how you put it
19:02 Smokeman: but thats not a new thing to you
19:02 Smokeman: that old shape just... it was to owierd
19:03 Smokeman: now look 01:50:746 (1,2,3,4) -
19:03 Smokeman: i wont kill you
19:03 Smokeman: but wtf
19:04 Smokeman: just go for a simple slider + double pattern
19:04 Riven: lol
19:04 Riven: doomsday nailed that part though!!!!!
19:04 Riven: !!!111
19:04 Smokeman: dat 1/6 slider
19:04 Smokeman: xD
19:04 Smokeman: i like the idea tho
19:04 Riven: wait wtf
19:04 Riven: why iss it 1/6th
19:05 Smokeman: idunno magic
19:05 Riven: someone changed it i swear
19:05 Riven: it was 1/4th
19:05 Riven: Kappa
19:05 Smokeman: LOOOL
19:05 Smokeman: try keeping it if you want
19:05 Smokeman: but mute it
19:05 Smokeman: and move the triple closer
19:05 Riven: 01:10:823 (1) - fuck you man i had those on 1.00 sv
19:05 Smokeman: mute the end of the slider*
19:05 Smokeman: yes those are wrong
19:05 Riven: and you made me change them because you told me why i had lowered slider velocity there
19:06 Riven: now i have to change them back
19:06 Riven: to 1.00
19:06 Riven: wtf
19:06 Smokeman: no w8 those are right
19:06 Smokeman: i m confused
19:06 Riven: OF COURSE THEY ARE RIGHT
19:06 Smokeman:
19:06 Riven: dude
19:06 Riven: you made me change those 3 times
19:06 Riven: :<
19:06 Smokeman: i didnt know what you were goign there
19:06 Smokeman: i just guessed you just werent consistent
19:06 Smokeman: and then i saw the next part
19:07 Smokeman: :^(
19:07 Riven: 01:17:516 (1,2,3) - i dont like those
19:07 Riven: what do i do
19:07 Smokeman: OH GOD....
19:07 Riven: xD
19:07 Smokeman: i ll be honest i didnt even look at that part
19:07 Riven:
19:07 Smokeman: i wasnt rly looking while scimming the map
19:08 Smokeman: try
19:08 Smokeman: 01:16:823 (7,8,9) - copy paste this and change angles of the tringle
19:08 Smokeman: mb this will leade you to a cool pattern
19:08 Smokeman: or w8
19:08 Riven: nope it wont xD
19:08 Riven: i tried
19:08 Riven: 01:15:900 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - these are enough
19:08 Smokeman: just ctrl+g 01:17:516 (1,2,3) -
19:08 Riven: i need something new for the next part
19:09 Riven: wtf??
19:09 Smokeman: i got it
19:09 Smokeman: do what i just told you BUT
19:09 Smokeman: caneg 01:17:747 (2,3) - with a curved slider
19:09 Riven: why did i just put a blue point in the timeline
19:10 Smokeman: sweg
19:10 Smokeman: screenshot inc
19:10 Smokeman:
http://puu.sh/jvdDT/e3a911f338.jpg19:11 Smokeman: i like the flow of this :^)
19:11 Smokeman: start the sv change here 01:22:362 -
19:12 Smokeman: the same in the next pre-chorus
19:12 Smokeman: 02:43:593 - *
19:12 Riven: why
19:12 Riven: 01:22:362 (3) - is already hyped
19:12 Smokeman: tbh
19:12 Smokeman: its not as hyped as this 00:41:746 -
19:13 Smokeman: the hype start here for me 01:24:208 -
19:13 Smokeman: but i dotn want to dissmiss your choices
19:18 Smokeman: about the timign in the end
19:18 Smokeman: 05:20:589 -
19:18 Smokeman: offset 320,589
19:19 Smokeman: 85 bpm
19:19 Smokeman: check it out yourself
19:19 Smokeman: offset might be wrong
19:19 Riven: .
19:19 Smokeman: +-1 bpm
19:19 Smokeman: +-5ms
19:21 Smokeman: 05:17:362 (1) - offset 312,593 78BPM
19:22 Riven: lol
19:22 Riven: no
19:23 Smokeman: don use 1/16 snap for thsoe notes
19:23 Smokeman: it didnt sound right
19:23 Smokeman: at al
19:23 Smokeman: all*
19:23 Smokeman: