Razor Sharp wrote:

Mod for CLSW!

Since i cant mod cup -> platter, i will only mod Rain and up.

GENERAL

Everything seems fine here.

BLESS

Difficulty Name: Bless, this is ok, but what about Blessing? I think it sounds nice. Up to you tho! leeme think about more better name.

00:02:977 (1,2) - Would suggest you to curve them more, to create more movement, as it follows 00:06:053 (1,2) ! It is ok as it is, but just a suggestion, to create a better flow. I think it's okay to do with this.
00:17:303 (6,7) - Increase the distance between these? There is a "strong" guitar sound here, and i think this stream should follow it. Just to make it follow these points: 00:18:169 (6,1) 00:19:418 (4,5) 00:19:803 (8,1) 00:20:380 (6,7) 00:20:957 (4,5) done with (6) and (7) only.
00:38:746 (2) - Move to x256. Will make it fit the vocal pitch. Too long and borderline jump. I don't like them.
00:40:284 (2) - Would suggest to have the curve bend more to have more movement at this slider. done
00:53:746 (1,2,3) - There is crying for a hyper from (1) too (2), and (2) too (3). I think it would fit pretty good. Just using HDash for (3)'s end is enough.
01:01:438 (1,2) - What about making them like this? I presonally feel like this would make it more fun. Troll sliders, I won't touch it.
01:05:092 (2) - Moving this to the centre of the map will create a nice flow IMO. I wanted to make a long jump for 01:05:092 (2,3).
01:14:515 (3) - Make this into a hyper, as it hypers to (4). It cries for it. I think it's enough. This mapset isn't made for challenge, just a relaxing and calm.
01:27:111 (4,5,6,7,8) - Move to x159, then move 01:27:399 (7,8) to x432? Would make it interesting to play. And it is in the kiai after all. Oh no it's too much exaggerated, also it's really painful for beginners.
01:42:015 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Have this whole stream curve more, to make more movement. Feels kinda empty as it is. Same reason as 02:40:669 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9)
01:47:592 (1,2,3,4) - Increase distance on these. I feel like they are way to easy to hit as it is. But keep them not hyper. Done
02:40:669 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Bigger curve to make more movement. Feels empty. It's an enough usage.
02:50:284 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - Why not map after the vocals? This part feels kinda, straight forward. IMO it dont fit the map. So would suggest to make it different. I wanna try with something different for this part. This part was mapped with 1/1, and next part was mapped with full of 1/2.
03:14:803 (3,4,5,6,7) - Try to make this stream something like i suggested on 01:27:111 (4,5,6,7,8) No HDash for this.
03:33:746 (1,2) - This cries for a hyper. As I said below, I wanna make it easy. No HDash please.
03:34:515 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Try to make this stream different. By that i mean, have different patterns than you usually use on this map for streams. Would make it much more interesting to play. The placements are really hard to decide. Actually, I already have thought a lot about the other variations of this part, and yea, I picked one of them before but afb just pointed out. There's no problem to using similar pattern and not worse than using random shapes and ruining whole flows.
04:02:207 (8,9) - Move (8) too x384 (remember to ctrl+h it). And then move (9) too x48. Would make it much better IMO. Hyperdashes? No, this map is aiming for relaxing and easy, useless forced 1/4 hyperjumps are not allowed for this mapset.
04:04:515 (1,2,3,4) - Try this? Simply copy paste and ctrl+h (1) and (2) and replace it by the (3) and (4). The anti-flow movements between (1) and (2) will ruin the flow, it isn't acceptable. I'd better to keep with mine.
04:22:784 (1,2) - Move the slider end more to the side, to make it curve more. Not really good choice. I think it's enough.

Thats all from me! Overall the map is to say perfect! Good luck on ranking!

1. 00:06:053 (1,2) and 00:07:592 (3,4) - Why is there no movement here when the same section of music at 00:09:130 (1,2) has 0.88x DS?
2. 00:10:284 (2,3) - ^ Here you have no movement for arguably a more prominent note, whilst you have a jump for ever similar object pair in this section - 00:07:207 (2,3) - 00:08:746 (4,1) - 00:11:823 (4,1) - etc. This doesn't make sense to me
3. 00:44:130 (3) - Vocal note on the slider end of (3) is prominent, so deserves more spacing IMO. I'd remove the repeat on (3) and then add a circle with a jump at 00:44:515 - x-192 seems to fit to me
4. 00:47:207 (3) - ^
5. 00:50:284 (3) - Same idea as above, shorten by 1/2 and add a new circle on the downbeat
6. 00:55:284 (1) - Hdash here? It's the first time you use the drum finish, so it would provide a nice emphasis I feel - try moving (1) to x-208 and (2) to x-384 for a more even jump spacing to 00:56:823 (1)
7. 01:14:515 (3) - I'd NC here, the number of fruits on the plate gets quite high here without it, obstructing the player's view
8. 01:41:246 (4,1) - Spacing feels kinda awkward here right after the hdash pattern, I'd reduce the jump size a tiny bit, (1) to x-160
9. 02:50:669 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Pretty boring tbh, why not add some more movement here, even if you only sway (2,3) for both combos and then move them slightly away from each other
10. 02:53:746 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
11. Slightly larger and more varied spacing, but still pretty uninteresting to play - same ideas as above, but feel free to keep some of the ideas you already have here, such as slightly increased/varied spacing to make it distinct from the previous iteration
12. 03:50:284 (3,1) - Change of direction creates an annoying wiggle with dash here - I'd move 03:50:669 (1,2) to x-304 (since the spacing 03:51:246 (2,3) also feels a little too high to me)
13. 04:02:207 (7) - Consider NC here to reduce the combo count and amount of fruit on the plate

1. 00:15:284 to 00:21:438 - Nothing strictly wrong with this, and it plays pretty well, but it's a huge increase in note density from the Platter (1/1 and 1/2 sliders), and I think it's overemphasized for a relatively calm part at the beginning of the song. This would fit better as 1/2 sliders with the occasional triplet or 1/4 repeating slider. If you want a nice buildup, I feel keeping the last part of this 00:20:669 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) as a stream would be acceptable
2. 00:30:669 (1) - Drop the spacing a little here please, reaction speed might be a little low right after the break. Try x-80
3. 00:44:130 (3) - Same suggestions and reasoning as in the Platter, this would be better if you removed the repeat and added a spaced circle in it's place
4. 01:38:169 (7,1) - Spacing can be a little annoying here following the zig-zag pattern, so I'd reduce the jump distance here a little. E.g. spacing at 01:36:438 (3,1) is only 1.66x, which feels more natural to me
5. 01:39:707 (7,1) - ^
6. 02:07:495 (8,1) - ^ Similar problem here, large hdash out of the wiggle feels really awkward to play, so I'd reduce the spacing whilst maintaining the curved stream and a hyper here
7. 02:50:669 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same comments as in the Platter, this is just too simple, it doesn't fit well with the rest of the diff at all in my opinion. There's plenty of opportunity for the player to rest in the break right before this, so having a trivial section here seems senseless. Strongly suggest you vary this pattern up a little or swap some notes to create some movement, even if you stick to 1/1