Hatsuki Yura - Izayoi Warabeuta [OsuMania] · forum

Elementaires

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

Elementaires 2015-06-04T18:57:02+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jeudi 3 mars 2016 at 22:08:09

Artist: Hatsuki Yura
Title: Izayoi Warabeuta
Tags: 清風明月宵闇恋想奇譚 drop 同人音楽どろっぷ
BPM: 138
Filesize: 3825kb
Play Time: 01:51
Difficulties Available:

EZ - 7Key (1,02 stars, 255 notes)
HD - 7Key (2,57 stars, 918 notes)
NM - 7Key (1,71 stars, 544 notes)

Download: Hatsuki Yura - Izayoi Warabeuta
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Featured in the Group Stage mappool for 7K MWC 2017 !

[Changelog]

4 June - Beatmap submitted (EZ,NM,HD)
6 June - Applied changes from Kaito-Kun and Mwalls Ho mods
8 June - Applied changes from AJIekceu and Steins mods
22 July - Applied changes from Todestrieb mods ; trying some hitsounds
28 July - Added hitsounds on EZ, NM, HD.
14 September - Revived and finished hitsounds on all diff. Also applied changes from PyaKura mods.
25 September - Applied changes from Kruzon
2 November - Applied some changes from Tifyron
12 November - Applied changes from LordRaika
4 December - Applied changes again from LordRaika
5 January - Resolved consistency issues thanks to Takane6
3 March - Applied final changes by LordRaika and by Feerum

EZ : 6 mods

NM : 8 mods

HD : 10 mods

Last edited by Elementaires 2017-01-08T15:55:13+00:00, edited 58 times in total.

Mwallx

222 posts

Joined April 2014

Mwallx 2015-06-05T18:43:29+00:00

Mod ~~tomorrow~~today

Kaito-kun

490 posts

Joined July 2014

Kaito-kun 2015-06-05T19:36:08+00:00

Hi Elementaires :3, M4M requested from the queue, so here I am:

1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[General]
Change NM's OD and HP to 7.5 each (you can keep it as it is if you'll like)

[EZ]
00:01:525 (1525|0,1525|6) - Why double notes here, sound isn't stronger than the rest, in fact, the past notes were stronger. Delete one note.
00:03:264 (3264|0,3264|6) - ^^^
00:05:003 (5003|0,5003|6) - ^^^
00:06:742 (6742|0,6742|6) - ^^^
00:08:481 (8481|0,8481|6) - ^^^
00:10:220 (10220|6,10220|0) - ^^^
00:11:960 (11960|0,11960|4) - ^^^
00:13:699 (13699|5,13699|1) - ^^^
00:41:960 (41960|5,41960|1) - ^^^
00:46:742 (46742|0,46742|4) - ^^^
00:50:220 (50220|1,50220|4) - ^^^
00:57:177 (57177|4,57177|6) - ^^^
01:09:351 (69351|3,69351|6) - ^^^
01:23:264 (83264|2,83264|5) - ^^^
00:20:655 (20655|5,20655|3) - Why not remove this and add an LN from 00:20:510 - up to 00:20:945 -
00:34:568 (34568|2,34568|6) - ^^^, add LN from 00:34:423 - up to 00:34:858 -
00:48:481 (48481|5,48481|3,48916|1,48916|5) - ^^^, add LN from 00:48:336 - up to 00:48:916 - (add a note at the end of the LN, since there's a sound there)
01:02:394 (62394|2,62394|4,62829|0,62829|6) - ^^^, add LN from 01:02:249 - up to 01:02:829 - (add a note at the end of the LN, since there's a sound there)
01:16:307 (76307|3,76307|5) - ^^^, add LN from 01:16:163 - up to 01:16:597 -
01:30:220 (90220|2,90220|4) - ^^^, add LN from 01:30:076 - up to 01:30:510 -
On this part 01:16:742 -, why didn't you added a note (besides the LN), like you did here 00:35:003 -?
Why a double here 01:47:612 (107612|4,107612|6) - and only one here 01:40:655 (100655|3) -?

[NM]
00:01:525 (1525|6,1525|4,1525|0) - Why a chord here, sound isn't stronger than the rest. Delete one note.
Why is this 00:09:786 (9786|6,9786|1) - a double while this 00:09:641 (9641|4) - is a single? You also mapped the same pattern with singles only beforehand, so make that double a single to make map coherent.
00:13:264 (13264|1,13264|5) - Make this a single, ^same reason
00:17:177 (17177|0,17177|3) - Add a note here, sound is stronger than the rest, so it should distinguish from the rest
00:24:134 (24134|0,24134|4) - ^^^
00:31:090 (31090|3,31090|1) - ^^^
00:51:960 (51960|0,51960|2) - ^^^
01:05:873 (65873|0,65873|5) - ^^^
01:12:829 (72829|0,72829|5) - ^^^
01:26:742 (86742|0,86742|6) - ^^^
01:33:699 (93699|0,93699|5) - ^^^
00:38:047 (38047|5) - Why only one note when sound is so strong? Add at least one more (but making it a 3-note chord should make the map more coherent)
00:45:003 (45003|0) - ^^^
00:58:916 (58916|0) - ^^^
01:19:786 (79786|0) - ^^^
01:26:742 (86742|0) - ^^^
01:02:322 - You forgot to add a note here
01:47:612 (107612|0) - Add another note here

[HD]
00:01:525 (1525|1,1525|4,1525|0) - Sound is faint, make it a single note
00:03:264 (3264|0,3264|3,3264|5) - ^^^
00:05:003 (5003|0,5003|4,5003|6) - ^^^
00:06:742 (6742|0,6742|4,6742|2) - ^^^
00:08:481 (8481|0,8481|2,8481|5) - ^^^
00:10:220 (10220|2,10220|0,10220|3) - ^^^
00:11:960 (11960|0,11960|3,11960|5) - ^^^
00:02:684 (2684|5) - Make this a double, you mapped this sound as doubles before, make it coherent
00:09:641 (9641|3) - ^^^
00:13:119 (13119|2) - ^^^
Move 00:06:163 (6163|3) - to another column (preferably column 5) and add a note to make it a double, for map coherence
00:02:829 (2829|3,2829|6,2829|1) - Delete a note, making it a double, ^same reason
00:06:307 (6307|1,6307|6,6307|5) - ^^^
00:09:786 (9786|1,9786|4,9786|6) - ^^^
00:13:264 (13264|5,13264|1,13264|6) - ^^^
00:03:554 (3554|4,3699|4) - Why a jack here? Move 00:03:554 (3554|4) - to column 2
Move 00:06:163 (6163|3) - to another column (preferably column 5) and add a note
00:17:177 (17177|0,17177|2,17177|3) - Add an extra note, you map vocals with 3-note chords, and this is stronger sound, so map it with 4-note chords
00:24:134 (24134|0,24134|3,24134|4) - ^^^
00:31:090 (31090|1,31090|4,31090|0) - ^^^
00:38:047 (38047|0,38047|4,38047|5) - ^^^
00:51:960 (51960|0,51960|5,51960|2) - ^^^
00:58:916 (58916|0,58916|6,58916|3) - ^^^
01:05:873 (65873|0,65873|5,65873|3) - ^^^
01:12:829 (72829|0,72829|5,72829|2) - ^^^
01:33:699 (93699|0,93699|5,93699|3) - ^^^
Make this 00:45:003 (45003|0,45003|5) - a 4-note chord
01:19:786 (79786|0,79786|4) - ^^^
01:26:742 (86742|0,86742|5) - ^^^
I can let slide some jacks in the song, but 00:27:902 (27902|5,28047|5,28336|5,28481|5,28771|5,28916|5) -, seriously? XD. Remove these jacks please. (you can simply move the single notes one column to the right (column 7))
01:47:612 (107612|6) - Add two more notes in here
01:40:655 (100655|6) - ^^^
00:44:423 (44423|3) - Add a note here
00:47:902 (47902|6) - ^^^
00:54:858 (54858|2) - ^^^
00:50:220 (50220|0,50220|2,50220|5) - Make it a single note
Two things regarding HD: 1. Be careful with those jacks, 2. at the very end, where you map the flute (01:37:612 - to be exact), there's another instrument playing, if you'll like, you can map it.

I didn't took into account note placement, since I was mainly suggesting changes to the patterns, patterns in itself may vary.

Finished the huge mod XD. Anything you need help with, PM me about it. Also, if you think this mod wasn't fit for our M4M agreement, PM me and we'll sort it out .

Very good map, Good Luck with it

Kamikaze

2,898 posts

Joined November 2012

Kamikaze 2015-06-05T21:14:08+00:00

#rankhardermaps2015 project vol.36

Elementaires

658 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

Elementaires 2015-06-05T22:16:14+00:00

kaito ET mod

Kaito-kun wrote:

Hi Elementaires :3, M4M requested from the queue, so here I am:

1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[General]
Change NM's OD and HP to 7.5 each (you can keep it as it is if you'll like)

[EZ]
00:01:525 (1525|0,1525|6) - Why double notes here, sound isn't stronger than the rest, in fact, the past notes were stronger. Delete one note. all updated
00:03:264 (3264|0,3264|6) - ^^^
00:05:003 (5003|0,5003|6) - ^^^
00:06:742 (6742|0,6742|6) - ^^^
00:08:481 (8481|0,8481|6) - ^^^
00:10:220 (10220|6,10220|0) - ^^^
00:11:960 (11960|0,11960|4) - ^^^
00:13:699 (13699|5,13699|1) - ^^^
00:41:960 (41960|5,41960|1) - ^^^
00:46:742 (46742|0,46742|4) - ^^^
00:50:220 (50220|1,50220|4) - ^^^
00:57:177 (57177|4,57177|6) - ^^^
01:09:351 (69351|3,69351|6) - ^^^
01:23:264 (83264|2,83264|5) - ^^^
00:20:655 (20655|5,20655|3) - Why not remove this and add an LN from 00:20:510 - up to 00:20:945 - updated
00:34:568 (34568|2,34568|6) - ^^^, add LN from 00:34:423 - up to 00:34:858 - updated, prefered to start the slider at 00:34:568 - to follow the vocal that fit more with the next LNs, i'll see if others mods from other people would say about this or not
00:48:481 (48481|5,48481|3,48916|1,48916|5) - ^^^, add LN from 00:48:336 - up to 00:48:916 - (add a note at the end of the LN, since there's a sound there) updated
01:02:394 (62394|2,62394|4,62829|0,62829|6) - ^^^, add LN from 01:02:249 - up to 01:02:829 - (add a note at the end of the LN, since there's a sound there) updated
01:16:307 (76307|3,76307|5) - ^^^, add LN from 01:16:163 - up to 01:16:597 - updated
01:30:220 (90220|2,90220|4) - ^^^, add LN from 01:30:076 - up to 01:30:510 - updated
On this part 01:16:742 -, why didn't you added a note (besides the LN), like you did here 00:35:003 -? updated, idk either i didnt put that note lol
Why a double here 01:47:612 (107612|4,107612|6) - and only one here 01:40:655 (100655|3) -? updated, double on both

[NM]
00:01:525 (1525|6,1525|4,1525|0) - Why a chord here, sound isn't stronger than the rest. Delete one note. updated
Why is this 00:09:786 (9786|6,9786|1) - a double while this 00:09:641 (9641|4) - is a single? You also mapped the same pattern with singles only beforehand, so make that double a single to make map coherent. updated
00:13:264 (13264|1,13264|5) - Make this a single, ^same reason updated
00:17:177 (17177|0,17177|3) - Add a note here, sound is stronger than the rest, so it should distinguish from the rest all updated
00:24:134 (24134|0,24134|4) - ^^^
00:31:090 (31090|3,31090|1) - ^^^
00:51:960 (51960|0,51960|2) - ^^^
01:05:873 (65873|0,65873|5) - ^^^
01:12:829 (72829|0,72829|5) - ^^^
01:26:742 (86742|0,86742|6) - ^^^
01:33:699 (93699|0,93699|5) - ^^^
00:38:047 (38047|5) - Why only one note when sound is so strong? Add at least one more (but making it a 3-note chord should make the map more coherent) all updated
00:45:003 (45003|0) - ^^^
00:58:916 (58916|0) - ^^^
01:19:786 (79786|0) - ^^^
01:26:742 (86742|0) - ^^^
01:02:322 - You forgot to add a note here updated
01:47:612 (107612|0) - Add another note here updated

[HD]
00:01:525 (1525|1,1525|4,1525|0) - Sound is faint, make it a single note all updated
00:03:264 (3264|0,3264|3,3264|5) - ^^^
00:05:003 (5003|0,5003|4,5003|6) - ^^^
00:06:742 (6742|0,6742|4,6742|2) - ^^^
00:08:481 (8481|0,8481|2,8481|5) - ^^^
00:10:220 (10220|2,10220|0,10220|3) - ^^^
00:11:960 (11960|0,11960|3,11960|5) - ^^^
00:02:684 (2684|5) - Make this a double, you mapped this sound as doubles before, make it coherent all updated
00:09:641 (9641|3) - ^^^
00:13:119 (13119|2) - ^^^
Move 00:06:163 (6163|3) - to another column (preferably column 5) and add a note to make it a double, for map coherence all updated until end
00:02:829 (2829|3,2829|6,2829|1) - Delete a note, making it a double, ^same reason
00:06:307 (6307|1,6307|6,6307|5) - ^^^
00:09:786 (9786|1,9786|4,9786|6) - ^^^
00:13:264 (13264|5,13264|1,13264|6) - ^^^
00:03:554 (3554|4,3699|4) - Why a jack here? Move 00:03:554 (3554|4) - to column 2
Move 00:06:163 (6163|3) - to another column (preferably column 5) and add a note
00:17:177 (17177|0,17177|2,17177|3) - Add an extra note, you map vocals with 3-note chords, and this is stronger sound, so map it with 4-note chords
00:24:134 (24134|0,24134|3,24134|4) - ^^^
00:31:090 (31090|1,31090|4,31090|0) - ^^^
00:38:047 (38047|0,38047|4,38047|5) - ^^^
00:51:960 (51960|0,51960|5,51960|2) - ^^^
00:58:916 (58916|0,58916|6,58916|3) - ^^^
01:05:873 (65873|0,65873|5,65873|3) - ^^^
01:12:829 (72829|0,72829|5,72829|2) - ^^^
01:33:699 (93699|0,93699|5,93699|3) - ^^^
Make this 00:45:003 (45003|0,45003|5) - a 4-note chord
01:19:786 (79786|0,79786|4) - ^^^
01:26:742 (86742|0,86742|5) - ^^^
I can let slide some jacks in the song, but 00:27:902 (27902|5,28047|5,28336|5,28481|5,28771|5,28916|5) -, seriously? XD. Remove these jacks please. (you can simply move the single notes one column to the right (column 7))
01:47:612 (107612|6) - Add two more notes in here
01:40:655 (100655|6) - ^^^
00:44:423 (44423|3) - Add a note here
00:47:902 (47902|6) - ^^^
00:54:858 (54858|2) - ^^^
00:50:220 (50220|0,50220|2,50220|5) - Make it a single note
Two things regarding HD: 1. Be careful with those jacks, 2. at the very end, where you map the flute (01:37:612 - to be exact), there's another instrument playing, if you'll like, you can map it.

I didn't took into account note placement, since I was mainly suggesting changes to the patterns, patterns in itself may vary.

Finished the huge mod XD. Anything you need help with, PM me about it. Also, if you think this mod wasn't fit for our M4M agreement, PM me and we'll sort it out .

Very good map, Good Luck with it

Thanks Kaito!

Mwallx

222 posts

Joined April 2014

Mwallx 2015-06-06T01:59:43+00:00

Here we go.
Don't know if it's for rank,but still I will mod it as ranked level.Hope you like it.

[Overall]

Hitsound is too loud.If you want to keep it,please allow I recommend this one instead of 'defalut normal'.
http://puu.sh/ie2FT/d76e5b13c4.wav (from suwako koi yomi zakura)
Since the music style is '和風'(japanese folk style),this sound fits it best.
Meta:
I don't know if you are willing to change to the oringinal title,but nevertheless I shall mention it.
Title: 十六夜童歌
Artist: 葉月ゆら
Tag: 清風明月宵闇恋想奇譚 drop 同人音楽どろっぷ
All I can find,also I think it's enough.Delete current tag though,it's useless.
By the way the title means 'children folk of full moon night ',so the current
BG is not very suitable xD,suggest you change it to night.
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/250599 This one is pretty good.

[HD]

00:00:221 to 01:37:612
It's a bit tedious to be honest for its repeated pattern for roughly 100 second.
Try to add some LNs,there is much sound that you can correspond with LN,the long vocal,the flute ect.
Also the pattern is kind of irregular for a ranked(rip it if not),try to make it more regular or symmetric like

~~Why the picture both from puush,but of different formats,nvm.~~
Sorry for my laziness not to point out concrete pattern OAO.
01:47:612 (107612|5) - Move to 2 or 5.
01:50:655 (110655|0) - Extend to 01:51:090,it ends here.

Actually I can make a MX if you like and wait

(~~I love yura's sound~~ No I'm not weeaboo !!)

[NM]
Not much to say here,the overall is very good,just try to make the pattern more beautiful.
Also it's a little weird it has less LN than EZ -_-.Don't add to make it harder though,
the current spread is good,break can be pity.

[EZ]

00:02:394 (2394|3) - Move to 00:02:249 . 00:05:873 (5873|1) - 00:09:351 (9351|1) - these also,I think it feels better.
00:27:612 (27612|6) - Delete.
00:35:003 (35003|5) - LNs better make them continuous like
instead of even if the sound ends earlier.
It's easier for novice.

Okay that's all.
Wish you luck it get attentioned.
Have a look at this btw,this is the exam I'am facing.Every student from every school do this. -_-

http://image.baidu.com/i?tn=baiduimage&ipn=r&ct=201326592&cl=2&lm=-1&st=-1&fm=result&fr=&sf=1&fmq=1433564150890_R&pv=&ic=0&nc=1&z=&se=1&showtab=0&fb=0&width=&height=&face=0&istype=2&ie=utf-8&word=高考撕书

Elementaires

658 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

Elementaires 2015-06-06T11:35:49+00:00

Mwalls ET mod

Mwalls Ho wrote:
Here we go.
Don't know if it's for rank,but still I will mod it as ranked level.Hope you like it.

[Overall] all updated, taking your .wav and all sample volume to 25%
Hitsound is too loud.If you want to keep it,please allow I recommend this one instead of 'defalut normal'.
http://puu.sh/ie2FT/d76e5b13c4.wav (from suwako koi yomi zakura)
Since the music style is '和風'(japanese folk style),this sound fits it best.
Meta:
I don't know if you are willing to change to the oringinal title,but nevertheless I shall mention it.
Title: 十六夜童歌
Artist: 葉月ゆら
Tag: 清風明月宵闇恋想奇譚 drop 同人音楽どろっぷ
All I can find,also I think it's enough.Delete current tag though,it's useless.
By the way the title means 'children folk of full moon night ',so the current
BG is not very suitable xD,suggest you change it to night.
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/250599 This one is pretty good.

[HD] all updated, tried to make some "symmetric" pattern
00:00:221 to 01:37:612
It's a bit tedious to be honest for its repeated pattern for roughly 100 second.
Try to add some LNs,there is much sound that you can correspond with LN,the long vocal,the flute ect.
Also the pattern is kind of irregular for a ranked(rip it if not),try to make it more regular or symmetric like

~~Why the picture both from puush,but of different formats,nvm.~~
Sorry for my laziness not to point out concrete pattern OAO.
01:47:612 (107612|5) - Move to 2 or 5.
01:50:655 (110655|0) - Extend to 01:51:090,it ends here.
Actually I can make a MX if you like and wait (~~I love yura's sound~~ No I'm not weeaboo !!)

[NM]
Not much to say here,the overall is very good,just try to make the pattern more beautiful.
Also it's a little weird it has less LN than EZ -_-.Don't add to make it harder though,
the current spread is good,break can be pity.

[EZ] all updated
00:02:394 (2394|3) - Move to 00:02:249 . 00:05:873 (5873|1) - 00:09:351 (9351|1) - these also,I think it feels better.
00:27:612 (27612|6) - Delete.
00:35:003 (35003|5) - LNs better make them continuous like
instead of even if the sound ends earlier.
It's easier for novice.

Okay that's all.
Wish you luck it get attentioned.
Have a look at this btw,this is the exam I'am facing.Every student from every school do this. -_-
http://image.baidu.com/i?tn=baiduimage&ipn=r&ct=201326592&cl=2&lm=-1&st=-1&fm=result&fr=&sf=1&fmq=1433564150890_R&pv=&ic=0&nc=1&z=&se=1&showtab=0&fb=0&width=&height=&face=0&istype=2&ie=utf-8&word=高考撕书
i want to be chinese now

thanks Mwalls

AJIekceu

725 posts

Joined July 2011

AJIekceu 2015-06-08T05:51:04+00:00

Hi

M4M from Alexey's Queue

Column |0|1|2|3|4|5|6|

Let's begin :3

Click

[General]
Check your metadata

You must write same artist's name and title in all diffs in unicode, fix tags

You must fix NM. Many doubles there are.

You turn

Good luck

Elementaires

658 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

Elementaires 2015-06-08T11:56:18+00:00

[box=Alexey ET mod[quote="AJIekceu":1337:1337]Hi

M4M from Alexey's Queue

Column |0|1|2|3|4|5|6|

Let's begin :3

[box=Click]

[General]
Check your metadata

You must write same artist's name and title in all diffs in unicode, fix tags

You must fix NM. Many doubles there are.

You turn

Good luck

[/box]

Thanks Alexey!!

Steins

308 posts

Joined December 2013

Steins 2015-06-08T13:56:46+00:00

Mon god mods me dit que sur ta HD y'a un petit soucis :

01:37:467 (97467|2) - cette note correspond au même son que cette LN 01:37:612 (97612|5) - ? dans ce cas là pourquoi ne pas LN aussi ?

01:38:481 (98481|4,99351|2,99641|5,99786|1) - dans le genre flemmardise tu peux add des notes

Ps: 70 % de tes chords sont focus à droite tu le sais ?

Si je suis motivée je te ferais de beaux hitsounds =w= donc en attendant cadeau !

Elementaires

658 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

Elementaires 2015-06-08T14:07:54+00:00

Steins ET mod

Steinstwo wrote:
Mon god mods me dit que sur ta HD y'a un petit soucis :

01:37:467 (97467|2) - cette note correspond au même son que cette LN 01:37:612 (97612|5) - ? dans ce cas là pourquoi ne pas LN aussi ? j'avais peur que ce soit un peu en paté mais updated~

01:38:481 (98481|4,99351|2,99641|5,99786|1) - dans le genre flemmardise tu peux add des notes je voulais en mettre mais j'ai peur de mettre trop de notes (vu que les LNs ont un rythme particulier), je mets vite fait 3 mini chords, à voir si les autres mods trouveront un moyen de m'aider sur ça ;w;

Ps: 70 % de tes chords sont focus à droite tu le sais ? pas le choix

Si je suis motivée je te ferais de beaux hitsounds =w= donc en attendant cadeau ! aaaah

Todestrieb

305 posts

Joined February 2014

Todestrieb 2015-07-22T18:36:51+00:00

Last edited by Todestrieb 2015-07-22T20:23:22+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Elementaires

658 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

Elementaires 2015-07-22T19:19:34+00:00

Todestrieb ET mod

Todestrieb wrote:
Hello, requested mod, there is also a lot of notes around the end that can be double chords.

Columns: 0-1-2-3-4-5-6

HD

00:13:989 (13989|4) - Add 1 note
00:19:206 (19206|5) - Move to 6
00:19:278 (19278|5) - Add 1 note
00:22:757 (22757|3) - Add 1 note
00:22:829 (22829|2) - Add 1 note
00:26:163 (26163|2) - Move to 1
00:26:235 (26235|2) - Add 1 note
00:29:641 (29641|5) - Move to 3
00:29:713 (29713|4) - Add 1 note
00:33:192 (33192|3) - Add 1 note
00:36:670 (36670|5) - Add 1 note
00:50:583 (50583|2) - Add 1 note
00:55:728 (55728|6) - Add 1 note
00:57:539 (57539|5) - Add 1 note
01:01:018 (61018|2) - Add 1 note
01:04:496 (64496|4) - Add 1 note
01:07:974 (67974|3) - Add 1 note
01:11:452 (71452|2) - Add 1 note
01:14:858 (74858|6) - Move to 5
01:14:931 (74931|4) - Add 1 note
01:18:409 (78409|2) - Add 1 note
01:21:887 (81887|2) - Add 1 note
01:28:771 (88771|1) - Move to 2
01:28:844 (88844|3) - Add 1 note
01:35:800 (95800|2) - Add 1 note
01:38:916 (98916|0) - Add 1 note
01:39:206 (99206|5) - Add 1 note
01:39:278 (99278|4) - Add 1 note
01:39:351 (99351|3) - Add 1 note
01:39:351 (99351|0) - Add 1 note
01:39:641 (99641|6) - Add 1 note
01:40:076 (100076|5) - Add 1 note
01:40:220 (100220|1) - Add 1 note
01:41:090 (101090|4,101090|2) - Add 2 notes
01:41:525 (101525|2) - Add 1 note
01:41:960 (101960|4) - Add 1 note
01:42:394 (102394|3) - Add 1 note
01:42:684 (102684|4) - Add 1 note
01:42:757 (102757|3) - Add 1 note
01:42:829 (102829|2,102829|5) - Add 2 notes
01:43:119 (103119|4) - Add 1 note
01:43:554 (103554|5) - Add 1 note
01:43:699 (103699|1) - Add 1 note
01:44:568 (104568|1) - Add 1 note
01:45:003 (105003|1) - Add 1 note
01:45:438 (105438|1) - Add 1 note
01:45:873 (105873|6) - Add 1 note
01:46:163 (106163|2) - Add 1 note
01:46:235 (106235|3) - Add 1 note
01:46:307 (106307|4,106307|2) - Add 2 notes
01:46:597 (106597|2) - Add 1 note
01:47:032 (107032|5) - Add 1 note
01:47:177 (107177|1) - Add 1 note
01:47:902 (107902|0) - Add 1 note
01:48:047 (108047|2) - Add 1 note
01:48:481 (108481|1) - Add 1 note
01:48:916 (108916|5) - Add 1 note
01:49:351 (109351|5) - Add 1 note
01:49:641 (109641|6) - Add 1 note
01:49:713 (109713|5) - Add 1 note
01:49:786 (109786|4,109786|0) - Add 1 note
01:50:076 (110076|5) - Add 1 note
01:50:510 (110510|3) - Add 1 note
01:50:655 (110655|4) - Add 1 note

ALL APPLIED!!

you da real mvp

PyaKura

2,084 posts

Joined January 2013

PyaKura 2015-09-14T18:56:24+00:00

wallah

02:09 Elementaires: tu peux speedmod ma map oo pas?
02:13 PyaKura: la map que tu m'as filé tout à l'heure ?
02:13 PyaKura: btw
02:13 *PyaKura is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/681992 DJ Sharpnel - Touch the Angel]
02:13 Elementaires: oui
02:13 PyaKura: Elle est cool j'trouve, c'est pporse qui a map
02:14 PyaKura: go me /np la song j'me rappelle pas du nom xD
02:15 PyaKura: wtf
02:15 PyaKura: bbu c'est une fille
02:15 Elementaires: sérieux
02:16 *Elementaires is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/712126 Hatsuki Yura - Izayoi Warabeuta]
02:16 Elementaires: jcroyais c'était du troll quand tout le monde disait que c'était une femme lmao
02:16 PyaKura: je sais pas sur le grouep skype je lisais ce que ça disait hier
02:16 PyaKura: ils disaient "qu'elle" est passée overjoy
02:18 Elementaires: ah ouaaaiis
02:18 Elementaires: chaud en 2 semaines y'a eu 2 overjoy
02:19 Elementaires: wait
02:19 Elementaires: c'est quoi son ID ?
02:19 PyaKura: chépa
02:19 Elementaires: YUKO ?
02:19 PyaKura: aucune idée
02:20 PyaKura: wesh j'pense que je sais comment diversificationner la map
02:21 Elementaires: ah
02:21 Elementaires: pas trop kan mm ok
02:21 PyaKura: tkt
02:21 PyaKura: à partir de là 00:41:960 -
02:21 Elementaires: et fait des trucs sur la EZ et NM si tu peux j'ai que 3 mods dessus
02:21 PyaKura: parce que là c'est comme le début
02:21 PyaKura: oué
02:21 Elementaires: même si je sais pas trop comment on pourrait changer
02:22 PyaKura: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3677644
02:22 PyaKura: juste comme ça
02:22 PyaKura: ça mappe sur la flute
02:23 PyaKura: ou j'sais pas c'que c'est comme instru mais voilà
02:23 PyaKura: et peut-être utiliser des LNs aussi pour la flûte
02:23 PyaKura: ça me semble intéressant
02:24 Elementaires: ah pas con
02:24 Elementaires: du coup je le mets à chaque passage
02:24 Elementaires: ou pas
02:24 Elementaires: ou de l'autre côté pour varier
02:25 Elementaires: 00:45:728 -
02:25 PyaKura: ouais j'pense change de côté
02:25 PyaKura: c'est pas une diff difficile et je pense que ce sont encore des débutants qui joueront
02:25 PyaKura: tant qu'à faire ça force à s'habituer des deux côtés
02:26 Elementaires: oui voilà
02:27 PyaKura: je pense que tu peux faire pareil en moins lourd pour l'intro
02:27 PyaKura: vu que les sons sont plus légers
02:27 PyaKura: genre une LN pour la flûte et une note pour la guitare(?)
02:28 Elementaires: ce sera un bordel non?
02:28 PyaKura: mmmh laisse moi voir
02:31 PyaKura: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3677686
02:31 PyaKura: une LN sur deux j'ai mis, au tout début
02:32 PyaKura: parce que c'est vrai que les petites LNs en 1/3 doivent être chaud à jouer
02:32 PyaKura: j'ai mis des notes simples à la place
02:33 PyaKura: 00:22:684 (22684|1,22829|1) - évite les petits jacks comme ça
02:34 PyaKura: 00:37:902 (37902|2,38047|2) - etc
02:37 PyaKura: la fin est pas mal à quelques trucs près, vu qu'y a des LNs faudrait penser à garder des triplets simples à jouer
02:38 PyaKura: 01:43:989 (103989|5,104061|1,104134|3) - par exemple, si à la place tu fais 763 ça fait un petit stairs vers la LN, et la dernière note sur l'autre main
02:41 Elementaires: je vais manger en fast
02:41 Elementaires: depuis quand 763 fait un stairs xD
02:41 PyaKura: non mais y a une LN en 5
02:41 PyaKura: ça fait 7 et 6 notes simples
02:41 PyaKura: 5 LN
02:42 PyaKura: 765
02:42 PyaKura: un petit stairs vers une LN
02:42 PyaKura: avec la "vraie" note du triplet sur 3 en décalé
02:42 PyaKura: 'fin tu verras
02:55 Elementaires: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3677786
02:55 Elementaires: comme ça?
02:57 PyaKura: oui
02:57 PyaKura: ça équilibre sur les deux mains et c'est plus lisible/jouable pour un noob
02:57 Elementaires: c'est trop weird sur la main droite
02:58 Elementaires: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3677794 comme ça sinon
02:59 PyaKura: ouais aussi
02:59 Elementaires: jpense pas mettre les LNs au début
02:59 Elementaires: une map qui start par une LN c'est bizarre
02:59 PyaKura: chain de/struction o)
02:59 PyaKura: bon ok c'est entozer
03:00 PyaKura: 01:39:206 (99206|5,99278|4,99351|3) - décale ces trois là un cran à droite je pense
03:01 PyaKura: 01:39:351 (99351|0) - et celle là sur 2 comme ça ça colle avec ce que t'as fait sur les LNs suivantes
03:01 PyaKura: avec une note simple et une LN collées ensemble
03:02 PyaKura: 01:46:163 (106163|2,106307|2) - lol
03:02 PyaKura: à part ça y a rien d'autre qui pose problème je crois
03:02 PyaKura: je recheck
03:04 PyaKura: 01:37:467 (97467|5) - sur 2 ou 3, ça correspond mieuxau niveau des sons
03:04 PyaKura: 01:42:394 (102394|2,102829|2) - mmh
03:05 PyaKura: 01:42:394 (102394|2,102829|1) - essaie de les bouger une colonne vers la gauche
03:06 PyaKura: si tu fais ça, CTRL + H ces notes là 01:42:684 (102684|4,102757|3,102829|2) -
03:06 PyaKura: c'est plus simple à jouer
03:06 PyaKura: et après c'est bon
03:10 Elementaires: j'ai tout fais comme ta dis
03:10 Elementaires: un peu déçu du dernier truc ça ressemble à un random
03:10 Elementaires: peut-être mieux en jouant
03:10 PyaKura: ouais mais comme c'était avant c'est chaud la petite LN sur 7, la note sur 5
03:11 PyaKura: si tu utilises le pouce droit ça fait encore une note sur 4 après
03:11 Elementaires: btw les jacks je les ai gardés je trouve que ça ajoute une petite difficulté (c'est une HD et c'est pas des jacks immenses non plus)
03:11 PyaKura: et tu dois appuyer sur 6 en relachant 7
03:11 Elementaires: ouais j'avoue que c'est mieux cépendant
03:11 PyaKura: et là c'est wtf
03:11 PyaKura: mmmh
03:11 PyaKura: remove les petits jacks quand ça tombe sur une chord à 4 notes alors
03:12 PyaKura: 4 notes c'est beaucoup au début
03:12 Elementaires: ça me va
03:13 PyaKura: 'fin genre déplace la note quoi, la remove pas xd
03:13 Elementaires: oui
03:14 PyaKura: j'suis sur la NM là
03:14 PyaKura: 00:30:148 (30148|4) - ? lol
03:15 PyaKura: si tu mappes la voix c'est mieux sur la ligne rouge au dessus
03:16 Elementaires: ouais dans le mod de jsais plus qui qui me conseillait ici
03:16 Elementaires: au vu de l'instru
03:16 Elementaires: et pour donner un autre rythme
03:16 Elementaires: idk
03:17 PyaKura: la voix est juste au dessus
03:17 Elementaires: je la remet sur la rouge
03:17 PyaKura: la syllabe est pas encore prononcée là où t'as mis la note
03:17 PyaKura: xD
03:17 PyaKura: 01:23:626 (83626|4) - y pas de son ici normalement
03:18 PyaKura: (d'ailleurs tu devrais la remove dans la HD aussi celle là)
03:19 Elementaires: hm je trouvais que ça faisait un bon flow
03:19 PyaKura: ouais mais c'est de l'overmap xd
03:20 PyaKura: 00:27:539 - ici si tu veux mettre une note tu peux (idem pour la HD)
03:21 Elementaires: genre stairs
03:21 Elementaires: sans hitsounds?
03:21 PyaKura: ??
03:21 Elementaires: 00:27:539 -
03:22 PyaKura: 'fin j'veux dire c'est exactement comme plus loin
03:22 Elementaires: tu veux jla mette où
03:22 PyaKura: genre
03:22 PyaKura: attend
03:22 PyaKura: 00:55:293 (55293|0,55365|1,55438|2,55438|5) -
03:22 PyaKura: ici
03:22 PyaKura: là t'as mis un triplet et c'est le même son à 27s et quelques
03:23 Elementaires: ah oui
03:23 Elementaires: ah du coup ouais
03:24 PyaKura: c'est un détail mais 00:32:249 (32249|5,32394|6) - décale d'une colonne vers la gauche parce que 67 c'est relou à jouer
03:27 PyaKura: 01:25:293 (85293|1,85365|2,85438|3,85438|4,85728|3,85728|4,85873|2,86163|2,86307|4,86307|3) - CTRL + H parce que y a un truc identique là 01:18:481 (78481|3,78481|4,78771|3,78771|4,78916|2,79206|2,79351|4,79351|3) -
03:27 Elementaires: done
03:28 Elementaires: voila
03:28 Elementaires: c'est ouf de voir tout les changements
03:28 Elementaires: sur une NM
03:28 Elementaires: comparé à la première version que j'avais faite xD
03:28 PyaKura: http://puu.sh/kbf5T/0662f675b8.png mdr ingen qui m'envoie ça
03:28 PyaKura: t'as eu combien de mods dessus?
03:29 PyaKura: Stop cette LN 01:39:351 (99351|3) - à 01:39:641 - et ajoute une note simple là
03:30 PyaKura: 01:39:786 (99786|5) - stop à 01:40:076 - et ajoute une note simple
03:30 PyaKura: 01:40:220 (100220|3) - stop à 01:40:510 - mais rajoute pas de note
03:31 Elementaires: EZ NM 3 mods et HD 5
03:32 Elementaires: done^
03:32 Elementaires: btw t'en penses quoi de mes hitsounds
03:33 PyaKura: aucune idée j'les ai désactivé hier xD
03:33 PyaKura: j'ai pas fait gaffe
03:33 Elementaires: a
03:34 PyaKura: btw fait les même changements pour ces LNs 01:42:394 (102394|2,102829|4,103264|3,103699|0) -
03:34 Elementaires: je fais pareil pour les LNs d'après ou pas?
03:34 PyaKura: et les LNs d'encore après aussi etc jusqu'à la fin
03:34 Elementaires: ok xD
03:36 Elementaires: voililo
03:36 PyaKura: 00:30:510 (30510|5) - bouge sur 5 pour faire comme le reste
03:38 PyaKura: tu vois ce pattern 00:36:742 (36742|3,36742|4,37032|3,37032|4,37177|1,37467|1,37612|3,37612|4) -
03:38 Elementaires: oui
03:39 PyaKura: bon tu l'as mis de partout avec des variantes
03:39 PyaKura: mais là 00:33:264 -
03:39 PyaKura: xd
03:39 PyaKura: mais pas là *
03:39 Elementaires: ouais
03:39 PyaKura: 00:40:220 - ni là
03:39 Elementaires: jsais pas jtrouvais la voix toute douce et tout et j'ai eu pitié
03:39 Elementaires: puis ça fait variante undernote
03:39 PyaKura: LOL
03:40 PyaKura: ouais ok ça me va
03:40 PyaKura: "j'ai eu pitié" plz xd
03:40 Elementaires: puis sinon ça ressemblerait trop à la HD
03:43 PyaKura: EZ diff
03:43 PyaKura: 00:12:829 (12829|5) - bouge à 00:12:684 -
03:44 PyaKura: de 00:41:960 - à 00:55:873 - reprend le rythme que t'as fait dans l'intro
03:45 PyaKura: je préfère car ça donne de la variation plutôt que full 1/1
03:46 Elementaires: voilà
03:46 PyaKura: idem pour le ending
03:47 PyaKura: 01:40:220 (100220|2,100655|6,100655|4) - très violent pour une sortie de LN
03:47 PyaKura: même si c'est sur des mains séparées xd
03:47 PyaKura: 01:47:177 (107177|1,107612|6,107612|4) - idem
03:48 Elementaires: voilà
03:48 PyaKura: mmmh
03:48 PyaKura: dis moi ce que tu penses de virer cette note 01:51:090 (111090|3) -
03:48 PyaKura: et
03:49 PyaKura: 01:50:945 - rajouter une LN là sur 3
03:49 PyaKura: qui finit au moment où t'as viré la note
03:49 Elementaires: pas bête
03:49 Elementaires: je sais pas si c'est autorisé sur une EZ ce genre de mini ln
03:49 PyaKura: c'est ce que je me dis
03:50 PyaKura: mais bon vu que dans les autres diffs y a un petit triplet
03:50 Elementaires: yolo
03:50 PyaKura: j'me dit que pour une dernière note c'est bon
03:50 PyaKura: et puis euh
03:50 PyaKura: c'est tout j'crois
03:50 Elementaires: att
03:50 Elementaires: tu trouves pas que ça fait bizarre
03:51 Elementaires: 01:50:655 (110655|1) - genre cette note
03:51 Elementaires: ou alors pour la fin de la EZ jmets un pattern chaud genre
03:51 PyaKura: awé si tu fais la petite LN là
03:51 PyaKura: bouge cette note sur 5 ou 6
03:51 PyaKura: mieux
03:51 Elementaires: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3677998
03:52 PyaKura: ouais ça me va
03:52 Elementaires: ultra chaud le pattern
03:52 Elementaires: xd
03:52 PyaKura: fait ctrl + h sur les deux notes simples dans ton screenshot alors
03:53 Elementaires: vla
03:53 PyaKura: et rajoute une note ici 01:50:076 - aussi
03:53 PyaKura: sinon ça fait bizarre
03:53 PyaKura: genre sur 1 2 ou 3
03:54 Elementaires: voilà
03:54 Elementaires: ça fait un pic de difficulté pour les noobs
03:54 Elementaires: parfait
03:54 PyaKura: bon je /savelog

Steins

308 posts

Joined December 2013

Steins 2015-09-15T23:24:17+00:00

j'ai tellement bien travaillé que j'ai envie de faire des cadeaux (non pas parce que j'taime) j'voudrais bien GD aussi mais bon .. Flemme et pas sur de qualité ~ bref bref

Kruzon

1,023 posts

Joined December 2013

Kruzon 2015-09-25T12:21:45+00:00

hello, 7k column format is 1-7

let's goo

ez

nm

00:00:221 (221|5,655|5) - shift 1 time to the left
00:02:684 (2684|5) - move to 2
00:03:264 (3264|5) - move to 7 refer 00:01:525 (1525|6,1525|0) -
00:04:134 (4134|3,4568|3) - shift 1 time to the right
00:06:307 (6307|5) - move to 4 refer 00:02:684 (2684|1,2829|3) -
00:06:742 (6742|4,6742|2) - move to 1 and 7 respectively

00:07:177 (7177|0) - move to 3
00:07:612 (7612|5) - move to 4
00:08:047 (8047|2,8047|6) - move to 4 and 6 respectively
00:09:641 (9641|4) - move to 2
00:09:786 (9786|1) - move to 4
00:10:220 (10220|3,10220|0) - move to 3 and 7 respectively
00:10:655 (10655|5,10655|2,11090|5,11090|2) - shift 2 times to the left and 00:10:655 (10655|3,11090|3) - move to 5
00:11:525 (11525|2,11525|5) - align same column as 00:11:090 (11090|0,11090|4) -
00:11:960 (11960|0,11960|4) - shift 1 time to the right
00:12:394 (12394|1,12684|1) - move them to 7
00:13:119 (13119|3) - move to 6
00:13:264 (13264|5) - move to 2

00:14:134 (14134|2) - move to 1
00:15:003 (15003|6,15003|1) - move to 3 and 5 respectively
00:16:090 (16090|4) - add note to column 5
00:17:032 (17032|5) - move to 7
00:17:177 (17177|3) - move to 3
00:18:047 (18047|2) - move to 1
00:18:481 (18481|1) - move to 3
00:18:916 (18916|2,18916|4) - shift 1 time to the right
00:20:220 (20220|0) - move to 2
00:20:510 (20510|5) - move to 5
00:20:583 (20583|4) - move to 3
00:20:655 (20655|2) - move to 1
00:20:945 (20945|0) - move to 7
00:21:090 (21090|4) - move to 2 and add a note on 4
00:21:525 (21525|5) - move to 5
00:21:815 (21815|6) - add note on column 7
00:21:960 (21960|6) - move to 6

00:23:047 (23047|1) - add note on column 2
00:23:264 (23264|1,23264|3,23554|3,23554|1) - shift 1 time to the left
00:23:699 (23699|4) - move to 6
00:24:134 (24134|0) - move to 2
00:24:423 (24423|1) - move to 1
00:24:568 (24568|2) - move to 6
00:25:003 (25003|5) - move to 5
00:25:293 (25293|4) - move to 6
00:25:438 (25438|2) - move to 1
00:25:728 (25728|5) - move to 7
00:25:873 (25873|4) - move to 4
00:26:163 (26163|0) - move to 2

momentum raise + density
00:31:525 (31525|0,31960|3) - add 1 note to each of them
00:32:394 (32394|5) - same case
00:33:264 (33264|2,33554|5) -
00:33:989 (33989|5,34134|2) -
00:35:003 (35003|0) - add 2 more notes, loud crash + new sequence
00:35:438 (35438|1,35873|4) - add 1 note to each of them
00:38:481 (38481|4,38916|5) -
00:39:351 (39351|6) -
00:40:220 (40220|1,40510|3) -
00:40:945 (40945|5,41090|0) -
00:45:438 (45438|4,45873|4) -
00:46:307 (46307|2) -
00:47:902 (47902|5) -
00:48:916 (48916|3) - add 2 more notes, loud crash + new sequence
00:49:351 (49351|3,49786|3) -
00:50:655 (50655|5,50945|1) -
00:51:380 (51380|3,51525|6) -
00:53:699 (53699|2,53699|5) - delete either 1
i think you know what to fix next

good luck with your map c:

Elementaires

658 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

Elementaires 2015-09-25T13:50:01+00:00

Kruzon wrote:
hello, 7k column format is 1-7

let's goo

ez
00:07:177 (7177|4) - move to 1
00:10:655 (10655|0) - move to 5
00:11:525 (11525|5) - move to 3
00:11:960 (11960|4) - move to 1
00:12:394 (12394|2) - move to 7

00:15:438 (15438|3) - move to 3
00:16:307 (16307|2) - move to 2
00:16:742 (16742|6) - move to 5
00:17:177 (17177|3) - move to 3
00:17:612 (17612|5) - move to 4
00:18:481 (18481|4) - move to 6
00:19:351 (19351|3) - move to 5
00:20:220 (20220|2) - move to 4

00:21:090 (21090|4) - move to 1
00:21:525 (21525|0) - move to 3
00:21:960 (21960|5) - move to 5
00:22:394 (22394|2) - move to 2
00:22:829 (22829|6) - move to 6
00:23:264 (23264|1) - move to 4
00:23:699 (23699|4) - move to 7
00:24:134 (24134|5) - move to 5

00:24:568 (24568|2) - move to 2
00:25:438 (25438|1) - move to 3
00:25:873 (25873|3) - move to 5
00:26:307 (26307|4) - move to 4
00:27:177 (27177|2) - move to 7
00:27:612 (27612|3) - move to 6

00:29:786 (29786|1) - move to 3
00:31:090 (31090|0) - move to 3 and 00:31:090 (31090|4) - move to 6
00:31:525 (31525|2) - move to 5
00:31:960 (31960|5) - move to 1
00:33:699 (33699|2) - move to 7
00:34:134 (34134|3) - move to 3

00:40:220 (40220|3) - move to 5
00:40:655 (40655|4) - move to 4
00:41:525 (41525|5) - move to 7
00:41:960 (41960|1) - move to 6
00:42:394 (42394|3,42829|3) - shift them 2 times to the left
00:43:699 (43699|1) - move to 4
00:43:989 (43989|4) - move to 6

00:45:873 (45873|1) - move to 1
00:49:786 (49786|3) - move to 5
00:50:220 (50220|6) - move to 4
00:50:655 (50655|2) - move to 7
00:50:945 (50945|5) - move to 1
00:51:525 (51525|3) - move to 6

the other half seem identical, you may implement the same pattern i suggest on chorus/repeatable part

nm
00:00:221 (221|5,655|5) - shift 1 time to the left
00:02:684 (2684|5) - move to 2
00:03:264 (3264|5) - move to 7 refer 00:01:525 (1525|6,1525|0) -
00:04:134 (4134|3,4568|3) - shift 1 time to the right
00:06:307 (6307|5) - move to 4 refer 00:02:684 (2684|1,2829|3) -
00:06:742 (6742|4,6742|2) - move to 1 and 7 respectively

00:07:177 (7177|0) - move to 3
00:07:612 (7612|5) - move to 4
00:08:047 (8047|2,8047|6) - move to 4 and 6 respectively
00:09:641 (9641|4) - move to 2
00:09:786 (9786|1) - move to 4
00:10:220 (10220|3,10220|0) - move to 3 and 7 respectively
00:10:655 (10655|5,10655|2,11090|5,11090|2) - shift 2 times to the left and 00:10:655 (10655|3,11090|3) - move to 5
00:11:525 (11525|2,11525|5) - align same column as 00:11:090 (11090|0,11090|4) -
00:11:960 (11960|0,11960|4) - shift 1 time to the right
00:12:394 (12394|1,12684|1) - move them to 7
00:13:119 (13119|3) - move to 6
00:13:264 (13264|5) - move to 2

00:14:134 (14134|2) - move to 1
00:15:003 (15003|6,15003|1) - move to 3 and 5 respectively
00:16:090 (16090|4) - add note to column 5
00:17:032 (17032|5) - move to 7
00:17:177 (17177|3) - move to 3
00:18:047 (18047|2) - move to 1
00:18:481 (18481|1) - move to 3
00:18:916 (18916|2,18916|4) - shift 1 time to the right
00:20:220 (20220|0) - move to 2
00:20:510 (20510|5) - move to 5
00:20:583 (20583|4) - move to 3
00:20:655 (20655|2) - move to 1
00:20:945 (20945|0) - move to 7
00:21:090 (21090|4) - move to 2 and add a note on 4
00:21:525 (21525|5) - move to 5
00:21:815 (21815|6) - add note on column 7
00:21:960 (21960|6) - move to 6

00:23:047 (23047|1) - add note on column 2
00:23:264 (23264|1,23264|3,23554|3,23554|1) - shift 1 time to the left
00:23:699 (23699|4) - move to 6
00:24:134 (24134|0) - move to 2
00:24:423 (24423|1) - move to 1
00:24:568 (24568|2) - move to 6
00:25:003 (25003|5) - move to 5
00:25:293 (25293|4) - move to 6
00:25:438 (25438|2) - move to 1
00:25:728 (25728|5) - move to 7
00:25:873 (25873|4) - move to 4
00:26:163 (26163|0) - move to 2

momentum raise + density
00:31:525 (31525|0,31960|3) - add 1 note to each of them
00:32:394 (32394|5) - same case
00:33:264 (33264|2,33554|5) -
00:33:989 (33989|5,34134|2) -
00:35:003 (35003|0) - add 2 more notes, loud crash + new sequence
00:35:438 (35438|1,35873|4) - add 1 note to each of them
00:38:481 (38481|4,38916|5) -
00:39:351 (39351|6) -
00:40:220 (40220|1,40510|3) -
00:40:945 (40945|5,41090|0) -
00:45:438 (45438|4,45873|4) -
00:46:307 (46307|2) -
00:47:902 (47902|5) -
00:48:916 (48916|3) - add 2 more notes, loud crash + new sequence
00:49:351 (49351|3,49786|3) -
00:50:655 (50655|5,50945|1) -
00:51:380 (51380|3,51525|6) -
00:53:699 (53699|2,53699|5) - delete either 1
i think you know what to fix next

good luck with your map c:

changed almost everything, thanks~

Tifyron

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Tifyron 2015-11-01T21:12:47+00:00

Suggestion for the ending LN parts of [HD]

http://puu.sh/l5SlE/ca6db6ee2d.osu

Elementaires

658 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

Elementaires 2015-11-01T23:44:12+00:00

Tifyron wrote:
Suggestion for the ending LN parts of [HD]

http://puu.sh/l5SlE/ca6db6ee2d.osu

Applied some changes, it feel more readable now, thank you

(and sorry i was afk on IRC lol)

LordRaika

Elite Mapper

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Joined September 2013

LordRaika 2015-11-05T06:36:38+00:00

Finally im back after lots of stuff happens... *attending funeral T^T, and piles up irl work* sry this takes too long

BG : ✔
Snap : ?_?
Audio : ✔
Timing : ✔
Pattern : ✔
Metadata : ✔

Everything is good, unless some snap is really weird, idk bout this.... might need some other BN opinion before bub?

Some Mod

EZ

00:43:264 - remove one pls XD
because you only use 2 note on japanese intrumental sound
00:35:003 - remove because 00:28:047 - dont have 2 note , 01:09:786 - same (as reference)
01:16:742 - remove as well, 01:30:655 -
01:48:916 (108916|5) - move to 2, same pitch and same instrument sound

NM

00:16:307 (16307|4) - please remove one
00:27:612 (27612|5) - remove? because its the same sound type with this 00:41:525 -
00:53:554 - missing 1, add 1 to 3
01:16:742 - idk about the chord cymbal consistency here, 01:23:699 - here too and so on
01:40:655 - add 1 more note
01:48:047 (108047|1,108481|4,109351|4,109786|6,110220|4,110655|2) - remove this extra single note , its really hard on NM and its on last section which supposed to be easier.

HD

not really have things to mod, but try this... Open HD in editor...
File > Open Difficulty > For Reference, > select NM
now check everything, it somehow looks very similar in density and difficulty with NM
-try to make them different?

next things is the instrumental snap, some of it really sounds weird about the snapping
and some ghost note here 00:45:655 - dont knw, better remove things like this
and the instrumental starts here 00:45:764 - with 4 sound 1/12 (at least this is what i heard)

also double check the chord amount on cymbal place, thats all

Really nice song ^^b
adorable japanese vocal along with the instrumental...
btw thats all, its about the snapping, check for ghost note and proper snap, then i can back for a bubble...
sry still have lots of things to do T^T

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Kaito-kun wrote:

Mwalls Ho wrote:

Steinstwo wrote:

Todestrieb wrote:

Kruzon wrote:

Tifyron wrote:

EZ

NM

HD

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