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Rameses B - Mountains (feat. Veela)

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Topic Starter
-Tochi
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 12. juni 2016 at 21:45:30

Artist: Rameses B
Title: Mountains (feat. Veela)
Tags: DnB drum and bass Monstercat Marathon Remix Long Extended
BPM: 175
Filesize: 26459kb
Play Time: 05:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Mountain (5,49 stars, 1383 notes)
Download: Rameses B - Mountains (feat. Veela)
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Mountains - By: Me
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Thanks
C00L - For timing on weird parts.
KittyAdventure - For making the Lyrics.
Syrte/Taiyaki - For helping me with the mp3.
All the supporters - For modding it.
Test-players - For testing my maps.
Favorites - For reaching over 100 favorites!<3
Syrte
Get that ranked! <3
Topic Starter
-Tochi

Syrte wrote:

Get that ranked! <3

I will try! ^^
SpajdeR
So good! <3 Go Tochi!
Topic Starter
-Tochi

SpajdeR wrote:

So good! <3 Go Tochi!
Nice to see u guys like it ^^
Ciyus Miapah
oh its for approval ya

~ N I C E ~
Topic Starter
-Tochi

Fort wrote:

oh its for approval ya

~ N I C E ~
Yeah I made the song longer :p
iste_old_1
Oh my god this looks so good. :o
(I might not yet have the skill to do this but I like the way it's mapped overall!)
Try your best to get this beatmap ranked :)
Topic Starter
-Tochi

Y04V wrote:

Oh my god this looks so good. :o
(I might not yet have the skill to do this but I like the way it's mapped overall!)
Try your best to get this beatmap ranked :)
Thanks ! ^^
Ujimatsu Chiya
Yaha!!

[General]
  1. combe1 , combo3 circle looks kinda similar. try add combo4 or change combo3's color.
  2. BG size wrong. try 1366x768 size.
  3. you don't need letter box. check out pls.
  4. you should be check AImod. http://puu.sh/iQJXR/c6545ea608.png


[Mountain]
  1. 00:22:864 - this green line is unsnap
  2. 00:47:550 - ^
  3. 00:24:922 - ^
  4. 00:25:264 - ^
  5. 00:25:522 - ^
  6. 00:25:607 - ^

    hmm.... ok you should be check all green line. almost line isn't snap.

  7. 00:22:865 (1,2) - this DS shoud be similar with 00:23:379 (2,3) - DS. Emphasizing that might is not a part.
  8. 00:29:893 (4) - I think make jump better. you can emphasize here coz 00:29:723 (3,4) - those sounds is big.
  9. 00:41:723 (3,4,5,6,7) - how about this placement? looks better to me.
  10. 00:47:464 (6,1) - how about stack these too? increase DS before use long circle stream feel awkward.
  11. 00:52:351 (4) - move x:272 y:136 and Make little more curve. like blanket with 00:51:494 (1) - head
  12. 00:53:380 (2,3,4,5,6) - This part only long DS without KiAi. try reduce DS make better to play.
  13. 00:55:094 (1,2,3,4) - DS logner then KiAi part now. reduce DS better I guess.
  14. 01:01:780 (3) - not be emphasized enough. sounds is weeker then 01:01:608 (2,4) - here. try reduce DS.
  15. 01:11:551 (1,2,3,4) - this stream's DS should be shorter then 01:11:894 (1,2,3,4) - this. The difference from the hit sound and you can emphasize strong drum sounds 01:11:894 (1,2,3,4) - here.
  16. 01:34:865 (1,2) - how about this shape? don't stack those notes make better then read.
  17. 01:35:722 (1) - If you have any reason? no need to NC here I think.
  18. 01:47:379 (7,8) - that's DS is kinda hard to play. feel not suitable for difficulty to me
  19. 03:05:723 (4) - The part emphasizes the need to increase the distance song.
  20. 03:18:837 (2,3,4) - I don't know why you didn't stack all circles. Toxic difficult because only here please note are stack with each other.
  21. 03:26:980 (2,3,4,5) - ^
  22. 03:28:694 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  23. 03:46:180 (1) - kinda closer HP bar move a bit down better.
  24. 04:06:065 (6,7) - this DS can longer then 04:05:894 (5,6) - here. you can emphasize 04:06:065 (6) - sound.
  25. 04:43:951 (2,3,4,5,6) - try make ' star ' follow you can make better design.

ok good luck !!
Topic Starter
-Tochi

eINess wrote:

no kds , I'll finish tmr
Ooops... I always give kds when i see a mod x)
Topic Starter
-Tochi

eINess wrote:

Yaha!!

[General]
  1. combe1 , combo3 circle looks kinda similar. try add combo4 or change combo3's color. Fixed!
  2. BG size wrong. try 1366x768 size. Fixed!
  3. you don't need letter box. check out pls. Fixed!
  4. you should be check AImod. http://puu.sh/iQJXR/c6545ea608.png Fixed!


[Mountain]
  1. 00:22:864 - this green line is unsnap Fixed!
  2. 00:47:550 - ^ Fixed!
  3. 00:24:922 - ^ Fixed!
  4. 00:25:264 - ^ Fixed!
  5. 00:25:522 - ^ [color= #00BF00]Fixed![/color]
  6. 00:25:607 - ^ Fixed!

    hmm.... ok you should be check all green line. almost line isn't snap. Fixed!

  7. 00:22:865 (1,2) - this DS shoud be similar with 00:23:379 (2,3) - DS. Emphasizing that might is not a part. Fixed!
  8. 00:29:893 (4) - I think make jump better. you can emphasize here coz 00:29:723 (3,4) - those sounds is big. Fixed!
  9. 00:41:723 (3,4,5,6,7) - how about this placement? looks better to me. OK.
  10. 00:47:464 (6,1) - how about stack these too? increase DS before use long circle stream feel awkward. More confusing to stack them.
  11. 00:52:351 (4) - move x:272 y:136 and Make little more curve. like blanket with 00:51:494 (1) - head I like it better like this.
  12. 00:53:380 (2,3,4,5,6) - This part only long DS without KiAi. try reduce DS make better to play. I don't see the problem since the music is more tense..
  13. 00:55:094 (1,2,3,4) - DS logner then KiAi part now. reduce DS better I guess. Same as above.
  14. 01:01:780 (3) - not be emphasized enough. sounds is weeker then 01:01:608 (2,4) - here. try reduce DS. Fixed!
  15. 01:11:551 (1,2,3,4) - this stream's DS should be shorter then 01:11:894 (1,2,3,4) - this. The difference from the hit sound and you can emphasize strong drum sounds 01:11:894 (1,2,3,4) - here. Uh, oh. Might change.
  16. 01:34:865 (1,2) - how about this shape? don't stack those notes make better then read. I like this better.
  17. 01:35:722 (1) - If you have any reason? no need to NC here I think. Fixed!
  18. 01:47:379 (7,8) - that's DS is kinda hard to play. feel not suitable for difficulty to me It's better like this imo
  19. 03:05:723 (4) - The part emphasizes the need to increase the distance song. wat?
  20. 03:18:837 (2,3,4) - I don't know why you didn't stack all circles. Toxic difficult because only here please note are stack with each other. I like this, and i don't know what's wrong. Might change if someone other else point it out.
  21. 03:26:980 (2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
  22. 03:28:694 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
  23. 03:46:180 (1) - kinda closer HP bar move a bit down better. It would be weird if i change it. Might change.
  24. 04:06:065 (6,7) - this DS can longer then 04:05:894 (5,6) - here. you can emphasize 04:06:065 (6) - sound. It's fine like this.
  25. 04:43:951 (2,3,4,5,6) - try make ' star ' follow you can make better design. I didn't try to make a star jump here.

ok good luck !!
Thanks!
FrozenJebus
Hey, I absolutely love this beatmap. I find a few parts hard to read (like at about 1:15) but other then that I think this map is nearly perfect (great song too).
Please stick with this, it would make me really happy to see this ranked, keep up the good work Tochi!
Topic Starter
-Tochi

FrozenJebus wrote:

Hey, I absolutely love this beatmap. I find a few parts hard to read (like at about 1:15) but other then that I think this map is nearly perfect (great song too).
Please stick with this, it would make me really happy to see this ranked, keep up the good work Tochi!
Thank you Frozen <3
Tehron
Awesome map, take my kudosu! :)
Topic Starter
-Tochi
Thanks Tehron :D
Kuki


[General]
The fade out of the .mp3 is not very good at all. It fades out when you can hear a buildup/stream beat in the background. Fix this.

[Mountain]
01:01:078 (2) - Ctrl+G.
01:04:678 (1,2) - Ctrl+G.
01:10:335 (6,7) - Curve a bit here.
01:21:135 (5,6,7) - Even out spacing.
01:24:564 (1) - Stack sliderend of this on something.
01:41:621 (1) - Blue tick slider. I strongly reccomend changing this to a small stream of some sort, but if you don't want to do that try and do something else as I think this should not be kept in the map.
02:26:278 (1) - Sounds like this is actually 1/8, not 1/6.
02:29:020 (1) - This feels offbeat and totally weird in the section, remove it or change it so it actually fits here. (here too 05:02:620 (1) - )
03:38:964 (1) - Random NC. Please remove NC here.
04:31:763 (4,5,6) - Fix triangle.
05:13:249 (5,6,3) - Fix stack.
Topic Starter
-Tochi

Kuki wrote:



[General]
The fade out of the .mp3 is not very good at all. It fades out when you can hear a buildup/stream beat in the background. Fix this. I know what u mean, but i will keep it since i want it to be approval, so i don't want to make it end earlier.

[Mountain]
01:01:078 (2) - Ctrl+G. The spacing would be bad, so i'll keep it.
01:04:678 (1,2) - Ctrl+G. Bad flow.
01:10:335 (6,7) - Curve a bit here. No need to, it looks better like this imo.
01:21:135 (5,6,7) - Even out spacing. What do you mean? :o
01:24:564 (1) - Stack sliderend of this on something. I already stacked the sliderhead, and there's no need to stack the end.
01:41:621 (1) - Blue tick slider. I strongly reccomend changing this to a small stream of some sort, but if you don't want to do that try and do something else as I think this should not be kept in the map. This is perfectly snapped according to the song, since there's a strong beat here.
02:26:278 (1) - Sounds like this is actually 1/8, not 1/6. I found out that it's 1/4 lol.
02:29:020 (1) - This feels offbeat and totally weird in the section, remove it or change it so it actually fits here. (here too 05:02:620 (1) - ) Changed to 1/8, that's the right one.
03:38:964 (1) - Random NC. Please remove NC here. Fixed
04:31:763 (4,5,6) - Fix triangle. Fixed
05:13:249 (5,6,3) - Fix stack. ?
Thanks for the mod!
Arcane

Syrte wrote:

Get that ranked! <3

YESS!!! GET THIS SHIET RANKED!!! ^^
Topic Starter
-Tochi

Arcane wrote:

Syrte wrote:

Get that ranked! <3

YESS!!! GET THIS SHIET RANKED!!! ^^
I will try! ^^;
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