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/v/ - AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY LMAO

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poltoid
79 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
poltoid
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, May 28, 2017 at 12:09:10 AM

Artist: /v/
Title: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY LMAO
Tags: aliens Macarena ayy /v/ sings los del rio xcom Proph Nobster Mazziv -Shizuku- Kyshiro ProfessionalBox _rat Baraatje123 Bara Space meme
BPM: 206.3
Filesize: 2446kb
Play Time: 00:36
Difficulties Available:
  1. Ayyxpert (5.53 stars, 165 notes)
  2. Bara's Ayyxtra (5.19 stars, 146 notes)
  3. Box's Ayyxtreme (5.6 stars, 174 notes)
  4. Hayyrd (3.47 stars, 121 notes)
  5. Insayyne (4.96 stars, 153 notes)
  6. Kyshiro's Ayylien Invasion (6 stars, 155 notes)
  7. Mazziv's Insayyyne (4.5 stars, 139 notes)
  8. P. Nobster's Easy (1.28 stars, 39 notes)
  9. Shizuku's Normal Ayy+ (2.28 stars, 83 notes)
  10. Space's Normal Ayy (1.78 stars, 58 notes)
Download: /v/ - AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY LMAO
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Ayy lmao
Inappropiate language

Ayy Lmao

Kyshiro's Ayylien Invasion ( Expert ) by Kyshiro
Ayyxpert ( Expert ) by me
Box's Ayyxtreme ( Extreme ) by ProffesionalBox
Bara's Ayyxtra ( Extra ) by Bara
Insayyne ( Insane ) by me
Mazziv's Insayyne ( Insane ) by Mazziv
Light Insayyne ( Light Insane ) by me
Hard Ayy ( Hard ) by me
Shizuku's Normal Ayy+ ( Normal ) by Shizuku-
Space's Normal Ayy ( Normal ) by Space
P. Nobster's Easy ( Easy ) by Roxy Lalonde
Skin by DEAD END edited by Roxy Lalonde and Shizuku-
Mods
Proph NobsterCrimmiExaMadHypnofrogSadistic Potato-LemonsJosdeLasseIdanZelpinataman[ Shark ]forbiddenplayerCptSqBanySquareyNhawakRikiH_iedesubaraatje123 [ Space ] -Faded-
Last edited by poltoid , edited 160 times in total.
jigglypuff
71 posts
Joined January 2015
jigglypuff
Can I make a skin for this map?
poltoid
79 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
poltoid

_rat wrote:

Can I make a skin for this map?
Sure why not
pkk
1,821 posts
Joined November 2013
pkk
ayy lmao
Roxy Lalonde
100 posts
Joined June 2014
Roxy Lalonde
Timing is incorrect. (I told you about the timing bro)

Only one red timing point is needed.

BPM remains 103.15
Offset is 55
poltoid
79 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
poltoid

Proph Nobster wrote:

Timing is incorrect. (I told you about the timing bro)

Only one red timing point is needed.

BPM remains 103.15
Offset is 55
Okay then, should be changed soon
Crimmi
1,947 posts
Joined June 2009
Crimmi
By the request of <strong>Mazziv</strong>, I shall mod your map for you~

General (Metadata/Timing)


______________________________________________________________________



  1. Well then, after 10 seconds on youtube I already found the artist for you, so it's "/v/ the Musical 2" or "/v/ the Musical II" but I am not so sure.
  2. And the correct title is just "AYY LMAO", it's track 6 on the album "Viva La Vidya" given that you're only using the 30 second version xD.
  3. But you can add "Macarena" to the tags because that's what the original song that artist is using and "Los Del Rio" since they are the original artist of the Macarena.
  4. Try a timing setting of 103.10 BPM but you can reject it if you so wish. Just besure to fix all Inherited points (green lines) afterwards.
  5. Add Proph Nobster and Mazziv to the tags since they contributed a diff in your map.
  6. I know this is going to be nitpicky, but your BG is 1365 x 768 as to the required 1366 x 768. But I am sure someone will let it slide :| or you can get that issue checked out. :P
  7. Maybe place 00:18:668 as your preview point?


P.Nobster's Eayysy



Nothing bad here except the lack of hitsounds, so i'll make it quick:

  1. 00:36:700 (x) - Maybe add a note here, to finish it up right.

Normayylmao



There is a change in spacing in this diff, double check it to make sure. Examples I will point out are here & here. And the lack of hitsounds is apparent here as well.

  1. 00:09:652 (2) - I would copy and paste this slider and fix it up like this.
  2. 00:14:596 (6) - Maybe move this around so that the slider repeat is pointing upwards like this.
  3. 00:25:067 (6) - Suggestion.
  4. 00:26:375 (1,2) - The ending after this is a bit too sudden, even for a normal.
  5. 00:34:955 (1,2) - ^

Hayyard



While there are some hitsounds in this diff, they really don't fit that much like the claps, I suggest experimenting with hitsounds a bit more, like the whistles and finishes as well.

  1. 00:02:817 (1) - Stack this under (3).
  2. 00:05:871 (1) - This could blanket (5) neatly.
  3. 00:08:053 (1,2) - Suggestion.
  4. 00:10:234 (4,5) - This a bit too hard for a normal player to execute, even on a hard, I suggest you fix the gap so that the reaction time between these two is acceptable.
  5. 00:14:015 (4,1,2) - Fix the spacing between these sliders, they are uneven.
  6. 00:16:632 (1,2,3,4) - Suggestion.
  7. 00:19:104 (2,3) - Suggestion. (Try to follow this to avoid any more spacing related mods from me or others.)
  8. 00:20:995 (1,2,3) - Spacing.
  9. 00:28:411 (1,1,1,1) - Remove the NC's since the verse isn't finished yet.
    00:34:373 (8) - Maybe blanket (6) with this slider.

Light ayy



  1. 00:07:035 (2) - Suggestion.
  2. 00:11:106 (4) - Maybe blanket (3) with this slider.
  3. 00:31:610 (1,2) - These two are kind of overlapping each other and should be spaced out a bit.
  4. 00:34:955 (2,3) - Suggestion.

Mz's ayyy



Lack of hitsounds in this diff, but like we talked in IRC, I am sure that you're fixing it as I type this mod.

  1. 00:07:616 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Suggestion.

Ayy Lmao



  • Clear.

Verdict:



  • There are some issues with spacing and patterns, and as I said, hitsounding. Not bad just keep in mind to keep your spacing constant in the easier difficulties.

Crimmi out~!
Exa
445 posts
Joined January 2015
Exa
Modding done:


[P. Nobster's Eayysy]


- Change diff name to "P. Nobster's Easy" for the sake of rankability.
00:00:055 (1,2) - Blanket.
00:09:361 (1,2) - Imperfect blanket.
00:25:648 (1) - Looks bad but w/e.

[Normayylmao]



- Change the name to "Normal ayylmao" for the sake of rankability.
00:07:325 (3,4) - Touchy, you shall break the DS here just for that
00:16:923 (2,5,1) - Bad overlap. You can avoid this.
00:25:648 - Don't use different SV on Normal diffs. If you do stick with it, ask a BN.
00:29:138 (4,1) - Normal players will actually follow the reverse here, ending up in a 1.5 DS jump. Fix it.
00:30:592 (3,4) - Use same slider. Symmetry is a cool guy.
00:32:919 (2,3,4) - You can keep steady DS here easily.
00:36:991 - Make the player tap here. Use a note.

[Hayyrd]


- Change the name to "Hard ayy" for the sake of rankability.
00:02:817 (1,1,1,1) - Fix combos.
00:04:126 (1,1) - Add a bit more spacing for better readability.
00:04:999 (2,3,4,5) - Can't be read at all by Hard-Level players.
00:08:052 (1,2,4) - They touch in a way they should not. (It's almost sexual)
00:10:670 (5,6) - Too much touching is going on, fix it. I will stop pointing out weird touchings now because they are easy to be seen.
00:12:270 (1,2) - Use same slider.
00:14:306 (1,2) - Same.
00:14:887 (3,1) - Add spacing for better readability.
00:20:558 (7) - Ctrl+G Ayy.
00:27:975 (1,1,1,1,1) - Fix combos.
00:28:847 (1,1) - Use the same slider.
00:30:301 (1,2,3) - Make a symmetrical pattern here. Make each slider overlap the other the same.
00:28:847 (1,1) - Nasty overlap.
00:35:827 (3,4,5,6,1) - Will be read as a stream by Hard-Level players. Use another pattern.
00:36:409 (1) - Ctrl+G ayy?

[Light Ayy]


- Change name to "Light Insane Ayy" for the sake of rankability.
00:07:034 (2,5,6) - Bad overlaps.
00:08:052 (1,2) - use same slider.
00:08:052 (1,2,3,4) - The flow here a a bit confusing. You move from snappy flow to linear too fast.
00:10:961 (3,4) - Try making a fake blanket.
00:30:592 (2,4) - Nasty overlap.
00:36:118 (5,6,1) - Weird distance snap. There is more tension between 6 and 1 but you lower the DS. :|

[Mz's ayyy]


- Name is fine. I guess..
00:00:927 - Don't skip. (I see you skip the same beat many time ahead too, so you might skip it).
00:04:126 (7,1) - Bad overlap.
00:09:361- Don't skip that though.
00:09:943 (2,1) - You can keep it clean. Do it.
00:16:051 - and 00:11:979 - Don't do dem SV stunts.
00:14:306 (1,2) - There are instances where you do this before and after this time. Use the same slider! It looks bad not being symmetrical.
00:24:776 (4,5) - Don't stop the flow ~ Dun tun tuuun.
00:25:648 (7) - Ask a BN about this.
00:27:684 - Don't skip.
00:28:266 (3,1) - Moar DS.
00:28:266 (3,1) - Stack. And fix the pattern afterwards.
00:32:628 (1) - Lonely combo?
00:36:118 (3) - Ctrl+G.

[Ayy Lmao]


- Diff name and song names are the same. Fix ples.
00:00:055 (1,2,3) - Keep steady DS.
00:00:636 (3) - Or actually do something to bring out beats like that.
- AASDF It has the same antithetical issues as the other ones. Asymmetrical sliders, bad overlaps. And I can also not give feedback on the flow since it's not actually playable for me.

[General]


- Remove kiai times. This map is better off without them.
- Mind symmetry when you should.
- Hitsounds maybe?

That's all. Poke me when you are done with Normal. That is indeed a nice meme.
Last edited by Exa , edited 2 times in total.
Roxy Lalonde
100 posts
Joined June 2014
Roxy Lalonde

Crimmi wrote:

P.Nobster's Eayysy



Nothing bad here except the lack of hitsounds, so i'll make it quick: Added hitsounds. (soft-whistle every 2nd/4th white tick before kiai, after uses soft-clap)

  1. 00:36:700 (x) - Maybe add a note here, to finish it up right. Done.
poltoid
79 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
poltoid

Crimmi wrote:

By the request of <strong>Mazziv</strong>, I shall mod your map for you~

General (Metadata/Timing)


______________________________________________________________________



  1. Well then, after 10 seconds on youtube I already found the artist for you, so it's "/v/ the Musical 2" or "/v/ the Musical II" but I am not so sure.
  2. And the correct title is just "AYY LMAO", it's track 6 on the album "Viva La Vidya" given that you're only using the 30 second version xD.
  3. But you can add "Macarena" to the tags because that's what the original song that artist is using and "Los Del Rio" since they are the original artist of the Macarena.
  4. Try a timing setting of 103.10 BPM but you can reject it if you so wish. Just besure to fix all Inherited points (green lines) afterwards.
  5. Add Proph Nobster and Mazziv to the tags since they contributed a diff in your map.
  6. I know this is going to be nitpicky, but your BG is 1365 x 768 as to the required 1366 x 768. But I am sure someone will let it slide :| or you can get that issue checked out. :P
  7. Maybe place 00:18:668 as your preview point?


P.Nobster's Eayysy



Nothing bad here except the lack of hitsounds, so i'll make it quick:

  1. 00:36:700 (x) - Maybe add a note here, to finish it up right.

Normayylmao



There is a change in spacing in this diff, double check it to make sure. Examples I will point out are here & here. And the lack of hitsounds is apparent here as well.

  1. 00:09:652 (2) - I would copy and paste this slider and fix it up like this.
  2. 00:14:596 (6) - Maybe move this around so that the slider repeat is pointing upwards like this.
  3. 00:25:067 (6) - Suggestion.
  4. 00:26:375 (1,2) - The ending after this is a bit too sudden, even for a normal.
  5. 00:34:955 (1,2) - ^

Hayyard



While there are some hitsounds in this diff, they really don't fit that much like the claps, I suggest experimenting with hitsounds a bit more, like the whistles and finishes as well.

  1. 00:02:817 (1) - Stack this under (3).
  2. 00:05:871 (1) - This could blanket (5) neatly.
  3. 00:08:053 (1,2) - Suggestion.
  4. 00:10:234 (4,5) - This a bit too hard for a normal player to execute, even on a hard, I suggest you fix the gap so that the reaction time between these two is acceptable.
  5. 00:14:015 (4,1,2) - Fix the spacing between these sliders, they are uneven.
  6. 00:16:632 (1,2,3,4) - Suggestion.
  7. 00:19:104 (2,3) - Suggestion. (Try to follow this to avoid any more spacing related mods from me or others.)
  8. 00:20:995 (1,2,3) - Spacing.
  9. 00:28:411 (1,1,1,1) - Remove the NC's since the verse isn't finished yet.
    00:34:373 (8) - Maybe blanket (6) with this slider.

Light ayy



  1. 00:07:035 (2) - Suggestion.
  2. 00:11:106 (4) - Maybe blanket (3) with this slider.
  3. 00:31:610 (1,2) - These two are kind of overlapping each other and should be spaced out a bit.
  4. 00:34:955 (2,3) - Suggestion.

Mz's ayyy



Lack of hitsounds in this diff, but like we talked in IRC, I am sure that you're fixing it as I type this mod.

  1. 00:07:616 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Suggestion.

Ayy Lmao



  • Clear.

Verdict:



  • There are some issues with spacing and patterns, and as I said, hitsounding. Not bad just keep in mind to keep your spacing constant in the easier difficulties.

Crimmi out~!

Did everything , will do hitsounds later
poltoid
79 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
poltoid

Exa wrote:

Modding done:


[P. Nobster's Eayysy]


- Change diff name to "P. Nobster's Easy" for the sake of rankability.
00:00:055 (1,2) - Blanket.
00:09:361 (1,2) - Imperfect blanket.
00:25:648 (1) - Looks bad but w/e.

[Normayylmao]



- Change the name to "Normal ayylmao" for the sake of rankability.
- This section will be edited with actual modding notes once the difficulty has been remapped with steady DS.

[Hayyrd]


- Change the name to "Hard ayy" for the sake of rankability.
00:02:817 (1,1,1,1) - Fix combos.
00:04:126 (1,1) - Add a bit more spacing for better readability.
00:04:999 (2,3,4,5) - Can't be read at all by Hard-Level players.
00:08:052 (1,2,4) - They touch in a way they should not. (It's almost sexual)
00:10:670 (5,6) - Too much touching is going on, fix it. I will stop pointing out weird touchings now because they are easy to be seen.
00:12:270 (1,2) - Use same slider.
00:14:306 (1,2) - Same.
00:14:887 (3,1) - Add spacing for better readability.
00:20:558 (7) - Ctrl+G Ayy.
00:27:975 (1,1,1,1,1) - Fix combos.
00:28:847 (1,1) - Use the same slider.
00:30:301 (1,2,3) - Make a symmetrical pattern here. Make each slider overlap the other the same.
00:28:847 (1,1) - Nasty overlap.
00:35:827 (3,4,5,6,1) - Will be read as a stream by Hard-Level players. Use another pattern.
00:36:409 (1) - Ctrl+G ayy?

[Light Ayy]


- Change name to "Light Insane Ayy" for the sake of rankability.
00:07:034 (2,5,6) - Bad overlaps.
00:08:052 (1,2) - use same slider.
00:08:052 (1,2,3,4) - The flow here a a bit confusing. You move from snappy flow to linear too fast.
00:10:961 (3,4) - Try making a fake blanket.
00:30:592 (2,4) - Nasty overlap.
00:36:118 (5,6,1) - Weird distance snap. There is more tension between 6 and 1 but you lower the DS. :|

[Mz's ayyy]


- Name is fine. I guess..
00:00:927 - Don't skip. (I see you skip the same beat many time ahead too, so you might skip it).
00:04:126 (7,1) - Bad overlap.
00:09:361- Don't skip that though.
00:09:943 (2,1) - You can keep it clean. Do it.
00:16:051 - and 00:11:979 - Don't do dem SV stunts.
00:14:306 (1,2) - There are instances where you do this before and after this time. Use the same slider! It looks bad not being symmetrical.
00:24:776 (4,5) - Don't stop the flow ~ Dun tun tuuun.
00:25:648 (7) - Ask a BN about this.
00:27:684 - Don't skip.
00:28:266 (3,1) - Moar DS.
00:28:266 (3,1) - Stack. And fix the pattern afterwards.
00:32:628 (1) - Lonely combo?
00:36:118 (3) - Ctrl+G.

[Ayy Lmao]


- Diff name and song names are the same. Fix ples.
00:00:055 (1,2,3) - Keep steady DS.
00:00:636 (3) - Or actually do something to bring out beats like that.
- AASDF It has the same antithetical issues as the other ones. Asymmetrical sliders, bad overlaps. And I can also not give feedback on the flow since it's not actually playable for me.

[General]


- Remove kiai times. This map is better off without them.
- Mind symmetry when you should.
- Hitsounds maybe?

That's all. Poke me when you are done with Normal. That is indeed a nice meme.
I don't understand what you mean by using the same slider, I'll look into normal and ayy insane too...
Roxy Lalonde
100 posts
Joined June 2014
Roxy Lalonde

Exa wrote:

Modding done:


[P. Nobster's Eayysy]


- Change diff name to "P. Nobster's Easy" for the sake of rankability.
- Change the name to "Normal ayylmao" for the sake of rankability.
- Change the name to "Hard ayy" for the sake of rankability.
No. The difficulty names still communicate the level of difficulty, therefore they're rankable. I did some reading on this, but please correct me if this is wrong. And as a side note, since OP believed the names were too cheesy (I'd agree), they were changed anyways.

00:00:055 (1,2) - Blanket. Sliders of this length are difficult to see as blankets, but I've played around with their positions and it worked out.

00:09:361 (1,2) - Imperfect blanket. Fixed.

00:25:648 (1) - Looks bad but w/e. I moved a white point to make it resemble an elbow more. Still, "looks bad" communicates almost nothing about what you want me to do.
Jabba
813 posts
Joined February 2015
Jabba
random very nazi mod, all of the NC things are pretty much my opinion that can be wrong, also there's a ton of recommendations to make sliders parallel that can be wrong as well

P. Nobster's Easy:
preview point is different from other diffs, same with tags
looks fine. i'd personally make the combos shorter but it's ok

Normal:
00:09:361 (1,2,3) - blanket?
00:11:978 (6) - NC instead of 00:12:270 (1)
00:12:851 (2) - this one's shape feels a little bit too weird for me compared to the previous one
00:14:305 (5) - NC
00:17:505 (3) - this is nazi but i'd rather make a blanket there or move it to the right a bit and change its shape so it'll be more symmetrical to 00:16:923 (2)
00:22:740 (6) - make it parallel to 00:23:612 (2)?
00:30:011 (2) - NC instead of 00:29:720 (1)

Hard:
00:02:236 (4) - this is not needed I guess
00:02:381 (5) - NC instead of 00:02:817 (1)
00:05:725 (4,1) - imperfect blanket
00:09:943 (3,4) - ^ (in case it was supposed to be a blanket LOL)
00:11:688 (7) - NC instead of 00:12:270 (1) -
00:12:270 (1,2) - (nazi) i'd make these parallel
00:14:306 (1,2) - ^
00:15:469 (1,2) - ^
00:16:632 (1,2,3,4) - ^, those can really be better (especially the 1st)
00:17:796 (1,2,3) - this looks fine though but can be fixed a bit, also i'd increase the spacing between 2 and 3 so it'll be similar to 1 and 2
00:21:867 (1,2,3) - ^
00:23:176 (5) - same as 00:02:236 (4)
00:28:411 (1) - remove NC?
00:29:720 (1) - ^
00:32:628 (4) - NC instead of 00:32:919 (1)
00:34:228 (7,8) - imperfect blanket?
00:34:955 (1,2) - (nazi again) make these parallel
00:35:828 (3,4) - ^

Light Insane:
00:02:381 (5) - NC instead of 00:02:817 (1)
00:07:470 (3) - i'd move this to (384, 300), looks better imo
00:14:014 (4) - NC?
00:14:305 (1,2) - (nazi strikes again) make these parallel
00:15:469 (1,2) - ^
00:16:632 (1,2,3,4) - random spacing between these looks weird for me
00:23:176 (5) - same thing as in Hard, i'd remove this

Mz's Insane:
00:16:341 - put a note there?
00:16:632 (1) - move this to (184, 152) to fix the spacing between those 3 sliders
00:21:867 (1) - ^, i'd move this to (76, 184)
00:23:758 (1) - i'd remove that NC, that lonely slider..
00:25:648 (8) - NC?
00:28:848 (1) - why is this NC here? either remove this or put it on 00:19:541 (7) i guess
00:29:720 (5) - not really important, looks fine but i'd put the sliderend a bit lower
00:31:464 (5,6) - (you know what) make these parallel

Insane:
00:03:545 (1,2,3) - i'd make the order the same as in the previous triangle
00:12:269 (1) - remove NC?
00:14:014 (4) - NC? same as for the Light Insane
00:21:722 (6) - (optional) i'd put a NC there instead of 00:21:867 (1)
00:22:158 (2) - (really optional) move to (292, 72)
00:26:520 (3,4,5,6) - these look bad, use that polygon thingie to get a good square
00:29:138 (7) - (optional again) put a NC there instead of 00:29:429 (1)

general:
fix some overmapping and symmetries/etc and it will be 11/10
as for now i r8 8/8, gr8 m8
poltoid
79 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
poltoid
Will look into it tomorrow , 60% of your mod was only NC related ayy. Also my mapping is more empathetic towards mouse players who struggle with symmetry , so I might ignore a ton of symmetry suggestions. If it holds the map from getting qualified I'll change it if else I'll keep it
poltoid
79 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
poltoid
Also take this with a grain of salt. If mods are over rank 30k and mod Ayy Insane I'll be highly hesitant to accept the mods because their skill isn't on par with the diff. I used to rage and call a lot of bs on 4.6 star + maps until recently.
Sadistic Potato
49 posts
Joined December 2013
Sadistic Potato
[Mz's Ayy]
00:16:341 - feels empty
00:23:758 (1) - if you want to NC, NC it to 00:24:194 (2) - instead
00:25:648 - NC should be here, like 00:34:955 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -

[Ayy Insane]
00:10:670 (1,2,3) - this flow isn't very nice, move (2) down
starting from 00:14:306 (1,2,3) - you introduced the flow, continuing to 00:15:469 (1,2,3) - nice, but 00:16:632 (1,2,3) - contradicts your flow, I'd suggest putting the (3) like this

00:34:373 (2) - what about this?

If you decide to not ignore the symmetry mod
00:26:084 (2) - not straight
00:26:520 (3,4,5,6) - not even square
00:35:391 (2) - not straight
00:35:827 (3,4,5,6) - not even square
poltoid
79 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
poltoid

MadHypnofrog wrote:

random very nazi mod, all of the NC things are pretty much my opinion that can be wrong, also there's a ton of recommendations to make sliders parallel that can be wrong as well

P. Nobster's Easy:
preview point is different from other diffs, same with tags
looks fine. i'd personally make the combos shorter but it's ok

Normal:
00:09:361 (1,2,3) - blanket?
00:11:978 (6) - NC instead of 00:12:270 (1)
00:12:851 (2) - this one's shape feels a little bit too weird for me compared to the previous one
00:14:305 (5) - NC
00:17:505 (3) - this is nazi but i'd rather make a blanket there or move it to the right a bit and change its shape so it'll be more symmetrical to 00:16:923 (2)
00:22:740 (6) - make it parallel to 00:23:612 (2)?
00:30:011 (2) - NC instead of 00:29:720 (1)

Hard:
00:02:236 (4) - this is not needed I guess
00:02:381 (5) - NC instead of 00:02:817 (1)
00:05:725 (4,1) - imperfect blanket
00:09:943 (3,4) - ^ (in case it was supposed to be a blanket LOL)
00:11:688 (7) - NC instead of 00:12:270 (1) -
00:12:270 (1,2) - (nazi) i'd make these parallel
00:14:306 (1,2) - ^
00:15:469 (1,2) - ^
00:16:632 (1,2,3,4) - ^, those can really be better (especially the 1st)
00:17:796 (1,2,3) - this looks fine though but can be fixed a bit, also i'd increase the spacing between 2 and 3 so it'll be similar to 1 and 2
00:21:867 (1,2,3) - ^
00:23:176 (5) - same as 00:02:236 (4)
00:28:411 (1) - remove NC?
00:29:720 (1) - ^
00:32:628 (4) - NC instead of 00:32:919 (1)
00:34:228 (7,8) - imperfect blanket?
00:34:955 (1,2) - (nazi again) make these parallel
00:35:828 (3,4) - ^

Light Insane:
00:02:381 (5) - NC instead of 00:02:817 (1)
00:07:470 (3) - i'd move this to (384, 300), looks better imo
00:14:014 (4) - NC?
00:14:305 (1,2) - (nazi strikes again) make these parallel
00:15:469 (1,2) - ^
00:16:632 (1,2,3,4) - random spacing between these looks weird for me
00:23:176 (5) - same thing as in Hard, i'd remove this

Mz's Insane:
00:16:341 - put a note there?
00:16:632 (1) - move this to (184, 152) to fix the spacing between those 3 sliders
00:21:867 (1) - ^, i'd move this to (76, 184)
00:23:758 (1) - i'd remove that NC, that lonely slider..
00:25:648 (8) - NC?
00:28:848 (1) - why is this NC here? either remove this or put it on 00:19:541 (7) i guess
00:29:720 (5) - not really important, looks fine but i'd put the sliderend a bit lower
00:31:464 (5,6) - (you know what) make these parallel

Insane:
00:03:545 (1,2,3) - i'd make the order the same as in the previous triangle
00:12:269 (1) - remove NC?
00:14:014 (4) - NC? same as for the Light Insane
00:21:722 (6) - (optional) i'd put a NC there instead of 00:21:867 (1)
00:22:158 (2) - (really optional) move to (292, 72)
00:26:520 (3,4,5,6) - these look bad, use that polygon thingie to get a good square
00:29:138 (7) - (optional again) put a NC there instead of 00:29:429 (1)

general:
fix some overmapping and symmetries/etc and it will be 11/10
as for now i r8 8/8, gr8 m8
I did almost everything except paralel sliders after talking about it with a friend, also the optional move at Insane I ignored
poltoid
79 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
poltoid

Sadistic Potato wrote:

[Mz's Ayy]
00:16:341 - feels empty Shorter mod I can reply easier :3, That was fixed
00:23:758 (1) - if you want to NC, NC it to 00:24:194 (2) - instead dun
00:25:648 - NC should be here, like 00:34:955 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - dun

[Ayy Insane]
00:10:670 (1,2,3) - this flow isn't very nice, move (2) down Everything here also done
starting from 00:14:306 (1,2,3) - you introduced the flow, continuing to 00:15:469 (1,2,3) - nice, but 00:16:632 (1,2,3) - contradicts your flow, I'd suggest putting the (3) like this

00:34:373 (2) - what about this? NaH

If you decide to not ignore the symmetry mod Since you and the last mod suggested I might aswell do it, it won't hurt that much
00:26:084 (2) - not straight
00:26:520 (3,4,5,6) - not even square
00:35:391 (2) - not straight
00:35:827 (3,4,5,6) - not even square
-Lemons
219 posts
Joined July 2012
-Lemons
here have a mod by the way you're gonna have a lot of work to do because the 'soundcloud' songs get a lot of shit so be prepared for that

also in general fix your combos, it's really easy to fix them just literally have a new combo start on every downbeat (or if there's like a timing of notes change, like going from 1/2 to 1/3 or something then NC helps read it but that doesn't happen in this map just a tip kkthnx)
p nobsters easy
ur good dawg

normayyylmao
00:01:218 (3) - ugly slider please make pretty (blanket it with 00:02:090 (4) - or something)
00:03:981 (3) - blanket
00:07:325 (3) - literally just take 00:08:198 (5) - and Ctrl- GHJ it and put it in the place where this is right now cuz that looks nice
00:08:779 (6) - why straight give it a wiggle
00:11:397 (5,2) - make them same slider or at the very least make 00:12:270 (2,3) - the same slider
00:21:576 (3) - make like mr derulo and give it a wiggle wiggle wiggle
00:22:158 (4,5,6) - tighten this up it looks bad (something like this idk https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3400082&#41;
00:31:174 (3) - wiggel wiggle wigleg
00:32:047 (5) - running out of wiggles to tell you make these striahgt sliders have curves so it's not so bland
00:32:919 (2) - Jason derulo
00:36:700 (4) - This one is gud as a straight tho by the way just watned to tell you

hard
00:04:708 (1) - give some distance between the previous slider and this one because otherwise peeps are probably gonna sliderbreak here
00:05:725 (4,1) - why are these so close together? good blanket but the spacing is silly
00:08:634 (3,4) - move to x:88 y:164
00:15:469 (1,2) - make em the same
00:16:632 (1,2,3,4) - space out more too cramped
00:17:795 (1,2,3) - same here also cancel out the combo, it doesn't need to be a new one
00:24:339 (5,6,7) - move this somwhere else, the way it's overlapping with 3 from the previous part of the combo is icky looking
00:24:630 (7,8) - idk bout this random curves here, they stick out a lot, also make them the same pls
00:25:212 (9) - put at x:264 y:16
00:26:084 (2) - put at x:296 y:308
00:28:411 (2,3,4) - make all the same
00:34:955 (1,2) - ^
00:36:991 (2) - make this a jump tbh

light insayyylmaone
00:01:363 (1) - put at x:184 y:328
00:01:654 (2) - x:356 y:284
00:08:052 (1,2) - this needs to be changed to something else, like make the 1 not overlap the 5 from the previous combo or like, move it to somewhere else or move the 00:07:761 (5,6) - to somewhere else because it looks crowded and ugly atm. also make them the same slider
00:14:014 (1,2,3) - make them the same
00:14:887 (4) - move to x:456 y:236 or like straihgt up change this slider because the curve looks ugly where it is but if you move it down there it looks a little bit better
00:16:051 (3) - same thing with the curve being unappealing
00:16:632 (1,2,3,4) - all the same
00:18:086 (6) - make this the same angle as the previous bunch of sliders I think that would look nice but up to you on this one
00:19:104 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3400122 it's at x:184 y:100 by the way
00:20:558 (5) - x:272 y:192
00:20:994 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - all the same slider, NC unneeded
00:24:339 (4,5,6,7) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3400130 I think this plays better, 00:24:339 (4) - starts at x:212 y:328 then it's just single tap spacing that's up to you really
00:25:212 (9) - blanket
00:26:521 (3,4,5,6) - I don't like how 5 touches a pretty much random spot on 00:26:084 (2) - have it like stack on the slider end, also this box is barely even a box pls fix
00:29:283 (4,5,6) - overlap ugly on the triple single tap thingy and also the spacing is pretty whatever here i'd change that up
00:30:156 (7) - x:112 y:224
00:30:883 (3) - x:188 y:180
00:31:610 (1) - x:292 y:284
00:31:901 (2,3) - x:224 Y:324
00:35:827 (3,4,5,6) - pls squares have 90 degree angles wat r u doin

mz's ayy
I don't wanna mod this because tbh you should probably just remap it, it's got a ton of spacing inconsistancy issues and just like generally ugly sliders and just some pretty I guess bleh flow would be the word, it's nawt bad but it could be a lot better. you can come bug me on IRC or forum PM if you want me to elborate what I'm getting at

the rest of the diffs we discussed on IRC weeee
log here
03:46 -Lemons: ayy I'm doing a mod thingy for your map do you mind if I bug you about stuff because I don't feel like writing a mod for some of the really simple to fix stuff
03:46 pLolz: sure ayy
03:46 -Lemons: ayy
03:47 -Lemons: anyway
03:47 -Lemons: so combos
03:47 pLolz: pls mod extra as hard as you can ayy
03:47 -Lemons: I know someone complained about them so Imma just explain it
03:47 -Lemons: Literally just like
03:47 -Lemons: clear every combo on the map
03:47 -Lemons: and then just make it have a new combo on every downbeat
03:47 -Lemons: and shabam good combos
03:47 pLolz: which one is the down beat , I know it sounds stupid as fuck
03:47 pLolz: I forgot
03:47 -Lemons: naw no biggy nigga
03:48 -Lemons: it's the big ass white bar
03:48 -Lemons: on the time line
03:48 pLolz: oh
03:48 -Lemons: it's basically where the beats reset
03:48 pLolz: k
03:48 pLolz: it'll be ez pz den
03:48 -Lemons: But yeah literally do that for every map
03:48 pLolz: ayy
03:48 pLolz: 3hard5me Kappa
03:48 -Lemons: Another thing because as I move along in difficulties I'm noticing this more
03:48 -Lemons: oh my god please your sliders
03:48 -Lemons: they're ugly
03:48 pLolz: hue :>
03:49 -Lemons: I'm on ayy insane by the way
03:49 -Lemons: 00:01:800 (3,1) - 
03:49 -Lemons: like these
03:49 -Lemons: you should just copy 3 and paste it and make it be where 1 is
03:49 -Lemons: and then ctrl g it
03:49 -Lemons: looks gud
03:49 -Lemons: plays the same
03:50 -Lemons: or really, 1 you can just make a completely bonkers design for all it matters cuz it's a new combo
03:50 -Lemons: it's just super similar to the previous slider, so it looks kinda bleh yano?
03:51 -Lemons: so it's like, if it's that similar might as well make it a literal clone
03:51 pLolz: well yeah
03:52 -Lemons: you also have this thing you do
03:52 -Lemons: I mentioned it a bunch in my mod
03:52 -Lemons: 00:10:234 (4,2) - 
03:52 -Lemons: this here
03:52 -Lemons: where like
03:52 -Lemons: 2 is just kind of chillin half way on 4
03:52 -Lemons: you should just put 2 above 4 and not even worry about the overlap
03:53 -Lemons: sumthin like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3400183
03:53 pLolz: I'll also move 1 a bit up
03:53 -Lemons: yeah dawg do whatever it's just like
03:53 -Lemons: as I move along on the difficulties it's kinda like
03:53 -Lemons: you seem to forget how to asthetics more and more lol
03:53 -Lemons: and those are pretty much the least important thing on a map
03:54 -Lemons: but it's still pretty easy to fix it up
03:54 -Lemons: like this one here 00:11:688 (1) - 
03:54 pLolz: I'll fix them :d ayy
03:54 -Lemons: do somethin like this osu.ppy.sh/ss/3400187
03:54 -Lemons: nice screenshot peppy
03:55 -Lemons: now he's limiting my screenshot uploading
03:55 pLolz: nice
03:55 -Lemons: wow
03:55 -Lemons: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3400187
03:55 -Lemons: there
03:55 -Lemons: once again, I probably wouldn't put it there because yano then 2 is kinda just like casually overlapping 1
03:55 -Lemons: but you get what I'm sayin probs
03:55 -Lemons: 00:12:706 (6,1) -  another instance of weird overlap
03:56 -Lemons: oh and then you also do this a lot
03:56 -Lemons: I can tell that you pretty much didn't copy any sliders
03:56 -Lemons: 00:15:469 (1,2) - 
03:56 -Lemons: just copy 1 and paste it in 2's place, then just adjust it with Ctrl-g-h-j and whatnot
03:57 -Lemons: makes it prettier because symmetry is cool looking or something
03:57 pLolz: the weirder the merrier
03:57 pLolz: that's my motto
03:57 pLolz: :>
03:57 -Lemons: I mean I totes get that especially with this fuggin song
03:57 -Lemons: but like, trust me you're gonna get a lot of shit when it comes to ranking this map
03:57 -Lemons: because it's a 'soundcloud' song
03:57 -Lemons: and people like to rip them apart
03:58 pLolz: if you are talking about yes we cant
03:58 pLolz: the explaination is simple
03:58 -Lemons: Yes we can't and others like it
03:58 pLolz: the diffs were edgy
03:58 pLolz: CS2 CS7
03:58 -Lemons: cs2 is based
03:58 pLolz: extra's
03:58 pLolz: are edgy
03:58 -Lemons: but no I know what you're saying but srsly people like to rip on soundcloud songs
03:58 -Lemons: dunno why
03:59 -Lemons: trust me I hated both mapsets of that song
03:59 pLolz: I fc'd asphyxia's extra first try with 84% acc
03:59 -Lemons: lel
04:00 pLolz: then I tried to repair acc and failed the song
04:00 pLolz: gg
04:00 -Lemons: by the way the reason I pointed out so many of the symmetry issues is there were times where you did it fine like here 00:16:632 (1,2,3) - 
04:00 -Lemons: also I'm not gonna post like a mod thingy for the last 3 diffs since we're just discussing here
04:00 -Lemons: modded up to MZ's Ayy, and then Iw as like you know he's probably just online
04:01 -Lemons: I'll like
04:01 -Lemons: rip apart alien invasion if you want
04:01 pLolz: you can do as much modding as you'd like
04:01 pLolz: just keep the diff over 5.25
04:01 -Lemons: I know I figured so but I'm gettin tired
04:01 -Lemons: I was probably gonna see if you wanted a GD or something
04:02 -Lemons: just because this song is going to be stuck in my head for like 2 days at least
04:02 -Lemons: from the sheer dumbness of /v/
04:02 pLolz: You can do it I'm not extra level so I might be a bit extreme on mapping them
04:02 -Lemons: What diff would you want?
04:02 -Lemons: I tend to make like
04:02 -Lemons: 4-5 stars the best
04:02 -Lemons: I can rock an extra if needed
04:02 pLolz: extra pls
04:02 -Lemons: do you even want me to look at your extra lol
04:02 pLolz: should I add you in the mods box
04:03 -Lemons: yeah I'm posting a mod on the thread
04:03 -Lemons: I'm just talking with you here as well
04:03 -Lemons: and this will be in the mod post as well
04:03 pLolz: oh k
04:03 -Lemons: ye
04:03 pLolz: I really want this to get ranked
04:03 -Lemons: I know you do
04:03 -Lemons: also the difficulty
04:03 -Lemons: should be named
04:03 -Lemons: Ayylien invasion
04:04 -Lemons: the last difficulty on your map can be named whatever the fuck you want
04:04 pLolz: I thought it was too cheesy
04:04 pLolz: I know
04:04 -Lemons: dude this map is cheesy
04:04 -Lemons: roll with it
04:04 pLolz: the original names were as follows
04:04 -Lemons: I remember reading them
04:04 pLolz: P. Nobster's Eayysy
04:04 pLolz: Normayylmao
04:04 pLolz: Hayyrd
04:04 pLolz: Light Ayy
04:04 pLolz: Ayy Lmao
04:04 pLolz: thoose were the original
04:04 pLolz: and Hz's ayyy
04:05 -Lemons: I'll cut off my log here tho and post my mod on the thread so you can do my suggestion stuffs
Josde
26 posts
Joined July 2013
Josde
I'm shit at mapping but whatever
[General]
Tags:
Ayy lmao is there twice, remove one of them
Add "/v/ sings" and "los del rio"
Source: /v/ The Musical 2: Viva La Vidya
(Original source: http://vthemusical.bandcamp.com/album/v-the-musical-2-viva-la-vidya)
[Ayylien Invasion]
00:03:545 (1,2,3,1,2) - Shouldn't the NC be in the slider, for consistency's sake?
00:28:411 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - What are 4 and 5 mapped to?

[Ayy Insane]
>not ayynsane

00:26:521 (3,4,5,6) - You should probably scale this down a bit, it feels unnatural due to how huge it is compared to other patterns
00:35:828 (3,4,5,6) - ^

[Mz's Ayy]
OD8 seems overkill for this.
00:25:648 (1) - The change in slider velocities feels to sudden. Try to make the previous sliders slower too, or simply make that slider bigger and faster
00:34:955 (1) - ^

[P. Nobster's Easy]
00:25:648 (1) - The "ayy lmao" slider should last 1/2th more, but I'm not sure on how to map the next beat.
00:34:955 (1) - ^
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