Mod as requested IG.
This will be the real test if i can go for BN for not Kappa
[General]
As i already said earlier, the lowest should have under 2.0stars. I guess we can have a clean diff under, but let's see the set itself!
Teh widescreen support is enable. D:
[Kantan]
00:05:088 : The patterns are decent itself, but i'm not sure about the k placements (on this section) sometimes they are on 1/2, and some on 1/1, i would go for the 1/1 since they are on big tick. I may think the players would be like "wtf I didn't got it?"
00:19:788 : Futsuu and muzu has a break here, so you should delete this note. Plus that would make a consistent pattern, and... it sounds well /o/
00:24:588 : Right now the pattern is a bit long moreover on a 200 BPM, maybe a delete here? That would also make the next d sweeter.
00:38:088 : Why this pattern is different from the others? It doesn't sounds bad either but i don't know why?
00:40:038 : Going with 1/2 on kantan, moreover with 200 BPM sounds risky. I can accept tho.
00:45:288 : Most of the time, your patterns are repetitive. So how about moving this to d and follow next pattern?
00:53:088 : Woot? Even futsuu don't have this. Spem for newbies xD
01:00:588 : Imo, i would move this k to 00:58:488 : That will make the whole section easier to play.
01:43:145 : Add a d here? The next k is a bit alone D: Up to you tho.
02:04:936 : You may move this k to 02:03:736, this will make a similar pattern as 02:00:136.
Generally it's not that bad But aaaa with the fast bpm and these 1/2 it's kinda normal to be on 2.0 SR. I think we can have a cleaner map. But dem that sounds hard to make a proper map on this D:
Also watch out on some mistakes, some of them are obvious imo.
[Futsuu]
00:01:788 : On kantan, you added oftenly a k, and here on futsuu you should add too. Tbh regarding on the next pattern, i don't know why there's no k here. OR if you want to keep like that, the k at 00:06:588 have to be at 00:07:788 instead if you want to be consistent.
00:29:838 : I don't think you did a nice choice with this d here. Not only you break the curent pattern with this double, but you're not consistent with the next patterns. Instead you should have a d at 00:30:138 would be better and seems like 00:34:488.
00:35:838 : Same reason, why not a k at 00:36:138 instead?
00:45:888 : Why a K here? I found no reasons for that. Instead i would prefer a kd at 00:45:588 in order to continue the previous rythm and make a similar rythm pattern like at 00:40:038
01:17:388 : I would for a delete here, because kepping a 2~3 /1 break is good since you have some complex pattern here.
The kiai is nice for me.
Less to say, just to point some rythm structures.
[Muzukashii]
00:04:488 : There's a strong beat here, and it souds weird this break, moreover with the rythm you put earlier on. So i would add a d here.
00:34:188 : Even without looking forward on what you did, i strongly feel that a K would be awesome here. Plus you did it after on the section delimiter (00:38:988).
00:45:738 : I feel like there's missing some notes. And in order to follow the previous pattern rythm i would go for kddddk instead. you can delete the solo note after (or keep the d at 00:46:638).
00:55:188++ : It's up to you, but moving this k 1/2 earlier is worth due to the vocals.
01:05:388 : Somehow i don't really understand completly your mapping style, but this kD feels a bit alone, you oftenly have pair rythm pattern or a style like, so it seems a bit alone imo. D:
01:27:288+ : Just as an opinion. Overall it sounds good but quite technical. I'm curious about further opinions about it. Howerver since it's a really clean section for a muzukashi, that shouldn't be a problem.
Others part are ok for me. Nice rythm. It reminds me some plays on TnT by the rythm and the structure.
[Ura Muzukashii]
00:48:588 : That shouldn't be d instead? Both patterns will be symetrical.
00:55:338 : Since the next note is not a D, there no real reason to get a 3/2 break here. So i would add a d here imo. Plus it is the only 3/2 break around and after, it seems akward.
01:06:288 : Why not a D? Compare to what we have before, this is a bit strange.
01:22:638 : This kind of melody completely deserve a k. Really D:
01:23:838 : Same.
01:31:573 : That could be hard for an Ura muzukashi since you have changement on rythm and BPM, but i let you the judgment.
01:34:788 : You should add a d here, the next similar patterns have a d too, let's be more consistant o/ .
01:55:486 : You may add a k aswell, it makes the next D more impact imo.
02:01:636 : In terms of lengh, it is ok, but i don't understand why you put twice a triple here where the previous similar patterns has just one triple. But in terms of vocals, it's sounds decent tho, so it's just a questionable pattern structure imo.
02:15:586 : I would add a d here just to make it similar to the previous pattern (except for the K).
How a diff can be so easy and have 3.64 SR while le disco's Oni is way more technical in terms of patterns and got 3.02 SR. Tom judge so high the 170 ~ 220 bpm value it's so Huge!
[Oni]
00:39:288++ : In terms of structure, you put your doubles differently compared to the Ura muzukashii and your Inner Oni but same as Ura Oni, that's strange and i'm curious about that. Also your Ura muzukashi is harder here than the Oni, which is a problem imo. Maye some restructure here can be good.
00:55:338++ : I playtested the Ura muzu then the Oni and i was like "wtf how?" the gap is huge between them because the Ura is clean and got breaks while the Oni doesn't but also the Inner Oni and Ura Oni don't have that. Like woooooot did you do Ono?
00:56:688 : The majority diff of the set got some k here. YOu should have some here too imo.
00:57:438++ : Well, same as @55 sec. :> Curiously i passed it not with that ease but still D:
01:32:612 : I missed here! D: Even in Muzu too, demn this previous stream. I think this is the result of 1/6 then 1/2 after. Maybe.
02:05:236 : Compared to the Ura M and Inner O, this should be there D:
Sorry i didn't checked all in deep.
I playtested the diff and i like it, it plays so cool without OD troubles that i can have on other maps. But the problem is the difference between Ura Muzukashii and Inner/Ura Oni, it's like it has been done by someone else because it's completely different and some parts / patterns are way harder than Uras/Inner Diff. You may need to look and compare. That shouldn't take you too much time but you'll find lot of issues imo.
[Inner Oni]
00:22:338 : That may be a pointless thing but compared to 00:18:588, the double 1/2 is placed differently, the are placed on white - red while here it's the reverse.
00:27:963 : I don't think it's necessary to have a k here imo. It sounds better without too.
Nothing else found which is shocking. I'm not a pro a judging inner too D:
[Ura Oni]
00:15:288++ : Well that's not shockiing that Ura has less SR than inner, this part has less triples, but you have instead Finishers, which is harder to read, but "easier" to play.
00:34:563 : For this kind of part i would go (since we're on The higest diff) for a quint triple triple quint rythm structure, so you can add a d here and at 00:38:313 for example. It sounds decent and good imo.
01:15:663 : Compared to what we have a bit before, that shouldn't be here.
01:25:938 : I heard a bit this part and i don't find the difference in term of battery to make a escalate d (1/2 -> 1/4 -> 1/6).
02:05:161 : Compared to the begining of the kiai (i mean, 01:59:386), there some missing triples here i think (02:05:911 here too).
And that's all i could see
Waaaaa finished.
I need a Doko2000 now.