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[General]
Change diff name to "Inner Oni"
Add "touhou" in tags
Change all soft hitsounds to Normal as normal is incredibly quiet on taiko skin (also no purpose in doing soft)
ALL NINJA NOTES: They overlap with other notes. They don't feel right as the sound is completely different from what you follow generally. Not really necessary to have them.
[Inner Oni]
00:15:380 - to 00:22:880 - I would recommend to reconsider the 1/4 mainly because the song would suggest a doublet (for example: 00:15:731 (8,9) - only these, remove 00:15:614 (7) - ). It will help to differ the parts as well
00:26:630 (73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93) - You know people will hate you for this, right? : P
00:32:255 - 01:17:255 - This part was mentioned in TNA and I will mention it again: You have to reduce the density a lot. It's not really entertaining to play and I'm gonna be honest, switching between 2/1 and 1/1 might even be more fun than continuous 1/2. Of course you can use 1/2 here, but I would recommend to add quite a few breaks in there. 00:32:489 (99,100,103,104) - Try deleting these for example.
When you get to the 1/4 in this part I would recommend deleting all of them as well. You can go for vocals a bit more and add 1/2 (still no 1/2 stream please)
01:17:255 - 01:21:005 - I really don't like how the rhythm changes from dons on white ticks to kats on white ticks, feels random and inconsistent. Choose one and keep it
01:21:239 (327,329) - Change these to dons so 01:21:356 (328,330) - have more importance (gotta make the "OH" more important!). Repeat on all patterns that are like this
01:43:505 (441) - Change to don plays nicer
01:54:169 (511,512) - As a solution to another TNA problem: Maybe just move 01:54:169 (511) - to 01:54:051 - OR remove it so the big note has a bigger impact.
02:09:169 (606,607) - ^
02:11:278 (622) - I know you are amazed by the new added sound but I think this overdoes it and removes the impact on the other 1/4 in this cluster
02:14:911 (653,654,655,656) - Listening to this in various speeds and there's no 1/6, so while I find many 1/6 in the 2nd half of this kiai questionable play-wise (like 02:09:989 (611,612,613,614,615,616,617,618,619) - and the other 1/6 in this stream) you should definitely remove this one.
02:20:419 (684,685,686,687,688,689,690,691) - Too many kats imo, they also don't really add much. 02:21:239 (688,690) - Change these to dons and for the sake of consistency make 02:21:942 (692) - a kat and remove the finisher on it (you don't do the D D pattern anyway)
About the kat doublets: We had that before at ~1:20
02:22:880 (698,699,700,701,702,703) - ^
02:29:442 (741,742,743,744) - Why is this 1/6 and not 1/4
02:30:145 (748,749,750) - why is this 1/4 and not 1/6
02:34:130 - 03:19:130 - Same 1/2 trouble as before
04:16:083 (1315,1316,1317,1318) - I doubt this plays well : P
04:16:786 (1322,1323,1324,1325) - Same as last kiai (mentioned in mod)
04:22:294 (1353,1354,1355,1356,1357,1358,1359,1360) - Also same as before
04:31:317 (1411,1412,1413,1414,1415,1416,1417,1418,1419,1420) - Also same as before
04:49:715 (1522) - Think this would play way nicer as a don, also emphasizes the sound on 04:49:598 (1521,1523) - better (repeat for whole part and reverse when it's dons)
05:45:380 (1875,1876,1877,1878,1879,1880,1881,1882,1883,1884,1885,1886,1887,1888,1889,1890,1891,1892,1893,1894,1895,1896,1897,1898,1899,1900,1901,1902,1903) - First one has to be 1/4, 2nd has to be 1/6. See below for the other streams. This one is a no-go.
00:22:880 (41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93) - VS 01:39:755 (409,410,411,412,413,414,415,416,417,418,419,420,421,422,423,424,425,426,427,428,429,430,431,432,433,434,435,436,437,438,439,440,441,442,443,444,445,446,447,448,449,450,451,452,453,454,455,456,457,458,459,460,461) - VS 03:41:630 (1078,1079,1080,1081,1082,1083,1084,1085,1086,1087,1088,1089,1090,1091,1092,1093,1094,1095,1096,1097,1098,1099,1100,1101,1102,1103,1104,1105,1106,1107,1108,1109,1110,1111,1112,1113,1114,1115,1116,1117,1118,1119,1120,1121,1122,1123,1124,1125,1126,1127,1128,1129,1130) - VS 04:41:630 (1461,1462,1463,1464,1465,1466,1467,1468,1469,1470,1471,1472,1473,1474,1475,1476,1477,1478,1479,1480,1481,1482,1483,1484,1485,1486,1487,1488,1489,1490,1491,1492,1493,1494,1495,1496,1497,1498,1499,1500,1501,1502,1503,1504,1505,1506,1507,1508,1509,1510,1511,1512,1513) -
Why are there so huge differences between those streams? Seems weird to me. I find the 2nd stream to be the most pleasant so you might wanna look at that...
That's it!
Good luck