From coinz queue
Saranghae00:06:313 (4) - Maybe you could move this up and to the left a little bit, so that 00:05:837 (3) - points to it. Or you could just curve the slider so that it points to the circle. If you do that, you'll have to fix the three previous identical sliders, too :3
00:06:789 (1,2,3) - This setup is kinda strange. I don't really see a purpose for the placement. Like, you're not blanketing with this slider 00:07:742 (3) - , no triangles, etc. All I see is an overlap from the previous slider. You can ignore this overlap and keep it because it is neat, but maybe you could move 00:08:456 (5) - to the head of 00:06:789 (1) - , and then adjust the curve of 00:07:742 (3) - so that the tail of this slider is equidistant to 00:08:218 (4) - and 00:08:456 (5) - . Then maybe to fix afterwards you can move this 00:08:694 (1) - so the head overlaps 00:08:218 (4) - , idk
00:09:646 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - Here is a repeating pattern, but I don't really see hear anything in the vocals that suggest this. If you don't decide to change this, then move 00:11:551 (4) - so that the head is equidistant from 00:11:076 (2) - and 00:11:314 (3) -
00:12:027 (5) - This is awkward to play after the previous slider. Maybe you can ctrl+j and try to blanket 00:12:027 (5) -
Okay this is a long song, let me be less picky lol (next comes stuff I really think should be changed, even tho it still seems picky)
00:17:504 (2) - I think this should be curved to point to 00:17:980 (3) - more, obv keeping blanket
00:19:884 (6) - I would suggest moving this to create a nicer triangle, maybe equilateral
00:24:170 (2) - This has the HEY!, but then in a repeating pattern, 00:24:884 (4) - does not. It feels very empty to play the second slider without a HEY!, so I would change this pattern
00:25:837 (1) - Curve towards 00:26:313 (2) -
00:28:218 (2,3) - Try to place a note on the blue tick, if I hear correctly >_<
00:28:218 (2,3) - Ctrl g this to fix flow, and fix the hitsounds and stuffs
00:40:123 (3) - I would make this less challenging, just so it looks better
00:42:980 (1) - Curve the head so the cursor has a more ovalular (is dat a word) motion during gameplay, gah I cant fudging explain
01:00:600 (2,3) - I won't point this out from now on, but note on blue tick again? to follow vocal (if I hear correctly again lol) and 01:14:170 (3,4) - heh
01:04:646 (3,4,5) - I would replace with reverse slider
01:10:361 (3) - I would flip
01:21:075 (1) - Two circles instead?
01:22:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I love this part
01:31:313 (3,4,5) - Follow vocals more with some long sliders?
01:40:123 (1) - Make this end on red and make a slider starting on the end of 01:40:123 (1) - and ending on 01:40:837 (2) -
02:12:504 (1) - I don't really like how this is initialized, from 02:12:265 (6) - . It is uncomfortable to play
02:38:694 (4) - move to x236, y352 or something, the way it is now is uglee ;w;, no offense hehe, your mapping iz beautiful :3
02:48:694 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - follow vocals ?
like make 02:48:694 (1) - two circles, make this the head of a slider 02:49:408 (3) - nvm, just look at
this (ONLY TIMELINE), 1,2,3,4,5,6 violet color. Also change pattern so it goes with the vocals
03:00:599 (5) - Wot I hope this wasn't intentional, shift to the right
Hard00:17:742 (3) - NC for SV change
Okay, I can't really mod easier diffs ;w; Sorry. Also your mapping style is awesome except for when you make sliders straight and circles after it shifted off a bit. My ocd kills me so I have an urge that I must make the slider point directly in the direction of the circle. ANYWAYS, hard is a nice diff!
00:55:123 (2) - I would just recommend making equilateral triangles more often when you have the chance, like moving this to x455 y120. Okay that's not really equilateral but it does look nicer, yes? :3
01:08:694 (3) - Extend for vocal?
01:16:313 (3) - ^
01:20:122 (3) - ^
So for this diff you could follow my picky suggestions about moving stuff like 2 pixels to make it look better, and following vocals more often. You already do it, but sometimes.. you just dont. 01:12:504 (3) - like here you do follow the ehhhhhh but right afterwards you don't 01:16:313 (3) -
Sorry for short mod ;w; I really like the song! It has been a while since I modded a hawt song, so star!
nice map, good luck~~~~~ ~~~ `~~` `~~ ~ ~