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Bond - Strange Paradise (Short Ver.)

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Topic Starter
kazumikos
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, October 03, 2010 at 12:11:43 AM

Artist: Bond
Title: Strange Paradise (Short Ver.)
Tags: Shine Sallad4ever Alexander Borodin Polovtsian dances
BPM: 120
Filesize: 5698kb
Play Time: 02:53
Difficulties Available:
  1. Boring (0.81 stars, 85 notes)
  2. Neutral (2.86 stars, 167 notes)
  3. Special (4.87 stars, 353 notes)
Download: Bond - Strange Paradise (Short Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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To Sallad4ever...
xD

Fixed audio file ^^
Curisu
Hapy birthday salad4fever~ :D

[GenEral]
NO ANY HITSOUNDS?= =||
The quality of your audio is bad...


[BoRing]
LOL at BG...This BG is as same as my another map= =||
slider tick=1?

[NoRmal]
Some slider in this map are ugly>_<
00:25:250 (3,1) - Exchange new combo

Looks nice :D
Topic Starter
kazumikos

yangzd88 wrote:

Hapy birthday salad4fever~ :D

[GenEral]
NO ANY HITSOUNDS?= =||[color=#FF40FF]waa!!! b-but I still can hear hit sound... :S I added finish and whistle :| (clap doesn't suit here imo :S)
The quality of your audio is bad...[/color]bad?!! =(( how bad??

[BoRing]
LOL at BG...This BG is as same as my another map= =||oh~..... but I won't change =p
slider tick=1?fixed

[NoRmal]
Some slider in this map are ugly>_<u mean the first one? lol ( im still thinking of remaking it)
00:25:250 (3,1) - Exchange new combodone

Looks nice :D
Thx a lot
=D
Zetsubou Sensei
Hey.

-Blue Timeline at the end isnt on tick.

[Boring]
HP Drain Rate: -1
00:31:500 - remove the break here.
01:49:375 (1) - move this 1 tick foward to start on the red tick, and end it still on the white tick.
02:49:750 (x) - add a note here
Add more hitsounds in the difficulty...Boring...seems really BORING without good hitsounds.
Add Kiai Time.

[Normal]
Lower Slider Velocity to 1.20
02:21:250 (1) - extend this slider to end at 02:22:750
Seems fine...Lol funky sliders.

[Weird]
02:21:250 (4) - I think removing this note and starting the spinner here is better.
02:24:500 (x) - add a note here
Seems fine.

~STAR
Curisu

kazumikos wrote:

yangzd88 wrote:

[BoRing]
LOL at BG...This BG is as same as my another map= =||oh~..... but I won't change =p
LOL I won't mind it :D
Teras
Hey ;)

Nice song you got there. And happy birthday Sallad4ever :P

Everything looks fine to me. No visible errors to me atleast
La Cataline
hi~

[overall]
  1. .osb, get rid of it
  2. this map is so cute :3

[boring] has no hitsounds. It is at least..boring O.o
you could at least use a [whistle-normal-normal-clap] hitsound order or something...
or better the following pattern(you can use it as an example):
00:33:250(1) whistle
00:34:750(1) clap
00:36:750(2) clap
00:37:250(3) whistle
00:38:750(3) clap
00:40:750(4) clap

*
Kurai
Star~~
Topic Starter
kazumikos

Zetsubou Sensei wrote:

Hey.

-Blue Timeline at the end isnt on tick.

[Boring]
HP Drain Rate: -1
00:31:500 - remove the break here.
01:49:375 (1) - move this 1 tick foward to start on the red tick, and end it still on the white tick.
02:49:750 (x) - add a note here
Add more hitsounds in the difficulty...Boring...seems really BORING without good hitsounds.
Add Kiai Time.
done
[Normal]
Lower Slider Velocity to 1.20It's fine with 1.30 (I think :|) plus, changing slider velocity could make me redo the whole map... :(
02:21:250 (1) - extend this slider to end at 02:22:750 k
Seems fine...Lol funky sliders.

[Weird]
02:21:250 (4) - I think removing this note and starting the spinner here is better.done
02:24:500 (x) - add a note hereIt's fine here
Seems fine.

~STAR

La Cataline wrote:

hi~

[overall]

* .osb, get rid of it
* this map is so cute :3



[boring] has no hitsounds. It is at least..boring O.o
you could at least use a [whistle-normal-normal-clap] hitsound order or something...
or better the following pattern(you can use it as an example):
00:33:250(1) whistle
00:34:750(1) clap
00:36:750(2) clap
00:37:250(3) whistle
00:38:750(3) clap
00:40:750(4) clap

*
Done =3
Thx alot for nice suggestion xD
Again, thx alot for modding xD (sorry for the delay. my internet got problem :cry: )
Topic Starter
kazumikos
Yea..
And thx for ur star, Teras and KuraiPettan xD
Vass_Bass
Hi~

General
No sources?

Boring
01:22:250 (3) - mb end of the slider to 01:23:250 ?

Normal
Good

Weird
00:51:000 - add circle?
02:44:250 (3) - 1 grid right

Very good map, star
Topic Starter
kazumikos

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi~

General
No sources?

Boring
01:22:250 (3) - mb end of the slider to 01:23:250 ?

Normal
Good

Weird
00:51:000 - add circle?
02:44:250 (3) - 1 grid right

Very good map, star
fixed =D thx alot xD
Vikon
[General]
seems the strong countdown doesn't fit this soft song, consider to disable it.

[Boring]
01:49:500 (1) - make a fade out effect of sound here?
02:41:250 (1,1) - the slider is too near the spinner for [Easy], may be end the spinner at 02:46:750 ?
02:47:750 (1,2,3) - spacing?

[Normal]
from 00:17:250, the "soft-hitwhistle" seems too loud for this part, consider to turn down the sound?
02:24:750 (1) - remove new combo
02:32:625 (1) - it is easy for newbie to miss this 1/4 note, may be remove 1 reverse of 02:31:500 (1) and add a slider start at 02:32:250 end at 02:32:625 and add a reverse also ?
02:38:000 (1,2,3) - spacing?
02:41:230 the kiai time should start and end with a hitobject. so move this timing point to 02:41:250 ?

[Weird]
01:04:250 (1,2,3,4) - these whistle is too loud for me.
01:28:750 (3,1,2,3) - spacing
02:10:730 move this timing point to 02:10:625
02:24:750 (2) - change clap to finish ?
02:41:230 move this timing point to 02:41:250

star~
Topic Starter
kazumikos

Vikon wrote:

[General]
seems the strong countdown doesn't fit this soft song, consider to disable it.

[Boring]
01:49:500 (1) - make a fade out effect of sound here?
02:41:250 (1,1) - the slider is too near the spinner for [Easy], may be end the spinner at 02:46:750 ?k
02:47:750 (1,2,3) - spacing?fixed

[Normal]
from 00:17:250, the "soft-hitwhistle" seems too loud for this part, consider to turn down the sound?
02:24:750 (1) - remove new combo
02:32:625 (1) - it is easy for newbie to miss this 1/4 note, may be remove 1 reverse of 02:31:500 (1) and add a slider start at 02:32:250 end at 02:32:625 and add a reverse also ?
02:38:000 (1,2,3) - spacing?
02:41:230 the kiai time should start and end with a hitobject. so move this timing point to 02:41:250 ?
done
[Weird]
01:04:250 (1,2,3,4) - these whistle is too loud for me.
01:28:750 (3,1,2,3) - spacing
02:10:730 move this timing point to 02:10:625
02:24:750 (2) - change clap to finish ?It's fine here imo
02:41:230 move this timing point to 02:41:250
all fixed
star~
Thx ^^
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
why the "ding" is set as whistle XD

[Boring]
default clap...= =...emm... better to find sth instead. but good enough now. nothing need to point out.

[Normal]
00:37:250 (1) - emm... the finish at the end is on purpose? if not better to remove imo.
02:32:000 (6,1,2) - emm... change these notes to a circle + a 3/4 reverse slider...? feel better to me, just a suggestion. your choise.

[Weird]
01:35:250 (6,1) - can't agree the spacing here. though i saw a new combo T T.
01:43:250 (8,1) - ^
01:50:500 (3) - a nazi spacing. should be 1 grid up to keep symmetry.
01:52:500 (3,4) - add whistle?
02:32:000 (1) - 1 grid right? or rotate this square note?
02:38:500 (3,4) - 3: 1 grid left, 4: 1 grid up.
02:40:750 (4) - new combo to prevent misreading

very nice done, sry to be nazi but can't find sth really a big problem... = =
also here's some hitsounds, don't know if they're useful to you but i just put them here.... btw, default soft-hitwhistle is really good why not use = =
want to save some kud so no kud star for you, forgive me.


Download: hitsounds.rar
Bikko
Why short version? I want full version because this map is awesome I want to play till the end ugh



IMO, you should find a famous modder or BAT, not average modder.

Take my kudosu star please. good luck!
Topic Starter
kazumikos

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
why the "ding" is set as whistle XD
becuz "ding" sound mysterious xD
[Boring]
default clap...= =...emm... better to find sth instead. but good enough now. nothing need to point out.

[Normal]
00:37:250 (1) - emm... the finish at the end is on purpose? if not better to remove imo.my bad>fixed
02:32:000 (6,1,2) - emm... change these notes to a circle + a 3/4 reverse slider...? feel better to me, just a suggestion. your choise.hm.. ok u r the second telling me so

[Weird]
01:35:250 (6,1) - can't agree the spacing here. though i saw a new combo T T.fixed
01:43:250 (8,1) - ^^
01:50:500 (3) - a nazi spacing. should be 1 grid up to keep symmetry.k
01:52:500 (3,4) - add whistle?uhm :| i saw what u mean, then it must be (5) :|
02:32:000 (1) - 1 grid right? or rotate this square note?
02:38:500 (3,4) - 3: 1 grid left, 4: 1 grid up.
02:40:750 (4) - new combo to prevent misreadingall fixed

very nice done, sry to be nazi but can't find sth really a big problem... = =
also here's some hitsounds, don't know if they're useful to you but i just put them here.... btw, default soft-hitwhistle is really good why not use = =
want to save some kud so no kud star for you, forgive me.
[/color]
Thx a lot ^^
Topic Starter
kazumikos

Bikko wrote:

Why short version? I want full version because this map is awesome I want to play till the end ugh



IMO, you should find a famous modder or BAT, not average modder.

Take my kudosu star please. good luck!
Thx =3
Sakura
[osz File Scan!]
Fine

[Weird]
Fine

[Normal]
Fine

[Boring]
As the title says... anyways fine.

Ok no problems have a Star!
RandomJibberish
General
It just seems a waste of space to use different fonts on different diffs :V
White combo colours look horrible, especially during kiai, change to a light blue or grey.
You've used some very interesting slider shapes~

Boring
01:27:750 (1,2,3) - Space 1 and 2 out a little more and more 3 to keep them in a neat triangle.

Normal
Give this a unique diff name too?
02:53:750 (5) - This slowdown is really confusing and works just as well if not better at normal speed with a repeat

Weird
02:53:750 (6) - Same as normal

Great map~
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