1. Colin's Normal (1.9 stars, 176 notes)
2. Collab (4.45 stars, 323 notes)
3. Insane (4.76 stars, 458 notes)

Pokie wrote:

oops

324,331,11364,1,0

396,260,16194,2,0,B|376:314|316:324,1,90,2|0

LKs wrote:

star : √

mod : √

我觉得这种歌曲offest稍早一点比较好 -3~5?

hard

[00;09;584] 这里的重心低一点
[00:11:110] 1与3间距稍微差了些 在note密集度不大的情况下这个小差距容易被缺陷放大化 建议修改
[00:12:635] remove whistle
[00:13:398] 向下一些(使4 5 6 7 更加呈方形
[00:16:703] 选中后中间的点向右少许
[00;18;737] remove whistle
[00:24:584] green line volume 35%
[00:26:745] 30%
[00:27:762] 45%
[00:28:906] 因为这里是不是可以考虑去掉spin-bonus
[00:39:838] 选中后中间的点向右一格
[00;54:330] 选中后 中点 右两格
[00;59:669] 取消whistle或者降低音量20%
[01:01:194] 向下一格 再向上1/4格 (保持1 2 3间距 量体裁衣而行
[01:01:449] 开头whistle结尾空
[01:02:211] 开头whistle结尾空 选中后中点上移一格
[01:05:516] whistle
[01:09:076] 选中后 中点 向右三格 向下一格
[01:10:093] remove whistle
[01:16;703] ^
[01:33:482] 2,3 这里没明白想表达的意思..“你就当人在唱歌需要换气一样理解就好”
[02:04:499] 选中后 中点 向右两格
[02:23:259] 这里有点不尽人意 但是似乎也没有改善的办法.
[00:29:923] 选中后 中点 向右一格向下一格 尾点 向右一格
[02:48:228] 音量下降至15%

Own

[00:11:364] 向左+向下

324,331,11364,1,0

[00:16:067] 删去这个
[00:16:194]

396,260,16194,2,0,B|376:314|316:324,1,90,2|0

[00:19:245] 向右一格
[00:23;313] 向右一格
[00;31:449] whistle
[00:34:499] whistle
[00:36:025] whistle
[00:42:127] remove whistle
[01:06:025] ^

guest diff : ----

[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"pokie.png",320,240
 M,0,3480,,539,428
 F,2,3480,4496,0,1
 S,2,3480,4496,1.2,0.7
 F,0,4496,54835,1
 F,0,54835,55344,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"neethime.png",320,240
 M,0,58903,,490,428
 F,2,58903,59920,0,1
 S,2,58903,59920,1.2,0.7
 F,0,59920,109242,1
 F,0,109242,109751,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"lks.png",320,240
 M,0,113310,,546,428
 F,2,113310,114327,0,1
 S,2,113310,114327,1.2,0.7
 F,0,114327,186530,1
 F,0,186530,187039,1,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples

Neethime wrote:

[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"pokie.png",320,240
 M,0,3480,,539,428
 F,2,3480,4496,0,1
 S,2,3480,4496,1.2,0.7
 F,0,4496,54835,1
 F,0,54835,55344,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"neethime.png",320,240
 M,0,58903,,490,428
 F,2,58903,59920,0,1
 S,2,58903,59920,1.2,0.7
 F,0,59920,109242,1
 F,0,109242,109751,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"lks.png",320,240
 M,0,113310,,546,428
 F,2,113310,114327,0,1
 S,2,113310,114327,1.2,0.7
 F,0,114327,186530,1
 F,0,186530,187039,1,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples

希望效果还行

Colin Hou wrote:

Change anything you need.

Don't forget the preview point.

NatsumeRin wrote:

隐然觉得哦喷的幽怨已经感染了这歌……>_>

[General]
我不知道那个用很多次的铃声加进来是不是合适…… 应该不错的，不然一个whistle感觉做不出层的效果。。。我懒
x=whistle / o=normal

[Colin's Normal]
00:07:039 (2) - 换xox。这个旋律和前后两处并不一样，建议增加一个对照。
00:17:208 (2) - oox
00:21:785 (1,2) - 把2的x换1尾
00:54:835 (5) - x，另外绿线位置
01:03:480 (5) - 去掉尾x
01:06:530 (7) - x
01:11:107 (5) - 去尾x
01:37:039 (3) - new combo
01:37:547 (4) - 加尾x
01:48:480 (3) - 去x
02:18:734 (1) - x
02:21:785 (6,7,8) - oxoox
02:27:886 (4) - 。。。尾部可能有误导作用
02:36:022 (5) - x
02:52:293 (6) - 尾x
03:05:005 (4) - 中x换到尾

[Collab]
00:06:530 (2,3,4) - 3x换到2尾+4
00:50:768 (3) - 如果换了自定finish用这里不错没用所以没换
01:09:073 (1,2,3) - 去掉1和3头的x换在2，这里起音和之前结束不要相同。
01:21:276 (1,2) - 基本同上，另外3尾的x去掉让4的x出效果
01:37:547 (3,4) - 3尾的x换中x和4
01:59:666 (1) - 去x
02:21:785 (2) - slider按我习惯是画圆点，只是个视觉效果建议
[attachment=0:7473c]2.png[/attachment:7473c]
02:27:759 (6) - 建议去掉lks的不敢改
02:28:776 - 建议加^
02:32:717 (1,2) - 没有跳的感觉。^

[Hard]
00:27:124 (2) - x
00:39:073 (2,3,4) - 间距
01:39:835 (1,2) - 这个可能unrankable，因为根本看不到数字介于可能所以待定
01:41:107 (3) - 去x
01:58:903 (9,1) - 间距

[Own]
00:18:225 (10) - 换一个1/2slider转出去感觉不是我想要的下法...
00:35:641 (2) - 挪到1前的1/4听听看
01:36:022 (3) - x，带进下一段
01:38:310 (2,3) - 没听懂
01:58:903 (5,7) - x
02:37:547 (6) - 去中x

其他fixed
可以看的出来我越来越懒。