1. Futsuu (2,09 stars, 154 notes)
2. Inner Oni (3,93 stars, 425 notes)
3. Kantan (1,3 stars, 89 notes)
4. Muzukashii (2,4 stars, 254 notes)
5. Oni (2,98 stars, 329 notes)

mattinator123 wrote:

Hi, first mod so might not be very good, and pardon lazy grammar. too lazy to fix

[Start mod]

[General]

add kai time from 00:18:201 - 00:33:098 - Done

[Kantan]

00:36:408 - add d, seems kinda boring here No, this part is to balance the density with the previous part
01:05:374 - add d, fits better Okay
01:07:029 - ^ ^
01:07:856 - remove? i know theres a beat there but it "feels" better when you end on a "down" beat <- cant explain very well sorry I'll keep it

[Futsuu]

00:17:167 (41) - k? d fits better
00:30:615 (83,84,85) - maybe kdk? i think you were trying to mix it up but this sounds better, and you did kdk for 00:32:270 (88,89,90) - which has the same sound In 00:32:270 (88,89,90) - I followed Terry's voice instead of the music, I'll keep it
01:07:856 (189) - delete? (see kantan) Same as Kantan

[Muzukashii]

00:11:891 (43) - move 1/4 to the left, sounds better. same with 00:46:650 (202) - Okay
00:12:718 (46) - and 00:47:374 (205) - ^ I'll keep this
00:16:443 (64) - delete? sound weird ^
01:06:822 (300,301,302,303) - maybe try kdkd? Same as Futsuu, following Terry's voice there

[Oni]

great for the most part Thanks =w=

01:05:374 (413,414,415) - d k d? because the music goes bum BAM bum Okay
01:07:029 (423,424,425) - ^ Same as Muzu and Futsuu

[/End Mod]

overall fun map. good job

Skeuddy wrote:

Hi, Midnaait, from my queue

Futsuu

1. 00:13:029 - Some note Added
2. 00:47:787 - ^ ^

Muzukashii

1. 00:07:236 (24) to 00:06:822 and replace on k Okay
2. 00:41:994 (183) to 00:41:581 - ^ ^
3. 00:12:718 (46) on one 1/4 tick to the left I'll keep this for now
4. 00:47:477 (205) - ^ ^
5. 01:07:856 (304) - Replace on spin to 01:10:339 I don't see why should I place a spinner there, I prefer keeping that note

Oni

1. 00:07:236 (35,36) - Swap (on rhythm) Dumb mistake, fixed
2. 00:41:994 (260,261) - ^ ^
3. 00:11:891 (67) and 00:12:718 (72) - Delete I'll keep it for now, I'll wait until somebody points that out
4. 01:07:856 (1) - Replace on spin to 01:10:339 Same as Muzu

It's all. Good luck

1. HP should be 5.0 or higher. 3.0 is too easy to pass.
   
   SPOILER

   

1. don't have to set SV1.2 because this song is low BPM.
2. There are no 4/1 breaks. you have to make few it ;w;
   https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Difficulty_appropriate_gameplay_elements
3. 00:18:201 (25) - missing Finish?
4. 00:19:029 (26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34) - dkd pattern is so continuous. i suggest change to "dkd-kkd-dkd" and delete 00:24:408 (36) -
5. 00:52:960 (77) - Finish?

1. 00:18:201 (45) -, 00:52:960 (144) - finish would fit imo.
2. 00:24:408 (65) - ^

1. 00:24:615 (104) - delete for little break. this 1/4+1/2 pattern is too long.
2. 00:59:374 (263) - ^

1. looks fine.

tasuke912 wrote:

おっぱい。 M4M
[ General]

1. HP should be 5.0 or higher. 3.0 is too easy to pass. I see, changed
   
   SPOILER

   

[ Kantan]

1. don't have to set SV1.2 because this song is low BPM. Fixed
2. There are no 4/1 breaks. you have to make few it ;w; It'll be hard, but I'll try
   https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Difficulty_appropriate_gameplay_elements
3. 00:18:201 (25) - missing Finish? There's no finish on purpose, but I'll see if somebody else points that out
4. 00:19:029 (26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34) - dkd pattern is so continuous. i suggest change to "dkd-kkd-dkd" and delete 00:24:408 (36) - Nice, changed
5. 00:52:960 (77) - Finish? Same as the other suggestion

[ Futsuu]

1. 00:18:201 (45) -, 00:52:960 (144) - finish would fit imo.
2. 00:24:408 (65) - ^

Same as Kantan, I'll wait until somebody points this out

[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:24:615 (104) - delete for little break. this 1/4+1/2 pattern is too long. Fixed
2. 00:59:374 (263) - ^ ^

[ Oni]

1. looks fine. yay

strange song.
Good luck.

Quizmaegi wrote:

It's extremely good map. W o W

* This modding is full of suggestion...?

[Muzukashi]

00:11:581 ~ 00:11:787 - change to dkd Sorry, I shouldn't place 1/4 patterns unless they are of the same colour

00:12:201 ~ 00:12:408 - change to kdk ^

00:12:718 - delete (if you change 00:12:201 ~ 00:12:408 to kdk) I didn't so no

00:14:270 - add d The only thing I hear is voice, I'll see

00:19:856 - d (?) No, I need to place some breaks and that is the most appropiate point of that part
00:21:512 - d (?) ^

00:26:477 - ^

00:46:339 ~ 00:46:546 - change to dkd

00:46:960 ~ 00:47:167 - change to kdk

00:47:477 - delete

00:54:615 - add d
00:56:270 - add d

01:01:236 - ^

The other part repeats so same answers

[Oni]

00:11:994 - add d I'll keep as it is for now

00:12:822 - add k ^

00:46:753 - add d ^

00:47:581 - add k ^

01:07:856 - Finish (?) I don't see why, there are no loud sounds, and it's the end of the song

1. 00:07:960 - dem.. this sir terry voice... must fill kat and 00:08:063 - change this don :>
2. 00:11:787 - demm midnait, this fit is kat.. more POWEERRRR............
3. 00:12:408 - kdkkd? lol terry voice is fit and music too
4. 00:12:201 - forget, change to kat.. for emphasize
5. 00:14:063 - just suggest, dkddkdk or dkdkkdk *is more fits too music and vocal*
6. 00:18:615 - don.... emphasize this =w= kat is make music cant heard..
7. 00:20:270 - this can keep =w=
8. 00:21:925 - like on 103 `w`
9. 00:23:167 - not make kkdkddk? XD fill thats BG music
10. 00:25:236 - same above before
11. 00:27:201 - delete XD for 00:27:305 - emphasize this pattern
12. 00:28:132 (171,176) - 171 kat, and 176 is don *high to low pitch*
13. 00:28:546 (175,179) - and ctrl g this??
14. 00:42:718 - like above before
15. 00:46:546 -
16. and next lenght.. is same? little different on end kiai *dem engrish*

Shantae and the Pirate's Curse

Jake Kaufman OST Video Game Inturmental Terry Crews Odor Blocker Old Spice [strike]bla bla[/strike] 

1. 00:02:891 (9) - k, so the little pitch rise is mapped? :3
2. 00:26:684 (162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171) - These can probably join up and make a bigger stream! Unless you only wanted that in the second kiai, although they are both pretty similar already. kkkkkkdkddk should be a nice way to map it.
3. 01:01:443 (387,388,389,390,391,392,393,394,395,396,397) - kkkkkkdkddk like mentioned above. Keeps the trilling kkkkkkd part mapped the same but leads into the lowness of the other part nicely.
4. 00:29:787 (182) - k? kddkkkd represents the sounds here way better.
5. 01:04:546 (408) - ^ plus dddkkkd is lame pls

1. 00:11:787 (41,42,43,44,45,46) - Instead of this rhythm, keep it like at 00:04:960 ? What exists currently doesn't really fit anything. Using a 7 note 1/2 pattern has worked so far.
2. 00:46:339 - ^ Whatever you decided there works here too!
3. 00:22:960 (93) - Delete this to not make such a big string of notes.
4. 00:57:718 (248) - ^ Same here!
5. 00:27:098 (114,115) - ctrl+g these? Sounds like it should be descending.
6. 00:27:718 (116,117,118) - Then this can be d d k? The note at 00:28:132 being k sounds nice. So far only Oni has it, however.
   01:01:856 (269,270,271,272,273) - ^ Same as those two suggestions!
7. 00:01:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I think (d d k d k d k d d k d D D) would work nicer. Starting with dkd and having the dkdkdkd leak into the next bar doesn't sound too great.
8. 00:33:305 (142) - ^ to 00:33:718 , 00:34:960 (149) - to 00:35:374 , 00:36:615 (156) - to 00:37:029 use timestamps instead of the number, I probably messed something up)
   After that, 00:36:201 (154,155) - can be a ddd, so it's a 1/2, then a 1/2+1/4, then 00:37:443 (159,160,161) - can just be k d, so it's back to only 1/2 after that 1/2+1/4, then the d D D can basically serve as the other variation! (confusing?!? sorry!!)

1. HP 6?
   How rankable this spread is will be dependent on the spread between Muzukashii and NEW Oni. Make sure the difficulty jump is equal!
   
2. 00:04:546 (8) - d? Higher diffs like the IT'S ME part as don.
3. 00:39:305 (109) - ^ Same!
4. 00:12:201 (29) - to 00:11:787 and 00:13:029 (31) - to 00:12:615 sounds soo much better.
5. 00:46:339 - ^ Saaame!
6. 00:17:167 (44) - Delete this note, and then you can make 00:17:374 (45) - a finisher :B
7. 00:51:925 - 54|\/|3
   
   Here in Futsuu territory, we need a fewww more breaks.
8. 00:18:615 (48,49) - Delete these since the notes before the kiai create an even longer string.
   OR, you can delete 00:17:787 and then kiai stays a bit more structured.
9. 00:24:408 - Deleting the note here does the same.
10. 00:31:856 (89,90) - Then deleting these can allow you to map to OH NOO. Speaking of which 00:32:477 (88) - K? K K so that the d k coming up doesn't look as lame.
    Repeat in the next kiai!

• HP 7, OD 4 (3 is for babies).

1. 00:35:581 (48) - Seems this should be at 00:36:408 , and then you can get rid of 00:38:891 (53) - .
   
   Breaks in this diff come naturally, and are consistently ~22 note strings, so looks good.

-Anhedonia- wrote:

m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m req
;3
lo hago en español por que puedo asd

General
- Creo que deberias ponerle Widescreen Support por que tiene video/storyboard, hasta donde sé, esa opcion se debe poner cuando hay una de esas (¿) No, la SB y video estan en una resolucion 4:3, no 16:9, asi que no lo veo necesario

Oni
- 00:05:787 (24) - creo que esa nota deberia ser d por pura consistencia, me suena un poco raro tocar 2 kats seguidos ahi solo por seguir vocales No me gusta lel
- 00:05:994 (25,26,27) - esta es pura sugerencia, pero a mi me suena mas lindo kdk que dkd xD ^
- 00:11:581 (63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73) - a mi gusto suena mucho mejor ddkkd k kdkkd ^
- 00:21:305 (122) - tiene pitch mas bajo que la nota anterior, no sería estupidez ponerle d xD ^
- 00:27:305 (167,168,169,170,171) - creo que aqui deberia ser casi si o si ddddk, va con la musica y le da buen efecto abekobe Le cambie eso
- 00:47:167 (295,296,297,298,299) - kdkkd , suena mejor segun yo Lo dejo como esta

Muzukashii
- Por algun motivo esta suena demasiado bien y casi que deberias basarte en esta para hacer las demas xD
- 00:28:960 (120,121,122) - este triplete no me suena tan necesario just sayin Lo saqué
- 00:44:891 (189) - tal vez esta deberias cambiarla a 00:44:477 - Esta bien como esta
- 00:02:063 (2,4,6) - esas k caen justo en lugares donde deberia haber d, le quita un poco la variedad pero asi es la cancion xD Lo sé, pero lo dejare como esta, me gusta mas como lo sugirió el modder anterior
- 00:33:512 (91,93,95,99,101,103) - ^ ^
- 00:40:960 (109) - suena mejor como k, hace puente entre la nota anterior y la siguiente Lo dejo como está

Futsuu

- Lo siento pero no encontre mayor problema Dx Lol

Kantan
- 00:28:960 - pese a que se supone que no deberia tener tanta densidad, de verdad se siente que falta una nota aca tanto como para no perder el ritmo como para que la nota siguiente no suene tan vacía Ok
- 00:30:615 - ^ ^
- 00:32:270 - ^ , aunque aca puedes omitir ya que luego vienen 2 notas y *puede* parecer muy dificil (¿ Lo dejare, por la densidad
- 00:50:891 - aca aplica lo mismo, solo que no es tan urgente como antes, ya que solo es para hacer puente, la siguiente nota en si acentua algo importante y en fin, opcional ^
- 00:52:546 - ^ ^

xdxdxdxd

bbj0920 wrote:

hi

Kantan
I suggest od -1, it's better to be less than Futsuu
No flaws found, but gap between Kantan and Futsuu is pretty big, I suggest to add some notes for Kantan

Futsuu
01:02:270 (171) - I don't really think this note is necessary.

Muzukashii
00:36:408 (153,154,155) - Why would you put triplet when other similar patterns don't

Oni
00:16:132 (92) - K, pitch is definitely higher than 00:16:546 (93) -
00:17:581 - Add a note to follow the sound
00:27:098 (166) - k for consistency
00:52:339 - Add a note
01:01:856 (391) - ----------^

This map is pretty good, you can really bubble this pretty soon

wofl100 wrote:

From Queue

[Kantan]

00:23:167 - k
00:57:925 - ^

[Futsuu]

00:09:512 - d
00:27:305 - k
00:44:270 - same as 00:09:512
01:02:063 - same as 00:27:305

[Muzukashii]

00:14:891 - KKKKK is little bit weird. KKKDD or KKKdd
00:49:650 - ^

[Oni]

00:05:167 - Delete
00:08:477 - ^
00:11:684 - ^
00:14:891 - same as Muzukashii
00:20:270 - d
00:24:512 - Delete
00:30:201 - d
00:39:925 - same as 00:05:167
00:41:477 - ^
00:43:236 - ^
00:49:650 - same as Muzukashii
00:55:029 - same as 00:20:270
00:59:063 - Delete
01:04:960 - d

well done map :3

Grimbow wrote:

Mod from IG o/

d - Small don (red note)
D - Big don (red note with a finish)
k - Small kat (blue note)
K - Big kat (blue note with a finish)

Black means something that I think needs changed
Orange is just a suggestion
Blue is a comment

[Kantan]

00:08:270 (11,12) - Ctrl+g these two notes, the vocals in the background where these notes land go from low to high so this change will map that vocal flow nicely Okay, I tried to make abekobe with the previous notes but it really doesnt sound good
00:11:581 (16,17) - Ctrl+g these two notes for the opposite reason, the vocals here descend in tone so the k d will help follow this ^
00:18:201 (23) - Add a finish to this note, it's the start of the kiai time and it would give a nice kick to the start of it Okay
00:24:822 (34) - Add a finish to this note? Since it is the same as the start of the kiai it might work, but it's not necessary I'll keep it without finish
00:43:029 (60,61) - Ctril+g these two notes for the same reason as the first suggestion
00:46:339 (65,66) - Ctrl+g these two notes for the same reason as the second suggestion
00:52:960 (72) - Add a finish to this note since it is the start of the kiai time and the emphasis here sounds good!
00:59:581 (83) - Add a finish to this note? Since it is the same as the start of the kiai it might work, but it's not necessary

The rest is the same as the first half

[Futsuu]

00:18:201 (45) - Add a finish to this note, it is the start of the kiai time and the emphasis will do it good! Ok
00:59:581 (161) - Add a finish to this note? Since it is the same as the start of the kiai it might work, but it's not necessary I did it because ^^^

[Muzukashii]

00:18:201 (69) - Add a finish to this note, it is the start of the kiai time and the emphasis will do it good! Ok
00:19:443 (76,77) - Ctrl+g these two notes, the vocal things here goes from high to low instead of low to high so the kdkkd will follow this vocal trend (Read Oni)
00:21:305 (85) - You could change this to a k since the vocal it lands on is a higher pitch than the note before it, but I see why you have it as a d so it's not too important Already a kat lol
00:26:063 (108,109) - Ctrl+g these two notes for the same reason as above, the vocals are descending here (Read Oni)
00:29:787 (123) - I think you should make the triplet start here since the vocals do that weird "dododo" thing here instead of on the 1/2 beat after. So to ffix this, you could move 00:29:994 (124,125) - these two notes back half a tick and make them dons Sounds good
00:31:650 (132,133) - Do the same with these two notes, move them back half a tick so they join into 00:31:443 (131) - ^
00:52:960 (222) - Add a finish to this note, it is the start of the kiai time and the emphasis will do it good!
00:59:581 (254) - Add a finish to this note? Since it is the same as the start of the kiai it might work, but it's not necessary
01:01:856 (266,267) - Ctrl+g these two notes since the vocals here descend instead of ascend so it will follow the vocal trend
01:04:753 (277,278) - Same as in the last kiai, move these two notes back 1/2 tick and change them to dons
01:06:408 (285,286) - And move these back 1/2 a tick too

The rest is the same as the first half

[Oni]

00:18:201 (82) - Add a finish to this note, it is the start of the kiai time and the emphasis will do it good! Ok
00:19:443 (90,91) - Ctrl+g these two notes, the vocal things here goes from high to low instead of low to high so it will follow this vocal trend Not following the "old spice" vocals, I'm following the melody there lol
00:22:753 (108,109) - Ctrl+g for the same reasons as above ^
00:26:063 (128,129) - Ctrl+g for the same reasons as above ^
00:38:477 (191) - You could add a finish to this note since there is a short break after and it would be a nice point of emphasis, but you might not want to since you have some finishers on the notes after. Your call! Nah, I think that note is okay as it is
00:52:959 (260) - Add a finish to this note, it is the start of the kiai time and the emphasis will do it good! Ok
00:54:201 (268,269) - Ctrl+g these two notes, the vocal things here goes from high to low instead of low to high so it will follow this vocal trend Same as the others
00:57:511 (286,287) - Ctrl+g for the same reasons as above ^
01:00:821 (306,307) - Ctrl+g for the same reasons as above ^
01:07:856 (1) - The whole map is mapped in one spot and this one note is out of place plz fix so it isn't out of place ;w;

[Inner Oni]

00:05:063 - You could add a k here to map a vocal where this note lands (Like you did at 00:11:787 - ) I'll keep as it is, I don't like it lol
00:08:891 (44,45,46) - Change this to kdk? The vocals here seem a bit more stressed on the first and last notes and it would contrast well with the dkd before it Okay, also 44 is the same pitch as 00:08:684
00:18:201 (98) - Add a finish to this note, it is the start of the kiai time and the emphasis will do it good! Ok
00:27:201 - You could add a k here and change 00:27:098 (165) - to a k too so you have a nice stream that flows into the next section, but it might be a bit long so it's your call Keep, just personal preference lol
00:39:822 - You could add a k here for the same reason as the first suggestion
00:43:650 (269,270,271) - Change this to kdk? The vocals here seem a bit more stressed on the first and last notes and it would contrast well with the dkd before it
00:52:960 (323) - Add a finish to this note, it is the start of the kiai time and the emphasis will do it good!
01:01:960 - Same as the suggestion on the last kiai, you could add a k here and change 01:01:856 (389) - to a k for a bit of a longer stream that will still fit the flow of the music, but will be a bit long so it's your call!
01:07:856 (1) - You did it again, move it to the middle ahhhhhh ;w;

The rest is the same as the first half