22:08 DankHomie: Alright
22:09 DankHomie: 00:19:720 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
22:09 DankHomie: lets see if i can explain myself here
22:09 DankHomie: If you dont want to map this in full 1/4
22:09 DankHomie: which it looks like you dont
22:10 DankHomie: 00:20:234 (3,1) -
22:10 DankHomie: id suggest following the two woo woo sounds here
22:10 DankHomie: with two 1/4 sliders
22:11 DankHomie: theres one at the end of this slider and the start of this note as well
22:11 DankHomie: 00:17:320 (2,3) -
22:11 DankHomie: It works fine as it is now
22:11 DankHomie: but im not sure what you are following in the music
22:12 monstrata: im following vocals here actually xD
22:12 DankHomie: ohhh
22:12 monstrata: 00:19:720 (1,1,1,2,3,4,5) - cool flowing pattern
22:12 DankHomie: yeah if you follow vocals it should be fine
22:13 DankHomie: oh right this thing
22:13 DankHomie: 00:54:691 (3,4,5,6) -
22:13 DankHomie: I feel like this would be pretty weird to read unless you stacked the slider below the last circle
22:14 DankHomie: Then again i didnt notice it while playing
22:14 monstrata: oh
22:14 monstrata: yea originally i had it stacked
22:14 monstrata: but due to stack leniency it looked really ugly lol
22:14 DankHomie: i can see that
22:14 DankHomie: hm
22:15 DankHomie: Let someone more experienced look at it than me at least :s
22:15 DankHomie: 01:25:548 (1,2,3,4) -
22:16 DankHomie: I feel like this section could fit better with 1/2 jumps to emphasize the increasing intensity in the music
22:16 DankHomie: but as its not follwed up with a stream
22:16 DankHomie: It still works
22:16 monstrata: hmm you have a point
22:16 monstrata: theres a lot of 1/2 slider spam in that particular section
22:17 monstrata: in later parts i use different rhythms
22:17 monstrata: i think making them all 1/2 jumps would be too intense, but yea i could definitely make the rhythm more diverse
22:17 DankHomie: Yeah with no stream at the end of that and then mapping to the lyrics after
22:17 DankHomie: just jumps would be too much
22:18 DankHomie: Also this rhythm comes up a lot in this song
22:18 DankHomie: 01:42:005 (1,2,3) -
22:18 DankHomie: This one works well imo
22:18 DankHomie: but there are some i found uncomfortable
22:19 monstrata: oh like the 3/4 circle jumps?
22:19 DankHomie: yeah
22:19 DankHomie: Ill point one out i didnt like when i get to it
22:19 DankHomie: 01:50:234 (1) -
22:19 DankHomie: this stream
22:19 DankHomie: why lower ds ;_;
22:19 DankHomie: It feels so intense and then boop
22:20 monstrata: eh, cuz its 17 notes lol
22:20 DankHomie: You increased ds on all the other sections looking like that
22:20 DankHomie: hm
22:20 monstrata: idk, i don't really consider stream spacing too much nowadays. more shape and length of stream
22:20 DankHomie: Here
22:20 DankHomie: 01:50:234 (1,1,2,3) -
22:20 DankHomie: this one is perfect
22:20 monstrata: yea i increased DS for the first two streams for some build up
22:21 DankHomie: I think its because they are all stacked on top of each other
22:21 DankHomie: for some reason that felt much easier
22:21 DankHomie: on these ones 01:55:720 (1,2,3) -
22:21 DankHomie: the third one didnt seem like a part of it, so i expected a 1/2 gap
22:21 DankHomie: It might just be something with my reading
22:22 DankHomie: But the 1:50 one flowed really really well
22:22 monstrata: 02:03:948 (1,2,3) - what do you think of jumps like this tho
22:23 monstrata: like rhythm wise are they difficult to read or anything?
22:23 DankHomie: No problem at all
22:23 monstrata: i tried making them really big so it wouldn't be confused with 1/2's
22:23 monstrata: ok
22:23 DankHomie: But i do like the slider version better when it worked
22:23 DankHomie: mix is good
22:23 monstrata: yea
22:23 monstrata: i prefer sliders too
22:23 monstrata: but some mix would benefit the repeitive nature of this song lol
22:24 monstrata: gotta get better at constructing good 3/4 slider structures tho xPP
22:24 DankHomie: yeah keep mix
22:24 monstrata: i think its got to do with angles not being good
22:24 DankHomie: I loved it when they were all stacked on top of each other
22:24 DankHomie: but check with others
22:24 DankHomie: feels like a somewhat subjective thing
22:24 DankHomie: also
22:24 DankHomie: 02:31:378 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
22:24 DankHomie: was gonna comment on how i didnt like this
22:24 DankHomie: but
22:24 DankHomie: it worked really well when playing
22:25 DankHomie: so keep
22:25 DankHomie: :s
22:25 DankHomie: uh
22:25 DankHomie: 02:39:948 (3,4) -
22:25 DankHomie: Why not a triple here, feels weird when every other 1/4 triple is mapped
22:25 DankHomie: but not that one
22:26 monstrata: oh oh oh
22:26 monstrata: 02:31:377 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Hanburgeric also noted that so i nerfed the spacing
22:26 monstrata: going into second set
22:26 monstrata: 02:39:948 (3,4) - Here tho i have a cool effect going
22:26 DankHomie: I liked it tho :s
22:27 monstrata: I just made spacing a bit smaller, same structure xD
22:27 DankHomie: oh alright
22:27 DankHomie: 02:39:948 (3,4) -
22:27 DankHomie: what do you mean
22:27 DankHomie: cool effect
22:27 monstrata: 02:39:948 (3,4) - Here, no triplet, but 02:40:634 (6,7,8) - stacked triplet
22:27 monstrata: 02:42:348 (1,2,3,4,5) - here stacked triplets 02:43:377 (7,8,9) - here unstacked/spaced
22:27 monstrata: 02:45:091 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Now theyre all mapped and all unstacked
22:28 monstrata: its a progression based on loudness of the music
22:28 DankHomie: yeah i liked that
22:28 DankHomie: oh you mean like that
22:28 DankHomie: imo the first triple should still be mapped
22:28 DankHomie: but up to you
22:29 DankHomie: 02:51:262 (1,1,2,3) - inb4 people who cant quad
22:29 DankHomie: dont change tho
22:29 monstrata: LOL
22:29 monstrata: i hope it was straightforward enough
22:29 monstrata: with the NC's
22:29 DankHomie: It is
22:29 DankHomie: people just cant quad
22:29 DankHomie: at all
22:29 DankHomie: its hilarious
22:29 DankHomie: They know its a quad
22:30 DankHomie: and they know what they need to do
22:30 DankHomie: but they just dont have the muscle memory
22:30 monstrata: well, the intention with the NC is to make ppl just play it like a normal triplet rather than a quad xD
22:30 DankHomie: keep it for salt
22:30 DankHomie: its readable no problem
22:31 DankHomie: 03:18:005 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - see this is why i want to play stuff before i mod
22:31 DankHomie: i didnt think it would work but playing it was fun
22:31 monstrata: ooo
22:31 monstrata: ya
22:31 DankHomie: 03:39:949 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
22:31 monstrata: that was a cool pattern i came up with using a 5 note stream as the base
22:32 DankHomie: come on man hitsounds
22:32 monstrata: 03:18:177 (2,3,4,2,3) -
22:32 monstrata: :D
22:32 DankHomie: Loses all the intentisty
22:32 monstrata: hmm
22:32 DankHomie: That part was really cool though
22:32 monstrata: what shuld i add ;o
22:32 DankHomie: Im not an expert at hitsounding, but just whistles isnt nearly enough
22:33 monstrata: actually
22:33 DankHomie: 03:38:577 (1,2,3,4) - these didnt feel as intensive as the music either
22:33 monstrata: what if i add whistles to all the red ticks
22:33 DankHomie: tbh i would just change to normal instead of soft
22:34 DankHomie: on either the jumps or the kicksliders
22:34 DankHomie: The hitsounding on the jumps there are actually the biggest problem i have with the map atm
22:35 DankHomie: 04:07:377 (1,2,3) -
22:35 monstrata: yea
22:35 DankHomie: These are probably the ones i disliked the most out of the 1/3 sliders
22:35 monstrata: okay i added whistles onto red ticks for more hitsounding
22:35 monstrata: ill change the earlier verses too
22:35 DankHomie: alright
22:36 monstrata: ah
22:36 monstrata: yea i should fix them they look too much like normal 1/2 sliders
22:36 DankHomie: get someone better than me to look at the 1/3 sliders, i cant say much outside of a player perspective here
22:36 DankHomie: but yeah what you just said
22:36 DankHomie: felt too much like 1/2s
22:36 DankHomie: 04:07:377 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
22:36 DankHomie: these worked
22:36 DankHomie: wait no
22:36 DankHomie: shit i
22:37 DankHomie: 04:10:120 (1,2,3) -
22:37 DankHomie: these
22:37 DankHomie: :3
22:37 DankHomie: worked well
22:37 monstrata: yea
22:37 DankHomie: 04:15:605 (1,2,3) - these also worked well
22:37 monstrata: i think first one didnt work well
22:37 monstrata: because
22:37 DankHomie: ill stop pointing them out though
22:37 monstrata: 04:06:691 (2,3,1) - made the spacing look weird
22:37 DankHomie: possible, you know that better than me
22:38 DankHomie: 04:45:777 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - god dammit i almost died here
22:38 DankHomie: because im so bad at these
22:38 DankHomie: but i love them
22:38 DankHomie: ;w;
22:39 monstrata: lol
22:39 monstrata: <3
22:39 monstrata: theyre fun to play :D
22:39 DankHomie: alright so last thing
22:40 DankHomie: long thing inc
22:40 DankHomie: 05:02:234 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) -
22:40 DankHomie: This section was the most well made buildup in your map imo
22:40 DankHomie: constant increase in intensity
22:40 DankHomie: both in music and mapping
22:40 monstrata: i thought id end it with a straightforward buildup xD
22:41 DankHomie: :s
22:41 DankHomie: 05:10:462 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) -
22:41 DankHomie: best part about map by far
22:41 monstrata: how did the last kick slider set play tho ;o
22:41 monstrata: 05:10:462 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - exgyy
22:41 monstrata: okay
22:41 monstrata: <3
22:41 DankHomie: So thats it for me i guess
22:41 DankHomie: Overall
22:42 DankHomie: Its pretty good
22:42 DankHomie: I feel that some parts are unpolished, but im not experienced enough to tell exactly what
22:43 monstrata: sweet :D
22:43 DankHomie: Im just glad that you accepted some of my suggestions :d