Crisis00:37:942 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The inconsistency of the spacing here is very difficult to read. Going into the stacked notes with 2.9 spacing, keeping them 2.5 apart, followed by a 3.0, 2.0, 2.3, 1.4 spaced jump seems a little bit illogical. Consider moving 00:38:804 (1) so that it gets even spacing before and after, or altering the jumps entirely so that they gradually increase spacing to match the buildup of the music. In fact, I find the stacking of 00:38:115 (1,2,3,4) to be quite out of place altogether, and would recommend either making them part of the spaced jumps or changing 00:38:804 (1,2,3,4) to be consistent with the stacked sets of two notes. the stacks are intentional to lead the player into the chorus/used-to-be kiai to make the transition not as bad. jump slightly altered
00:45:701 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Sections like this, and to be honest almost the entire chorus, get boring when flow in constantly counterclockwise. In fact, just 8 notes from 00:35 to 01:02 have clockwise flow, and when the song is clearly in motion as much as it is here, it's hard to imagine it only going in one direction. the song repeats the same rhythm for 2 minutes so it's kind of hard not to repeat stuff and idk how else to map it lo
00:55:356 (3,4,5,6) - This jump seems really excessive. Consider moving 00:55:701 (5) up and to the right to make a triangle with (4) and (6) ? i have no idea how that managed to slip my mind, overlapped 5 with sliderend of 2
00:58:632 (6) - Same as above, maybe make 00:58:459 (5,6,1) into a triangle? triangle would ruin the sort-of back and forth pattern i have going here but i reduced the spacing
01:06:218 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Again, this section is begging for a bit more flow reversal, being entirely counterclockwise. pls give me suggestions on what to do here thanks dad
01:12:942 (2,3,4,5) - I get what you were trying to do here, but this set of jumps is still quite awkward. Maybe rotate (4) and (5) about 30 degrees to the left, move it down and to the right a bit, and Ctrl+H 01:13:632 (6,1,2) or something? these jumps are intended to be awkward at first but still manage to be playable given a few tries / second try but they're ugly i agree so changed lo
01:31:563 (3,4,1) - I wouldn't say the music has really grown in intensity compared to 01:27:770 (6,1,2,3) so maybe bring down the spacing so that these triangle jumps are of equal size. ye
01:37:425 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1) - Again, too much counterclockwise flow for my tastes. gggg
01:45:011 (1,2,3,4) - Not sure about the logic of placing (4) all the way out to the right there... maybe pull it in a bit, make this into a square as opposed to a diamond? 4 is placed on the beginning of the synth sounds and it's intended to be symmetrical with 3 like the jump (1,2) was so idk I think it works okay
01:50:528 (1,2,3,4) - Yeah, here's the square shape I was looking for, but why such intense spacing? It's not a chorus. Tone it down a notch. 2.5 would be the highest I would go on that section. i'd also have to readjust the sliders after that in order to get the pattern i was trying to accomplish there and yeah that's a problem so idk i'll consider this but i don't think it's a necessity to reduce spacing here
02:02:080 (6) - I think this note is just a tad too low. Bring it up a little and try centering it so the spacing before and after match up. did a retarded fix ayy
02:06:391 (1,2,3,4) - Having contrasting slider lengths like this is very difficult to read. Consider making all of them repeat sliders, or turning (1) and (2) into a stream that leads into (3). ??? this is done in plenty of other maps and it reads well enough for a majority of everyone, i don't really see what the point you're trying to make here is
03:07:770 (3) - Consider removing this circle. after 1 is where the constant clap sounds occur until the pause and second kiai, there's definitely a note there, should be ok
03:22:943 (1,2,3,4) - This is a really awkward shape to play, especially after the previous jumps. Consider making (3) a triangle with (2) and (4). ehh i think it looks and plays alright, not sure about this
03:29:322 (1) - The jump into this stream is 3.4 spaced! Far too difficult to read when there's an unexpected BPM change. (This is where I broke on my sightread actually.) Move 03:29:149 (3) to the right, or at least put the slider tail facing the stream in order to fix this. moved 3 closer to the stream, also there's no bpm change here what
03:30:356 (1) - The jump into this slider is also really awkward to play, again perhaps curve 03:30:184 (5) to the right a bit so that it flows into this better. 5 is meant to be a kickslider that you don't fully follow and i did the same thing with the previous stream so it should be fine
03:57:597 (4) - To have this circle stacked is inconsistent with the rest of your map. Consider moving it towards the playfield center and then making 03:57:597 (4) a square. did a lot of pattern readjustment here because it looked ugly and shitty so ye hopefully it works now
04:04:838 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Too much clockwise flow this time. Try to keep in mind that the circular flow of a map should only be constant when the song's direction is unchanging. It's clearly indicated by the shape of your jumps that it's moving quite a bit, so try to also indicate it in your flow direction. holy
04:25:701 (1,2,3) - Without knowing the song before, this is going to be impossible to read. Having three notes here (as opposed to two, as one might expect) is very tricky. Consider instead using a repeat slider to be more forgiving. a repeat slider would also catch most people off guard i think, i don't really know how to go about mapping this without possibly screwing over rhythm so i'll ask around
04:34:149 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - Consider remapping this jump section so that the spacing is consistent - either staying the same, constantly increasing, or constantly decreasing. reduced spacing on big jump
05:03:976 (6,7,8) - I know that the emphasis on kiai by increasing the size of this jump is justified, but nonetheless it can still be a bit awkward to play. Consider changing this so that the spacing before and after (7) is the same. all of these work fine as they are imo, it's the most intense part of the song so ye
05:09:494 (6,7,8) - Same as above, possibly replace with a triangle?
05:13:632 (6,7,8) - ^
05:15:011 (6,7,8) - Same as above, maybe putting (7) over to the right side? It would help with flow in general, too, as vertical patterns don't always work out with varying spacing. this one i agree with though, adjusted pattern a bit
Can't wait to see how it develops as you continue to work on it further!
