1. Rain - 4Key (3,04 stars, 639 notes)
2. Storm - 4Key (3,84 stars, 796 notes)
3. Sun - 4Key (1,98 stars, 370 notes)

Bubbled by ExUsagi

Ranked by Kuo Kyoka

Destiny

Love is forever

Happy End

Feerum wrote:

First
Requested Mod


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Big means Important stuff
Normal are Suggestions
// means comments
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Hello Shana. Here's my mod :3

General

Artist: Looks right
Title: Looks right
Source: I think its right
Tags: Right
AiMod: Right
Background: Unrankabke cuz wrong ratio. Try this one BG
BPM/Offset: Right
Other: ----

Sun

00:08:649 - Suggest to Add here one. Like you have 00:08:983 - , 00:10:316 - etc.
00:13:983 - Here too. Loud Drum + Guitar.
00:28:483 (28483|1,28816|1) - When you follow with this two the Guitar you should maybe add here one too 00:29:149 - ?
00:37:983 (37983|0) - Maybe move this one to 2? :c
00:42:649 (42649|3) - Move thos one to 1 and 00:42:983 (42983|0) - to 2 to avoid the note short before LN hold.
00:49:983 - maybe add here one additional for the Finish?
00:58:483 - Add here, same like 00:57:149 -

Rain

Little Suggestion for Pitch:
00:15:316 (15316|1) - Move to 1
00:15:649 (15649|3) - Move to 2
00:15:816 (15816|1) - Move to 3
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Again for Pitch:
00:19:816 (19816|2,19983|3) - CTRL + G
00:20:316 (20316|1,20483|3) - CTRL + G
Brings nice variation and pitch :3
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00:22:983 (22983|0,23316|0,23649|0,23983|0,24316|0) - Maybe try to rearrange here a little bit?
00:26:899 - You should try to add here a note. It still has drum.
00:38:983 - Why here suddenly two notes in the Stream?
00:50:649 (50649|0) - Maybe move to 3? A short trill in the middle could emphasize the drum a bit more.
01:01:983 (61983|1,62149|3) - Maybe CTRL + G here to avoid something like this 01:01:649 (61649|1,61816|1,61983|1) -
01:07:816 (67816|3,67816|0,67983|3,67983|0) - make them different to the previous chords because not same pitch.

Hehehee. Finish! Hope it helps. Its not much because its a short song and its pretty well mapped.
Good luck

SpectorDG wrote:

Request from - ★ | ✊ #СПЕКТОР Mania Queue ✊ | ★

Yo Shana :3 Here the MODS

Sun

00:39:816 (39816|2) - Move to 4 people love this pattern <3 LN
Maybe 00:39:816 (39816|2) - Move to 3 and add LN here 01:01:816 (it's KIAI time end)

01:06:649 - Add note 2 ? added
because it's same 00:44:983 (44983|1,45316|3,45649|2,45983|1) -

Rain

00:05:650 - Here add LN for 2 because ups noise+piano sound
00:05:983 (5983|1) - Move to 3
00:14:066 (14066|2) - Move to 4 very boring pattern

00:37:983 - FOCUS THIS PART
maybe follow this styles (it's 3 star song ;w; need this)


- HARD PATTERN re-arranged
00:52:983 (52983|3) - Move to 2 and 00:53:149 (53149|2) - Move to 4 and 00:53:316 (53316|3) - Move to 2 (don't forgot it's 3 star song)

Nice map :3 GL FOR RANK~

MeowPaz wrote:

Yahalo.Shana
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Open

[Sun]
00:26:566 - Add this sound?Then 00:26:649 (26649|2,26649|1) - Delete one.
00:32:149 (32149|3,32149|2) - Move to 23。 And don't miss this sound 00:32:316 - Add one at 4.


[Rain]
00:36:483 - Add one more?Loud here.
01:01:149 (61149|1) - You can change LN

Just these.Good luck.

Critical_Star wrote:

Nyapalo Shana nyan~
mod requested
column 1 2 3 4

Sunny
00:15:316 (15316|1,15649|3) - ok since u are following this, i would suggest to add a single note at 00:15:483 - 00:15:816 - those sound are quite obvious and loud :s it won't make hard for normal ;e;
00:16:983 (16983|0) - oh guitar long sound ya, if that so would suggest to change these all 00:19:649 (19649|3) - 00:24:983 (24983|1) - into LN

Rainy
00:14:316 - add at 2?
00:19:649 (19649|0) - 00:22:316 (22316|0) - 00:24:983 - change to LN? since all these sound u used LN like 00:16:983 (16983|3) -
00:56:649 - add at 4?

Good Luck nyan~ only all these i could find ;e; have a star~

Dereku wrote:

Маленькие правочки для (ещё) более простого чтения.

Rain

00:16:149 (16149|2) - Move to 00:16:149 (16149|0) - (1st column)
00:16:233 (16233|0) - Move to 00:16:233 (16233|2) - (3rd column)
00:16:316 (16316|3) - Move to 00:16:316 (16316|1) - (2nd column)
00:16:399 (16399|1) - Move to 00:16:399 (16399|2) - (3rd column)

Sun

00:27:316 - (Start) Не совсем удачное расположение LNов.
00:29:983 - (End) Стоит пересмотреть их расположение.

А так карта приятная на игру. Лайк.

DarkSider2442 wrote:

Кудосу можешь не давать

Sun
00:15:066 (15066|0) - финиш не забыл?
00:35:316 (35316|3) - ^
00:39:149 (39149|0) - попробуй этот холд до этого момента протянуть 00:39:316 - , глянь потом, как лучше в игре чувствуется

- Bad Apple - wrote:

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- Apples Mania Mods (⌒∇⌒。) -

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As requested~ :3

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- General -

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  - Metadata: ☑
  - BPM/Offset: ☑
  - Hitsounds: ☑
  - Background: ☑
  - Timing/Kiai: ☑
  - Folder/Files: ☑
  - Settings: ☑ I would suggest HP8 for "Rain" too, 7 seems a bit too easy for 3 stars >w<
  - Random Stuff: ☑

- Sun -

- 00:01:149 - i would add notes here, since the piano is loud and clear ;w;
- 00:01:483 - ^
- 00:01:816 - ^
- 00:02:483 - ^ ... ;w;
- 00:02:816 - ^
- 00:03:149 - ^
added ^

- 00:03:316 (3316|2,3316|0,3483|3,3483|1,3816|3,3816|1,3983|2,3983|0,4316|1,4316|0,4483|3,4483|2,4816|2,4816|3,4983|1,4983|0) - these should be single notes if - 01:07:316 (67316|3,67483|3,67816|0,67983|0) - these are single notes too (or you make them doubles >w<)
however, i would suggest turning the first ones into singles, since it's easy diff
- 00:35:149 (35149|1,35149|3,35316|2,35316|0) - i think single notes are enough here, but that's just my opinion ówò
- 00:38:316 - you could add notes here... added
- 00:38:649 - ...and here for the instruments added
- 00:50:483 - add cause its snare+kick here
- 00:57:816 (57816|2,58149|2,58483|0) - i would remove those, part seems hard for easy
- 00:58:983 - would add one here for the snare added
- 00:59:149 - same added
- 01:05:983 - add one cause cymbal+guitar+kick added
- 01:07:316 (67316|3,67483|3,67816|0,67983|0) - as mentioned previously, should be 2 notes~

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Nice song & map, hope to see this ranked soon! :3/
Best of luck
Apple

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NlHIL wrote:

[Sun]
00:28:316 (28316|0,28649|3) - I think 00:28:483 - is the turning point
00:30:149 - add to 4?
01:08:316 (68316|1) - change to a LN?
[Rain]
poi

Frim4503 wrote:

Col : 1,2,3,4,5,6,7
request from chat in game
sorry for delay

[General]
-BG : ok
-Mp3 : ok
-Hitsound : not very audible. try increase it for 5% or 10% up
-Difficulty : idk about the diff name (sun and rain) is acceptable cuz for general people it will confuse them. suggest to change to NM, HD or something else
-AI Mod : this map need easy/normal diff. AI mod, are you drunk ?
-Comments : this map is ready to go >.<

not really a mod for Rain diff

00:36:983 (36983|0,37316|1) - ctrl+g ?
00:37:983 - http://puu.sh/kmAcd/e96b727c17.png

Sun already good i think

mod done