Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
Empty .osb file detected, please remove and full submit i knew about that, i've been waiting for someone to mod, than i'd delete it :p
Do not... and i repeat... DO NOT STORYBOARD HITSOUNDS EVER!!! oh, ok :) i've been thinking are they ok or not, and now i know ^^
00:05:901 - I dont recommend you use this Kiai, also you dont need an uninherited timing section for Kiai fixed

[Hard]
try to shorten it so you have less max score i've mentioned to map the whole song on that difficulty, so i'm not gonna shorten it ;)
Also the map feels very repetitive, plus you keep repeating the same patterns over, and over, and over again it's because the song is repetitive too, i couldn't came up with another placement :p
00:15:844 (8) - Random slow slider? fixed
00:16:528 Why do i hear a clap here? couse of storyboarded hitsounds, deleted them
00:40:356 (6) - New combo yup
00:56:299 (2,3) - I'm not going to nazi your slider shapes since they are decent and your a new mapper, however overlaps like theese are a nono, shape the slider in a form so that the circle doesnt touch it okay, i'll keep that in mind
01:17:256 (1) - Shorten until 01:19:442? done, but 'til 1:19:613
02:27:842 (2,3,4,5,6) - Although i appreciate the fact that you want to do something different to avoid repetitiveness i rather you use different patterns on the chorus and keep the stream here. nah, i'll leave it in the way it actually is, the stream wouldn't follow with the song after all
02:34:013 (1) - Random circle? remove! i've put it in like that on purpose, leaving :p
02:57:328 (12) - Random slow slider? this is unintuitive. plus doesnt seem to fit the song well fixed
03:50:814 (1,2) - Swap new combo as well nah, combos are ok in way they actually are

[Normal]
00:22:358 (1) - Remove New combo ; 00:23:729 (3) - New Combo etc. combo's are ok imo
00:25:101 (1) - Could be split into 2 circles oh, that's right :p fixed
02:02:473 (3) - Looks kind of ugly, reshape it by moving the control points a bit for a smoother curve? fixed a little bit

[Easy]
This diff is too short thought so... expanded 'til 2:31

thanks for your mod :3

Leorda wrote:

Yo yo!

[Timing]
Change the BPM and Offset if the wod are bold, if not bold, no change fixed timing on my own, it's synced properly now.

[Normal]
Check AIMod instead, there is some object aren't snapped in the timeline. To *snap* it, click Timing -> Resnap all notes -> Yes done
00:57:672 (4) - Move 1 grid right and 1 grid up ; 00:58:015 (1) - Move 1 grid right and 3 grid up etc. done
00:59:729 (2,3,4) - Perhaps make a pattern like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/26563? So the pattern looks curve from 00:58:015 (1)? yup, that's better in that way :)

[Hard]
Please check AIMod, AIMod found some unsnapped notes. To *snap* it, click Timing -> Resnap all notes -> Yes done
01:16:871 (8,9,10,11,12) - Re-arrange like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/26576, This object (01:16:956 (9)) in number are hidden fixed
01:34:699 (x) - Add note here? nope, im leaving it in the way it actually is ;)
01:43:958 (7) - Move 1 grid left? So this object are alligned with 01:43:101 (4)? fixed
01:51:672 (6) - New combo? <nods>
03:01:699 (2) - Are you following rhythm, guitar or beat? If those 3 are not, remove it, or move forward to white tick or move backward to red tick fixed
04:10:271 (B) - Fill this break with spinner? uhm...no.

[Insane]
Kinda, overmapped =(
00:04:701 (4) - New combo? nah, i wont leave three circles in one combo :p
00:23:728 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Ugly pattern, try re-arrange the pattern fixed, ctrl+r rlz <grins>
00:38:128 (2) - Not good if this object are touching by HP Drain health bar doesnt have to be full all the time, come on
01:28:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Weird pattern... why? just jumps x_x

nice song, STAR thanks!

karenying wrote:

General
need a preview point they are putted in :p
Delete .osb deleted too
delete many timing section that you don't use actually i use them for different hitsounds' volume

Normal
the spacing is different in kiai time...check plz ;_; yeah, it's like that on purpose
00:03:684(2) - 1 grid down ; 00:04:712(4) - 1 grid left etc. fixed
02:31:455(x) - add break time? oh, you got me here :) added

Hard
01:34:712(x) - add a circle? someone said that before too, but i'll skip on that
02:27:684(x) - ^ i'm not following with vocals, so not. :)
03:15:170(1,2,3)- just suggestion.Make they JUMP is funny for me ...what? i'll skip on that too ^^;

Insane
00:43:627(5) - end at 00:43:884(1/4beat) like i said before, i'm not following with vocals ;)
01:55:284(6) - move to the front blue line done
02:27:684(x) - add a circle? i won't say the same thing for the third time, copypasta is boring
02:59:655(4) - no clap? actually with clap it sounds better imo :3

great job<3 thanks! :)

KuraiPettan wrote:

Random mod ~ yay!

[Normal]
00:40:370 (4) - Hide by 00:39:513 (2), flip horizontally (ctrl+H) and replace it. yeah
04:04:541 (1) - This spinner is on the same tick as 04:04:540 (4), move it 1/8 later thanks for noticing that, fixed

[Hard]
01:05:741 (8) ; 01:06:083 (11) - Spacing fixed
some new combo suggestions - i think i used few of them

[Insane]
another new combo suggestions - again, few of them were brought to live

Oh, nice map o_o :3 Star~ merci :3

James2250 wrote:

Long map is long, don't forget to post in modding queues if you haven't already, I see you on modreqs alot :P haha, that's so true :D of course i did, and still doing that. :)
Make sure the kiai time is the same on every difficulty (look at the end of Normal, then Hard and Insane) fixed
Go through and check all inherited timing sections, they don't look like they are all needed few of them weren't, that's true, but most of them are

Normal:
If this is the easiest difficulty AR -2 done
00:03:171 (1) - isn't snapped fixed o_o
01:17:227 (4) - I would just delete this note and start the spinner here (as it doesn't really suit a normal) and the others like that most of people didn't found this really unsuitable, so i'm leaving it in the way it actually is. the same with other spinner comments
02:11:055 (2,4) ; 02:19:284 (2,4) - align fixed
02:55:970 (3,4) - I would prefer if these didn't touch agreed and moved a little bit
03:16:541 (1,1) - pretty close to the end of the spinner for a Normal, change it if possible yup, just deleted it. :)

Hard:
Some notes aren't snapped, do resnap all notes (check AIMod) done
02:43:455 (3,5) - stack the endpoints better i had some problems with them before, so i just left them in the way they actually were, but fixed for now
02:57:341 (4) - new combo yup

Insane:
15 mil for a pretty easy Insane, BAT's won't like this bah, i think there's few maps that contain 4+ easy insanes with 15-16 mil, so i hope this one might be ranked too :)
Put the stack leniency the same as the other difficulties, or at least don't have it all the way to the left fixed
resnap all notes yup
00:14:485 (2,3,4,5) - redo this pattern so 4 isn't under the slider, I found it confusing when playing redo just redid this pattern, should be ok now
02:06:597 (1,3) - stack these yup

I wonder if this length is even rankable, maybe just *star* thanks!

nante wrote:

since this post is written in polish, i'm going to reply in polish aswell

[general]
usun plik *.osb i zrob full sumbit oh, znowu się wkradł? ;x wywalony

[normal]
02:06:598 (1,2,3,4,1) - na twoim miejscu bym to bardziej zaokraglil poprawione
02:25:798 (1) - zwieksz wygiecie tego slidera, zeby poprzedni note mial wiecej miejsca do tego polkola ułożyłem nieco inaczej, niż było wcześniej

[insane]
ogolnie srednio mi sie podobaja twoje comba, przyklad jakbym ja je ustawil <spoilerbox> ustawiając je nie miałem zamiaru iść z wokalem, ale mimo wszystko dojrzałem parę błędów, które poprawiłem :p
01:12:941 (3) - zwieksz wygiecie tego slidera, zeby poprzedni note mial wiecej miejsca do tego polkola mhm

i gwiazdka dzięki, rzucę okiem jutro na Twoją mapę :)