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fhana - Wonder Stella

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Nathan
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Nathan
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, October 10, 2015 at 10:13:58 AM

Artist: fhana
Title: Wonder Stella
Source: Fate/kaleid liner プリズマイリヤ ツヴァイ ヘルツ！
Tags: Prisma☆Illya 2wei Herz! Illya Prisma Herz towana yuxugi waga kevin mitsunaga junichi sato
BPM: 193
Filesize: 8330kb
Play Time: 05:02
Difficulties Available:
  1. Marvel (6.01 stars, 1305 notes)
Download: fhana - Wonder Stella
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Contributors (mods/testplays/opinions)
pishifat #1
monstrata #2
Rizia
Mishima Yurara
hvick225
RLC
Azer
Nara
Chloe Lemaire
Shina Kokomi
Xilver
iyasine
captin1
Horo
Toke
toybot
Enjoy
Japanese Lyrics
命儚い恋せよ少女よ
今衝撃的な体験が紡ぐたった一つの絆


青い衝動に駆られて走る私達
誰も知らない想いを共に秘めて

戸惑いを捨てて進み出せば
新しい強さの定義を手にしたんだ
一人じゃないきっと星座もつかめる

命儚い恋せよ少女よ
今衝撃的な体験が紡ぐたった一つ絆
気付いているあなたの想いに もう何一つ言わなくていい
ああ心そっと触れた手に手を重ねた熱情
一つに世界を越える

ねえ聴こえる？ 高鳴る鼓動
まるで幼き日のような
分かっている たった一つ冴えた方法
あなたも勘付いてる: 一筋の光

冒険はいつも想像を超え 新しいを出会いをもたらす
あなたとなら広い空にきっと航路を描ける

この世の果てに繋がる少女よ
今情熱的な誘惑と時に頬を伝う涙
気付いている私達ならば きっと何処へだって飛べるさ
ああ心そっと触れる もう何もかも手に取る様に浮かべるの

命の儚さまだ知らぬ少女
ずっと確かな自分のまま 花は咲き誇れると信じた
繋がっていたよ世界のどこかに
そうまだ見ぬ星座を目指し 駆け出したあの日

命儚い恋せよ少女よ
今情熱的な衝動が 開くたった一つ扉
予感してるあなたの存在をもう何一つ言わなくていい
ああ心そっと触れた手に手を重ねる熱量の高鳴り
魔法に変わる

メーデー誰か今
メーデー叫ぶ声
そう冒険の地図を見つけた
English Lyrics
Young girl, live a love immeasurable by life itself;
This single bond will spin a series of sensational experience.

Urged on by a pale impulse, we run onward,
Hiding together an emotion yet unknown to the world.

Once we cast away our hesitation and started moving forward,
We acquired a new definition of “strength”!
We’re not alone… surely we could even grasp the stars!

Young girl, live a love immeasurable by life itself;
This single bond will spin a series of sensational experience.
I’ve already realized what you’re feeling – you don’t have to say a thing!
Ahh, this warmth… of my hand covering the hand that touched my heart,
Will go beyond the world as one.

Hey, can you hear it? That rising heart beat,
Is just like when we were young.
I’m know the one clear way;
I’m sure you know it too: that single ray of light.

Adventures always go beyond the imagination, bringing about new encounters;
If I’m with you, I’m sure we can draw our own course!

Young girl, you’ll connect with the ends of the Earth;
This moment holds passionate temptation, along with the occasional tear down your cheek.
I’m realizing that, with all of us together, we could fly to anywhere we please –
Ahh, you gently touch my heart, and everything in the world seems to float up within reach!

That young girl, still unbeknownst to the emptiness of life,
Always stayed sure of herself, believe that her flower would bloom in glory.
She was connected, from somewhere in the world,
To that never-before-seen constellation we sought after that day!

Young girl, live a love immeasurable by life itself;
In this moment, your passionate impulse will open the one and only door.
I’m predicting your existence – you don’t have to say a thing!
Ahh, this throbbing warmth… of my hand covering the hand that touched my heart,
Will become a magic spell!

Mayday! Someone, quickly!
Mayday! Says a shouting voice.
That’s right: someone’s found a map to an adventure!
Last edited by Nathan , edited 44 times in total.
hvick225
352 posts
Joined November 2008
hvick225
fhana =w=
Sing
354 posts
Joined December 2013
Sing

hvick225 wrote:

fhana =w=
sukinathan =w=
pishifat
osu! Paragon
3,802 posts
Joined August 2013
pishifat
hihi!~
this is my first time criticizing such a good map so be gentle senpai >.<
oh! also, please reply to my mod after applying it and then suck on my penis thoroughly so i can get better at modding! thanks!~

  1. 03:41:618 (3,4) - 03:54:986 (1,2) - you know what would sound better 03:46:592 (3,4,5) - that owuld sound better. especailly for the first one at least since 3/4 slider on a triple is gross, second one is kinda ew but less ew
  2. 03:36:644 (1,2,3) - would be cool to lead into the faster sv with slight increases on each of these. like .6 on 1, .65 2, .7 3, and .75 on 03:37:577 (1) - u get it kckckcksdck
  3. 03:06:799 (2) - tbh 2 circles > since completely different sounds that are both mega emphasizewd
  4. 02:12:395 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - hahaha handdrawn streams are so fun to make they are so pretty :) :) (excluding this one it's shit)
  5. 01:29:960 - whats with the ignoring of the loud af pianoxxxxxxxx you mapped it at 01:34:934 (2) - 01:39:908 (3) - 01:44:882 (3) - so converting it to a triple like the first two would be sense. the 1/1 gap would fit between smoewhere else consistency figure it out
  6. 01:28:250 (1,2) - this is super opinionated but two parallel curved sliders looks kinda gross. angling either by +-15 degrees looks better somehow and i dont know why
  7. 01:22:343 (3,4) - so lame that the 1/4 here is ignored. could even keep the symmetry and include it like t49gxgbdf. oh i am just now seeing it repeats later ugh
  8. 00:40:064 (3) - sounds better with emphasis on that tailred tick since vocal and kick stuff
o7
Akiyama Mizuki
2,710 posts
Joined March 2009
Akiyama Mizuki
fhana voice imo is pure 53x which is adorable <3
Nathan
Beatmap Nominator
2,144 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Nathan

pishifat wrote:

hihi!~
this is my first time criticizing such a good map so be gentle senpai >.<
oh! also, please reply to my mod after applying it and then suck on my penis thoroughly so i can get better at modding! thanks!~

  1. 03:41:618 (3,4) - 03:54:986 (1,2) - you know what would sound better 03:46:592 (3,4,5) - that owuld sound better. especailly for the first one at least since 3/4 slider on a triple is gross, second one is kinda ew but less ew i am deaf
  2. 03:36:644 (1,2,3) - would be cool to lead into the faster sv with slight increases on each of these. like .6 on 1, .65 2, .7 3, and .75 on 03:37:577 (1) - u get it kckckcksdck sik
  3. 03:06:799 (2) - tbh 2 circles > since completely different sounds that are both mega emphasizewd yes
  4. 02:12:395 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - hahaha handdrawn streams are so fun to make they are so pretty :) :) (excluding this one it's shit) same
  5. 01:29:960 - whats with the ignoring of the loud af pianoxxxxxxxx you mapped it at 01:34:934 (2) - 01:39:908 (3) - 01:44:882 (3) - so converting it to a triple like the first two would be sense. the 1/1 gap would fit between smoewhere else consistency figure it out yes
  6. 01:28:250 (1,2) - this is super opinionated but two parallel curved sliders looks kinda gross. angling either by +-15 degrees looks better somehow and i dont know why did something else
  7. 01:22:343 (3,4) - so lame that the 1/4 here is ignored. could even keep the symmetry and include it like t49gxgbdf. oh i am just now seeing it repeats later ugh im deaf
  8. 00:40:064 (3) - sounds better with emphasis on that tailred tick since vocal and kick stuff yes
o7
thankssss =w=
Starfy
1,046 posts
Joined November 2012
Starfy
Len
2,812 posts
Joined June 2012
Len

hvick225 wrote:

fhana =w=
Konomi_old_1
Konomi_old_1
fhana is love, fhana is life. fhana <3
Last edited by Konomi_old_1 , edited 1 time in total.
zyoi
631 posts
Joined May 2014
zyoi
From your req ♥
[Marvel]
00:03:691 (1) - ctrl+J?
00:10:374 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3765854
00:37:266 (1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3765804
01:06:488 (4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3765812
02:13:950 (6) - ctrl+G
02:15:038 (4,5) - ^
02:23:898 (5) - ctrl+J
02:52:033 (1,2,3) - ctrl+G
02:52:343 (4,5) - ^
04:40:374 (4,5) - ^

how to mod(sad)
Rapthorn
234 posts
Joined October 2014
Rapthorn
o wow
Nathan
Beatmap Nominator
2,144 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Nathan

Enjoy wrote:

From your req ♥
[Marvel]
00:03:691 (1) - ctrl+J? ok why not
00:10:374 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3765854 i don't want a wide angle from the triplet to 4, i need it to play more snappy
00:37:266 (1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3765804 the second pair of 1/2 sliders were supposed to be lower spacing since piano pitch decreases there
01:06:488 (4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3765812 i prefer current more aesthetically
02:13:950 (6) - ctrl+G ctrl g with what o.o
02:15:038 (4,5) - ^ i wanted a sharp angle here for the crash on the next slider, don't want it to be too circular or it feels underwhelming
02:23:898 (5) - ctrl+J done
02:52:033 (1,2,3) - ctrl+G done
02:52:343 (4,5) - ^ I don't want such a wide angle going into a flow break, it'll be difficult to snap on and change direction
04:40:374 (4,5) - ^ ok

how to mod(sad)
thank you :)
iyasine
1,135 posts
Joined January 2012
iyasine
hi~ nathan :D from pm.

[Marvel]
  1. 00:21:255 - add hitsound ( arrange ) ? , whistle ( bass flow ) or clap ( 00:23:742 - pattern ) :3
  2. 00:22:654 - add whistle ? bass durm flow.
  3. 00:34:779 - ^
  4. 02:29:494 - remove sampleset drum ?
  5. 02:33:924 - hmm...Probably, this is a overmap :P try this rhythm
    ①
    ②
    ③
  6. 00:49:468 - ↑↑rhythm pattern↑↑
  7. 03:57:473 - finish!

GO :D
toybot
1,050 posts
Joined June 2013
toybot
you really use a lot of acute angles in like every section ;;, but i'll try not to touch that unless it really sucks

  1. 00:14:260 (3) - stack tail with 00:15:193 (5) -
  2. 00:14:571 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i always cry whenever you do imperfect polygons like this
  3. 00:37:266 (1,2) - these look like they should ctrl+g'd individually, wasnt expecting it to flow like this
  4. 00:49:235 (2,3,4,5,6) - uh don't know what you were thinking here, stream doesn't really fit a slow section lol; goes for 02:33:691 (2,3,4,5,6) - too
  5. 01:24:364 (1) - you could do 3/4 slider + circle for emphasizing 01:24:675 -
  6. 01:26:851 (4,1) - personally to me this jump doesn't really need to be so op since it calms down and isnt the climax of the song
  7. 02:23:742 (4) - can you move this up a bit to make it look better with (5) plz
  8. 02:52:033 (3,4,5) - eh this kinda sucks to play, i'd ctrl+g 02:52:343 (4,5,6) - so you don't get that robotic-feeling movement from (3) to (4)
  9. 03:00:271 (1) - 03:02:758 (1) - man you skip what could be fun jump patterns with these )':
  10. 03:27:628 (1) - 03:32:602 (1) - 03:57:473 (1) - 04:04:934 (1) - add me to tags for collabthx xd tbh though i think you should change the first slider mentioned to a cleaner shape to fit with how fluid the song is
  11. 03:36:178 (3) - stack this with (4)? (3) is a stronger sound so it feels like it should be emphasized more
  12. 03:37:266 (1) - move to the left a bit past 03:36:644 (1) - so the pattern is expanding rather than making a regular 'z' movement
  13. 04:29:183 (4,5) - yeah i'd ctrl+g these individually as well
  14. 05:02:136 (1) - why can't you just make this perfectly vertical ;A; and also whistle on the last beat instead of first beat for more of a ringing effect?

yeah p nice gj
Nathan
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Topic Starter
Nathan

iyasine wrote:

hi~ nathan :D from pm.

Marvel
  1. 00:21:255 - add hitsound ( arrange ) ? , whistle ( bass flow ) or clap ( 00:23:742 - pattern ) :3
  2. 00:22:654 - add whistle ? bass durm flow.
  3. 00:34:779 - ^
  4. 02:29:494 - remove sampleset drum ?
  5. 02:33:924 - hmm...Probably, this is a overmap :P try this rhythm
    ①
    ②
    ③
  6. 00:49:468 - ↑↑rhythm pattern↑↑
  7. 03:57:473 - finish!

GO :D did everything

toybot wrote:

you really use a lot of acute angles in like every section ;;, but i'll try not to touch that unless it really sucks yeah i just dislike wide angles =w=

  1. 00:14:260 (3) - stack tail with 00:15:193 (5) - asdf
  2. 00:14:571 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i always cry whenever you do imperfect polygons like this
  3. 00:37:266 (1,2) - these look like they should ctrl+g'd individually, wasnt expecting it to flow like this ok done
  4. 00:49:235 (2,3,4,5,6) - uh don't know what you were thinking here, stream doesn't really fit a slow section lol; goes for 02:33:691 (2,3,4,5,6) - too changed to triplets from iyasine's mod
  5. 01:24:364 (1) - you could do 3/4 slider + circle for emphasizing 01:24:675 - ok why not
  6. 01:26:851 (4,1) - personally to me this jump doesn't really need to be so op since it calms down and isnt the climax of the song ok i nerfed it a bit
  7. 02:23:742 (4) - can you move this up a bit to make it look better with (5) plz well I wanted equal distance with 3 and 2 so I just rotated 5 a bit
  8. 02:52:033 (3,4,5) - eh this kinda sucks to play, i'd ctrl+g 02:52:343 (4,5,6) - so you don't get that robotic-feeling movement from (3) to (4) welp yeah that's how it was originally was
  9. 03:00:271 (1) - 03:02:758 (1) - man you skip what could be fun jump patterns with these )':
  10. 03:27:628 (1) - 03:32:602 (1) - 03:57:473 (1) - 04:04:934 (1) - add me to tags for collabthx xd tbh though i think you should change the first slider mentioned to a cleaner shape to fit with how fluid the song is idk i like the shapppeeeee
  11. 03:36:178 (3) - stack this with (4)? (3) is a stronger sound so it feels like it should be emphasized more
  12. 03:37:266 (1) - move to the left a bit past 03:36:644 (1) - so the pattern is expanding rather than making a regular 'z' movement done
  13. 04:29:183 (4,5) - yeah i'd ctrl+g these individually as well yeah
  14. 05:02:136 (1) - why can't you just make this perfectly vertical ;A; and also whistle on the last beat instead of first beat for more of a ringing effect? asdf

yeah p nice gj
thanks for the modsssss
VINXIS
Featured Artist
3,161 posts
Joined April 2014
VINXIS
I helped w. mp3 editing and piano shit i can tell ppl wot i did specifically if they wnat (even tho it was like 2 things)

ill mod after stargzr or smth i guess
Sing
354 posts
Joined December 2013
Sing

Mishima Yurara wrote:

I helped w. mp3 editing and piano shit i can tell ppl wot i did specifically if they wnat (even tho it was like 2 things)

ill mod after stargzr or smth i guess
last piano note sounds kinda weird by itself, u should like make the noise right before it abit longer so theresn ot liek an awkward blank space or msth but thats just me
Nathan
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Nathan

Sing wrote:

Mishima Yurara wrote:

I helped w. mp3 editing and piano shit i can tell ppl wot i did specifically if they wnat (even tho it was like 2 things)

ill mod after stargzr or smth i guess
last piano note sounds kinda weird by itself, u should like make the noise right before it abit longer so theresn ot liek an awkward blank space or msth but thats just me
sounds fitting for me
Rizia
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Joined January 2012
Rizia
overall it's very good
just one thing
04:47:525 (2,3) - ctrl+g feel better
no kd plz
Nathan
Beatmap Nominator
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Nathan

Rizia wrote:

overall it's very good
just one thing
04:47:525 (2,3) - ctrl+g feel better
no kd plz
done
tyyyyyyyy
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