1. Draw's Hard - 4Key (2,88 stars, 685 notes)
2. Easy - 4Key (1,37 stars, 338 notes)
3. Maximum - 4Key (3,62 stars, 957 notes)
4. Normal - 4Key (1,87 stars, 476 notes)

NlHIL wrote:

[Kids]
00:07:967 - ad(ok)d
00:29:411 (29411|2) - remove (ok)
00:34:059 - add (ok)
00:46:735 - add (ok)
00:57:087 - 00:59:622 - 01:00:467 and same in last kiai- add? (No)
01:01:101 - add (ok)
01:04:798 (64798|2,64851|2) - 'w' (ah i overmapped this ==", confirmed )
01:05:749 - add (No)
01:09:129 - add (No)

Raediaufar wrote:

[Kids]

click

playabililty > everything

00:02:686 (2686|3) – move ke 2

00:07:545 (7545|2,7545|1) – remove 2

00:07:439 (7439|3,7439|1,7439|0) – remove 1

00:07:650 (7650|3,7650|1) – add 1

00:07:862 (7862|0,7862|1,7862|2) – jadiin double 34

00:07:967 (7967|2) - ^

00:08:707 (8707|2,8707|1) – jadiin double 12

00:08:918 (8918|2,8918|1,8918|0) – jadiin triplet 124

00:10:186 (10186|3,10186|1) – add note di 1

00:10:397 (10397|2,10397|1) – 34

00:10:502 (10502|3,10502|2) – 12

00:10:608 (10608|2,10608|1,10608|0) – 134

00:11:242 (11242|0,11242|2) – 12

00:11:348 (11348|2,11348|1) – 34

00:11:453 (11453|0,11453|2,11453|3) – 124

00:12:087 (12087|2,12087|1) – 12

00:12:298 (12298|1,12298|0) – jadiin triplet 124

00:13:143 (13143|2,13143|1) - ^

00:14:094 (14094|2,14094|1) – 12

00:14:200 (14200|2,14200|0) – 34

00:14:411 (14411|3,14411|2,14411|1) – 124

00:14:622 (14622|3,14622|1,14622|0) – jadiin double 34

00:14:728 (14728|1,14728|2) – 12

00:14:833 (14833|3,14833|1) – triplet 124

00:16:312 (16312|2) – double 12

00:16:418 (16418|3,16418|1) – double 34

00:16:524 (16524|2,16524|0) – triplet 124

00:17:157 (17157|0,17157|3) – 12

00:17:263 (17263|2,17263|1) – 34

00:17:369 (17369|0,17369|3,17369|2) – 124

00:18:002 (18002|2,18002|0) – 12

00:18:002 (18002|1,18108|2,18108|1) – 34

00:18:214 (18214|0,18214|3,18214|2) – 124

00:18:953 (18953|2,18953|1) – 12

00:19:693 (19693|0,19693|2) – 12

00:19:798 (19798|3,19798|1) – 34

00:19:904 (19904|0,19904|2) – 124

00:20:855 (20855|2,20855|1) – 12

00:27:509 (27509|1,27509|0) - 34

00:27:721 (27721|3,27721|2,27721|1) – 134

00:32:686 (32686|3,32686|2) – 12

00:32:791 (32791|2,32791|1,32791|0) – 134

00:33:214 (33214|2) – move ke 1

00:33:531 (33531|1,33531|3) – 12

00:33:636 (33636|3,33636|0,33742|2,33742|1,33848|0,33953|2,33953|1) – bikin pattern 34 12 34 12

00:34:904 (34904|2,34904|0) – 12

00:35:009 (35009|1,35009|2) – 34

00:35:115 (35115|0,35115|3,35115|2) – bikin 124

00:36:700 (36700|2,36700|1) – 12

00:37:017 (37017|2,37017|1) – 12

00:37:228 (37228|1,37228|0,37228|2) – 124

00:37:439 (37439|2) – buat double 34

00:37:545 (37545|3,37545|1) – 12

00:37:650 (37650|2,37650|0) – triplet 134

00:37:862 (37862|3,37862|2) – 12

00:38:284 (38284|2,38284|1) – 12

00:38:390 (38390|2,38390|0) – 34

00:38:495 (38495|3,38495|2,38495|1) – 124

00:39:235 (39235|2,39235|1) – 12

00:39:552 (39552|2,39552|1) – 12

00:40:186 (40186|2,40186|1) – 12

00:45:890 (45890|2,45890|1) – buat triplet

00:46:735 (46735|3,46735|2) – triplet 124

00:49:376 (49376|0,49376|2) – remove 3

00:50:221 (50221|2,50221|1) – remove 3

00:51:911 (51911|1,51911|2) – remove 3

00:53:601 (53601|0,53601|2) – remove 3

00:54:552 (54552|2,54552|1) – 12

00:54:763 (54763|0,54763|1,54763|2) – 124

00:55:186 (55186|2,55186|1) – 12

00:55:397 (55397|0,55397|1,55397|2) – 124

00:57:721 (57721|1,57721|2) – 12

00:57:932 (57932|0,57932|1,57932|2) – 124

01:00:256 (60256|0,60256|2) – 12

01:00:362 (60362|2,60362|1) – 34

01:00:467 (60467|3,60467|2) – 124

01:03:002 (63002|0,63002|2,63002|3) – remove 3

01:04:851 – add note (1/8)

01:04:904 (64904|0,64904|1,64904|3) – 123

01:11:242 (71242|3,71242|0,71348|2,71348|1,71453|3,71453|0,71559|2,71559|1) – bikin pattern 12 34 12 34

01:11:664 (71664|3,71664|0,71664|2) -124

01:13:249 (73249|2,73249|1) – 12

01:15:573 (75573|0,75573|3) – remove 4

01:15:679 (75679|3,75679|1) – add 3

01:16:418 (76418|3,76418|1) – remove 2

01:16:524 (76524|0,76524|2) – add 2

01:17:157 (77157|2,77157|1) – 12

01:17:369 (77369|0,77369|1,77369|2) – 124

01:18:848 (78848|0,78848|3) – 34

01:18:953 (78953|1,78953|2) – 12

01:19:693 (79693|2,79693|1) – 12

01:19:904 (79904|0,79904|1,79904|2) – 124

01:21:594 (81594|2,81594|1) – 12

01:21:805 (81805|0,81805|1,81805|2) – 124

01:22:228 (82228|1,82228|2) – 12

01:22:333 (82333|2,82333|0) – 34

01:22:439 (82439|1,82439|2,82439|3) – 124

01:23:073 (83073|0,83073|2) – 12

01:23:179 (83179|1,83179|3) – 34

01:23:284 (83284|0,83284|2) – 124

01:24:024 (84024|0,84024|2) – 12

01:24:129 (84129|3,84129|2,84129|1) – 134

01:24:763 (84763|2,84763|0,84869|3,84869|1,84974|0,84974|2,85080|3,85080|2) – bikin pattern 12 34 12 34

01:25:186 (85186|0,85186|1,85186|2) - 124

if you can take the idea of my mod above you know what I mean

Eternalie wrote:

Nyaho
incoming short mod

desu

[Child]
00:22:439 - add one more note for snare
or 00:22:650 - add one more note for kick impact ^ (I suggest snare one tho)
00:25:819 - same suggestion
^you can ignore this if you want i think i ignore that, cuz if i place 2 note not good for nubie player, just keep

00:42:509 (42509|2) - move to another collumn , not same sound as next note , I suggest to move in 4th collumn
00:44:200 (44200|2) - this note should be here : 00:44:094 - (if you follow guitar i'm sure at 100% it'ss here)
00:44:411 - add a note for guitar sound
01:04:270 (64270|0) - i'm not sure if there is a sound here
01:05:538 (65538|2) - move to another collumn not same sounds as previous note
01:13:355 - you can add another note if you want -it's not too much I think-
01:28:566 - you could make LNs for the ending sound to emphazise the lenght of the sound , up to you all accept

Good Luck~

Pharos21 wrote:

mark

ps: yakin cuman 2?

Lina Sintyadewi wrote:

Pharos21 wrote:

mark

ps: yakin cuman 2?

hmm kurang 1 sih, bikin insane bikin pusing pala barbieh

Pharos21 wrote:

hmm.. naming mu salah mbak.. kalo mau style kek gitu. atleast kasi tambahan di velakang nya kek gini

diff name "Hard"

atau

diff name [hard]

Izect Ztenz wrote:

Hi
NM Req's Sorry kelamaan ampe kelupaan,soalnya beberapa hari yg lalu gw kena demam parah

|0|1|2|3|

[Kids (HD)]00:03:425 (3425|3,3848|3) - Move to |2|
00:19:270 (19270|2) - . . . . . . ._. Move to |1|
00:32:580 (32580|2) - Pindahin ke |1|
00:32:686 (32686|1) - Move to |2|
00:32:791 (32791|2) - Move to |1|. Dari 00:32:580 (32580|2) - sampai sini tujuannya agar bunyinya sama dgn note-nya
00:42:932 (42932|2,42932|1,43249|1,43249|2,43566|1,43566|2) - Move to |0| |1|

sherrysina wrote:

hi mba lina, mod req by chat in game.
just pattern suggestion, sorry.. ;w;

4k 1234

mod inside

[Normal]
00:01:735 (1735|3,1946|2,2157|0) - move to 1-2-4
00:04:059 (4059|1,5326|0) - swap collumn?
00:10:608 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3844410
00:13:777 (13777|2) - move to 1
00:18:425 (18425|2) - move to 1. col 1 seems empty
00:20:326 (20326|2,20960|1) - geser 1 kolom ke kanan
if you applied mod above, 00:21:383 (21383|2) - move to 2
00:29:411 (29411|2) - move to 2 for density. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3844423 look, collumn 3 seems crowd
00:31:524 (31524|3,31946|2) - move to 1-4
00:39:129 (39129|2) - move to 1 for density
00:51:383 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3844434
01:19:270 (79270|2) - move to 1 for density and balance

[Hard]
aww too many hammer-jacks :c
00:03:425 (3425|2) - move to 4
patterns like these 00:22:545 (22545|2,22545|3,22650|0,22650|1) - better make it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3844448 for a better flow

Kruzon wrote:

reduce the stars gap between your difficulties, distance shouldn't be more than 1.5 stars

Lenfried- wrote:

"THE ORAL CIGARETTES"
lolwut

also, that diff gap is huge. Keep that and you'll have issues getting this ranked.

Hard feedback: The diff is just really plain. Can't argue with the note usage. It all fits and all but meh. Sorry :/

HD sorta mod. Mostly focusing on consistencies

Your triple usage is for every red line is random. You can use some variety but do it in a way that players can expect when the next triple comes.
In a full measure lets say, the first measure lacks a triple which is this one 00:08:495 (The third beat) then at the next measure there are no triples here 00:09:763 (the second beat) third measure is all mapped with triples. The fourth measure is excusable. The next set of measures do not show the same. So do check the triple consistency throughout the map.

00:07:862 - is double jacked, so move this to 2 00:10:608 (10608|2) -
00:08:707 (8707|1,8707|0,8812|3,8812|2,8918|0,8918|1,8918|3) - if applied, ctrl H this, also this 00:09:129 (9129|2,9340|1) -
00:12:087 (12087|1,12193|3) - switch columns
00:12:721 - should be a triple
00:13:143 - should be a double and look like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3853360

Patterns are generally smooth and all so consistency should be the focus to improve this map further.

DrawdeX wrote:

hi lina
sorry for the delay :v
requested mod via pm ~

4K = |1|2|3|4|

Everything modded

[Child (Normal)]
Note: I'll focus on hand balances, for now
• 00:02:369 (2369|2) - Move to 2
• 00:08:073 (8073|2) - ^
• 00:09:552 (9552|2) - Move to 2, then 00:09:763 (9763|1) - Move to 4
• 00:12:298 (12298|1) - Move to 4, then 00:12:087 (12087|2) - Move to 2
• 00:13:355 (13355|2,13566|3) - Ctrl+J
• 00:14:200 (14200|1,14411|2) - Ctrl+H
• 00:15:045 (15045|2,15256|3) - Ctrl+J
• 00:16:312 (16312|2,16524|1) - Move one space to the left
• 00:16:946 (16946|2) - Move to 4
• 00:19:059 (19059|2) - ^
• 00:20:960 (20960|2) - Move to 2
• 00:21:383 (21383|1) - Move to 4
• 00:27:721 (27721|2) - Move to 2
• 00:34:059 (34059|3) - Remove, not too loud
• 00:36:171 (36171|2) - Move to 4, then 00:36:383 (36383|3) - Move to 2
• 00:36:805 (36805|2) - Move to 2
• 00:37:439 (37439|2) - Move to 1
• 00:38:707 (38707|2,38918|3) - Ctrl+J
• 00:39:340 (39340|0) - Move to 2
• 00:39:552 (39552|2) - Move to 4, then 00:39:974 (39974|3) - Move to 2
• 00:48:002 - Remove one note, 3 notes are not recommended on Normal diff
• There are too many notes that needs balance for the hands :v

[Kids (Hard)]
• 00:07:545 (7545|2) - Remove, no sound
• 00:07:862 (7862|3,7862|2) - Move two spaces to the left, to balance with the incoming patterns
• 00:09:129 - Add a note, for the kick sound, also to balance with the previous and incoming patterns
• 00:09:763 - Add a note, to balance with the patterns
• 00:11:031 - Remove one note, not too loud, since you used two notes on kick sounds
• 00:13:566 - ^
• 00:15:573 - Add a note, for the kick sound
• 00:16:101 - Remove one note, same issue on 00:11:031 -
• 00:17:791 - ^
• 00:18:636 - ^
• 00:19:481 - ^
• 00:23:495 - Add a note, for the kick sound
• 00:25:608 - Add a note, since you made 00:24:763 - 3 notes, for the snare drum
• 00:31:524 - ^
• 00:35:326 - Add a note, for the kick sound
• 00:57:087 - ^, for the snare drum
• 00:59:622 - ^, ^
• 01:18:214 - ^, ^
• 01:20:749 - ^, ^
• 01:24:552 - ^, ^

That's all ~
I'll post another one for the GD later on
Good luck