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Topic Starter
Frim4503
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 12 Mei 2023 at 23:27:28

Artist: u's
Title: Natsuiro Egao de 1, 2, Jump! Funkot Remix
Source: ラブライブ!School idol project
Tags: pocotan Summer Wing 2013 muse Love Live! スクールアイドルプロジェクト summer smiles marathon electronic pop anime video game Japanese
BPM: 180
Filesize: 10120kb
Play Time: 06:13
Difficulties Available:
  1. The Color of Summer - 5Key (4,47 stars, 4669 notes)
Download: u's - Natsuiro Egao de 1, 2, Jump! Funkot Remix
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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im back again after long hiatus (cuz my pc broke)
and now i will rank this map..
plz re-download again cuz the metadata and background change
pocotan - Summer Wing 2013 Full Version 5k Mapset
The color of summer by me 100% Hitsounded

IM GONNA RANK THIS FOR SURE

Mod Count : 18 |||||||||||||||||
Modder :
Dellvangel
Hestia-
Taiwan_CDZ
ExKagii-
DixonBlackwing
Baim
Kivicat
MEGAtive
Rivals_7
AlisceaSparku
Xenophilius
Davin Fortune
Satoshi Kazuki
Kruzon
Takane6
BilliumMoto
-BANGKE-
Asherz007
Dellvangel
As requsted via chat-in-game, sorry for delay ..

Click here
1|2|3|4|5

[Dangdutan Biar Greget]
* 00:07:644 (7644|2,7978|1) - swap the col, more balance imo.
* 00:17:978 (17978|2) - move to col 2? for balance.
* 00:46:811 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3807733, i see you use something like this at 00:44:644 - for pattern variation.
* 00:48:144 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3807737, since you use 00:47:478 (47478|4,47561|2,47644|3,47644|1) - for variation and balance too.
* 02:18:311 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3807746 for balance, easier for play, and better flow too imo.
* 02:47:811 (167811|1,167978|0) - swap the col, easier for play imo.
* 04:09:478 (249478|1) - move to 4? easier for play imo.
* 04:30:144 (270144|3,270311|4,270478|3) - swap the col, 4 to 5, 5 to 4 for easier play.
* 04:36:978 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3807776 .
* 05:07:644 (307644|0,307728|1,307811|0,307894|1,307978|0) - swap the col, easier for play imo.
* 05:30:478 (330478|4,330644|0) - move to 2 and 4? easier for play.
* 05:52:144 - really? blank pattern after this? greget :v

nice song! rank this pls >w<
Topic Starter
Frim4503
all applied
dan buat yg terakhir, makanya baca creator wordnya


Surono
si kucig kucig ho taheee *anjeg ndandoet.,s
Dellvangel

Frim4503 wrote:

all applied
dan buat yg terakhir, makanya baca creator wordnya
lel, ane ga baca, sorry owo
Hestia-
hihi Frim~

[General]
The bg looks squashed out of proportion.
The original is 1400x1145 by Takazi Hayato: Here is 1366x768 version with top and bottom cropped: Here is 1024x768 version with top and bottom cropped slightly: or use another bg

[Greget]
00:09:686 (9686|3,9769|1) - Remove
06:01:686 (361686|3,361769|1) - Remove
00:21:478 (21478|3) - Remove?
00:21:144 (21144|0,21144|2,21186|4,21228|3,21269|2,21311|1,21353|0,21394|3,21436|2,21478|1,21478|4,21478|3) - Change this
00:52:894 (52894|2,52978|3,52978|1,53061|2,53144|1,53144|3,53228|2) - Change?
00:30:894 - 01:13:561 - 01:19:728 - 01:20:228 - 01:44:228 - 02:03:228 - 02:17:561 - 02:23:228 - 02:48:228 - 03:49:061 - 04:13:561 - 04:36:228 - 04:45:894 - 05:08:228 - 05:49:478 - 06:10:811 - Map more fast drums?
01:04:811 (64811|4) - Remove
01:06:144 (66144|0) - Remove
01:07:478 (67478|1) - Remove
01:10:144 (70144|1) - Remove
01:11:478 (71478|2) - Remove
01:15:478 (75478|1) - Remove
01:16:811 (76811|1) - Remove
01:18:144 (78144|1) - Remove
01:56:228 - Add?
02:19:478 (139478|0) - Remove
03:40:811 (220811|0) - Remove
03:44:811 (224811|0) - Remove
03:46:144 (226144|0) - Remove
03:59:478 (239478|0) - Remove
04:06:144 (246144|1) - Remove
04:27:478 (267478|2) - Remove
Also for the places with LNs remove all the chords / triple notes, LNs count as button presses too so it makes it too dense

nico nico nii
DJ Profetti
hello frim, m4m from queue

pattern suggest
  1. 00:00:145 try this pattern
    http://i.imgur.com/HxehAGU.jpg?1
    and 00:01:478 repeat this pattern again

    00:02:811 (2811|3) - move to 5
    00:02:811 (2811|2) - move to 2
  2. 00:02:811~00:04:144 ctrl+c this part and
    00:04:144~00:05:478 ctrl+v here, it is more fun that if you repeat twice for beginning
  3. 00:06:811 (6811|4,6811|2,6978|1,7144|3,7144|4,7311|0,7311|2,7478|3,7644|1,7644|0,7811|4,7811|3,7978|2) -
    ctrl+c this and ctrl+v in 00:05:478~00:06:811
    then 00:06:644 (6644|2) - move to 1
  4. 00:09:478 http://i.imgur.com/ewFBPDP.jpg?1
    and you can 00:09:894 (9894|3,9978|2,9978|1,10061|3) - ctrl+h this if you want

    00:18:144 (18144|3,18311|2) - move to left 1 column

    00:21:478 (21478|3) - move to 1

    00:26:644 (26644|3,26811|2,26811|1) - ctrl+h

    00:40:311 (40311|2,40478|4,40478|1,40644|3,40644|0,40811|2,40978|0,40978|3,41144|1,41144|4,41311|2,41478|3,41478|0,41644|2,41728|1) - ctrl+h

    00:46:811 http://i.imgur.com/iFb5TQA.jpg?1

    00:52:811 http://i.imgur.com/zsLwe7V.jpg?1

    01:03:311 (63311|3) - move to 1

    01:03:811 http://i.imgur.com/uKCKYGJ.jpg

    01:04:144 http://i.imgur.com/SSMWv8R.jpg?1

    01:04:978 http://i.imgur.com/SAyNhMB.jpg?1

    01:46:478 (106478|4,106478|0) - remove

    02:07:644 http://i.imgur.com/s8l3a26.jpg?1

    02:53:478 http://i.imgur.com/EQ9ARFb.jpg?1

    03:01:478 http://i.imgur.com/1MYHlRa.jpg?1

    03:22:811 (202811|2) - move to 4 and 03:22:978 (202978|3) - move to 2

    03:30:811 http://i.imgur.com/q6PUnRc.jpg?1

    04:05:144 (245144|4) - move to 2

    04:14:478 (254478|2) - move to 3

    05:09:144 (309144|4,309144|1) - remove

good luck :D

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/361271
here's my map
Topic Starter
Frim4503
i figure out from both of your mod
but i don't understand about remove things, fast drums, and copy-paste things. other fix
thank you for your mod

kagiii
sorry for LAMA , uts soal ny :v

Mod
[Dangdutz]
01:14:311 - add note ? agak keras
01:18:311 (78311|3) - move ke 3 ? balance
02:11:478 (131478|3) - move ke 2
02:49:894 - 02:50:061 - 02:50:228 - add note ? kek ny ada suara
03:28:144 (208144|4) - move ke 1 biar balance ?
05:08:311 (308311|3,308311|4,308478|3,308478|4) - geser 1 kolom ke kanan biar gak berat di kiri

kek ny sgini aja yg ketemu xD , gud lak ~
Topic Starter
Frim4503
apply smua kecuali yg add note


Maxus
Hi Frim :D
M4M here..


Dangdutan Biar Greget
01:04:978 - if you follow the sound for the LN, the LN should stop at 01:05:311 -
01:07:811 (67811|2) - klo pindah ke column 4 gimana? kykny spasinya trlalu intense o.o
01:19:978 - 01:20:144 - this sound has the double sound that's similar to 05:06:644 - 05:06:811 - imo.
01:21:978 - shorten the LN until 01:22:228 - , and add LN at 01:22:311 - until 01:22:561 - ? it's a double sound LN that's similar to LN jack that you use at 02:23:311 (143311|3,143644|3) -
03:58:644 - the LN is until 03:58:811 - ?
04:04:144 (244144|3) - The LN starts at 04:03:978 -
04:14:311 - 04:15:478 - Kalo begini gimana? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3829520 kykny LN nya agk trlalu right hand di daerah skitar situ.
04:59:311 - the LN until 04:59:478 - ?
05:03:978 - 05:04:144 - this sound has the double sound that's similar to 05:06:644 (306644|4,306728|3) - imo.
05:19:978 - add one? same sound as 05:19:644 (319644|0,319644|2,319811|2,319811|4) -

susah nemuin yg salah.. -,-"..
Good luck buat beatmapnya :D
Topic Starter
Frim4503
fix all kecuali
01:19:978 - 01:20:144 - this sound has the double sound that's similar to 05:06:644 - 05:06:811 - imo.
04:59:311 - the LN until 04:59:478 - ?
05:03:978 - 05:04:144 - this sound has the double sound that's similar to 05:06:644 (306644|4,306728|3) - imo.


Ibrahim
m4m here
sorry for delay

mod inside
01:35:811 (95811|4,95894|2,95978|0) - add 1 note
01:46:311 (106311|2,106394|3,106561|1,106644|2) - add 1 ?
03:01:144 (181144|1,181228|2,181311|3) - add 1
03:11:644 (191644|2,191728|0,191894|4,191978|2) - ^
03:22:478 (202478|3,202561|2,202644|1) - ^
03:31:478 (211478|4,211478|1,211478|0) - delete 1 note
04:26:478 (266478|1,266561|2,266644|3) - add 1
04:56:811 (296811|1,296811|2,296811|3) - delete 1
05:08:978 (308978|3,309061|1,309228|0,309311|2) - add 1 ?
05:30:478 (330478|1,330561|2,330644|3) - add 1

good luck~
Kurisu Makise
Hi! From cute queue :3

|1|2|3|4|5|
Dangdutan Biar Greget
00:31:644 (31644|3) - Change to hitwhistle2, there's kick.
00:44:978 (44978|3,45144|4) - 5-4 for some pattern consistency.
01:03:311 - Add note to 2 and make them hitclap2.
01:06:644 (66644|3,66728|2) - 1/4 LNs are unwanted in high bpm maps. Better change to notes.
01:07:144 (67144|3,67311|4) - Move to 1-2 for hand balance. Right hand is overloaded a bit in previous section.
01:12:478 - End LN here, sound is clear and it lasts no longer.
01:12:978 - ^
01:13:478 (73478|4) - End at 01:14:228 -
01:23:478 - End LN here.
01:57:144 (117144|1,117228|0,117311|1) - 1-2-1 for comfort.
01:56:728 (116728|1,116728|3) - No sound. You can leave this due to hitsounds, but better follow track since you follow it mostly in common and completely in this section.
02:09:644 (129644|2) - End at 02:09:894 - for consistency, follow the same sound as before.
02:10:811 (130811|1,131144|1) - 1/4 longer too.
02:12:978 (132978|3) - ^
02:13:811 (133811|1) - ^ (not absolutely sure).
02:14:644 (134644|3,134978|3,135311|2,135644|1) - ^
02:17:644 - End LN and start new, 02:17:978 - same.
Check LNs further attentively. If you meet problems, contact me and i'll complete mod in this section.
02:29:311 - Add note.
02:39:978 (159978|4) - Why not 2 LNs 1/4?
03:31:894 (211894|3,211978|0,212061|1) - Try 1-2-4 for some balance and comfort.
05:40:728 (340728|1,340728|3) - Better follow music, there's no sound.
06:02:311 (362311|0) - Change to hitwhistle2.
06:02:311 (362311|0,362478|3,362561|2) - Try 3-1-4 for more comfort.
06:12:311 - No hitsound from here? :D
Haven't you finished hitsounding yet? You have hat hs, but it's almost not used.
I missed LNs in the second half of the map cause you could just copy them with the same mistakes. Once more, if you really need a help with LNs, contact me and i will try to fix check the rest.

LNs
01:08:978 - 01:09:061 - 01:09:144 - 1/4 LNs or simple notes as i suggested before. 01:08:644 (68644|0) - Ends at 01:08:978 -
01:11:978 - 01:12:061 - Same.
01:19:644 - 01:19:728 - 01:19:811 - Same.
01:22:311 - 01:22:394 - 01:22:478 - Same.
In next section, most of LNs don't end at 1/2 line exactly if there's no new LN start, but they don't continue till next 1/2 line also. Use for them 3/4 length:
02:08:811 (128811|4) - End at 02:08:978 - , lower pitch from there.
02:09:978 (129978|3) - End at 02:10:228 - , there fade starts.
02:10:311 (130311|4) - End at 02:10:561 -
02:10:811 (130811|1,131144|1) - Make them 1/4 longer.
02:11:978 (131978|0) - It starts to fade at 02:12:144 - , i think.
02:12:978 (132978|3) - End at 02:13:228 - , move 02:13:311 (133311|0) - to 4 for pitch.
02:13:811 (133811|1) - End at 02:14:061 -
02:14:644 (134644|3,134978|3,135311|2) - Make 1/4 longer.
02:16:144 (136144|1) - End at 02:16:394 -
02:16:644 (136644|3) - End at 02:16:894 -
Next section seem to be the same.
02:44:978 - 02:45:061 - 02:45:144 - 1/4. I can barely hear it, but it must repeat previous considering style of song.
02:47:644 - 02:47:728 - 02:47:811 - 1/4.
There are many repeats further, except sounds like 03:56:978 (236978|1) - . I can clearly hear 3 sounds instead of one there, even using 100% speed. Better change to 3 notes with 1/4 space. I think, you won't meet any problem to find other similar LNs to change. There are same percussion sounds also.
04:04:311 (244311|4,244644|0) - Make 1/2 longer.
04:31:644 (271644|2) - Better change to 3 notes 1/4.
04:42:311 (282311|3) - ^
04:59:311 (299311|3) - End at 04:59:478 -
05:03:644 - 3 notes 1/4 from here, end LN here.
05:06:311 - ^
Well, i hope, i didn't make even more mistakes :D

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Frim4503
fix all the problems
Topic Starter
Frim4503
ok
thank yu for the re-check
MEGAtive
M4M repliance

pocotan - Summer Wing 2013



Column
|1|2|3|4|5|

[Dangdutan Biar Greget]
  1. 00:09:478 - D sini rada awkward maininnya. Coba d bikin jdi kyk http://puu.sh/kVAOb/7e7b11b1c3.png biar lebih enak tangannya.
  2. 00:10:311 - 00:10:644 - D bagian ini itu instrumen yg bunyi sama kyk 00:09:978 , jdi mending d bikin double. Dan klo mod ini d apply, bikin jdi kyk http://puu.sh/kVAMs/a385bc5f51.png biar enak dimaininnya.
  3. 00:13:811 - Seharusny d sini jdi kyk http://puu.sh/kVAR6/123b05f4f0.png biar konsisten patternnya.
  4. 00:15:644 (15644|1,15644|3,15811|2,15811|4) - Geser k kiri sekali. Biar pola patternny biar konsisten.
  5. 00:21:144 - TBH lebih enak klo patternny kyk http://puu.sh/kVAW1/6d5a2ef963.png atau kyk http://puu.sh/kVAX7/2cdf37665f.png (untuk arah streamny terserah mau k kiri apa k kanan)
  6. 00:30:811 - Seharusny not2 d sini sama kyk 00:09:478 . Jdi samain jumlah not (Untuk pattern mungkin bikin yg mirip kyk sebelumnya aja).
  7. 00:41:644 - D sini juga harusny sm kyk 00:20:311 soalny instrumenny juga sama.
  8. 01:14:311 - D sini gk enak patternnya. Coba kyk http://puu.sh/kVB9q/8bfa6c7da2.png biar enak mainnya.
  9. 01:22:311 - Menurut suara leadnya, hrusny LNny jdi kyk http://puu.sh/kVBbE/f1b7293982.png
  10. 01:24:144 - Sebenerny kurang suka penempatan notny kyk gini. Coba pas d 01:23:644 bikin jdi kykhttp://puu.sh/kVBfZ/b0403280f7.png dan pas d 01:24:144 bikin jdi kyk http://puu.sh/kVBhg/80836d62ea.png sm http://puu.sh/kVBhJ/2fc1cb800b.png . Lebih enak maininnya klo gini.
  11. 01:35:478 (95478|0,95478|2,95561|1,95561|3,95644|2,95644|4,95811|1,95811|0,95894|3,95894|4,95978|1,95978|0) - Saran mending ini not2ny d samain patternny. Mau Doublethrill, Doublethrill dua2ny. Atau apapun. Soalny pitch instrumenny sama.
    Masalah d section2 lain kurang lebih gitu2 juga.

GL~
Topic Starter
Frim4503
fix all kecuali utk beberapa LN, karna masih kurang yakin
thx for mod
Rivals_7
M4M req

Damn son, where did you find this thing? lmao :v

00:41:728 - add on 2 and move - 00:41:811 (41811|0) - to 3 to balance hand usage on each col. also this is to make pattern consistencies because you made - 00:20:311 (20311|1,20311|3,20394|0,20394|4,20478|3,20478|1) - double-double-double while here is Double-Single-Double.

01:07:644 (67644|2) - rather uncomfortable. move to 4 perhaps?

01:15:811 (75811|1) - to 4. hand balance

01:22:311 (82311|2) - end here - 01:22:561

01:23:478 - add on 4. it's just feel empty. also, kick noise.

03:28:144 (208144|0) - to 5 seems more symmetrical

03:37:478 - seems build up noise end here. cut the LN maybe.

05:18:978 (318978|2,319061|3,319144|4,319311|2) - 5,4,3,4 respectively maybe?

Can't find much. This is already cool, gj! :D
Good luck :)
Topic Starter
Frim4503
okay
fix all
will mod your map later

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