1. Gaia's Angel Michiru (5.06 stars, 356 notes)
2. Hard (3.05 stars, 243 notes)
3. Kisses' Insane (4.14 stars, 313 notes)
4. Mamayu's Easy (1.53 stars, 116 notes)
5. Mamayu's Insane (4.46 stars, 343 notes)
6. Mathew's Hard (3.36 stars, 289 notes)
7. Normal (1.92 stars, 161 notes)

LittlePigRMX wrote:

Hi from Queue!

Normal
Not sure about this, but end 00:06:849 (5) - to 00:07:311 - ? feels a bit blunt, I might change if others mention this
Your choice though.

Yahuri wrote:

From my queue~
eheheh michiru best

General
-The BPM you're using is in halftime. Double it. Doubled, since sv are kinda too fast so I halved them.
-Some empty space in the end of the music file, perhaps you could chop some off. I will do that later
-Change combo colors (especially the green), i would recommend matching the shades in the background. Oops
-Some tips for mapping technique: try to do as few unintentional overlaps as possible. If anything looks unintentional, it's grounds to keep your map from getting ranked ex.(01:00:317 (4,5,6,7) normal). Adding in more blankets can also boost the visual appeal immensely. Try to make the notes fit like puzzle pieces for better flow. So overlaps should be intentional? I will keep that in mind
-The style you're using to create the curve sliders is kinda...outdated? Generally, most people use only one anchor for a curve slider, and you use two. Curve sliders with only one anchor are much more symmetrical. If you'd like to change your existing curve sliders, remove them then remap them (simply deleting an anchor on the slider does not make the slider have a perfect curve, it's somewhat distorted) fixed

Easy
-Distance spacing absolutely must stay the same in Easy difficulties. It keeps changing all over the place, you must fix it. I will remap this. (with distance snap ofc)
-Its usually easier for beginners to follow the instruments (mostly white ticks) instead of the lyrics. You map both, and the flow just doesn't feel right. I will try to make those on white ticks as much as possible, I left some of them on the red ticks because I don't know how to do with them.
00:03:619 - nothing happens here, but 1/4 beat later something does. feels like 1/2 beat to me, but fixed anyway.
00:29:976 (3) - feels awk that you start on a lyric and end on an instrument fixed
00:32:363 (1,2) - this overlap doesn't look good fixed
00:39:692 (2,3) - try a blanket, use the approach circles for guidance fixed
00:43:272 (1) - starting on a blue tick is bound to throw beginners off. try mapping the drum on the white ticks? moved to the white tick and added a hitsound
00:53:158 (3) - timing of the slider feels weird, same goes for the next slider. changed into a reverse slider
01:03:556 (3,4) - try a blanket fixed
01:06:283 - miss a crash cymbal here changed into a reverse slider and added a hitsound
-Try to apply what I've mentioned above to the rest of the map.

Normal
-Distance spacing must also stay the same in Normal difficulties. Fix it.
00:06:849 (5) - I would end the slider on "wa" (i think i mentioned for easy too) fixed
00:30:317 (5) - i would suggest mapping the lyrics then adding on a circle for the instrument you're mapping at the end. fixed
01:15:317 (3) - end this slider 1/4 beat earlier to match the lyrics. not quite sure, will change if others mention about this
-Apply anything I've said above to this map.
I think Normal has better flow than Easy in terms of mapping rhythm.

Hope this helps, good luck!

Ars Novaa wrote:

Uhhm Hi ! I saw your beatmap on the forums and thought I'd might try out modding for others This is my first time so I might not be able to spot all the mistakes so yeah



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Generally , try not to end/start your notes on blue ticks. One example is as follows

00:40:715 (5) - Try extending this part to end at 00:41:226 instead of 00:41:141 , it sounds better to me fixed

01:13:271 - Ending the spinner here and then having a note so soon after might seem a bit too hard for Normal difficulties , players might not be able to readjust quickly enough. Maybe you can try reducing the slider length such that it ends at 1:13:101 instead, or replace the spinner with a slider. I think 1/2 beat spacing is fine for normal, but I will keep this in mind

Yeeahh thats all I can find sorry...Its my first time modding so I'm just starting small ! Thanks

Alliiiiiiiance wrote:

Hey here is my mod! Sorry in advance for my english mistakes

General
• I think that there is a big problem with the timing at the start of your map, for me it would be : 125,800 BPM and Offset 1906 or 3753 nah, I checked the offset with Audacity, bpm feels quite right to me
• I didn't see a lot of blanket combos though I would've put a lot of them regarding to the song! okay
• Not enough symmetry for my taste :'c I'll see what I can do
• The combos in your diffs felt a bit cramped Perhaps should I increase the tick rate?

Easy
Design & stuff
• 00:02:696 (1,2,3) Perhaps with a better placing you coud make a perfect "triangle" with them?
• 00:28:783 (2,3) Space them a bit maybe not sure though, It's kinda bad to overlap on easy diff but otherwise it won't fit the ds
• 00:48:555 (3,1,2,3) ^ fixed
• 01:03:555 (3,4) You should blanket it correctly fixed
• 01:17:703 (2) Uncommon shape but it's ok Yeah it's ok

Sliders
• 00:32:192 (1) The reverse time isn't on a white tick so it sounds weird fixed
• 00:58:271 (3) Seemed not in the rhythm fixed

Circles
• 01:13:612 (2) You could put this one nearer to the precedent slider to help the reading of the rhythm I want to avoid overlaps as much as possible for easy diff
• 01:23:840 (2) ^ nah, it's fine here

Hitsounds
• I think that you really should add more! It's too calm I intended to be calm and relaxing, but if others mention this I will change

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Design & stuff
• 00:28:101 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) I think that the correct rhythm should be this, it's more audible

SPOILER

• 00:58:442 (1,2) Y no blanket ;A; sorry, fixed

Sliders
• 00:35:260 (1) The rhythm of the lyrics is very rich so I think that it's a pity to just put a slider yeah it's a pity, but I intended to follow the lyrics
• 00:37:476 (4) This one seemed odd idk why sorry fixed
• 00:43:271 (1) I think that you shouldn't start this combo in a red tick fixed
• 01:13:612 (1,2,3) It feels hasty and it collides with the velocity of 2 and 3 so you should fix it fixed

Circles
• 00:54:180 (3) I think that you should stack this one to the head of the following slider and put it here because now it's barely readable and it feels clumsy I think it's readable

SPOILER

• 01:01:169 (5,6,7) Those three should be more spaced for more readability changed into a reverse slider
• 01:03:896 According to the rhythm, I would've add a circle here It will become very hard to read since there are 3 hitcircles with inconsistent beat spacing

SPOILER

Hitsounds
• Same as easy

GL and hope it'll help!

Alliiiiiiiance wrote:

I understand that you can reject my mods but I think that you really should do something about this -> 125,800 BPM (I looked again and it's 126,400 in fact) and Offset 1906 or 3753 because the first downbeat of your song is definitely on Offset 3573

Furthermore, if you go to the Timing pannel you can hear that the ticking does not coincide with the rhythm of the song, and while the beginning of a song is very important to introduce it I think that it can be a big problem

Dono027 wrote:

Easy
00:28:803 (2,3) - I don't like these sliders. Delete the two sliders and make 1 big slider (with 1 reverse) feels weird to me

SPOILER

00:48:575 (3) - Slider begin here and finish here : 00:48:575 (3) ?

Normal
00:04:991 (3) - Make a more little slider but with a reverse I don't want to put 1/2 slider in normal
00:06:890 (5) - Same here same here
00:59:655 (3) - Delete the next slider and make 2 reverses on the current slider nah, this looks fine

Hard
The spacing is too big, that's not an Insane diff. fixed
01:02:382 (2) - Make a biggest slider with less reverses fixed

SPOILER

klonoa wrote:

HI from my modding queue

Easy

AR3 feels more recommended for me, rather than AR4, just because it's an easy diff. fixed
00:02:618 (1,2,3,4) - these sliders feel better on these tics instead, i found that it was a little easier to read (and sliders are recommended to be on white tics) Example sry, I don't get this, because I don't know where are your ''these tics'' supposed to be, tried several change here but it just feel weird to change.
00:29:825 (3) - i feel like this slider should start on the next white tic instead, and then end it on the red tic where the song goes BLING.looks consistent, but doesn't fit the lyrics(at least to me)
Example
00:40:905 (3) - this note isn't peroperly snapped accorind to distance snap? Weird, considering 00:28:803 (2,3) - has almost the same note placement, but no fancy blanket on it. (i'd kinda prefer there would be a blanket there, but idk how strict the DS has to be). yeah, ds made me a harsh life here, and nothing was unsnapped though.
00:50:280 (1) - all the sliders in this part make it a little difficult for an easy difficulty, maybe consider changing that slider to a circle instead? (on the white tic at 00:50:621 - ) doesn't look fit though
00:58:462 (3) - according to DS, this note is too far from the previous note. at least in my pc, it's not. And it gets MAD when I move it closer

01:13:803 - the circle feels better if it's on this tic instead, but if you don't change it, i understand. I don't think that tick is matching the instruments.
01:14:485 (3) - NC? fixed
01:17:724 (2) - another note on a red tic, should be on white tic since this is an easy diff. I really want to fix this though, but ds gets mad when I fixed this and made my map a diaster when I follow my way with it.
01:23:860 (2,3) - strange shift to red tic ? should'nt be like that in my opinion.

I put it on red ticks for consistency in that area

I'm only modding this diff now, sorry. If you choose to change nothing, i understand (i'm just noob at modding). Nice song though! Hope it goes ranked one day!

Xelasto wrote:

Incoming mod from The Gentleman Modding Queue!

Easy

00:06:415 (3) - Turn into two notes since the end of the slider is a strong piano note. fixed
00:08:314 (4) - Move this forward onto the blue tick fixed
00:33:575 (2) - Raise this above 1 more. fixed
00:39:712 (2) - Curve more fixed
00:42:695 - Empty pause. It's boring. fixed
00:44:485 (2) - Balance out this shape better I think it's fine as it is
00:47:894 - Add a note fixed
00:53:007 (3) - NC (new combo) fixed
00:55:735 (1) - No NC fixed
00:58:462 (3) - NC fixed
01:01:189 (1) - No NC fixed
01:03:576 (3) - NC fixed
01:07:667 (6) - NC fixed
01:16:530 (1) - No NC fixed
01:19:939 (3) - NC fixed
01:22:325 (1) - Do this instead fixed
01:24:542 (3) - NC fixed
01:33:405 (5) - NC fixed

Overall, work on the New combos. Also some of the timing of your sliders is off. Good job though If you can point these out specifically will be much appreciated.

Normal

00:35:280 (1,2) - Blanket Not quite sure, I will leave it as it is for now, will change if someone mention this.
00:42:098 - Don't leave silences like this. Fix ALL of them fixed
00:48:916 (3) - Change the shape. Looks odd. fixed
00:58:803 (2) - Curve more to blanket 1 better fixed
01:34:769 (3) - Move this forward onto the white ticks fixed
01:32:212 (4) - Fix blanket fixed
01:34:769 (3) - Improve shape fixed

Good job. However, the notes feel altogether too close and bunched up, so turn DS up HIGHER and make sure none of them touch and have equal spacing.

Hard

00:07:958 (4) - Make the shape better. Looks odd. changed into a hit circle and a slider
00:28:121 (2) - Curve less fixed
00:28:803 (4) - Fix blanket fixed
00:31:360 (2,3) - This doesn't fit the music very well. Change it. I fixed this, but not quite sure that this is right. My ideas just dried up.
00:38:178 (7) - Space this out from 6 fixed
00:38:860 (2,6) - Try and stack these. didn't see that coming, nice one here.
00:39:030 (3,4,5) - Clean this and make it symmetrical fixed
00:41:928 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Too confusing for Hard mode. Remap this fixed
00:44:485 (6) - NC fixed
00:45:166 (7,8) - Make these blankets better fixed
00:47:553 (1,2,3,4) - Use DS fixed
00:51:303 (5) - Fix this blanket fixed
00:54:200 (6,8) - Blanket these fixed
00:55:735 (1,2) - Make these blanket each other better fixed
00:59:655 (4,5,6,7) - This big thing of notes is no bueno. (good) fixed
01:07:325 (1,2,3) - Do something else. This doesn't flow well. I don't understand how it should be flowed, but fixed anyway
01:17:553 (5,7,8) - Please don't overlap these. fixed
01:21:303 (4) - Fix this blanket fixed
01:22:325 (1,2,3,4) - Use distance spacing fixed
01:25:905 (5) - Curve more fixed
01:26:416 (6,2,5,6) - Don't overlap fixed
01:35:450 (5) - Blanket better fixed

Nice job! Just a few weird spacing things and bad blankets. I like this mode!

Good job so far! Just make sure to ask some other people for timing help with the notes, and fix those blankets and slider shapes! Good luck on your map!

Hi Im Nathan wrote:

hi from my modding queue

I think you should change the timing of the first section to this fixed


I can mod the second part for the song for all your diffs or all of it if you change the timing. Just pm me what you want me to do