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ChouCho - Sora to Kimi no Message

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Monstrata
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
4,642 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Monstrata
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on December 8, 2015 at 3:41:34 PM

Artist: ChouCho
Title: Sora to Kimi no Message
Source: 翠星のガルガンティア
Tags: umi kibbleru ちょうちょ Suisei no Gargantia on the Verdurous Planet Amy Message from You and the Sky
BPM: 130
Filesize: 19157kb
Play Time: 01:33
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.46 stars, 89 notes)
  2. Gargantia (4.17 stars, 282 notes)
  3. Hard (2.98 stars, 213 notes)
  4. Normal (1.7 stars, 128 notes)
  5. Quib's Insane (3.41 stars, 245 notes)
  6. Umi's Insane (3.38 stars, 223 notes)
Download: ChouCho - Sora to Kimi no Message
Download: ChouCho - Sora to Kimi no Message (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Thanks Umi and Kibbleru for the Insane GD's!

ChouCho - Sora to Kimi no Message
Last edited by Monstrata , edited 13 times in total.
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Umi
First Itadaku!~

also here the diff+HS > http://puu.sh/kM5Ua/907e007549.zip <
Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
5,844 posts
Joined August 2013
Kibbleru
doubles r kewl tho xddxdxxdxddxdxxrdxddxd
ill fix l8r
Darson
187 posts
Joined June 2014
Darson
General

Great mapset and pretty song :D
I didn't find too many problems with the easier difficulties so hopefully I didn't miss anything lol2

Easy

  1. 01:00:599 (2) - Move the slider head point to x:236 y:256, makes for a better triangle with 00:59:676 (1)
  2. 01:22:060 (2) - Weird kink in this slider, all of your other sliders that are that size are curved
Normal

  1. 00:40:291 - Missed beat here, I'm sure you did this on purpose but that's a pretty big beat!
  2. 00:42:137 - ^
Hard

  1. 01:03:137 (6,1) - This gap seems pretty hard for this difficulty
Umi's Insane

This map could sue a bit of cleaning imo, some notes pointlessly over lap and some patterns look a bit sloppy

  1. 00:07:060 (2,3,4) - Fix the spacing here between the slider end and the 2 notes
  2. 00:13:522 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This part could probably look better, 00:13:522 (4,5) - these over lap for no reason, if you moved 00:14:676 (5) to x:428 y:140 is would form a pattern with 00:13:522 (4,1), also 00:13:753 (1,8) would look better if they shared the same Y coordinate
  3. 00:17:676 (2,3,4,5,6) - These are oddly placed, 00:17:676 (2,3) are closer to each other than 00:18:137 (4,5,6) are to each other
  4. 00:32:676 (2) - Have the slider end stack on 00:31:291 (3)
  5. 00:36:830 (3,4,1) - Fix the spacing, 00:36:830 (3,4) are closer together than 00:37:522 (4,1) are
  6. 00:46:983 (1) - Maybe have this stack on 00:45:830 (2)
  7. 00:57:137 (3,4,5,6) - This pattern has a weird flow, between 00:57:368 (4,5) is a pretty big jump compared to 00:57:137 (3,4) or 00:57:599 (5,6) if you move 00:57:137 (3) to like x:32 y:236 then I think the pattern would flow better
  8. 01:02:214 (2,3,4) - Same as above, the spacing just doesn't seem to flow right, but I assume you were going for 01:02:676 (4) being farther because of the strong vocals, but then again 01:02:214 (2,3) are really strong vocals as well
  9. 01:07:060 (5) - If you move this to x:344 y:140 it would form an overlap pattern with 01:05:445 (1) and flow better in terms of spacing
Quib's Insane

>>There's no kiai time!!<<

  1. 00:04:406 (6) - This isn't mapped to anything lol
  2. 00:08:099 (6) - ^
  3. 00:11:906 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern looks and flows weird, consider changing it a bit
  4. 00:18:830 (6) - This slider should end on the red tick
  5. 00:27:137 (2) - Stack this on 00:26:214 (3) maybe
  6. 00:28:060 (5) - This should probably be a bit closer to 00:27:599 (3,4), try x:116 y:88
  7. 00:32:214 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern looks uneven to me but I don't think it actually is, have a look at it
  8. 00:33:599 (3) - Move this down one tick to y:256, so it's even with 00:33:368 (2)
  9. 00:39:137 (5) - Either stack this on 00:37:983 (2) or move it down 1 tick to y:284 to get a better overlap pattern
  10. 00:40:522 (3,4) - No reason for these to be so far from each other, consider moving 00:40:522 (3) closer
  11. 00:45:137 (1,1,2,1,2) - I don't think you should ignore the vocals here, they're pretty strong at this part
  12. 01:17:445 (7) - You could make this a long slider that ends on 01:18:137 this red tick to follow the guitar then have the slider follow that
Gargantia

  1. 00:00:830 (1) - I think this slider should be curved, kinda random that it's straight
  2. 00:02:214 (5,6) - Maybe move (5) to :280 y:320 and (6) to x:255 y:228 that way it follows the pattern that 00:00:830 (1,2,3,4) follow. Also you could rotate 00:02:676 (1) 30 degrees so it still blankets 00:02:214 (5)
  3. 00:04:406 (6) - This note isn't mapped to anything
  4. 01:01:522 (1) - This is just me but this slider shape just doesn't seem to fit with 00:59:676 (1,1), those 2 are curved where as 01:01:522 (1) has a kink, it just doesn't look right to me but that's my opinion
  5. 01:18:599 (1) - I think this slider would look better with out the 1st kink
Done!


I hope this mod was able to help :D

omg I made this mod like 4 hours ago and forgot to post it xdd
Monstrata
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
4,642 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Monstrata

Reclaimer wrote:

General

Great mapset and pretty song :D
I didn't find too many problems with the easier difficulties so hopefully I didn't miss anything lol2

Easy

  1. 01:00:599 (2) - Move the slider head point to x:236 y:256, makes for a better triangle with 00:59:676 (1) I don't want a triangle here
  2. 01:22:060 (2) - Weird kink in this slider, all of your other sliders that are that size are curved Thought i'd do something different instead xD
Normal

  1. 00:40:291 - Missed beat here, I'm sure you did this on purpose but that's a pretty big beat! Ahh you're right. remapped
  2. 00:42:137 - ^Remapped too
Hard

  1. 01:03:137 (6,1) - This gap seems pretty hard for this difficulty It's fine since people will naturally release 1/4 early on these sliders.

Gargantia

  1. 00:00:830 (1) - I think this slider should be curved, kinda random that it's straight Its fine imo. I don't want everything to be a blanket xD
  2. 00:02:214 (5,6) - Maybe move (5) to :280 y:320 and (6) to x:255 y:228 that way it follows the pattern that 00:00:830 (1,2,3,4) follow. Also you could rotate 00:02:676 (1) 30 degrees so it still blankets 00:02:214 (5) Nah, i don't like how it overlaps with the sliderend of 1.
  3. 00:04:406 (6) - This note isn't mapped to anything Ahhh pretty sure theres a triplet there
  4. 01:01:522 (1) - This is just me but this slider shape just doesn't seem to fit with 00:59:676 (1,1), those 2 are curved where as 01:01:522 (1) has a kink, it just doesn't look right to me but that's my opinion I want the difference in shape for emphasis, but i tweaked the shape a bit
  5. 01:18:599 (1) - I think this slider would look better with out the 1st kink^
Done!


I hope this mod was able to help :D

omg I made this mod like 4 hours ago and forgot to post it xdd
Thanks for the mod!
Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
5,844 posts
Joined August 2013
Kibbleru
uhg still debating on the doubles. i really think they just follow the guitar better than a triple would :/

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Monstrata
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
4,642 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Monstrata
Oh i was gonna get a few mods first and then call you two to apply all the mods xD.

Updated~

And ehh i guess if you wanna keep thats fine.
00:18:830 (6,7,1) - Is pretty cool tho.
Sotarks
3,493 posts
Joined May 2014
Sotarks
SPOILER
monstrata is love :3
DahplA
1,099 posts
Joined March 2014
DahplA
Mod

Gargantia
  1. 00:14:676 (3) - Fix the stack here.
  2. 00:48:252 (7) - ^
  3. 01:13:753 (1) - Just a little thing, but I'm pretty sure this can be moved to 55, 175 to be in line with 01:09:599 (2) -
Quib's Insane
  1. 00:48:830 Shouldn't you at least consider a Kiai burst here? Leaving Kiai out completely feels a bit weird, and this chorus start is relatively strong (I'm assuming you left Kiai out on purpose).
  2. 01:22:983 (4) - This spacing conflicts with a few of the other 3/4 gaps, since it looks identical to a 1/2 gap. Consider moving closer for better readability. I suggest moving 01:22:522 (3) - to maybe 411, 223 or just moving the sliderend to a better spot, but giving up the blanket.
Umi's Insane
  1. 00:03:599 (3) - Personally I think you should manually fix this sliderend stack, since it's quite a bit off.
  2. 00:15:368 (8,1) - Aren't these missing whistles (drum beats)?
Hard
  1. 00:18:830 (5) - I'm positive this is meant to be snapped to the 1/2
  2. 01:20:906 (2) - I don't recommend stacking under, especially with a similar curve. It doesn't make it easy to read. I would make a straight slider going upwards maybe.
Normal
  1. 00:07:753 (5) - You use a 1/2 slider here in the next combo (and basically the rest of the map) for the drum beat. Why not here?

Not like it wasn't already good C:
Kroytz
703 posts
Joined February 2013
Kroytz
Agree/Disagree ask me if I really care. Just tell me why.

Easy
00:00:830 (1,2) - I'm not one to be nazi tho...
00:57:137 (2) - something bout that rhythm up until 00:59:676 (1) - just feels weird.
01:13:753 (4) - 1/1 slider maybe

Normal
00:04:522 (1,2,3) - Try rhythm and stuff like this maybe. (1) and (2) are stacked. http://puu.sh/kThLL/0003f95e10.jpg
00:13:753 (3,4) - This too rhythm
00:17:445 (1) - NC?
00:26:676 (1,2) - same as the first
01:02:214 (6) - 1/2 slider + circle

Hard
01:03:137 (6) - I'd split this up into two :s

Umi's thingy
00:46:983 (1) - Slider looks so outta place there, I came up with something like this I think is more structured idk
00:48:830 (1) - could make this curve like the next slider
01:14:445 (1) - maybe move off to 180;328 somewhere so the 2 gets that aesthetic
01:16:291 (1) - different shape I think can be better.
01:22:983 (3) - ctrl g, but not like it really matters I guess idk lol

Quib's thingy
00:04:406 (6) - bro. at least make triple with red tick seeing has how red is more audible than blue (is there even a sound on blue)
00:17:330 (4) - bro.
00:34:060 (1) - DS seems kinda short imo, this could stack over 00:32:676 (3) - with a different slider shape or smth
01:12:599 (1) - same tbh

i already forgot the diff name
01:01:522 (1) - someone else mentioned this, and I didn't like the differentiation either when I played it. just kinda like, huh? The emphasis is there in spacing already, but idk. thats just me i guess.
01:12:830 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - cmon dude... I know you like the dt pp stuff, but its so unsettling seeing this. i know you can get away with it too, but really, this doesn't need to be so overly exaggerated :/
01:16:291 (1,2,3,4) - here too even.
Lami
1,756 posts
Joined June 2011
Lami
hi

[Easy]

find to nothing

[Normal]

01:02:214 (6) - [

[Hard]

01:00:599 (3) - flow NC partten with highest diff?
01:03:137 (6) - reduce repeat time?
or move to close with 01:03:599 (1) -

[umi's Insane]

00:15:599 (1,3) - 00:16:522 (3) - stack on tail?
00:31:522 - add note?
00:31:983 - ^
00:44:445 (3) - x275 y129 ?


[Quib's Insane]

00:22:522 (3) - little reduce jump?
01:03:137 (1) - remove NC?
01:05:445 (1,2) - reduce DS each other, like other partten
01:22:522 (3,4) - ^ look like 1/2 partten..

[Gargantia]

00:29:445 (3) - remove whistle
00:36:830 (4) - add soft-whistle on tail
00:51:830 (5) - add whistle instead of 00:51:599 (4) -
01:14:099 - add note?
01:16:060 (2) - add clap

GL
Fushimi Rio
Fushimi Rio
Greeting

[General]

none.

[Easy]
missing video

00:59:445 - consider change 3 to a slider and end here? feeling empty since most of notes are following 24claps in this diff
01:14:214 - ^
01:25:753 (1) - spinner is too close to former slider

[Normal]

00:04:522 (1) - a 1/2 slider is better. The latter parts follow some vocals but you skipped 00:04:753 - now
01:11:676 (2) - remove feels better

[Hard]

00:10:060 (1,2) - compared with other patterns these looks a bit too close...move 2 a bit further?
00:56:676 (2) - ctrl+g for a smoother flow here
01:03:137 (6) - decrease one reverse. newbies usually misread this and stop holding too early

[Umi]

00:18:368 - add a note at x324 y144? to follow the sound here

[Quib]

N:C1 doesn't fit 3/4 sliders' ends in kiai imo. consider change some other samples to these sliderends?
00:04:406 (6) - I personally don't like this pattern when there is no sound to follow here. 00:17:330 (4,1) - has sound to follow so ok.
00:14:214 (2) - ctrl+g so the flow fits vocal better

[Insane]

00:25:291 (2) - try move it downward? example: x256y300

Good luck.
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Umi
thx guys for mods, fixed bunch of things (If u want the replies, tell me)

code
osu file format v14

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Countdown: 0
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Title:Sora to Kimi no Message
TitleUnicode:空とキミのメッセージ
Artist:ChouCho
ArtistUnicode:ChouCho
Creator:monstrata
Version:Umi's Insane
Source:翠星のガルガンティア
Tags:umi kibbleru ちょうちょ Suisei no Gargantia on the Verdurous Planet Amy Message from You and the Sky
BeatmapID:803446
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265,304,33830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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306,48,45830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
209,240,46060,2,0,P|190:171|196:100,1,144,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,216,46753,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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468,187,49291,1,8,0:0:0:0:
447,343,49522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,304,49753,2,0,P|271:253|275:207,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,84,50214,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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506,204,59445,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Shadw
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Shadw
why is the od that much higher than the ar
man i am certainly disappointed
monstrata you have reached an all time low
smh

i suggest making the od around 7.3-8 and ar maybe up to 8-8.5
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Chikubi
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Joined September 2014
Chikubi

Shadw wrote:

why is the od that much higher than the ar
man i am certainly disappointed
monstrata you have reached an all time low
smh
Shadw
44 posts
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Shadw
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Monstrata
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
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Topic Starter
Monstrata

DahplA wrote:

Mod

Gargantia
  1. 00:14:676 (3) - Fix the stack here. k
  2. 00:48:252 (7) - ^k
  3. 01:13:753 (1) - Just a little thing, but I'm pretty sure this can be moved to 55, 175 to be in line with 01:09:599 (2) - was done on purpose

Hard
  1. 00:18:830 (5) - I'm positive this is meant to be snapped to the 1/2 im a bad mapper ty
  2. 01:20:906 (2) - I don't recommend stacking under, especially with a similar curve. It doesn't make it easy to read. I would make a straight slider going upwards maybe.i think its fine, but i fixed the stack
Normal
  1. 00:07:753 (5) - You use a 1/2 slider here in the next combo (and basically the rest of the map) for the drum beat. Why not here? okay sure, added

Not like it wasn't already good C:
Thanks for the mod!
Monstrata
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
4,642 posts
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Topic Starter
Monstrata

Kroytz wrote:

Agree/Disagree ask me if I really care. Just tell me why.

Easy
00:00:830 (1,2) - I'm not one to be nazi tho... fixed
00:57:137 (2) - something bout that rhythm up until 00:59:676 (1) - just feels weird. yea rip 3/2 rhythm
01:13:753 (4) - 1/1 slider maybe i dont want a 1/2 gap on easy tho idk xPPP

Normal
00:04:522 (1,2,3) - Try rhythm and stuff like this maybe. (1) and (2) are stacked. http://puu.sh/kThLL/0003f95e10.jpg okay
00:13:753 (3,4) - This too rhythm nah i like the current one
00:17:445 (1) - NC? nah
00:26:676 (1,2) - same as the first tried, didnt like it here
01:02:214 (6) - 1/2 slider + circle oh nice

Hard
01:03:137 (6) - I'd split this up into two :s i dont want kick sliders on a hard tho ;c


i already forgot the diff name
01:01:522 (1) - someone else mentioned this, and I didn't like the differentiation either when I played it. just kinda like, huh? The emphasis is there in spacing already, but idk. thats just me i guess. still, i think theyre fine
01:12:830 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - cmon dude... I know you like the dt pp stuff, but its so unsettling seeing this. i know you can get away with it too, but really, this doesn't need to be so overly exaggerated :/ its not that hard to land on 130 bpm tho :D
01:16:291 (1,2,3,4) - here too even.yea
thanks for the mod!!
Monstrata
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
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Topic Starter
Monstrata

Lami wrote:

hi

[Easy]

find to nothing

[Normal]

01:02:214 (6) - okay

[Hard]

01:00:599 (3) - flow NC partten with highest diff? sure
01:03:137 (6) - reduce repeat time? Nah this is fine
or move to close with 01:03:599 (1) -

[Gargantia]

00:29:445 (3) - remove whistle k
00:36:830 (4) - add soft-whistle on tailk
00:51:830 (5) - add whistle instead of 00:51:599 (4) - k
01:14:099 - add note? nooo
01:16:060 (2) - add clapk

GL
Thanks for the mod!
Monstrata
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
4,642 posts
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Topic Starter
Monstrata

imoutosan wrote:

Greeting

[General]

none.

[Easy]
missing video wow nice catch

00:59:445 - consider change 3 to a slider and end here? feeling empty since most of notes are following 24claps in this diff i don't really want to use 1/2 rhythm on Easy tho
01:14:214 - ^ ^
01:25:753 (1) - spinner is too close to former slider That's perfectly fine

[Normal]

00:04:522 (1) - a 1/2 slider is better. The latter parts follow some vocals but you skipped 00:04:753 - now Okay sure
01:11:676 (2) - remove feels better Yea ur right,

[Hard]

00:10:060 (1,2) - compared with other patterns these looks a bit too close...move 2 a bit further? Its fine imo
00:56:676 (2) - ctrl+g for a smoother flow here I prefer current flow more.
01:03:137 (6) - decrease one reverse. newbies usually misread this and stop holding too early Nah, even if they stop holding early they will still get 300, thats how these 2x repeat sliders work really


[Insane]

00:25:291 (2) - try move it downward? example: x256y300 the jump to 3 is a bit too big for me xPP

Good luck.
Thanks for the mod!!~
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