1. Easy (1,71 stars, 181 notes)
2. Insane (4,3 stars, 432 notes)
3. Sieg's Normal (2,1 stars, 233 notes)
4. Twin Hard (3,19 stars, 328 notes)

1. 00:44:682 (2) - As for this slider, I understand why it's placed that way, as it's not overlapping the previous slider and it has a great distance, however, the spacing gap is too high if we compare it to your other objects. Since it would be weird to have a 1,00x spacing, I suggest you to move this slider to x:332 y:92. The spacing will be 1,04x instead of 1,13x. Make sure to keep the spacing consistent afterward!
2. 01:08:982 (4) - There is missing a normal sampleset a the beginning of the slider. Add it to keep the hitsounds consistent.
3. 01:12:282 (1) - Move this slider closer to the previous one to have a consistent spacing!
4. 01:41:082 (1) - I am not suggesting this kind of overlap with the previous circle, it might look weird to beginners. Also, the flow is quite broken if you do something like this. I would suggest you to do something different for this slider to have a better flow and to avoid the overlap.
5. 01:43:482 (4) - Starting from here, I would suggest you to do something different with your combos as they are not consistent with your previous combos:
   *01:43:482 (4) - Add a new combo and delete the combo on the next object;
   *01:45:882 (3) - Add a new combo;
   *01:48:282 (4) - Add a new combo and delete the combo on the next object;
   *01:50:682 (3) - Add a new combo;
   *01:53:082 (7) - Add a new combo and delete the combo on the next object;
   *01:55:482 (3) - Add a new combo.

1. 00:42:282 - I feel like there is missing a beat in here to emphasize the vocal. I would suggest you to add a circle in here. After that, for your two next objects, I would suggest you to do exactly what you've done to 00:39:882 (3,4,5) - . Since the beat is very similar, there shouldn't be any trouble.
2. 01:08:982 (4) - Add a normal sampleset hitsound to this circle. It has to be consistent everywhere!
3. 01:29:982 (2,3,4) - Same thing as mentioned @00:42:282 -
4. 02:12:282 (1,2) - If we follow the vocals, it would be weird to start clicking a circle when the vocals has a long note. I would suggest you to take these two objects and do a CTRL+G, it would be better if you want to keep the same format.
5. 02:27:582 (2,3,4) - Same applies to 00:42:282 -
6. 02:36:282 (1) - The spacing is quite different here from your previous objects. You should consider moving it to make it consistent with your previous objects!

1. 00:13:782 (4) - This slider's form and emplacement is visually weird. I'm suggesting you to rotate it in a way that the first part of this slider is perfectly aligned with the previous slider and you could also move it infront of it. Just like this:
   
   Example

   
2. 00:52:482 (8,9) - Just so it's not too awkward, it would be better if you have a consistent spacing with your previous circles, just like you've done with (7,8) @01:40:482 (8,9) -
3. 01:08:982 (6) - I'm sure that's on every difficulty.. Make sure to add a Normal Sampleset to keep your hitsounds consistent.
4. 02:09:882 (1,2,3,4) - *Honorable mention* THIS is F*CKING CUTE.
5. 02:38:082 (8) - I am suggesting you to have a better spacing consistency here. By doing so, you'll need to adjust your blanket.

1. 00:50:982 (2,3) - I like the idea for an Insane to do this kind of jump, however I don't feel like you should do that, it's more confusing and theres no presence of any flow. I would suggest you to do a CTRL+G to this two sliders and make them start from the left to the right. It would be way much better that way..
   
   Example

   
2. 01:39:582 (4) - If we look at your previous pattern that were similar to this, this slider should be facing backward. Apply a CTRL+G to it. If you do this, you'll need to consider moving your next objects also.
3. 02:09:882 (1,2,3,4) - Once again.. THIS is F*CKING CUTE!!
4. 02:36:282 (1,2,3,4) - Same as mentioned at 00:50:982 (2,3) -

1. Add tags, you're mean;w;
2. On each diff, 02:09:882 - 30% volume on that one barely hearable imo, I think 40% volume works better in this case for a proper feedback

1. 00:19:183 (7) - How about ctrl+g that one? I think this 00:19:183 (7,1) - could be emphsize a bit and due to music I don't think this 00:18:282 (4,5,6,7) - shouldn't share same patterning, because (7) have diffrent pitch on drum
2. 00:32:682 (4) - and 01:20:682 (4) - Add nc for slow sv? the sv diffrent seems need to be nc'd
3. 01:08:682 - Add circle there? Eventho you try to follow the vocal, missing a beat on that one somewhat odd to play imo

1. 00:12:582 (2,3) - On that part spacing should be around 0.9x for every 1/1 right?
2. 00:14:682 (1,2) - The spacing doesn't make sense imo why using 1.2x there, unless they are intentional like 00:14:382 (5,1) - to give more emphasis strong beat on (1)
3. 00:52:782 (9) - Ctrl+g that one? I think it should be share same emphasis like you did on 00:43:182 (9) - 01:31:182 (6) - and 01:40:782 (9) - the music sounds same on both part in each kiais imo
4. 01:19:182 (5,1) - Why on 1.2x? yet this one on 00:31:182 (5,1) - use 1.1x
5. 02:18:882 (6) - Add nc for using 1/6? the beat should be more distinguished imo

1. 00:20:982 (5) - Maybe replace with single circle instead? I think it would be great if they are more consistent like 00:11:382 (4,5) - etc before the first kiai https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6802644
2. 02:12:282 (1,2) - Ctrl+g those? so the rhythmical be more make sense, since the long slider for vocal supposed to be on 02:12:282 - instead
3. 02:18:882 (4) - Don't you think 1/6 stream reverse on a normal 200bpm a bit too much? I think you can simplified the rhythmical on that one imo by using 1/1 slider or 1/2 slider reverse, if you not agree then 02:18:882 (4) - Could be add nc for 1/6 so that beat more distinguished

1. 00:43:482 (1,2) - 01:11:682 (4,1) - 01:30:282 (4,1) - 01:45:282 (2,3) - 01:49:482 (1,2,3) - and 02:29:082 (1,2) - Nazi thing but the spacing should be around 1.0x right?
2. 00:53:082 (6) - Why there's a circle on that one? yet on hard and insane there's isn't any circle on that part. I think in each difficulty should be same on how you represent the music
3. 01:36:282 (1,2,3,4) - The flow rather weird imo seems too forced especially on (3,4). Maybe you can readjust this 01:36:882 (3,4) - into https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6802693 or else that plays smoother?
4. 01:54:882 (2,3) - How we turn the cursor on that one way too harsh for lowest diff imo, new player probably still learning basic movement, maybe you can flip like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6802699 or do something else?

Gabe wrote:

Sieg's Normal

1. 00:42:282 - I feel like there is missing a beat in here to emphasize the vocal. I would suggest you to add a circle in here. After that, for your two next objects, I would suggest you to do exactly what you've done to 00:39:882 (3,4,5) - . Since the beat is very similar, there shouldn't be any trouble.
   as option yes, I prefer to keep a bit of variety here with similar end of kiai 00:51:882 (2,3) - that's more entertaining to play imo
2. 01:08:982 (4) - Add a normal sampleset hitsound to this circle. It has to be consistent everywhere!
   yup
3. 01:29:982 (2,3,4) - Same thing as mentioned @00:42:282 -
4. 02:12:282 (1,2) - If we follow the vocals, it would be weird to start clicking a circle when the vocals has a long note. I would suggest you to take these two objects and do a CTRL+G, it would be better if you want to keep the same format.
   idea was to follow "long" sound staring from 02:12:582 (2) - but I guess your suggestion makes sense as more dominant "instrument" to follow here, changed
5. 02:27:582 (2,3,4) - Same applies to 00:42:282 -
6. 02:36:282 (1) - The spacing is quite different here from your previous objects. You should consider moving it to make it consistent with your previous objects!
   that's really minor to match pattering, not a big deal

Nice one

Mako Sakata wrote:

Sieg normal

1. 00:20:982 (5) - Maybe replace with single circle instead? I think it would be great if they are more consistent like 00:11:382 (4,5) - etc before the first kiai https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6802644
   legit
2. 02:12:282 (1,2) - Ctrl+g those? so the rhythmical be more make sense, since the long slider for vocal supposed to be on 02:12:282 - instead
   yup
3. 02:18:882 (4) - Don't you think 1/6 stream reverse on a normal 200bpm a bit too much? I think you can simplified the rhythmical on that one imo by using 1/1 slider or 1/2 slider reverse, if you not agree then 02:18:882 (4) - Could be add nc for 1/6 so that beat more distinguished
   that's notable, I'll ask more opinions around

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Gabe wrote:

hi there, as requested by pm

Easy

1. 00:44:682 (2) - As for this slider, I understand why it's placed that way, as it's not overlapping the previous slider and it has a great distance, however, the spacing gap is too high if we compare it to your other objects. Since it would be weird to have a 1,00x spacing, I suggest you to move this slider to x:332 y:92. The spacing will be 1,04x instead of 1,13x. Make sure to keep the spacing consistent afterward! That spacing difference doesn't really matter gameplay-wise and it's used for clean visual distance so yeah, I'll keep it. I'm very sure it won't cause any confusion for newbies.
2. 01:08:982 (4) - There is missing a normal sampleset a the beginning of the slider. Add it to keep the hitsounds consistent. Yup, applied!
3. 01:12:282 (1) - Move this slider closer to the previous one to have a consistent spacing! Nope, same thing
4. 01:41:082 (1) - I am not suggesting this kind of overlap with the previous circle, it might look weird to beginners. Also, the flow is quite broken if you do something like this. I would suggest you to do something different for this slider to have a better flow and to avoid the overlap. You are right, fixed!
5. 01:43:482 (4) - Starting from here, I would suggest you to do something different with your combos as they are not consistent with your previous combos: The combo pattern changes intentionally. I made it fit to the patterns I used in this diff. Since I used some symmetry I prefer to keep the whole symmetry pattern within the same combo, otherwise it would look weird to me.
   *01:43:482 (4) - Add a new combo and delete the combo on the next object;
   *01:45:882 (3) - Add a new combo;
   *01:48:282 (4) - Add a new combo and delete the combo on the next object;
   *01:50:682 (3) - Add a new combo;
   *01:53:082 (7) - Add a new combo and delete the combo on the next object;
   *01:55:482 (3) - Add a new combo.

Solid difficulty!

Twinzies

1. 00:13:782 (4) - This slider's form and emplacement is visually weird. I'm suggesting you to rotate it in a way that the first part of this slider is perfectly aligned with the previous slider and you could also move it infront of it. Just like this: Hmm I like it though D: Also I think it flows pretty nicely.
   
   Example

   
2. 00:52:482 (8,9) - Just so it's not too awkward, it would be better if you have a consistent spacing with your previous circles, just like you've done with (7,8) @01:40:482 (8,9) - I'd like to keep the slightly higher distance here for emphasis and visuals. Changed it for 1:40 instead
3. 01:08:982 (6) - I'm sure that's on every difficulty.. Make sure to add a Normal Sampleset to keep your hitsounds consistent. Yeah
4. 02:09:882 (1,2,3,4) - *Honorable mention* THIS is F*CKING CUTE. Mao did good here lol
5. 02:38:082 (8) - I am suggesting you to have a better spacing consistency here. By doing so, you'll need to adjust your blanket. Same as previous

Insane

1. 00:50:982 (2,3) - I like the idea for an Insane to do this kind of jump, however I don't feel like you should do that, it's more confusing and theres no presence of any flow. I would suggest you to do a CTRL+G to this two sliders and make them start from the left to the right. It would be way much better that way.. I think it flows super well though :< It's like my favourite pattern in this diff. People will mainly aim for the slider heads here for these slider patterns so if you take that into consideration it flows well.
   
   Example

   
2. 01:39:582 (4) - If we look at your previous pattern that were similar to this, this slider should be facing backward. Apply a CTRL+G to it. If you do this, you'll need to consider moving your next objects also. Yeah, I thought about this but I like the transition to the following pattern and there isn't really the need for consistency here because the pattern is quite intuitive to play as it is now
3. 02:09:882 (1,2,3,4) - Once again.. THIS is F*CKING CUTE!! ♥
4. 02:36:282 (1,2,3,4) - Same as mentioned at 00:50:982 (2,3) - Same

This is a really cute map. I'm looking forward to ranking!

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hello! good to know the project still on going

From pm
Sugestion,

General

1. Add tags, you're mean;w; lol yeah
2. On each diff, 02:09:882 - 30% volume on that one barely hearable imo, I think 40% volume works better in this case for a proper feedback You are right, changed!

Insane

1. 00:19:183 (7) - How about ctrl+g that one? I think this 00:19:183 (7,1) - could be emphsize a bit and due to music I don't think this 00:18:282 (4,5,6,7) - shouldn't share same patterning, because (7) have diffrent pitch on drum Uhh I'm emphasizing the weird 'noises' here though, as I never use 1/2-sliders anywhere else in the verses and the noises are only here.
2. 00:32:682 (4) - and 01:20:682 (4) - Add nc for slow sv? the sv diffrent seems need to be nc'd Nah the SV change is minimal and readable without NC
3. 01:08:682 - Add circle there? Eventho you try to follow the vocal, missing a beat on that one somewhat odd to play imo Hmm this was suggested to me in a testplay because this is the strongest vocal in the whole song basically, for now I'd like to keep it but maybe I'll change it later if more people find it bad

Twinies

1. 00:12:582 (2,3) - On that part spacing should be around 0.9x for every 1/1 right? Doesn't really matter if it's super consistent
2. 00:14:682 (1,2) - The spacing doesn't make sense imo why using 1.2x there, unless they are intentional like 00:14:382 (5,1) - to give more emphasis strong beat on (1) It is to avoid overlaps with the crossed slider
3. 00:52:782 (9) - Ctrl+g that one? I think it should be share same emphasis like you did on 00:43:182 (9) - 01:31:182 (6) - and 01:40:782 (9) - the music sounds same on both part in each kiais imo Yup, changed.
4. 01:19:182 (5,1) - Why on 1.2x? yet this one on 00:31:182 (5,1) - use 1.1x It isn't even noticable ingame :<
5. 02:18:882 (6) - Add nc for using 1/6? the beat should be more distinguished imo Yeah, added!

Easy

1. 00:43:482 (1,2) - 01:11:682 (4,1) - 01:30:282 (4,1) - 01:45:282 (2,3) - 01:49:482 (1,2,3) - and 02:29:082 (1,2) - Nazi thing but the spacing should be around 1.0x right? I prefer visual consistency and clean patterning over perfectly consistent DS here.
2. 00:53:082 (6) - Why there's a circle on that one? yet on hard and insane there's isn't any circle on that part. I think in each difficulty should be same on how you represent the music True, deleted.
3. 01:36:282 (1,2,3,4) - The flow rather weird imo seems too forced especially on (3,4). Maybe you can readjust this 01:36:882 (3,4) - into https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6802693 or else that plays smoother? I think this flows pretty well o.o It's just some zig-zag and then a little drop to the sides
4. 01:54:882 (2,3) - How we turn the cursor on that one way too harsh for lowest diff imo, new player probably still learning basic movement, maybe you can flip like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6802699 or do something else? True, applied your suggestion

Sorry I don't check the hitsound atm, hope they are not missing anything :p

1. Tags are missing additional stuff like electropop or synthpop. Subgenre tags often help out a lot, don't neglect them! You might also add tags like Collab collaboration if you want to emphasize that there is a difficulty with variable mapping style.
2. You don't really need Widescreen Support, unless you expect somebody to drop a cool storyboard. (Which would be amazing, to be honest)
3. I'd recommend blending the colours you have as to match with the background better.
4. 00:53:082 - don't you feel like snapping the break here would work better with the vocals? Give it a try, should work for all difficulties fairly well.

1. 00:33:882 (1) - minor - if there is any way we could have (1)'s tail farther apart from the previous hitobject, please try it. So, players won't have a single chance of clicking on the slidertail by mistake. After all, since there are no followpoints it could get a bit misleading. example
2. 00:43:482 (1,2) - minor - this would be great if you could get the sliders to blanket each other. This would give a pretty epic pattern, making the kiai part feel stronger, which is a good means of emphasising music things on the easiest difficulty. In case you need a picture
3. 01:19:482 (1,2) - these two are connected in terms of lyrics and similar-sounding instruments. Why not connect them by beginner-friendly flow or make them visually similar? Or even both at the same time! Example
4. 01:36:882 (3,4) - minor - I know you've missed those "blanket this" mods. This is one of those. Blanket could be improved here
5. 01:44:082 - it is quite surprising to have this one ignored whereas 01:41:682 - was mapped. Try to at least curve 01:43:482 (4) - in some way that would stress the beat somehow? I guess you could go for variety, but I believe that the part where the beat goes quite different from the regular parts should be as consistent as possible to keep beginners stable.
   Note: 01:48:282 (6) - same here.
   
   I feel like reusing the same pattern multiple times takes out a bit of creativity and makes the difficulty feel somewhat unoriginal to me. I understand that the lyrics and sounds are very repetitive, yet I am still left in a bit of a disappointment as I expected more interesting patterns from this difficulty.

1. My personal preferences oblige me to request CS 3,5. Lower CS would require a bit more aim and feel more appropriate for the tense atmosphere of the song. I would insist even on CS4 but the spread doesn't allow that.
2. the rhythm is mostly 1/1 with 1/2 inclusions which don't happen very often. I would recommend Tick Rate 1 as this would feel better with the rhythm used here.
3. 02:13:182 (2,3) - wasn't it like the only stack in this part? Felt a bit our of place to me. Consider unstacking?
4. 02:18:882 (4) - could use a plain 1/1 slider with red nodes representing pitch changes. This way it would be a lot easier and far more predictable. I'd personally avoid tricky combo-breaking patterns near the end of a Normal difficulty.
   
   Great stuff, man. Just as always.

1. 00:20:682 - I feel uncomfortable with the beat here being ignored. PErhaps, you could replace the slider with a circle on this very beat. Give it a try and tell me how you feel about it.
2. 00:50:982 (2,3) - feels a bit overdone in comarison with the previous patterns. Taken into consideration that the first two patterns were symmetrical and had no jump on (3) at all this feels pretty weird.
3. 01:13:932 (4,5) - could use the same spacing as (3,4) use. As there is a pretty intense 1/2 sound playing an extra spacing emphasis wouldn't hurt. Also, you can lower Ds to x1.4 to make things a bit easier.
   Note: same would apply for similar patterns.
4. 02:12:282 (3) - the word "hearts" itself has no heart-shaped slider. Pretty illogical, if you ask me. Consider adding one here or doing some magic with inversing patterns, so that it would get a lovely heart-shaped slider?
   
   I'd put a heart on this. A tiny neat heart, just like the one Marina would put on her cheek.

1. 01:27:582 (4,1) - I would consider inverting these two individually to get a bit more emphasis on (1). Example
2. 01:30:282 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ever thought about curving this circle-chain in a shape of a heart? Could be done a couple more times here and there, if you like the idea.
3. 01:38:682 (1,2) - feels a little bit too fast as for me. I would lower Ds to the more typical x2,6 or so,. You can make it work and look pretty if you try to curve the sliders like you did it with 00:48:282 (1,2,3,4) -
4. 01:43:482 (1,2,3) - 01:44:082 (4,5,6,7,8) - these two are in the same combo and that feels a bit too sudden. Perhaps, you could either stick to one DS or use a new combo to warn players about the DS change.
   Note: 01:53:082 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same here
5. 02:12:282 (3) - the word "hearts" itself has no heart-shaped slider. Pretty illogical, if you ask me. Consider adding one here or doing some magic with inversing patterns, so that it would get a lovely heart-shaped slider?
   
   Neat. I loved it.

Bakari wrote:

[Sieg's Normal]

1. My personal preferences oblige me to request CS 3,5. Lower CS would require a bit more aim and feel more appropriate for the tense atmosphere of the song. I would insist even on CS4 but the spread doesn't allow that.
   Twin Hard uses 3.5 so I guess we should stay on progression
2. the rhythm is mostly 1/1 with 1/2 inclusions which don't happen very often. I would recommend Tick Rate 1 as this would feel better with the rhythm used here.
   makes sense
3. 02:13:182 (2,3) - wasn't it like the only stack in this part? Felt a bit our of place to me. Consider unstacking?
   k
4. 02:18:882 (4) - could use a plain 1/1 slider with red nodes representing pitch changes. This way it would be a lot easier and far more predictable. I'd personally avoid tricky combo-breaking patterns near the end of a Normal difficulty.
   not sure about red dots on that cs and slider length, but i've made round slider there instead
   
   Great stuff, man. Just as always.

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270,198,151782,2,0,P|187:238|56:169,1,240,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
58,81,152682,2,0,L|-12:69,2,60,4|4|0,3:2|0:3|1:0,0:0:0:0:
152,62,153282,1,0,3:0:0:0:
247,75,153582,1,0,1:0:0:0:
342,66,153882,6,0,B|430:80|430:80|482:68,2,120,4|0|2,3:2|1:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
247,75,154782,1,0,1:0:0:0:
185,148,155082,1,4,3:2:0:0:
137,231,155382,2,0,L|7:218,2,120,0|2|0,1:0|3:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
105,332,156282,6,0,B|176:345|254:299|237:188|237:188|267:254|322:291,1,360,4|0,3:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
407,309,157482,2,0,L|392:376,2,60,2|4|0,3:2|0:3|1:0,0:0:0:0:
467,234,158082,2,0,L|482:167,2,60,4|4|4,0:3|1:2|0:3,0:0:0:0:
508,321,158682,1,4,3:1:0:0:

Bakari wrote:

[Twin Hard]

1. 01:13:932 (4,5) - could use the same spacing as (3,4) use. As there is a pretty intense 1/2 sound playing an extra spacing emphasis wouldn't hurt. Also, you can lower Ds to x1.4 to make things a bit easier. This is for consistency with the ones like 01:15:882 (3,4,5) - .
   Note: same would apply for similar patterns.
2. 02:12:282 (3) - the word "hearts" itself has no heart-shaped slider. Pretty illogical, if you ask me. Consider adding one here or doing some magic with inversing patterns, so that it would get a lovely heart-shaped slider? But isn't it "Lonely Hearts Club" as a whole? D:
   
   I'd put a heart on this. A tiny neat heart, just like the one Marina would put on her cheek.

Bakari wrote:

Yo, as promised like 2 weeks ago. I am (not really) sorry about the delay

[General]

1. Tags are missing additional stuff like electropop or synthpop. Subgenre tags often help out a lot, don't neglect them! You might also add tags like Collab collaboration if you want to emphasize that there is a difficulty with variable mapping style. added some
2. You don't really need Widescreen Support, unless you expect somebody to drop a cool storyboard. (Which would be amazing, to be honest) it doesn't matter when there is no sb
3. I'd recommend blending the colours you have as to match with the background better. I like the contrast coming from the bright colors and the grey background. If I would blend them they would end up grey too lol.
4. 00:53:082 - don't you feel like snapping the break here would work better with the vocals? Give it a try, should work for all difficulties fairly well. it's hardly any different and not really noticable ingame

[Easy]

1. 00:33:882 (1) - minor - if there is any way we could have (1)'s tail farther apart from the previous hitobject, please try it. So, players won't have a single chance of clicking on the slidertail by mistake. After all, since there are no followpoints it could get a bit misleading. example done
2. 00:43:482 (1,2) - minor - this would be great if you could get the sliders to blanket each other. This would give a pretty epic pattern, making the kiai part feel stronger, which is a good means of emphasising music things on the easiest difficulty. In case you need a picture yes
3. 01:19:482 (1,2) - these two are connected in terms of lyrics and similar-sounding instruments. Why not connect them by beginner-friendly flow or make them visually similar? Or even both at the same time! Example i used a different pattern here and for the previous one too to spice them up a bit (using different shapes / a little less obvious flow)
4. 01:36:882 (3,4) - minor - I know you've missed those "blanket this" mods. This is one of those. Blanket could be improved here i intentionally overblanket in this diff because i have more than averagely curved sliders
5. 01:44:082 - it is quite surprising to have this one ignored whereas 01:41:682 - was mapped. Try to at least curve 01:43:482 (4) - in some way that would stress the beat somehow? I guess you could go for variety, but I believe that the part where the beat goes quite different from the regular parts should be as consistent as possible to keep beginners stable. but there is no drum there D:
   Note: 01:48:282 (6) - same here.
   
   I feel like reusing the same pattern multiple times takes out a bit of creativity and makes the difficulty feel somewhat unoriginal to me. I understand that the lyrics and sounds are very repetitive, yet I am still left in a bit of a disappointment as I expected more interesting patterns from this difficulty.

[Twin Hard]

1. 00:20:682 - I feel uncomfortable with the beat here being ignored. PErhaps, you could replace the slider with a circle on this very beat. Give it a try and tell me how you feel about it. following vocals throughout the whole map though :<
2. 00:50:982 (2,3) - feels a bit overdone in comarison with the previous patterns. Taken into consideration that the first two patterns were symmetrical and had no jump on (3) at all this feels pretty weird. yeah nerfed with some ctrl+g magic :3
   
   I'd put a heart on this. A tiny neat heart, just like the one Marina would put on her cheek.

[Insane]

1. 01:27:582 (4,1) - I would consider inverting these two individually to get a bit more emphasis on (1). Example but then i'd have much less movement between the sliders which is what i am aiming for here
2. 01:30:282 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ever thought about curving this circle-chain in a shape of a heart? Could be done a couple more times here and there, if you like the idea. hmm a heart would be a bit weird i think in terms of aesthetics here, but i changed this because it flowed very poorly
3. 01:38:682 (1,2) - feels a little bit too fast as for me. I would lower Ds to the more typical x2,6 or so,. You can make it work and look pretty if you try to curve the sliders like you did it with 00:48:282 (1,2,3,4) - i don't think it feels so big xD
4. 01:43:482 (1,2,3) - 01:44:082 (4,5,6,7,8) - these two are in the same combo and that feels a bit too sudden. Perhaps, you could either stick to one DS or use a new combo to warn players about the DS change. since there is no 1/4 anywhere i think this is pretty obvious
   Note: 01:53:082 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same here
5. 02:12:282 (3) - the word "hearts" itself has no heart-shaped slider. Pretty illogical, if you ask me. Consider adding one here or doing some magic with inversing patterns, so that it would get a lovely heart-shaped slider? what Mao wrote for Hard
   
   Neat. I loved it.

Where do I sign up for the club?

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Best of luck!

Liuth wrote:

Easy

00:52:782 (5) - maybe move that circle either to x256 or just somewhere near tail of the slider? since the slider doesn't give it a good blanket and that place seems a bit random fixed

Twin Hard

00:42:282 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - I know it's kiai and so but compared to previous patterns, isn't this one a bit too difficult? It's harder to play than this 00:51:882 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - or this 01:30:282 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - for example and flow is also way sharper.
02:27:882 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - same ^^^^ the movement actually plays more smoothly i think, because players are more used to sharp movements, also yeah in any case i don't think it's a difficulty spike and insane uses a lot of movements like this too


Insane

01:24:732 (2,3) - these sliders are a bit too sharp, at least for me. maybe you should make them a bit softer?
01:34:332 (2,3) - same ^^^
01:35:682 (4,5) - ^^ i know what you mean, but these are here to form proper hearts so i think it's fine :b

gosh I love so much your sexy triangles in Hard diff

GL, song is amazing! <3