21:16 -Kamikaze-: ok hi
21:16 -Kamikaze-: w
21:16 Elementaires: huie
21:16 Elementaires: hi
21:16 -Kamikaze-: lol dude you don't even realize how bad that typo was
21:16 -Kamikaze-: huie reads as huje in polish
21:17 -Kamikaze-: and that's dicks
21:17 Elementaires: wow
21:17 -Kamikaze-: OFF TO A GOOD START FELLAS
21:17 Elementaires: :D
21:17 Elementaires: huie huiehuie
21:17 -Kamikaze-: g a y
21:17 Elementaires: okay
21:17 -Kamikaze-: ok so first things first
21:17 -Kamikaze-: why EZ NM as diffnames
21:17 -Kamikaze-: Easy Normal is so much better looking
21:18 Elementaires: yes i dont know
21:18 -Kamikaze-: (ok)
21:18 Elementaires: i dont even know if the gap is okay
21:18 Elementaires: easy is very easy
21:18 Elementaires: and normal is.. i dont know
21:19 Elementaires: some tricky long notes
21:19 -Kamikaze-: judging by starrating/object count it should be okay
21:19 -Kamikaze-: I'll check it out on auto tho
21:20 Elementaires: the NM is bad; i dont know how to make new patterns to not have repetition
21:20 Elementaires: and i tried some hitsounds so it makes ugly
21:21 -Kamikaze-: tbh it's hard to not make it repetetive with this song
21:21 Elementaires: :(
21:21 -Kamikaze-: that's not a bad thing tho
21:22 -Kamikaze-: if song is repeating itself 4 times and you repeat the same thing 4 times blame the song
21:22 -Kamikaze-: you're not really going for pitch relevancy points are you
21:23 Elementaires: i tried
21:23 Elementaires: to follow the pictch
21:23 -Kamikaze-: hmm
21:23 Elementaires: the pitch fuck
21:23 Elementaires: well maybe not on EZ
21:24 Elementaires: Easy*
21:24 -Kamikaze-: okay I'm terrible at pitch so I won't really go into detail with it I guess
21:24 -Kamikaze-: ok go to le easy
21:24 -Kamikaze-: 00:00:828 (828|3,1428|3) - move those to 5 maybe?
21:24 -Kamikaze-: |1-9|
21:25 Elementaires: right
21:25 -Kamikaze-: 00:02:328 - you could accent this whole fulte section with a note there
21:25 -Kamikaze-: "sample effect" how I call it
21:26 -Kamikaze-: 00:07:128 - same
21:26 -Kamikaze-: and to all of those honestly
21:26 Elementaires: i can place on 1 and 9 then
21:26 -Kamikaze-: yea sure
21:27 -Kamikaze-: make it on the other hand than notes around it are tho
21:27 -Kamikaze-: ballance and shit
21:27 Elementaires: ah
21:27 -Kamikaze-: 00:10:128 (10128|6,10428|2,11028|2) - ctrl+h for pitch?
21:28 -Kamikaze-: 00:13:728 (13728|5) - you're suddenly accenting that flute which you didn't accent at 00:04:128 - ?
21:29 Elementaires: because im dumb
21:30 -Kamikaze-: 00:18:528 (18528|4) - same tbh
21:30 -Kamikaze-: idk
21:31 -Kamikaze-: 00:22:728 - add a note for clap
21:31 -Kamikaze-: 00:23:928 - ^
21:31 -Kamikaze-: 00:27:528 - ^ tougher pattern but w/e
21:31 -Kamikaze-: you could add at 7 here and maybe move 00:28:128 (28128|8,28428|8) - to 8 even tho they're the same pitch
21:32 -Kamikaze-: your choice
21:34 -Kamikaze-: same for all claps that you've layered with 1 note
21:34 -Kamikaze-: or unless those that have that other thingy
21:34 -Kamikaze-: should help with bridging the gap as well
21:35 Elementaires: like where
21:35 -Kamikaze-: 00:28:728 - 
21:36 Elementaires: so i basically add a note on all the empty 1/2
21:36 -Kamikaze-: add a note where claps are
21:36 -Kamikaze-: not sure if they're constant 1/2
21:37 -Kamikaze-: let me know when you apply things I've mentioned
21:38 -Kamikaze-: (they kinda apply to whole map)
21:38 -Kamikaze-: ((blame the song))
21:38 Elementaires: yeah okay ;w;
21:40 -Kamikaze-: stop around 01:07:728 - with the sample effect notes for flute
21:40 -Kamikaze-: I have a good idea for further gap bridging
21:45 Elementaires: im updating
21:45 -Kamikaze-: oki
21:46 Elementaires: i tried something near 29 secondes to 40 like mini stairs just tell me if it is gud or not
21:46 -Kamikaze-: oki will see
21:47 Elementaires: updatededed
21:48 Elementaires: well i just hope i understood you successfully
21:49 -Kamikaze-: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3944757
21:49 -Kamikaze-: mfw letterboxing
21:49 Elementaires: ohfuck
21:49 -Kamikaze-: life goes on
21:49 Elementaires: what to do
21:49 -Kamikaze-: nothin'
21:50 -Kamikaze-: 00:13:728 (13728|5) - kinda meant to delete those notes tbh
21:51 -Kamikaze-: 00:23:628 (23628|5) - move to 5 for pitch
21:52 -Kamikaze-: 00:25:128 - something like this would be better pitch wise http://puu.sh/lgOI1/3044252a62.png
21:52 -Kamikaze-: those stairs are okay, tho pitch wise they're kinda lol
21:52 -Kamikaze-: idea is good
21:53 -Kamikaze-: 00:29:628 (29628|1,29778|3) - this _could_ be moved towards right
21:53 Elementaires: yes
21:54 -Kamikaze-: actually you could work more on spreading those stairs more and making them even _spacing_
21:54 Elementaires: i feel like its a mess LOL
21:54 Elementaires: yeah
21:54 -Kamikaze-: lmao
21:54 -Kamikaze-: 00:37:278 - add a note here tho to be consistent
21:55 -Kamikaze-: 01:05:328 - could add a note or two
21:56 -Kamikaze-: (second being on next 1/4)
21:56 -Kamikaze-: 01:06:528 - same
21:56 -Kamikaze-: 01:07:728 - add a note as well
21:57 -Kamikaze-: 01:08:028 (68028|4,68328|1,68628|4,68928|1,69228|4,69528|1,69828|4) - you could/should spread out at least white tick notes more and move the main anchor away
21:57 -Kamikaze-: 01:10:128 (70128|6,70428|6,70728|6,71028|6,71328|6,71628|6) - and then make this a trill, preferably two handed symmetrical one (373737 or something like that)
21:59 Elementaires: i dont get it about 01:08:028 (68028|4,68328|1,68628|4,68928|1,69228|4,69528|1,69828|4) -
21:59 -Kamikaze-: spread out the pattern
22:00 -Kamikaze-: if you want to keep the main beat anchor (01:08:028 (68028|4,68628|4,69228|4,69828|4) - ) at least move it away a bit
22:00 Elementaires: 01:07:728 (67728|6) - should i delete this
22:01 -Kamikaze-: nah it's fine
22:02 Elementaires: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3944811
22:03 -Kamikaze-: yup, that's okay
22:03 -Kamikaze-: ok last thing I wanted to mention about Easy diff is that you could layer those flutes from 01:14:328 - onward with short LNs
22:04 -Kamikaze-: that is for the whole 'burst'
22:04 -Kamikaze-: rest of the map is the same things mentioned
22:05 -Kamikaze-: 01:29:628 - o you may map those sound streams fully from here on because it's the end anyway
22:05 -Kamikaze-: the 1/4 I mean
22:06 Elementaires: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3944825 yellow or white
22:07 Elementaires: and im okkay for the 1/4 streams
22:07 -Kamikaze-: yellow
22:07 -Kamikaze-: brb 10 mins
22:14 -Kamikaze-: okback
22:15 -Kamikaze-: did you apply everything to easy?
22:15 Elementaires: just submitted
22:15 Elementaires: tell me what you think
22:15 Elementaires: im scared
22:16 -Kamikaze-: 00:20:328 (20328|4,20328|2,20928|8,21528|2,21528|4) - nope, not what I mean
22:16 -Kamikaze-: I meant that pitch changes
22:16 -Kamikaze-: so you should move the second one
22:16 -Kamikaze-: applies to all similar thingies with pitch change
22:17 -Kamikaze-: 00:31:728 - not missing
22:17 -Kamikaze-: note*
22:17 -Kamikaze-: 00:36:528 - same
22:18 -Kamikaze-: 00:36:828 (36828|6,36978|3,37128|0,37278|2,37428|6) - it'd be better/easier/whatever if it was just a reverse stair
22:18 -Kamikaze-: 00:41:328 - mIsSiNg NoTe
22:19 -Kamikaze-: 00:46:128 - asme
22:19 -Kamikaze-: 00:49:728 - could add here as well
22:19 -Kamikaze-: 00:50:928 - add here as well on 7th
22:20 -Kamikaze-: hmm maybe I shouldn't be this hard on the metronomes
22:20 -Kamikaze-: 01:00:528 - add on 1st fuck it
22:20 Elementaires: yeah i dont know
22:21 -Kamikaze-: 01:12:828 (72828|7,72978|5,73128|3) - move this further away from the note on 9th just before those
22:21 -Kamikaze-: can be tricky to hit
22:22 -Kamikaze-: 01:19:128 (79128|1,79128|2) - ok, move the note on the other hand, this combination is kind of a combobreak
22:22 -Kamikaze-: 01:20:028 (80028|3,80328|0,80628|3) - same 1/4 reverse stair idea because you layered it before
22:23 -Kamikaze-: idk what to do with those metronomes because sometimes you map it like on 01:17:328 (77328|2) - and sometimes you don't like 01:19:728 - 
22:23 -Kamikaze-: damn
22:24 Elementaires: yes i dont know either
22:24 Elementaires: i should put a note everytime
22:24 Elementaires: i think
22:24 -Kamikaze-: yeah I was thinking the same thing
22:24 -Kamikaze-: to mark the 'start' of the section
22:25 -Kamikaze-: man this feels like a bn check
22:25 -Kamikaze-: gEtTiNg ReAdY fOr My NeW jOb
22:25 -Kamikaze-: sry
22:26 Elementaires: lol its cool
22:26 Elementaires: im very bad at mapping so i can see my mistakes
22:26 -Kamikaze-: you made a wise move of mapping something rather easy and short tho
22:27 -Kamikaze-: and it's not nearly as bas as you would think
22:27 -Kamikaze-: bad*
22:27 -Kamikaze-: though I guess I won't go into Normal diff because I have like 30 mins left before I'll have to go
22:28 -Kamikaze-: but oh well
22:28 -Kamikaze-: note consistency wise normal is looking a lot better
22:28 Elementaires: you can do it another day its okay lol
22:28 Elementaires: ah :3
22:29 -Kamikaze-: it generally needs pattern adjustments and/or pitch adjustments
22:29 -Kamikaze-: 90% being the pitch imho
22:29 -Kamikaze-: lol
22:29 -Kamikaze-: btw this is a really easy song to hitsound lmao
22:29 -Kamikaze-: I'm jelly
22:30 -Kamikaze-: trying to hitsound absurd gaff is slowly making me want to dig my eyes out
22:30 Elementaires: could be easy but not for noobs like me
22:31 -Kamikaze-: hear clap in music - put clap on playfield
22:31 -Kamikaze-: rinse and repeat
22:31 -Kamikaze-: aaaand you have rankable hitsounds
22:32 Elementaires: good
22:32 Elementaires: i'll try my best
22:32 Elementaires: and thanks ><
22:32 -Kamikaze-: np haha
22:32 -Kamikaze-: imma edit the post with log now

1. 00:14:028 (14028|5,14028|0,14328|0,14328|5) - Pitch here is not really the same, change some columns. I mean keyboard pitch, not flute, so you jack 2 notes a 2 notes not instead of jacking 4 notes.
2. 00:28:128 (28128|3,28128|7,28428|5,28428|1,28728|5,28728|1) - For pitch:
   00:28:128 (28128|3,28128|7,28428|1,28428|5) - jack these
   00:28:428 (28428|5,28428|1,28728|5,28728|1) - Don't jack these

• column convention - | 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 8
  
  H/R - hold/release

• 🔍 Beatmap Metadata / Options
  Looks good to me except:
  Go to Song Setup -> Design -> Letterbox during breaks (please uncheck this for both beatmaps).
  
  🕐 Timing Sections
  No SV. Timing is good.

• BG is nice. I wish someone could help edit my BGs in the future ;w;

• 
  The BG size is 1364x767. I resized it for you to 1366x768. Take it here.
  [Click Here to View Rescaled BG]

• Mostly pleasant to play. I love the keysounds at the end so much. Great job!

• There are multiple inconsistencies in long note usage and jumps. Some of these are suggestions but I would encourage you to try them out. Do be careful with your existing keysounds.

• HP 8.0 (8.0)
  OD 8.0 (8.0)

1. 00:00:528 (528|1,528|7) - Inconsistency: Remove one of the 2 notes here because
   one note at 00:05:328 (5328|2)
   one note at 00:10:128 (10128|5)
2. 00:02:928 (2928|1) - Inconsistency: turn into short slider ending at 00:03:078 and move slider to 0.
   00:07:728 (7728|1) - Same here
   00:12:528 (12528|4) - turn to short slider and move 00:12:828 (12828|3) to 4.
   00:17:628 (17628|7) - short slider.
3. 00:50:778 - Add note on 4 just like 00:51:978 (51978|4)
   01:09:228 (69228|2) - Add note on 6.
   01:10:578 - Add note on 3
4. 00:56:028 (56028|3,57228|3) - turn to short sliders?
   01:06:828 (66828|6) - turn to short slider?
   01:08:028 (68028|2) - turn to short slider?
   01:09:228 (69228|2) - ^?
5. 01:17:028 - Possible missing note. Reference 01:21:828 (81828|6)
   01:26:628 - Possible missing note.
   01:30:528 (90528|1) - ^.
6. 01:14:328 - Add note on 3.
7. 01:19:428 - Missing percussion. Add note on 5. Reference 01:14:628 (74628|2,74628|0)
   01:19:128 (79128|5,79228|7,79328|3,79428|1) - Repattern such that the four 1/6 lines each have 2,1,1,2 notes.
   01:20:928 (80928|2,81028|3,81128|4,81228|5,81228|1) - ^. slider Release does not count as a note.
   01:23:928 (83928|6,84028|4,84128|5,84228|2,84228|0) - ^.
   01:28:728 (88728|5,88828|7,88928|3,89028|1) - ^.
   01:30:528 (90528|1,90628|2,90728|3,90828|6,90828|4) - ^.
8. 01:29:628 (89628|6,89928|3,90228|2) - double up.
9. 01:33:528 (93528|6,93528|2) - turn both into sliders just like Easy (9K)

1. Good keysound in the end!

• Good introductory diff to 9K.

• I would suggest lowering the HP and OD to make it more friendly to new people to 9K. There are also a couple of inconsistencies so I would suggest fixing them.

• HP 8.0 (7.5)
  OD 8.0 (7.5)

1. 00:37:728 (37728|4) - turn to slider ending at 00:38:028
   01:30:528 (90528|3) - Hold and Release at 01:30:828
   01:32:928 (92928|2) - H and R at 01:33:228
   Reference 01:14:328 (74328|4)
2. 00:47:928 - Missing notes. Better add note on 7
   Reference 00:43:128 (43128|7,43128|1) and 01:21:528 (81528|8,81528|0) etc.
3. 01:12:228 - Missing instrumental sound. Add note on 0 or 1.
4. 01:33:528 (93528|5) - Move to 4? it's my personal preference to have a symmetrical ending on 9K.

1. Perfect hitsound. Great job.

20:17 -Kamikaze-: <3
20:18 Elementaires: :DDDDDDDDDDddddddddddd
20:18 -Kamikaze-: man why are you not in the other discords
20:19 Elementaires: i left the soft one because idk
20:19 -Kamikaze-: hol y what are those chime hitsounds
20:19 -Kamikaze-: so good
20:20 Elementaires: :$
20:20 -Kamikaze-: yeah but why are you not in the osu mapping and osumania servers
20:20 Elementaires: o
20:20 Elementaires: i never get invited
20:20 -Kamikaze-: ay
20:20 -Kamikaze-: brb sending invites on discord
20:22 Elementaires: thank you
20:22 Elementaires: :)
20:22 -Kamikaze-: np bruh
20:24 -Kamikaze-: ok so, this map will take like no time at all to mod honestly
20:25 Elementaires: maybe not
20:25 -Kamikaze-: what can possibly go wrong in this
20:26 -Kamikaze-: especially considering that we went through easy a while ago already
20:26 Elementaires: i dont know
20:26 Elementaires: D:
20:26 -Kamikaze-: 00:29:928 - you're not accenting claps with doubles cause of more complex rhythms, correct?
20:27 Elementaires: yes
20:28 -Kamikaze-: so here 00:32:928 - you should either do 1-1-2 (delete one of 00:33:228 (33228|4,33228|6) - ) or do a 1-2-3 with some pitch for flute
20:29 Elementaires: I deleted one
20:29 -Kamikaze-: oki
20:29 -Kamikaze-: which one
20:29 Elementaires: the pscapcbe boar
20:30 Elementaires: the space bar one
20:30 -Kamikaze-: nice
20:30 -Kamikaze-: move the two on 7th to 9th maybe?
20:30 -Kamikaze-: column looks lonely
20:31 Elementaires: oh right i should do this
20:31 -Kamikaze-: 00:36:828 - shouldn't this be like 35753 pitch wise
20:32 Elementaires: probably but im afraid of the difficulty of the pattern for a beginner
20:32 Elementaires: wait
20:32 -Kamikaze-: I meant more of a pitch shift
20:33 Elementaires: i made it 24751
20:33 -Kamikaze-: nice
20:33 -Kamikaze-: 00:43:128 (43128|7) - shouldn't this be on 6th?
20:34 -Kamikaze-: pitcherino
20:34 -Kamikaze-: tho
20:34 -Kamikaze-: hmm
20:34 Elementaires: hmm
20:34 -Kamikaze-: you're not -really- following flute pitch
20:35 -Kamikaze-: so I guess it's okay
20:35 Elementaires: i can move it on 7
20:35 Elementaires: urgh
20:35 Elementaires: i dont know
20:35 -Kamikaze-: you'd have to move the other ones too
20:35 -Kamikaze-: it's ok
20:36 -Kamikaze-: 00:50:928 - why the double and/or why only here
20:36 Elementaires: YES i dont know why its a double, i just saw it like 5min ago
20:37 Elementaires: deleted 6
20:37 -Kamikaze-: oki
20:37 -Kamikaze-: and the only real problem I have
20:37 -Kamikaze-: 01:12:528 - 
20:37 -Kamikaze-: when you "keysound" it like that
20:37 -Kamikaze-: you should follow pitch more
20:38 -Kamikaze-: imo
20:38 Elementaires: i see
20:39 -Kamikaze-: amount of notes and patterning is okay, but make better use of pitch 
20:39 -Kamikaze-: and in the meantime I'll check the hitsound files
20:39 Elementaires: wait im gonna do changes and update it
20:39 -Kamikaze-: do the pitch changes now
20:40 -Kamikaze-: while I check the hs
20:42 Elementaires: im bad at this it makes some huge space like for example on 8 and 9;; or maybe its my illusion
20:42 -Kamikaze-: you don't have to follow it strictly
20:43 -Kamikaze-: just that the flow of notes should represent pitch flow more or less
20:43 -Kamikaze-: like when the pitch goes up, you do a 357 or 468 or 579 stair
20:44 -Kamikaze-: example
20:44 -Kamikaze-: because at the start there is (was) a 01:12:828 (72828|5,72978|3,73128|1) - stair for when pitch goes higher 
20:44 -Kamikaze-: and that's not okay imo
20:47 Elementaires: updated
20:47 -Kamikaze-: okay
20:47 -Kamikaze-: I've checked half of hs and most have 2ms delay which is okay but one has 5
20:47 -Kamikaze-: so I'll send fixed version in a sec
20:47 -Kamikaze-: once I'm done with all
20:48 Elementaires: ah fuck, feerum talked me about that i didnt know that "rule"
20:49 -Kamikaze-: raika you motherfucker
20:49 Elementaires: D:
20:49 -Kamikaze-: there's one file which has exactly 5ms delay
20:49 -Kamikaze-: sorry
20:49 -Kamikaze-: 4,95ms delay
20:49 -Kamikaze-: ffs
20:50 -Kamikaze-: http://puu.sh/nAGrV/b43c5cdc31.png
20:50 Elementaires: :(
20:50 Elementaires: can ouy fix it
20:50 -Kamikaze-: yea
20:51 -Kamikaze-: doing it along side checking dw
20:53 -Kamikaze-: http://puu.sh/nAGF2/ad55ba2498.rar
20:53 -Kamikaze-: replace those files and update
20:53 -Kamikaze-: I'll be back in 10 mins
20:55 Elementaires: done
20:55 Elementaires: (ok)
21:06 -Kamikaze-: ok back
21:07 Elementaires: yes
21:12 -Kamikaze-: ok easy is ✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔
21:12 Elementaires: o
21:12 Elementaires: :)
21:14 -Kamikaze-: Two timing points exist at the same time!	01:12:528
21:14 -Kamikaze-: o
21:14 *-Kamikaze- is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/813334 onoken - children's domain [Normal]]
21:15 Elementaires: oops
21:15 Elementaires: deleted one
21:16 -Kamikaze-: 00:23:628 - not sure if those should be both triples with one note changing cuz pitch
21:17 -Kamikaze-: I feel like it should
21:17 -Kamikaze-: so add one on 6 I think
21:17 Elementaires: note on 6 then
21:17 Elementaires: yes
21:18 -Kamikaze-: 00:28:428 (28428|3) - move to 2 and add on 5th
21:19 Elementaires: done
21:19 -Kamikaze-: rest looks fine to me honestly
21:20 -Kamikaze-: 1/6 streams do not follow the pitch perfectly but they are simplified in patterns
21:20 -Kamikaze-: which is nice
21:20 -Kamikaze-: double usage is quite heavy but it's okay as well imo
21:21 Elementaires: o thank you;;
21:22 -Kamikaze-: 01:30:528 (90528|1,90628|2,90728|3,90828|4) - this stream is meh in pitch
21:22 -Kamikaze-: but idk
21:22 -Kamikaze-: and 01:32:178 (92178|8,92478|7) - aren't doubles?
21:23 Elementaires: the stream pitch: hm i tried a pattern which is ofcourse not pitch following so idk
21:24 Elementaires: and those doesnt sound doubles for me
21:26 -Kamikaze-: yeah you fine
21:26 -Kamikaze-: update
21:26 -Kamikaze-: and I'm gonna post