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iNID - Dance Away

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Sakura
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, October 21, 2010 at 7:56:23 AM

Artist: iNID
Title: Dance Away
Source: LaTale
Tags: Sakura301 OGPlanet Aeria Games Abio Club Garven Sallad4ever lepidopodus KRZY
BPM: 150
Filesize: 3687kb
Play Time: 02:22
Difficulties Available:
  1. Garven's Easy (1.91 stars, 147 notes)
  2. Insane (4.99 stars, 388 notes)
  3. KRZY's Hard (4.35 stars, 223 notes)
  4. lepidon! - Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 852 notes)
  5. Sallad's Normal (3.83 stars, 184 notes)
Download: iNID - Dance Away
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Reminder I'm more interested in a mod post than a star, please dont just Star~
Fun Fact: This was intended to be a mostly solo mapset, since i only requested 1 guest diff, however ppl came interested in mapping guest diffs and i dont like rejecting stuff, so i decided to keep this as another mapset like Colorful X Melody, where each person mapped 1 diff including me.
10/14: Changed Background (hope this one's better than the last)
10/12: Changed combo colors on all diff thanks to lovhin456's mod

Ready for Modding~
Sumaki
Great map, even tho i can't beat it :P but i like how the streams are all timed really good.
Star!~
Topic Starter
Sakura

Sumaki wrote:

Great map, even tho i can't beat it :P
Star!~
Well next time you could write a mod post or something, instead of just a star post please? :<
Garven
Since you were hinting at it, here's the progress so far. I'm so awesome: whistle, clap, and finish all on the same note. Rawr.

Sakura Hana wrote:

Reminder I'm more interested in a mod post than a star, please dont just Star~
Uh, um, er, I did some IRC mods. And um, ah.. add me to tags. :P

All done~

Download: iNID - Dance Away (Sakura Hana) [Garven's Easy].osu
Lilac
Garven
A nazi, removed a spinner and adjusted a slider that actually managed to have an edge go out of bounds.

Download: iNID - Dance Away (Sakura Hana) [Garven's Easy].osu
lepidopodus
Taiko map finished. Taiko Oni lvl. 9 so it can be hard.

Well, you can change the name of the diff anyway you want.

Download: iNID - Dance Away (Sakura Hana) [lepidon! - Taiko Oni].osu
Sallad4ever
Sorry for the delay
Here's my normal, hope you like it :)
Download: iNID - Dance Away (Sakura Hana) [Sallad's Normal].osu
KRZY
Done! :D Thanks for your patience~

Download: iNID - Dance Away (Sakura Hana) [KRZY's Normal+].osu
Topic Starter
Sakura
Well renamed KRZY's Normal+ to Hard and sent to pending, ready for modding!
lovhin456
Hey ~ :3

General;
- Everything is fine ~

Looks;
- Colors; Maybe use this colors for all diffs ??
Combo1 : 131,252,216
Combo2 : 162,236,6
Combo3 : 9,56,221
Combo4 : 134,45,168
- BG; Nice ~~
- Maybe add a little kiai fountain at the end of each diff ?? :3

Garven's Easy;
- AIMod doesn't like your spacing )':
- 00:10:085 >> one grid to the right
- 00:12:085 >> one grid down
- 01: 00:885 >> ...finish,clap and whistle at the start of the slider ?! Remove the clap and the finish, also remove the whistle at the end of the slider
- 01:01:685 >> Remove whistle, I don't think it gives the note any ... eh ... is not necessary since the musi already does a kind of whistle sound
- 01:22:485 >> Kind of weird for you to do such a strange form for a slider since all your sliders until now are pretty ): Maybe make it like this ??
- 01:24:085 (1,3) >> add whistles ??
- 01:31:285 >> If the finish in this slider was a soft finish it'd sound better imo
- 01:58:485 >> I don't know ... something is not right with this ... I mean the shape is cool but is not ... well ehh symmetrical ??
- 02:04:885 >> New combo ?? also, I don't know if a clap at the end sounds good but oh well ~
- 02:22:685 >> A soft finish is better imo ~

Sallad's Normal;
- 01:12:885 >> remove whistle from body of slider
- 01:24:085 >> soft finish instead of normal ??
- 01:53:685 >> ^
- 02:22:685 >> ^

KRZY's Hard;
- 01:40:285 >> Too many repeats in one slider, maybe split this into two sliders ??

Lepidon! Taiko Oni;
- Sounds great !! :3

Insane;
- Is okk ~

* Star ~ :3
Topic Starter
Sakura

lovhin456 wrote:

General;
- Everything is fine ~ yay o/

Looks;
- Colors; Maybe use this colors for all diffs ??
Code:
Combo1 : 131,252,216 X Used another green tho
Combo2 : 162,236,6 O
Combo3 : 9,56,221 O
Combo4 : 134,45,168 O

- BG; Nice ~~
- Maybe add a little kiai fountain at the end of each diff ?? :3 I dont like anti-climatic fountains :V they just look odd like that.

Insane;
- Is okk ~ yay o/
lovhin456

Sakura Hana wrote:

- Maybe add a little kiai fountain at the end of each diff ?? :3 Unrankable.
I see...then I should probably edit my mod post because Sallad's Normal has a little kiai fountain at the end xD
Garven

lovhin456 wrote:

Hey ~ :3 Ahoy!

Garven's Easy;
- AIMod doesn't like your spacing )': AIMod is far inferior to humans in this matter. :3
- 00:10:085 >> one grid to the right Nah, it's that way on purpose. I don't like to use many straight lines.
- 00:12:085 >> one grid down It's that high from the curve of the previous slider guides right there for me.
- 01: 00:885 >> ...finish,clap and whistle at the start of the slider ?! Remove the clap and the finish, also remove the whistle at the end of the slider Haha, I have three rhythms going on with the hit sounds right there. This suggestion doesn't sound as cool to me, so I'll leave it for now.
- 01:01:685 >> Remove whistle, I don't think it gives the note any ... eh ... is not necessary since the musi already does a kind of whistle sound I like hitsounding for emphasis though. :<
- 01:22:485 >> Kind of weird for you to do such a strange form for a slider since all your sliders until now are pretty ): Maybe make it like this ??
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yessssss.png haha Well, I kinda like that little slider though. It kind of foretells the zig zag pattern that is coming up.
- 01:24:085 (1,3) >> add whistles ?? I didn't want to use whistles yet for this section. I wanted to save them for the last kiai.
- 01:31:285 >> If the finish in this slider was a soft finish it'd sound better imo There's actually supposed to be a whistle there. I dunno what happened D:
- 01:58:485 >> I don't know ... something is not right with this ... I mean the shape is cool but is not ... well ehh symmetrical ?? It's not meant to be. Just nice 'n flowy with the guitar solo. If you can propose something better, I'm all ears though.
- 02:04:885 >> New combo ?? also, I don't know if a clap at the end sounds good but oh well ~ Nah on both counts
- 02:22:685 >> A soft finish is better imo ~ Aaah, I like them both. I'll switch to soft. :3
Thanks for the look!

Download: iNID - Dance Away (Sakura Hana) [Garven's Easy].osu
lepidopodus
Some fixes (remapped 2nd kiai part.)

Download: iNID - Dance Away (Sakura Hana) [lepidon! - Taiko Oni].osu
Sallad4ever

lovhin456 wrote:

Sallad's Normal;
- 01:12:885 >> remove whistle from body of slider Moved
- 01:24:085 >> soft finish instead of normal ?? soft finish is too weak ;_;
- 01:53:685 >> ^ ^
- 02:22:685 >> ^ ^
- The little kiai fountain you have at the end is unrankable )': are you sure it's unrankable? never heard of it, but I'll remove it
Download: iNID - Dance Away (Sakura Hana) [Sallad's Normal].osu
thx for the mod
lovhin456

Sallad4ever wrote:

- The little kiai fountain you have at the end is unrankable )': are you sure it's unrankable? never heard of it, but I'll remove it
Wooops, well, they're not completely unrankable, but ehhh I believe they tend to make peppy mad ... so if you want to keep the fountain I guess is okk ~ Sorry for that D':
Kalypso_old
Well, I saw your post in IRC. Here's my map: Silver Forest - Kero (9) Revolution Final Battle +18
Mod4Mod

[Garven's Easy]:
These volume edits need to be put before notes, some may hit too early/late and mess up sound.
01:14:085 (4) - new combo
01:14:485 (1) - remove combo (if you did ^)
02:12:885 (1) - remove combo

[Sallad's Normal]:
00:52:485 (2) - align with (1)
01:15:485 (3) - align with (2)

[KRZY's Hard]:
00:01:085 (blank) - Should fill this in.
00:33:685 (7,8,9,10) - keep the curve going.
01:40:285 (6) - split this into more than 1 slider.
01:45:685 (1) - align with (8)

[lepidon! - Taiko Oni]:
01:15:085 (5) - finish
01:34:485 (1) - ^
02:25:685 (63) - clap
(Sounds nicer to me)

[Insane]:
Aiming for a star? 01:38:485 (1,2,3,4,5)
If so...
01:38:885 (3,4) - spread out more
01:39:285 (5) - to left (1 tiny grid)


These are all suggestions. It's up to you to decide whether you implement these or not.

not a bad song :3
star..
Topic Starter
Sakura

Kalypso wrote:

[Insane]:
Aiming for a star? 01:38:485 (1,2,3,4,5)
If so...
01:38:885 (3,4) - spread out more
01:39:285 (5) - to left (1 tiny grid)


not a bad song :3
star..
Yay thanks for helping me with the star =3
Fuuko
I'm lazy. Fuuko's mod DEKIMASHITA!!! <3'

General:

Maybe you'd want to have a silenced soft-sliderslide? That low part sounds kinda bad... Specially at Garven's diff.
Garven's sexyness:

00:04:885 (2) - Maybe ctrl+h this note? It's kinda awkward since it gets a bit covered by the slider ( but just a bit. )
00:18:485 (1,2,3,1) - Maybe make it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/30530
01:29:685 (3,1) - Not liking how the (3) covers up the (1). http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/30532 Maybe like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/30533 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/30534 ? :x

This is fun~ <3
Sallad's good patterns:

Nothing to really nitpick on. I'd like to say, though, that you could turn out DS for some notes, specially for those sliders that touches each other, like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/30536, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/30537 and http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/30538, for example.
I'd say doing it like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/30539, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/30540 and http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/30541 .
It looks sexier, imo. <3

But nice map at all.
Sakuya's hatred:

I didn't like this diff for some reasons...

Some parts are overmapped, some isn't. For example,
00:15:885 (8,10,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3) - This part is awfully overmapped, while
00:22:085 (1,2,3,4) - This isn't. It kinda breaks the balance.

Didn't like those random streams, too. Like:

00:48:885 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
00:51:285 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
00:55:285 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -

Some parts need to be spaced more, because it's awfully confusing:

01:14:085 ~ 01:20:885
01:48:485 ~ 01:50:485
01:52:085 (1,2,3,4,5) -

And, this part is awfully spaced. These jumps are just ... :

02:18:085 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -

If you fix that, I'm sure it will get 100x better. :x
Sorry for not modding lepidon's diff. I don't mod taiko because if I modded Taiko, they would get pretty boring. >:
Sorry for taking too long to post, too.
Have my star and my wish of good luck.
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