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Siestail - Magic Lip Service

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Hollow Wings
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年4月29日 at 13:38:25

Artist: Siestail
Title: Magic Lip Service
Source: 東方Project
Tags: Touhou th すぺらんかー spelunker ミサキ misaki 1n1m 小宮真央 Komiya Mao 霧雨魔理沙 Kirisame Marisa 恋色マジック Love-Coloured Magic メイガスナイト Magus Night オリエンタルダークフライト Oriental Dark Flight c79 zun Minakami Yuki mtbbsben Rizia Kawaiwkyik Flask Streliteela
BPM: 185
Filesize: 15068kb
Play Time: 02:53
Difficulties Available:
  1. Flask's Normal (2.15 stars, 243 notes)
  2. Magic Lip Service to You (5.15 stars, 621 notes)
  3. Stella's Easy (1.4 stars, 152 notes)
  4. wkyik's Hard (3.29 stars, 470 notes)
  5. Yuki's Lunatic (4.55 stars, 701 notes)
Download: Siestail - Magic Lip Service
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Magic Lip Sevice to u~ www

pls watch the animation storyboard at least once ;w;

bg by me
sb by me

Stella's Easy by Streliteela
Flask's Normal by Flask
wkyik's Hard by Kawaiwkyik
Yuki's Lunatic by Minakami Yuki

special thx to sherrie__fay
膜姐作为真正将我带入mapping的第一人，一开始黑历史那个图的mod对我的影响绝对是最大的，它让我知道了最基本的规则和思路，直接让我对mapping有了整体的概念，是我入坑很重要的原因之一。
光这个辅导新人的耐心其实就够我受用了，之后还给了我那么多建议，有点感动呀OVQ
希望这次做的图能让你喜欢:3

摩天楼坑掉了，感觉图做的不咋滴，而且感觉现在还没能力做出想要的sb效果。以后我再填坑233

------------我是华丽的分割线，上面是我2013年写的东西啦------------

膜姐后来还是接触过哒，柑橘好萌好卡哇伊的，只是老是把我无视了噗。。。
摩天楼rank啦！源流怀古也rank啦！绯想天地黄色魔导书都rank啦！连小圆都rank啦！剩下的就是这个mls和人形裁判啦，你和sco的cp简直了（
将sb的毕生功力传授与我，于是做了这个原创pv级sb送给你！！！
（已被夸过，双
about this map
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/112418

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i made this map in 2013/07/16 and finished it with storyboard at 2013/09/01, the storyboard is totally made by me from the source level, it's just a pure diy flash animation or pv movie. i think this is the most epic effort i've ever put into mapping field (thou it's not that related tight to the mapping itself... and the animation itself is simple), but i think it's time to give this a try again for already leave this in graveyard for over 2 years.

pls, take a look at it, it's my appreciation... <3

and, i should say, this is the true start of my own mapping way. i used to decide to map like other main streams expressed as well, because those kind of maps are easy to be ranked... thou it's not the 1st willing of my mapping. this map is also the 1st time i tried much of for-test patterns which can be seen very common nowadays, like some jumps or streams. testers told me it's unplayble or even unreadble when i just complete the map and seeking testing feed back, thou the truth is the map is totally fine even for players 2 years ago.

btw, someone asked me about the "star sliders" in the map which is similar to hanzer's map "miss you". the truth is hanzer's idea is from fanzhen's map, and fanzhen's idea is from my map, and my idea is from shinxyn's map. some people call me creative mapper, which i really can't fully accept, because most people skipped those mapping masters past days whose works are much more greater than mine.
thx modding from
  1. Azure
  2. Max Black
  3. N E K O
  4. rezoons
  5. 【CSGA】Ar3sgice
  6. lkx_Shore
  7. RandomEffect
  8. Autumn
  9. Chloe
  10. baldrace
  11. pieguy1372
  12. Mako Sakata
  13. Awaken
  14. -RIKKA-
  15. luxoDeh
  16. Jemmmmy
  17. Nymph
  18. Playing
  19. ignorethis
  20. Blue Dragon
  21. EmingK
  22. ts8zs
  23. DnJeiser
  24. Azmato
  25. Natsu
  26. Fycho
  27. sjoy
  28. Flower
  29. smallboat
  30. 1PSA
  31. happy623
  32. P A N
  33. Xinely
  34. rinsukir
  35. Colin Hou
  36. --------- old version above ------
  37. Chordzi
  38. Electoz
  39. Feb
  40. Kalibe
  41. sukiNathan ------ bubbling
  42. smallboat ------ qualifying ------ requalifying
  43. Bakari ------ disqualifying
  44. Natsu
  45. Momizi
  46. - Cappuccino -
  47. ZZHBOY ------ rebubbling
thx testing from
  1. 【CSGA】Ar3sgice
  2. Autumn
  3. Liselsia Cesarini
  4. Lunatic
  5. N E K O
  6. Nightcore Princess G
  7. Playing
  8. ShallICompareThee
  9. SuperContact
  10. wonders
  11. Zweib
  12. power002
  13. lkfo415579
  14. q1001a
  15. Donato Chi-
  16. Ldd-D
  17. --------- old version above ------
Last edited by Hollow Wings , edited 19 times in total.
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上了不負責任的音效

終於
osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 64437
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
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[Metadata]
Title:Magic Lip Service
TitleUnicode:魔法のリップサービス
Artist:Siestail
ArtistUnicode:Siestail
Creator:Hollow Wings
Version:Flask's Normal
Source:Touhou
Tags:すぺらんかー spelunker 小宮真央 Komiya Mao Kirisame Marisa Love-Coloured Magic Magus Night Oriental Dark Flight c79
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4.5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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325,219,100923,6,0,P|285:182|235:177,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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70,16,102869,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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218,105,103842,2,0,P|266:96|314:109,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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189,248,107410,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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240,162,108707,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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141,156,109680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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391,357,111950,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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110,354,114545,6,0,L|-1:350,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
54,260,115194,2,0,P|71:208|48:164,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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201,123,116491,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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333,287,129464,1,2,0:0:0:0:
421,240,129788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,161,130113,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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234,300,159464,2,0,L|293:288,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Mollon
86 posts
Joined February 2013
Mollon
先占个位，现在set全了嘛 好像还没有EZ？
全了的话我就在这里补摸啦 先射个星
Skubi
841 posts
Joined December 2013
Skubi
http://puu.sh/mcWnU/1e99d7665f.osr

Here's a testplay :3 Enjoy!
Chordzi
79 posts
Joined July 2012
Chordzi
m4m here.
先随便说一点SB的感想0.0
00:50:977 (1) - 这句虽然有时间能看清 但是后面一片白稍微有点影响美观的感觉
02:39:464 (1) - 02:44:004 (1) - 不注意的话一闪就没啦(或者本来就是当做彩蛋呢_(:з」∠)_

[Magic Lip Service to You]
00:09:626 (7,1,2,3,1) - 间距大的有点突然 特别三连前面还是个circle 好坑
00:14:653 (1,2) - 02:39:950 (1,2) - 这两个whistle有点奇怪
00:34:761 (9,1) - 小弧度的blanket靠这么近感觉不是很好看(个人看法
00:40:275 (2) - NC会好一点？只是觉得和前面的音不是很连贯
00:54:221 - 02:02:329 - 加个note比较好 有点漏音的感觉 it's fine
01:03:788 (7,8,9,1,2) - 太坑
01:18:059 (8) - NC？
02:30:708 (8) - ^
03:06:059 (7,8) - 没对齐 如果你是强迫症的话可以改

[Yuki's Lunatic]
00:02:815 (4) - 00:05:086 (4) - 00:09:626 (4) - 这个间距误导性太强了 很容易下意识认为是1/4
00:10:356 - 00:19:437 - 加note凑3/4听上去舒服一点
00:28:599 (2) - 00:29:248 (2) - 00:29:896 (2) - 00:30:221 (4) - 00:31:518 (5) - 00:31:842 (1) - 00:32:167 (3) - 试试加whistle
KIAI都没有whistle 有点偷懒啊

[wkyik's Hard]
怎麼不用自定義hitnormal
統一下KIAI
稍微吵了點 特別是KIAI
不過一直都很喜歡你工整的style ^ ^

[Flask's Normal]
偷懶了哦 其他diff都是3分10秒的說
00:56:167 (2) - 00:58:437 (2) - 00:58:437 (2) - 00:58:437 (2) - 感覺這一小段的音效都有點輕
01:21:788 (1,2) - 頭clap?0.0或者第二個尾巴clap

[Easy]
00:18:221 (3,4) - y轴就差这么点 稍微有点丑啊..
KIAI的部分 我觉得低难度clap还是下的有节奏感点比较好 有点把高难度音效硬往里套的感觉

EDIT：稍微补了一点
希望能有帮助
GL~
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Electoz
1,886 posts
Joined May 2015
Electoz
Hi, M4M from your queue.

[General]

  1. Combo Colours in Yuki's Lunatic conflicts with the other diffs.(Combo 1 : 238,220,208)
  2. Kinda weird when all diffs didn't end at the same point.
[Easy]

  1. Spacing errors. > 00:16:923 (1,2) - 00:45:788 (3,1) - 00:59:086 (3,1) .
  2. There shouldn't have any SV changes in Easy imo. And why Easy has the main SV set at 1.20 and Normal at 1.00 lol.
  3. 00:01:032 (1,2,1,2) - Maybe it's just me, but I think if you extend those sliders to end on the white tick they would fit better.
  4. 00:55:599 (1) - Why did you place this on the blue tick?
  5. 01:40:599 (1) - I think this circle is unnecessary.
  6. 01:50:004 (1,1) - Maybe you can try blanketing them?
  7. 02:15:626 (2,3,4) - Kinda misleading imo. After player clicked on 02:15:626 (2) they might go for 02:16:599 (4) instead of 02:16:274 (3) . Same applies to 01:02:978 (2,3,4) .
  8. 02:35:734 (2,2) - Weird overlap, also looks a bit weird when you're not stacking them like what you did all along.
  9. 02:53:086 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - I don't understand why you used 1.0 DS on this part, DS should be constant in Easy imo. Also, you should do some sliderarts instead of using only curved ones.
[Normal]

  1. 00:38:653 (3,4) - The flow doesn't feel right imo. I would do something about 00:39:302 (4) since you're trying to do a pattern here 00:37:356 (1,2,3) .
  2. 00:41:572 (5) - This slider touches the life bar. > http://puu.sh/mf244/aeff725792.jpg
  3. 01:02:167 - I would add something here to keep tracking on vocals.
  4. 01:09:464 (1,2) - Flow feels weird imo.
[Hard]

  1. Why this diff doesn't have kiai lol.
  2. SV in this diff kinda fast imo. It's as fast as Lunatic.
  3. 00:13:680 (1,2,3,4) - Kinda hard to read imo. Because there are two stacks here but they didn't have the same beat spacing.
  4. 01:06:869 (1) - Similar case to above, no one would expect 2 kicks on this slider since both 01:05:410 (2) - 01:06:383 (5) have only 1 kick. And I think 4 1/2 sliders would emphasize the song better than a slider with 2 kicks.
  5. What I have pointed out also applies to a few more patterns with the similar rhythm. Because you would know them already so I won't spam them more.
I guess I'll stop here, I can't guarantee my modding quality for something higher than Hard.

Here's the map I want you to mod back. > https://osu.ppy.sh/s/310702
(Actually it is my friend's map, since I modded only 3 diffs so you should mod any diff as you feel like it. Also, please tell them in your mod that you're from M4M with me, so they won't get confused about where's your mod coming from.)

Thank you very much !!
Feb
1,027 posts
Joined June 2014
Feb
from your queue~
I haven't modded for a while so yeah let's see what I can find. Most of it will prolly be suggestions tho.

[General]
  1. Combo Colour 1 blends a bit imo. Maybe find other colour or wait for others to suggest it.
  2. Rest seems legit.
[Easy]

  1. the placement of notes here is pretty complex for easy already ( i guess it was designed this way ). So I'll point out patterns which are imo to hard for an easy especially in reading.
  2. 00:24:058 (2,3,1) - the Flow here is extremley edgy for an easy and you can fix. I see you try to fullfill the pattern, but I still think this would flow better.
  3. 00:46:437 (1) - you broke DS here because of your SV change. Also I'd suggest you to place the note under the tail of 3 as the notes before have an edgy curve and this follows right after. Like this click
  4. 00:57:788 (1,2,3) - the note placement here is imo to hard to read for beginner, as i think most beginners will hit the slidertail as it is the closest target to hit.
  5. 01:06:545 (2,1,2) - I think the rythm could be easier with this
  6. 01:08:167 (3,1,2) - Yeah, it's to complex if you ask me this triangle is extremly edgy and I doubt any beginner can read this.
  7. 01:21:140 - place finish? I hear crash sound here.
  8. 01:44:490 (2,3,4) - okay the note placement here could be better imo as well. The triangle here right now starts from the head of the slider before makes this pretty edgy to begin with, but it gets even more complicated when you use 01:45:463 (1) - this to make the movement go up again.
  9. 01:44:490 (2) - could be farther away imo from 01:45:463 (1) - as they are both really close.
  10. 01:47:086 (2,3,1) - This is good linear movement but gets countered again with this 01:48:383 (2) - If the slider would turn upwards like this I could understand the idea behind it. Right now it just looks like you wanted to get 01:50:004 (1) - this as blanket no matter what.
  11. 02:14:004 (3) - I'm not sure you should cover 02:11:734 (3) - as players might not have enough time to react to it.
  12. 02:22:437 (1,2) - same movement i'd not suggest like similiar before, where you hit the slidertail instead of the head.
  13. 02:24:058 (2) - could be farther away from 02:24:058 (1) - as it touches almost.
  14. 02:33:139 (1,3) - I guess you wanted to make 3 to have the same shape as 1, but it doesn't have it visually.
  15. 02:34:436 (3,2) - the bodies touch each other makes it looke cramped up. give them more room.
  16. 02:35:410 (1) - Could be more away too. Right now Beginner will think he needs to hit this circle after hitting 3 as it is right underneath it.
  17. The rest is pretty good tho. The only thing I would do different is 02:43:519 (3,4) - this section because you did those sliders before with the same movement in the same direction and now you turn it into different ones. I think you should stay consistent here as well.
[Magic Lip Service]
  1. I'm sorry I can't really mod your style, but I'd suggest you to use higher od as Yukis diff has OD 7.5 already.
    I'll mod yukis diff instead.
[Yuki's Lunatic]

Pretty cool sum suggestions tho. I think you used to less whistles.
ugh 0.2 stack leniency - maybe turn it a bit higher i mean you kinda stack here and there it's not like you dont stack at all. (I'm actually only salty bcs i couldn't read these things 02:38:977 (1,2) - lul)
  1. 00:28:275 (1) - add whistle for vocal? (and everywhere else where she sings this way)
  2. 00:28:923 (1) - ^
  3. 00:29:572 (1) - ^
  4. 00:37:355 (1,1,1) - ^ same things. would already help just to make the pattern more clear.
  5. 00:59:086 (1) - I think you should ad note at 00:59:572 - cause your slider before indicates that you map vocal so I thought you would continue to map it at least for this combo.
  6. 01:09:950 (2,3) - How about stacking 2 onto 3 as it fits the vocal better imo. And move the slider abit away from the other as it might indicate that it's 1/4.
  7. 01:22:275 (3,4) - idk what you follow here you don't follow vocal - maybe the pause between 01:22:356 - this 01:22:518 - and this. But I'd recommend following the vocals here.
  8. 02:07:842 (3) - because of this overlap i thought you would continue to show them, but you didn't do it further e.g. 02:09:626 (2) - this one. I failed mulitple times might be me sucking to read it. 02:13:518 (4) - another example - To ME those overlaps are very random or i don't see a reason why you used them just "sometimes" here and there.
  9. 02:33:140 (1) - I think two notes fit here better because of vocals.
  10. 02:34:680 (2) - okay i see you really going for the pause or what ever you wanna call it, but I still recommend, what i did before.
  11. 02:42:221 (1,2) - both feel unnatural to play as u ignore both times 02:42:545 - the stronger beat here 02:43:194 - and here. Maybe go for those
  12. 02:44:491 (1) - add clap on head as it technically counts to the stream?
  13. 02:45:140 (3) - wouldn't recommend on doing an 3/4 here, as you ignore the strong beat on 02:45:302 - I think you should just go for normal 1/2 here. 02:44:491 (1) - same here.
    cool diff fun to play!

Should be it, would have modded more, but im tired :(
Good Luck with the Set, Song sounds very nostalgic to be honest :D
I like nostalgic stuff have a star :p

edit: wow i fucked up formatting lolz
Kalibe
2,060 posts
Joined October 2013
Kalibe
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  1. Inconsistency in Combo Colours on Yuki's Lunatic ( Combo2 should be 241,226,216 instead of 238,220,208 )
Easy :
  1. 00:55:599 (1) - Wot? I think it's issue, right? Well, snap it on downbeat lol.
  2. 00:26:004 (1) - How about this patterning? For me, works better, but isn't nessesary thing.
  3. 01:59:085 (1) - I don't want to be nazi, but it should be on 188|185 to creates a complete blanket ;w;
  4. 02:16:274 (3,1) - Idk, if overlaps are good on Easy tho.
  5. Nice !
Flask's Normal :
  1. I think you can easily raise AR to 5 | OD and HP to 3,5 or 4.
  2. 00:01:032 - Green line is unnessesary tbh. Feel free to delete it, if you want for cleanup.
  3. 00:41:572 (5,1) - Ehh.. looks tightly and plays weird. Well, i can see the bettttter way to make this buddy.
  4. 01:45:140 (6,1) - ^ same situation
  5. 02:31:842 (1) - Ctrl H works better imo.
  6. Cool !
wkyik's Hard :
  1. 00:27:302 (3) - Why you don't curve this like two previous ~ 00:26:004 (1,2) - ? It will be interesting to see this imo.
  2. 00:31:842 (1) - 01:18:545 (1) - Delete NC's.
  3. 00:32:815 (1) - Also this is nice object to curve harder for better transision with (2) tho.
  4. 01:22:761 (3) - Mayb NC this? It's not nessesary, but all diffs have therein.
  5. 01:35:410 (1) - 01:37:680 (1) - 01:39:950 (1) - Delete NC's
  6. 01:47:734 (1) - Ctrl J ?
  7. 02:09:464 (1) - 02:13:518 (1) - 02:16:275 (1) - 02:22:599 (1) - 02:32:167 (1) - Delete NC's
  8. 02:30:870 (4,1) - Swap NC.
  9. Ok, i'm not pointing all NC maybe issues, but you know what i mean, yea?
  10. Cool one !
Yuki's Lunatic :
  1. Uhh, i can't find any big issues, only minors. Well done !
Magic Lip Service to You :
  1. 00:49:031 (1) - Is this NC really nessesary?
  2. 01:22:275 (2,3,4) - Try maybe this thingy, i guess.
  3. 02:01:680 (1) - Same as in 00:49:031 (1) -
  4. 02:37:680 (1,2,3) - This flow is intentional, right? Because i'm aware of him .w.
  5. Niceeeee !
Ok, that's all. Hope i helped. ;w;

Happy New Year HW !!
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guest diffs can have different combo colours afaik
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