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Shano x 40mP - Natsukoi Hanabi [OsuMania]

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Akasha-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, February 29, 2016 at 12:58:58 PM

Artist: Shano x 40mP
Title: Natsukoi Hanabi
Tags: Chano Summer Festival Love Story Megpoid Gumi Fireworks 40meterp [_A_v_a_l_o_n_] Rizqy Zan_-
BPM: 158
Filesize: 3927kb
Play Time: 01:37
Difficulties Available:
  1. 7K Lv.10 - 7Key (2 stars, 534 notes)
  2. 7K Lv.18 - 7Key (3.22 stars, 868 notes)
  3. Avalon's 4K Lv.15 - 4Key (2.86 stars, 724 notes)
  4. Avalon's 4K Lv.7 - 4Key (1.77 stars, 468 notes)
  5. Zan's 5K Lv.16 - 5Key (2.88 stars, 789 notes)
  6. Zan's 5K Lv.8 - 5Key (1.85 stars, 497 notes)
Download: Shano x 40mP - Natsukoi Hanabi
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Zan-
web star rating is broken huh?????????????????

the difficulties

edit: i forgot to change HP OF in Lv.7, please fix it
Topic Starter
Akasha-
That was really fast LOL but thank you
Okay, now pending, gonna finding mods
[ A v a l o n ]
as requested, here is my mod for other diffs
i hope this can be a helpful mod
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

check this out

  • [General]
  1. ayy, plz delete "avalon_n" in tags, since i didn't use that name again from last 2 year ago (and no one knows me in that name)
  2. disable widescreen support in all diffs if you not using any storyboard, because this setting is unnecessary . . . (i will check mine too)
  3. maybe you can edit in your tags to ==> "Summer Love Fireworks"
  4. I feel the title of this map seems wrong, it should be "Natsu Koi Hanabi" since Natsu = Summer, Koi = Love . . . that it's contains different word
    https://onsenjikan.dreamwidth.org/61156.html , http://puu.sh/mQv35/ecad6ba3c2.jpg . . . well, maybe ask japanse QAT will resolve this imo
  5. http://utaite.wikia.com/wiki/Chano i get confused the singer is "Shano" or "Chano" lol

    [Zan's 5K Lv.7]
  6. 00:50:866 (50866|4) - this instrument seems not clear enough to give LN, i suggest to change it to single notes only, to avoid confusing when newcomer player playing it
  7. 01:02:068 (62068|2,62448|1) - drag 2 column to right, feels better to plays
  8. 01:25:233 (85233|1) - delete, this hat sound sounds too low to give a note here, not like 01:24:853 (84853|0) - well, give a break in this part is a good idea imo
  9. OK, very good diff

    [Zan's 5K Lv.15]
  10. 00:10:803 - 00:11:182 - why this part is losing the LN like 00:10:043 (10043|4,10423|3) - ? please add LN for that, it's really clear sound and the violin sound is connect each other
  11. 00:13:461 - same kick sound as 00:13:841 - suggest to same note too :3
  12. 00:16:499 - same as above ^ . . . and this 00:16:309 - low sound, i suggest to reduce it one note
  13. 00:49:537 (49537|4) - this LN is only have 1/2 long sound . . . please consider to cut that LN into the correct sound
  14. 00:50:866 (50866|0) - like my mod in Lv.7 diff, abuse LN you can hear that long sound is actaully start here 00:51:056 - (?) well, i suggest to not give LN on that part (KK not map that too)
  15. 01:19:157 (79157|3) - change to single note only, this sound is not long enough to give an LN here, the sound is stopped here 01:19:252 -
  16. 01:22:385 (82385|1) - end here 01:23:524 -
  17. 01:37:005 (97005|1) - extend to 01:37:575 - the piano sound is still exist

    [7K Lv.8]
  18. 00:03:967 (3967|5,4347|5) - i can really sure that this part is have different pitch, consider to move that into another column
  19. 00:09:473 (9473|6,9473|3,9853|3,9853|6) - well, this have different sound (type) change it to different pattern :3
  20. 00:12:511 (12511|0) - move to 2 ? i feel it's better to consistent with this part 00:12:891 (12891|1,12891|2) - and avoid same column with this 00:11:942 (11942|0) - since it have different feels
  21. 00:18:397 (18397|5) - delete this note, give some break for this section is better imo
  22. 00:20:296 (20296|5) - i don't get anything with this LN, there is not contains any long sound here . . . you can give other LN on here 00:19:347 (19347|3,19537|6,19727|3) -
  23. 00:33:587 (33587|3) - delete this note ? this is not have same strong as 00:33:397 (33397|1) - give some break for this part la
  24. 00:49:727 (49727|1) - not contains any sound like 00:49:347 (49347|2,50106|0) - so, it feels weird to be pressed
  25. 00:51:435 - add note, missing drum sound here ?
  26. OK, the rest seems fine

    [7K Lv.16]
  27. 00:02:068 (2068|3,2068|0,2448|0,2448|3) - i can really sure that this part is different pitch, consider to move that into another column
  28. 00:12:132 (12132|0,12132|3) - actually if you following violin sound, it should be start here 00:11:942 -
  29. 00:20:296 (20296|3) - same like in Lv.8 this LN feels weird imo . . . maybe it's better giving LN to spesific sound like violin in 00:19:347 (19347|6,19537|5,19727|6,19916|5) -
  30. 00:33:587 (33587|3) - delete this note, and put LN here 00:33:208 - for piano sound like 00:32:828 (32828|4) - it's way feels more better and fit with music
  31. 00:45:360 (45360|4,45739|3) - same reason as above ^
  32. 00:49:537 (49537|1,49537|4) - actually this part is only have 1/2 long sound in 00:49:537 - & 00:49:916 -
  33. 01:01:499 (61499|0,61499|2) - hmmm, what is this ;w; i can' understand this LN (because too long) . . . consider to do like this example http://puu.sh/mQxhe/a41dbd7b29.jpg way more fit with long sound on that part

that's all from me, OMG must rank this
good luck \o/
Topic Starter
Akasha-

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

as requested, here is my mod for other diffs
i hope this can be a helpful mod
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

check this out

  • [General]
  1. ayy, plz delete "avalon_n" in tags, since i didn't use that name again from last 2 year ago (and no one knows me in that name) sure
  2. disable widescreen support in all diffs if you not using any storyboard, because this setting is unnecessary . . . (i will check mine too) sure
  3. maybe you can edit in your tags to ==> "Summer Love Fireworks" it's not necessary, you still can find those with the tags
  4. I feel the title of this map seems wrong, it should be "Natsu Koi Hanabi" since Natsu = Summer, Koi = Love . . . that it's contains different word
    https://onsenjikan.dreamwidth.org/61156.html , http://puu.sh/mQv35/ecad6ba3c2.jpg . . . well, maybe ask japanse QAT will resolve this imo
  5. http://utaite.wikia.com/wiki/Chano i get confused the singer is "Shano" or "Chano" lol uh well, i will consider that later, according to ither ranked maps and one bubbled map, this title seems to be corrected

    [7K Lv.8]
  6. 00:03:967 (3967|5,4347|5) - i can really sure that this part is have different pitch, consider to move that into another column
  7. 00:09:473 (9473|6,9473|3,9853|3,9853|6) - well, this have different sound (type) change it to different pattern :3
  8. 00:12:511 (12511|0) - move to 2 ? i feel it's better to consistent with this part 00:12:891 (12891|1,12891|2) - and avoid same column with this 00:11:942 (11942|0) - since it have different feel
  9. 00:18:397 (18397|5) - delete this note, give some break for this section is better imo
  10. 00:20:296 (20296|5) - i don't get anything with this LN, there is not contains any long sound here . . . you can give other LN on here 00:19:347 (19347|3,19537|6,19727|3) -
  11. 00:33:587 (33587|3) - delete this note ? this is not have same strong as 00:33:397 (33397|1) - give some break for this part la
  12. 00:49:727 (49727|1) - not contains any sound like 00:49:347 (49347|2,50106|0) - so, it feels weird to be pressed
  13. 00:51:435 - add note, missing drum sound here ?
  14. OK, the rest seems fine
    nice, fixed all

    [7K Lv.16]
  15. 00:02:068 (2068|3,2068|0,2448|0,2448|3) - i can really sure that this part is different pitch, consider to move that into another column
  16. 00:12:132 (12132|0,12132|3) - actually if you following violin sound, it should be start here 00:11:942 -
  17. 00:20:296 (20296|3) - same like in Lv.8 this LN feels weird imo . . . maybe it's better giving LN to spesific sound like violin in 00:19:347 (19347|6,19537|5,19727|6,19916|5) -
  18. 00:33:587 (33587|3) - delete this note, and put LN here 00:33:208 - for piano sound like 00:32:828 (32828|4) - it's way feels more better and fit with music
  19. 00:45:360 (45360|4,45739|3) - same reason as above ^
  20. 00:49:537 (49537|1,49537|4) - actually this part is only have 1/2 long sound in 00:49:537 - & 00:49:916 -
  21. 01:01:499 (61499|0,61499|2) - hmmm, what is this ;w; i can' understand this LN (because too long) . . . consider to do like this example http://puu.sh/mQxhe/a41dbd7b29.jpg way more fit with long sound on that part
    fixed all except last one

that's all from me, OMG must rank this yessss
good luck \o/
nice job <3 thanks for modding
Dellvangel
Hi, here is my mod as requested by Avalon from PM forum :)

4K: 1|2|3|4
7K: 1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[Avalon's 4K Lv.6]
00:26:752 (26752|2) - move to 2, emphasis the cymbal sound, also for note variation, rare to find double notes like 1|3 or 2|4 around this part.
00:35:296 - something like this is better imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4458500 , because 00:33:777 (33777|3,34157|0,34347|2,34727|1) - LN right side, other note at left side, this one too 00:36:815 (36815|3,37195|0,37385|2,37765|1) - , then 00:35:296 - should be like LN at left side, other note at right side for better flow.
00:46:878 (46878|3) - if you apply above, you should edit this part too.
01:10:423 - add note, actually same with 01:07:385 - , or delete 01:07:385 - .
01:13:461 - ^
01:14:980 (74980|1,75170|2,75170|0,75360|1) - hmm, i kinda don't like a pattern like this at N icon diff. Also, i noticed that you didn't use double note at col 2|3 from when the kiai part started till the end of the song, i think you can use it to fix this part.

[7K Lv.8]
00:03:967 (3967|5,4347|5) - if you make this one at same col, you should make 00:00:929 (929|3,1309|5) - at same col too.
00:11:942 (11942|0,12511|0) - i think this one is too hard for N icon diff (lol, i always got 200 at this part), may be move 00:12:511 (12511|2,12511|0) - to col 2 and 6, then move 00:12:891 (12891|1,13651|1,14410|1,15170|1) - to col 1 and 00:15:549 (15549|0) - to col 2?
01:06:625 - change to LN? i think this one is same with 01:06:246 - .

[Avalon's 4K Lv.14]
00:21:246 (21246|1,21435|0) - swap the col, 1 to 2, 2 to 1 for balance.
00:25:613 (25613|3,25613|0,25803|3,25803|0) - if you make this one to jack, then you should do it at 00:26:372 - , move 00:26:372 (26372|1) - to col 3.
00:50:106 - missing 2 note?
01:00:739 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4458778 easier for play.
01:36:246 - add note col 1, for piano sound and better flow.

[7K Lv.16]
01:03:777 - missing a note? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4458833 .
01:36:246 - same with 4K, add note col 4.

Can you guys add me as your friends? pls lol
Good luck! >w<b
-[ AmiShici ]-
Hii Kavajan o/

Here my mod as requested by abalon :3

Key = 1~7
Click Me!
[4K Lv.6]00:19:347 - add note?
00:20:866 - ^
00:39:473 - ^
00:56:752 (56752|2) - move to 00:56:942 -

[5K Lv.7]00:15:360 (15360|2) - delete for better flow?
00:18:397 (18397|1) - ^
01:17:828 - add?

[7K Lv.8]00:09:284 (9284|0) - move to 7

[4K Lv14]00:30:739 (30739|1) - move to 3. buat bedain sama ini 00:31:119 (31119|1,31119|0) -
00:31:878 (31878|1,32068|2) - ctrl + h ^
00:32:448 (32448|1) - to 3
00:42:891 (42891|1,43271|1,43461|2,43841|1) - ctrl + H
00:44:600 (44600|1) - to 4
00:58:651 - add viano
01:00:170 - ^
01:36:246 - missing?

[5K Lv.15]00:21:435 (21435|3,22195|1) - to 3?
00:25:803 (25803|1,25992|0) - swicth colomb?
01:28:651 (88651|3,89410|1) - to 3?

[7K Lv.16]00:16:878 (16878|5) - why double?
00:21:815 (21815|5,22195|5,22575|5) - maybe better to move to left hand for hand balance
00:36:246 - add note?
01:03:777 - add note?

Good luck~

To abalon : gausah dipakek ae yo pak. wkwkwk :p
Topic Starter
Akasha-

Dellvangel wrote:

Hi, here is my mod as requested by Avalon from PM forum :)

4K: 1|2|3|4
7K: 1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[7K Lv.8]
00:03:967 (3967|5,4347|5) - if you make this one at same col, you should make 00:00:929 (929|3,1309|5) - at same col too. hmm no, 00:03:967 (3967|5,4347|5) -is same pitch, 00:00:929 (929|3,1309|5) - is kind of different
00:11:942 (11942|0,12511|0) - i think this one is too hard for N icon diff (lol, i always got 200 at this part), may be move 00:12:511 (12511|2,12511|0) - to col 2 and 6, then move 00:12:891 (12891|1,13651|1,14410|1,15170|1) - to col 1 and 00:15:549 (15549|0) - to col 2? i will mod that to 5th col, 2nd col is for snare, 3 is for kick
01:06:625 - change to LN? i think this one is same with 01:06:246 - . okay

[7K Lv.16]
01:03:777 - missing a note? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4458833 . nice, rearrangared
01:36:246 - same with 4K, add note col 4. added

Can you guys add me as your friends? pls lol of course
Good luck! >w<b

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

Hii Kavajan o/

Here my mod as requested by abalon :3

Key = 1~7
Click Me!
[7K Lv.8]00:09:284 (9284|0) - move to 7 i see no reasons to move it to 7, it will too hard for beginners while he/she are about doing a jack on here, but also i kept because of 00:08:904 (8904|0,9284|0) - kind of same pitch here to me

[7K Lv.16]00:16:878 (16878|5) - why double? strong bass on here
00:21:815 (21815|5,22195|5,22575|5) - maybe better to move to left hand for hand balance no, 1,2,3 is for instrument, 4th for cymbol: 00:22:954 (22954|3) - 5th and 7th for cymbal, and 6th for kick
00:36:246 - add note? nice
01:03:777 - add note? added

Good luck~

To abalon : gausah dipakek ae yo pak. wkwkwk :p
Thank you guys so much for such a helpful mod, we're really appreciated
[ A v a l o n ]

Dellvangel wrote:

Hi, here is my mod as requested by Avalon from PM forum :)

4K: 1|2|3|4
7K: 1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[Avalon's 4K Lv.6]
00:26:752 (26752|2) - move to 2, emphasis the cymbal sound, also for note variation, rare to find double notes like 1|3 or 2|4 around this part. moving to 2 will make lost the sense of this part, i feel 3 4 is more suitable for this but i rearranged some pattern below it
00:35:296 - something like this is better imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4458500 , because 00:33:777 (33777|3,34157|0,34347|2,34727|1) - LN right side, other note at left side, this one too 00:36:815 (36815|3,37195|0,37385|2,37765|1) - , then 00:35:296 - should be like LN at left side, other note at right side for better flow. aaa, it feels weird, 00:34:347 (34347|2,35296|2) - that part is sounds repeating, testplay my current pattern, so you can understand it
00:46:878 (46878|3) - if you apply above, you should edit this part too. i re-arranged this part
01:10:423 - add note, actually same with 01:07:385 - , or delete 01:07:385 - . i think the vocal notes on that part is runs good for kiai time intro
01:13:461 - ^
01:14:980 (74980|1,75170|2,75170|0,75360|1) - hmm, i kinda don't like a pattern like this at N icon diff. Also, i noticed that you didn't use double note at col 2|3 from when the kiai part started till the end of the song, i think you can use it to fix this part. re-arranged the only reason i'm not use 23 is i feel not any sound is suitable for that column

[Avalon's 4K Lv.14]
00:21:246 (21246|1,21435|0) - swap the col, 1 to 2, 2 to 1 for balance. yes, re-arranged on this part
00:25:613 (25613|3,25613|0,25803|3,25803|0) - if you make this one to jack, then you should do it at 00:26:372 - , move 00:26:372 (26372|1) - to col 3. i move this 00:25:803 (25803|0) - to 3 for that
00:50:106 - missing 2 note? not following drum clap for this time, focus to vocal
01:00:739 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4458778 easier for play. yea, i testplay it . . . but i feel my current one is fine ;w;
01:36:246 - add note col 1, for piano sound and better flow. Okay, added

Can you guys add me as your friends? pls lol done ;)
Good luck! >w<b
Thanks Dellvangel for mods ~

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

Hii Kavajan o/ anjirr :v

Here my mod as requested by abalon :3

Key = 1~7
Click Me!
[4K Lv.6]00:19:347 - add note?
00:20:866 - ^
00:39:473 - ^
00:56:752 (56752|2) - move to 00:56:942 -

[4K Lv14]00:30:739 (30739|1) - move to 3. buat bedain sama ini 00:31:119 (31119|1,31119|0) - emang sengaja itu www, just for feel
00:31:878 (31878|1,32068|2) - ctrl + h ^ itu drumnya sama hue
00:32:448 (32448|1) - to 3 ^
00:42:891 (42891|1,43271|1,43461|2,43841|1) - ctrl + H
00:44:600 (44600|1) - to 4 ^please
00:58:651 - add viano owo
01:00:170 - ^ see this 00:44:600 (44600|1) - more bigger ^
01:36:246 - missing? yes, added lol

Good luck~

To abalon : gausah dipakek ae yo pak. wkwkwk :p kagak ngerti lu ngomong opo wkwkwk
Thanks Ami ~

Update
http://puu.sh/mU8Dw/267f1c4f9d.rar
Topic Starter
Akasha-
Updated!
Zan-

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:


  • [Zan's 5K Lv.7]
  1. 00:50:866 (50866|4) - this instrument seems not clear enough to give LN, i suggest to change it to single notes only, to avoid confusing when newcomer player playing it /// piano, it's ckear enough
  2. 01:02:068 (62068|2,62448|1) - drag 2 column to right, feels better to plays
  3. 01:25:233 (85233|1) - delete, this hat sound sounds too low to give a note here, not like 01:24:853 (84853|0) - well, give a break in this part is a good idea imo /// it has lowest sound but still worth to be added as note
  4. OK, very good diff

    [Zan's 5K Lv.15]
  5. 00:10:803 - 00:11:182 - why this part is losing the LN like 00:10:043 (10043|4,10423|3) - ? please add LN for that, it's really clear sound and the violin sound is connect each other
  6. 00:13:461 - same kick sound as 00:13:841 - suggest to same note too :3
  7. 00:16:499 - same as above ^ . . . and this 00:16:309 - low sound, i suggest to reduce it one note
  8. 00:49:537 (49537|4) - this LN is only have 1/2 long sound . . . please consider to cut that LN into the correct sound
  9. 00:50:866 (50866|0) - like my mod in Lv.7 diff, abuse LN you can hear that long sound is actaully start here 00:51:056 - (?) well, i suggest to not give LN on that part (KK not map that too) /// see my Lv.7 reply
  10. 01:19:157 (79157|3) - change to single note only, this sound is not long enough to give an LN here, the sound is stopped here 01:19:252 - /// fine, the violin pitch also goes down
  11. 01:22:385 (82385|1) - end here 01:23:524 - /// added variety LNs at 01:23:334 -
  12. 01:37:005 (97005|1) - extend to 01:37:575 - the piano sound is still exist

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

[5K Lv.7]00:15:360 (15360|2) - delete for better flow? /// nope
00:18:397 (18397|1) - ^ /// nope
01:17:828 - add?

[5K Lv.15]00:21:435 (21435|3,22195|1) - to 3? /// nope
00:25:803 (25803|1,25992|0) - swicth colomb? /// nope, intended
01:28:651 (88651|3,89410|1) - to 3? /// nope
update
busy sleeping in the morning at work till night, will mod later la
Topic Starter
Akasha-
Thank you! Updated!
And no huge rush on anything, so just feel free to do it
We got 4 days left hh
Sandalphon
Hi quick check here

[Avalon's 4K Lv.6]
Clear
[Avalon's 4K Lv.14]
01:01:119 - same with 01:01:689 - 01:02:068 - , so changed to double
01:24:473 - miss one note ? img

GL!!!
[ A v a l o n ]

SanadaYukimura wrote:

Hi quick check here

[Avalon's 4K Lv.6]
Clear okay lol
[Avalon's 4K Lv.14]
01:01:119 - same with 01:01:689 - 01:02:068 - , so changed to double ops, yea you're right . . . re-arranged pattern
01:24:473 - miss one note ? img okay good

GL!!!
Thanks Sanada \o/
update ==> http://puu.sh/mXXcy/e4939021e3.rar
Kyousuke-
Hi all mod arrived~! xD

[General]
  1. Zan's 5K Lv.7 | OD 7 | HP 7 |
[Avalon's 4K Lv.14]
00:13:271 - 00:14:030 - 00:16:309 - 00:17:068 - knp snarenya ga di follow ;-; terasa aneh klo di skip karena ada sample hitsoundnya, dagian 00:14:790 - disini jga di follow, di kiai jga di follow 01:07:954 - 01:08:714 - 01:09:473 - dll. Klo di Lv.6 gpp karena emg di skip semua, tpi klo di diff ini menurut gw harus di follow deh ._.
00:19:347 (19347|0,19537|0,19727|0,19916|0) - hmm kurang balance klo yg kyk gini, 00:19:727 (19727|0) - pindah ke 2 aja. tenang masi ngejack kok 00:19:347 (19347|0,19537|0,19727|1,19916|3,19916|1,20106|3) - jdi masih dpt feel nya wkwk
^ klo setuju, 00:20:866 (20866|3) - pindah ke 3 jga
00:24:663 - add note di 1, kyk yg laen (ga bikin susah kok, serius wkwk)
00:30:739 - bukannya ini sama 00:31:309 - 00:32:068 - ini sama ya wkwk, 00:30:739 (30739|0) - ini hapus, trus 00:30:739 (30739|1) - pindah ke 3
^ klo setuju, 00:42:891 - yg ini jga :3
00:33:587 - add note di 2, kyk 00:45:739 (45739|0) - ini, dagian hat nya kedengeran bgt kok wkwk

00:50:106 - ini kok di skip o.o harusnya di add kyk 00:50:866 -
00:52:195 - mulai dri sini hithat nya, liat diff lain deh, dagian jga aneh klo di skip satu kyk gini :/
^ 00:58:271 - sbenerny di add jga buat konsisten, gw aj ngerasa aneh pas maen wkwk
01:01:689 - 01:02:068 - 01:02:448 - 01:03:208 - ga di add? kyk 00:38:144 - 00:38:904 - karena snare + chord
^ same goes with 01:18:397 - 01:18:777 - ini di add jga kyk 00:39:284 -
01:08:714 - gmn klo kyk http://puu.sh/mYYbX/f0d1d3d203.jpg gini, biar ga ngejack 01:09:094 (69094|2,69284|2) -

01:10:992 - http://puu.sh/mYYdV/f87882aa88.jpg cocok sama pitch vocal nya nih wkwk
01:11:562 - 01:11:752 - yg ini ngejack menurut gw gpp, karena 01:10:043 (70043|3,70233|3) - yg ini jga wkwk, instrumentnya sama" hat sama snare
01:14:030 - http://puu.sh/mYYiP/a8bacbce9e.jpg sama kyk tdi, 01:14:410 (74410|1,74600|1) - biar ga ngejack. trus lbh cocok sama pitch vocal nya imo dan lbh nyambung patternnya sama yg 01:14:600 (74600|2,74790|3) - ini
01:16:119 - http://puu.sh/mYYoR/1e60ccbeb0.jpg 01:16:689 - 01:16:878 - ini cocok bgt ngejack karena lirik nya sama xD dan patternnya lbh bgs '-'

01:21:435 - ga diadd? ;-; sebelumnya ga perna ad yg di skip :arrow: http://puu.sh/mYYIS/04fccc591f.jpg
01:24:473 - ayyy add note, ada drum sound yg tak bsa dilewatkan wkwk
01:31:499 - add note di 1, buat cymbal kyk yg laen (dan konsistent wkwk, sekali lagi, itu ga susah kok xD)
01:32:068 - 01:33:587 - 01:35:106 - add note buat cymbal + chord? biar lbh nge feel wkwk

[Zan's 5K Lv.15]
00:02:448 (2448|3,2828|4) - gmn klo ctrl + g?
00:14:220 - add note? kyk 00:13:461 - ini :arrow: http://puu.sh/mZ9Pi/0f462fc55f.jpg
00:20:296 (20296|3,20676|3,21056|3,21435|3) - duh bosen bgt kyk gini doang (har har)(dad)
00:36:815 (36815|3) - delete, 00:37:385 - ini ga double, 00:48:967 - ini jga wkwk
00:50:296 - ini harusnya double sih, tpi nvm patternnya ud bgs akwkw

01:18:397 - 01:18:777 - add note? sebelumnya di add :^)
01:32:638 - 01:35:676 - eh lu ga perna skip instrumentnya? kyk 01:34:347 - ini aj lu add xd
nice diff~!

[7K Lv.16]
00:09:663 (9663|3) - ghost note?
00:12:511 - add note like 00:10:803 - 00:18:587 - ? it's the same sound exactly
00:13:271 - oops add note like 00:14:030 - 00:14:790 - 00:16:309 - etc
00:16:878 (16878|5) - delete, you didn't map the hat for doubles before. like 00:16:119 - 00:16:499 - 00:17:258 - etc
00:30:170 - 00:42:322 - add note? since it's quite loud lol
00:32:448 - 00:32:638 - add note like 00:31:689 - 00:31:878 - 00:33:397 -
^ same goes with 00:44:600 - 00:44:790 -

00:36:246 - remove one note? you didn't add it at 00:34:727 - 00:37:765 - 00:48:397 - or add it, so it will consistent
00:35:296 - 00:36:815 - i think this isn't deserve 3 notes, bcs it isn't same with 00:33:777 - this and not loud enough
^ if you accept, same with 00:47:448 - this
00:37:575 - 2 notes? lol it's tiny sound though, you only make it one note like 00:34:537 - 00:36:056 -
00:51:435 - add note for the snare? the notes must be more than the others sound
00:52:005 - 00:58:081 - actually this must be 3 notes :/ you know since it's finish sound and it's more louder than 00:53:524 - 00:55:043 - 00:56:562 - this...

00:57:701 - doesn't this sound more deserve 2 notes than 00:57:322 - this? 00:57:132 (57132|4,57227|5,57322|6) - since this sound has the same loudness
01:02:448 (62448|1) - delete, this is the only 3 notes on that part while the others only 1 or 2 notes, also it plays a bit weird lol
01:04:916 (64916|2,65106|5,65296|2) - delete? isn't it's same with 01:04:347 (64347|6,64347|4,64537|0,64537|1,64727|6,64727|4) - this? i'd rather to add 01:04:157 - this bcs of crash sound
01:07:575 (67575|3) - move to 5, and 01:08:714 (68714|1,68714|3) - move to 4 7 seems more better, especially on 01:08:334 (68334|4,68524|5,68714|3,68904|4,69094|2,69284|3) - this lol
^ 01:19:347 - also for this? if you agree xD

01:11:752 - this should be double like the others, 01:12:132 - triple for this, 01:12:322 - and one note for this :arrow: http://puu.sh/n01BP/b26411c90f.jpg
01:10:233 - 01:22:385 - add note like 01:13:271 - 01:13:271 - 01:16:309 - ?
01:14:790 - add note at 1 like before
01:23:904 - add note at 3 like before, bcs the others have
01:25:423 - add note at 3 for crash

01:28:271 - delete one note? you only mapped bass for one note on that part 01:26:752 - like
01:33:967 - add note? like 01:33:587 -
01:37:290 (97290|0) - delete? it's like ghost note lol and delete it for more better playability



okay that's all, i love this song! <3
Goodluck, hope this can be ranked soon xD
Topic Starter
Akasha-

Kyousuke- wrote:

Hi all mod arrived~! xD

[General]
  1. Zan's 5K Lv.7 | OD 7 | HP 7 |
[7K Lv.16]
00:09:663 (9663|3) - ghost note? okay
00:12:511 - add note like 00:10:803 - 00:18:587 - ? it's the same sound exactly it's more lightly than that 4 notes
00:13:271 - oops add note like 00:14:030 - 00:14:790 - 00:16:309 - etc okay
00:16:878 (16878|5) - delete, you didn't map the hat for doubles before. like 00:16:119 - 00:16:499 - 00:17:258 - etc actually it's bass
00:30:170 - 00:42:322 - add note? since it's quite loud lol loud sound doesn't mean need to add many notes on here, i only here kick and bass, the next part i added 3 notes because it had loud snare and kick bass
00:32:448 - 00:32:638 - add note like 00:31:689 - 00:31:878 - 00:33:397 - okay
^ same goes with 00:44:600 - 00:44:790 -

00:36:246 - remove one note? you didn't add it at 00:34:727 - 00:37:765 - 00:48:397 - or add it, so it will consistent hear carefully, not any parts always have 1/2 on hihat, example this part have bass and hihat
00:35:296 - 00:36:815 - i think this isn't deserve 3 notes, bcs it isn't same with 00:33:777 - this and not loud enough it's call rhythm flow, 00:33:777 - [12] kick and hihat, 7th column for piano instrument, the rest are for another sound like 3rd one for snare, and it keep repeat until 00:33:777 - i kept it because of that reason, now it's just reversed
^ if you accept, same with 00:47:448 - this
00:37:575 - 2 notes? lol it's tiny sound though, you only make it one note like 00:34:537 - 00:36:056 - i would kept for rhythm
00:51:435 - add note for the snare? the notes must be more than the others sound sure
00:52:005 - 00:58:081 - actually this must be 3 notes :/ you know since it's finish sound and it's more louder than 00:53:524 - 00:55:043 - 00:56:562 - this... two timings you said before, it had cymbal, yes, but the next double white have piano, i feel like it for cymbal too

00:57:701 - doesn't this sound more deserve 2 notes than 00:57:322 - this? 00:57:132 (57132|4,57227|5,57322|6) - since this sound has the same loudness 00:57:701 - this part only have cymbal, no "tack" sound same as 00:57:322 -
01:02:448 (62448|1) - delete, this is the only 3 notes on that part while the others only 1 or 2 notes, also it plays a bit weird lol loud, same as 01:02:068 (62068|0,62068|5,62068|2) -
01:04:916 (64916|2,65106|5,65296|2) - delete? isn't it's same with 01:04:347 (64347|6,64347|4,64537|0,64537|1,64727|6,64727|4) - this? i'd rather to add 01:04:157 - this bcs of crash sound rearranged
01:07:575 (67575|3) - move to 5, and 01:08:714 (68714|1,68714|3) - move to 4 7 seems more better, especially on 01:08:334 rearranged(68334|4,68524|5,68714|3,68904|4,69094|2,69284|3) - this lol
^ 01:19:347 - also for this? if you agree xD ^

01:11:752 - this should be double like the others, 01:12:132 - triple for this added, 01:12:322 - and one note for this :arrow: http://puu.sh/n01BP/b26411c90f.jpg oops, i wrong missplaced this note, moved
01:10:233 - 01:22:385 - add note like 01:13:271 - 01:13:271 - 01:16:309 - ? no
01:14:790 - add note at 1 like before
01:23:904 - add note at 3 like before, bcs the others have
01:25:423 - add note at 3 for crash fixed all

01:28:271 - delete one note? you only mapped bass for one note on that part 01:26:752 - like added 2 notes
01:33:967 - add note? like 01:33:587 - okay
01:37:290 (97290|0) - delete? it's like ghost note lol and delete it for more better playability lol, i missed this one, move to white tick



okay that's all, i love this song! <3
Goodluck, hope this can be ranked soon xD
thanks for such helpful mod <3 updated
[ A v a l o n ]

Kyousuke- wrote:

[Avalon's 4K Lv.14]
00:13:271 - 00:14:030 - 00:16:309 - 00:17:068 - knp snarenya ga di follow ;-; terasa aneh klo di skip karena ada sample hitsoundnya, dagian 00:14:790 - disini jga di follow, di kiai jga di follow 01:07:954 - 01:08:714 - 01:09:473 - dll. Klo di Lv.6 gpp karena emg di skip semua, tpi klo di diff ini menurut gw harus di follow deh ._. you know, w nggak ingin bikin diff ini monoton, masa snare dikasi semua wkwkwk, cukup kick, clap, piano flows aja lah . . dan masalah HS itu nggak ada hubungannya lel
00:19:347 (19347|0,19537|0,19727|0,19916|0) - hmm kurang balance klo yg kyk gini, 00:19:727 (19727|0) - pindah ke 2 aja. tenang masi ngejack kok 00:19:347 (19347|0,19537|0,19727|1,19916|3,19916|1,20106|3) - jdi masih dpt feel nya wkwk ayy, itu violinnya 4 sound 00:19:347 (19347|0,19537|0,19727|0,19916|0) - makanya gitu xD
^ klo setuju, 00:20:866 (20866|3) - pindah ke 3 jga dude, 00:20:676 (20676|3,20866|3,21056|3) - 3 same violin sound
00:24:663 - add note di 1, kyk yg laen (ga bikin susah kok, serius wkwk) no plz ;__; yg lain kan karena 1/2 jadi masih ada break, lah yg ini 1/4 double note, RIP
00:30:739 - bukannya ini sama 00:31:309 - 00:32:068 - ini sama ya wkwk, 00:30:739 (30739|0) - ini hapus, trus 00:30:739 (30739|1) - pindah ke 3 Okay
^ klo setuju, 00:42:891 - yg ini jga :3 Okay
00:33:587 - add note di 2, kyk 00:45:739 (45739|0) - ini, dagian hat nya kedengeran bgt kok wkwk pls, give some break, w cuman ngikut lead sound aja wkwk . . . dan perasaan beda ah tingkat kekerasan suara mereka berdua ._.

00:50:106 - ini kok di skip o.o harusnya di add kyk 00:50:866 - iya w tau kok wkwkwk tapi itu fokus bass + vocal
00:52:195 - mulai dri sini hithat nya, liat diff lain deh, dagian jga aneh klo di skip satu kyk gini :/ you know, main sound is start here 00:52:385 - ayy sebenarnya w sengaja ignore hihat, main di piano aja www
^ 00:58:271 - sbenerny di add jga buat konsisten, gw aj ngerasa aneh pas maen wkwk already explained ^
01:01:689 - 01:02:068 - 01:02:448 - 01:03:208 - ga di add? kyk 00:38:144 - 00:38:904 - karena snare + chord
^ same goes with 01:18:397 - 01:18:777 - ini di add jga kyk 00:39:284 - itu sebenarnya udah fixed di modnya SanadaYukimura , cuman si KK blom update wkwk thanks btw
01:08:714 - gmn klo kyk http://puu.sh/mYYbX/f0d1d3d203.jpg gini, biar ga ngejack 01:09:094 (69094|2,69284|2) - Okay

01:10:992 - http://puu.sh/mYYdV/f87882aa88.jpg cocok sama pitch vocal nya nih wkwk Okay applied
01:11:562 - 01:11:752 - yg ini ngejack menurut gw gpp, karena 01:10:043 (70043|3,70233|3) - yg ini jga wkwk, instrumentnya sama" hat sama snare OK la
01:14:030 - http://puu.sh/mYYiP/a8bacbce9e.jpg sama kyk tdi, 01:14:410 (74410|1,74600|1) - biar ga ngejack. trus lbh cocok sama pitch vocal nya imo dan lbh nyambung patternnya sama yg 01:14:600 (74600|2,74790|3) - ini beda uyy . . . keep aja lah, pas aja perasaan Lek, kuota gw RIP lu send foto mulu, mana gak di crop lagi hadaw awkwkwk
01:16:119 - http://puu.sh/mYYoR/1e60ccbeb0.jpg 01:16:689 - 01:16:878 - ini cocok bgt ngejack karena lirik nya sama xD dan patternnya lbh bgs '-' Okay

01:21:435 - ga diadd? ;-; sebelumnya ga perna ad yg di skip :arrow: http://puu.sh/mYYIS/04fccc591f.jpg Okay
01:24:473 - ayyy add note, ada drum sound yg tak bsa dilewatkan wkwk kagak, w gamau 3 note , ntar penuh XD
01:31:499 - add note di 1, buat cymbal kyk yg laen (dan konsistent wkwk, sekali lagi, itu ga susah kok xD) 1/4 double notes itu pengecualian buat saya wkwkwk
01:32:068 - 01:33:587 - 01:35:106 - add note buat cymbal + chord? biar lbh nge feel wkwk NoPe, tau aja kan 3 note buat apa di part ini ? awkwk

okay that's all, i love this song! <3
Goodluck, hope this can be ranked soon xD
makasih banyak lek :*

Update ==> http://puu.sh/n0chn/7467d52bee.rar
Kyousuke-

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Lek, kuota gw RIP lu send foto mulu, mana gak di crop lagi hadaw awkwkwk
oke ga bakal lgi dah AWKWKWK
Topic Starter
Akasha-
I don't get it lol
Topic Starter
Akasha-
updated
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