1. Easy (1,48 stars, 207 notes)
2. Normal (2,22 stars, 354 notes)
3. Our Pink World (2,84 stars, 481 notes)

Gaia wrote:

where is melon pan







wew

P A N wrote:

I asked him to join but he said "fuck off, I want to do this alone because I love apink fucking much". so

Euny wrote:

shit dont have kudo

Reclaimer wrote:

Hello

Easy

1. 01:08:137 (2,3) - Super nazi but the spacing here is slightly off yeah

Normal

1. 00:27:003 (5) - maybe have this slider start at 00:26:900 like you did with 00:21:952 (4) to go with the vocals I know there should be a circle, but adding it on an easy diff or starting the slider there will be so hard and unexpected + will create an ugly overlap :l
   02:10:921 (5) - Same^
   02:54:219 (5) - ^

Our Pink World

1. 00:19:890 (8) - Silencing the slider end would sound better imo since there's no beat, or at least making the slider end quiter I 'lll consider, but for now I prefer to have feedback on taiils
2. 00:26:385 (4,7) - ^
3. 00:38:137 (3,4,8) - ^
4. 00:43:395 (4,5) - ^
5. 00:44:529 - Add a note here? if you notice I'm avoid doing those doubles cause they are a pain to play, also the next object is stronger
6. 00:52:055 (7) - same as above, slider end volume. anyway i'm sure you get the idea, there's lots of them i could point out but it would just be a long tedious and ugly list so i'm gonna stop linking them. Chances are you don't agree and it would just be a waste of time to link all of them lol same as before
7. 01:30:715 (3) - Maybe have the slider end at 01:31:230and put a circle at 01:31:333 that way you dont skip the beat sometimes is ok to ignore some beats, and this case I think is ok to do
8. 01:57:828 (4,5) - This double doesn't really fit imo, maybe make 01:57:828 (4) - a slider that ends at 01:58:034 and have 01:57:931 (5) start at 01:58:137 this would follow the beat and the vocals better i think there are vocals at 4 and music at 5

Done!

Hopefully this helps! Rather small mod but that's because its a good set lol. Good luck! (´・ω ・｀)

Kuki wrote:

[general]
over all diffs 03:21:332 - seems to be a little off time, i' m not that good at such precise timing but perhaps you have someone that you could get to check it out, cause it does sound off to me. sounds fine to me o.o

[easy]
00:17:725 (1,2,3) - try something more like this, i think current placing is a bit boring and this lets it flow to (4) nicer I dont feel it bored, its fine for me
01:41:849 (1,2,3) - i can't tell what you're mapping here, if you were mapping vocals then this should be a repeat 01:43:395 (3) -, or a hitcircle at 01:44:014 -, and if you were mapping the beat, then you should have mapped 01:43:395 (3) - and 01:44:014 -, ideally pick one or the other unless you have a good reason for this and can explain it to me listen to the strong sounds, you can't map everything at easy diff
02:04:735 (2,3) - i thiiiiiink blanket is off, i can't tell with this skin lol wew nazi, fixed
02:31:333 (1,2) - imo swapping these around would be more aesthetically pleasing, 02:31:333 (1) - curved to blanket 02:31:952 (2) - which is straight, for example looks good enought to me tbh
02:37:210 (1) - this isn't symmetrical, snap bits to grid so it's perfect? I'll do later if I feel like that, tbh isn't really noticeable in game
02:54:838 (1,2,1,2) - this could be sorta boring for an easy player, and players above the skill level, cause it's quite slow and the same slider in the same pattern, it's only really a problem cause this pattern takes like 6 seconds and doing the same thing in such a low bpm easy could be boring. just a heads up to try making the third and fourth sliders curved and in a different placement to the first two to spice things up. is good enought for easy diff, players about lvl should be playing normal diff not easy
03:01:024 (3) - i feel like this blanket is off but again, skin sorta confuses me so i'm not 100% on that fixed
03:21:126 (4) - this is weird for me cause you miss the finish beat, i think you should map it like this instead to make sure you get to map the finishing part I want to end at the same place as other diffs,
03:21:126 (4) - should be a nc here cause it finishes on an upbeat and starts on a pretty strong finish I don't see why a sound should make me break my combo pattern

[normal]
00:38:137 (3,5) - these being the same slider would look very nice imo and make a cool pattern for 00:38:137 (3,4,5) - there is nothing wrong with that, even talking about visuals my current pattern is good
00:45:560 (2,3,4) - fix spacing up here okay
00:57:931 (3) - move one pixel to the right and one down for perfect stack here that's too nazi tbh
00:58:550 (5,6) - these being lined up would make more sense i think, as (5) is straight and leads onto (6) same not really noticeable in game
01:53:601 (4,3) - both blankets are off orz, easy to fix (4) then copy it as (3) fixed
02:37:210 (1) - this is just a bit off its fine at it is, don't need to perfect
02:44:323 (4,4) - o boy i am not a fan of this, it's fine to keep since you've done a similar thing earlier in the diff, but I think that if you do want to fix that 02:45:869 (4) - and 02:44:323 (4) - are a perfect opportunity to stack my man I really like it
02:58:549 (4,5,6) - i think this is too straight, feels linear to play in game, i suggest trying a triangle-like shape to make it more fun and smooth-flowing like so the whole thing its an intended pattern 02:57:312 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
03:04:735 (1,2,3,4,5) - fix up spacing here, goes from 1.22 for the first double to 1.17, seemingly not a big deal but it looks off in editor and in play mode imo its 1,22 cause of grid :l don't affect gameplay
03:20:817 (4,5) - i think something more like this would make more sense here because currently there are three drum sounds (more or less the same) but only two are mapped. i think you could probably get away with this quite easily in the normal too, but it's all down to you. will end in a really weird pattern
03:21:642 (5) - also nc this since it's a pretty strong finish for the song and ends on an upbeat same as easy

[our pink world]
00:37:519 (1) - add some emphasis to this, would make this soft section a little bit more fun and make sense with the guitar riff + upbeat here, i especially suggest you do this because you added emphasis to the same sound at 00:42:467 (1) - what do you mean with emphasis?
00:58:550 (5,6,7) - instead of straight curved straight maybe try curved straight curved, this way you get to balnket (6) and (7) nicely and add a nice differentiation in aesthetics from 00:56:385 (6,7) - those are just personal preference about the design and i think mine its better
01:01:024 (5,6,7) - perhaps the same here as it's more or less the same pattern ^
02:10:302 (4,6) - the slider after (4) is 2.47, but the slider after (6) is 2.35, roughlt 0.1 ds less, and gets even smaller where there should be emphasis on the upbeat, nc, and finish hitsound at 02:11:540 (1) -, i think you should fix spacing on the sliders and maybe add a bit more emphasis to the upbeat at the end unless you have a good reason for doing what you did there check the gaps are different, there is no reason just is obviously the spacing numbers will look different to what real is
02:18:189 - i think it'd be a good idea to map this, makes this part before the break a bit more fun and interesting current way is more simple to play tbh I want a really easy play at this map
02:30:096 (5) - move this 1px down and 1px to the right for a perfect stack doesn't affect gameplay also not noticeable in game
02:30:406 (6,1) - this blanket i think is a little off, it looks fixed to me by moving 02:31:333 (1) - down by 1px fixed
03:21:745 (7) - again, nc here perhaps since it ends on an upbeat and is a pretty strong finish same as before

1. please make all of finish in kiai consistency. every kiai doesn't have the same finish lol.
2. 01:58:034 (5) - I know what are you following but maybe try to follow vocal instead? since you follow vocal on 01:57:003 (2,3) as well.
3. 02:10:921 (6,7,1) - make spacing of these three consistency would be great and make (7) body to be liner with (1).
4. 02:37:210 (1) - too nice, remove.
5. 02:47:415 (1) - a bit closer for consistency spacing.
6. 03:00:096 (2) - a bit down for consistency spacing.
7. 03:14:323 (7) - a bit left.

1. 00:44:323 (4) - spread to two circles instead? more fit for that double clap imo.

P A N wrote:

[OUR pink world]

1. please make all of finish in kiai consistency. every kiai doesn't have the same finish lol. fixed wew
2. 01:58:034 (5) - I know what are you following but maybe try to follow vocal instead? since you follow vocal on 01:57:003 (2,3) as well. I think its fine more easy to play
3. 02:10:921 (6,7,1) - make spacing of these three consistency would be great and make (7) body to be liner with (1).did similar
4. 02:37:210 (1) - too nice, remove. wew its for my cutie, thanks
5. 02:47:415 (1) - a bit closer for consistency spacing. k
6. 03:00:096 (2) - a bit down for consistency spacing. k
7. 03:14:323 (7) - a bit left k.

[Normal]

1. 00:44:323 (4) - spread to two circles instead? more fit for that double clap imo. k

Easy is perfect k

Good luck with your pink world :> hope so ma fren QAQ