[General]~Timing is off, use these values: BPM: 128,05; Offset: 242. Don't forget to resnap all notes (Timing>
Resnap All Notes).
~Title should be
-rinbu
- revolution and not Rinbu
~Revolution. If you fix this, don't forget to make a full submission
~Audio's volume is a bit low. I made it a bit higher (something like ~+4 Db). You can download it here:
http://www.mediafire.com/?973t4z24dwjncam (ps quality is the same)
~Consider to add (TV Size) in Title, since is the TV Version of the song, and not the full one.
[Normal]00:04:204 (1) - Add a Finish here
00:15:454 (1) - This sounds very odd for me. Consider to add a hitcircle here 00:15:454 (3) - and then a slider of 3/1 00:15:688 (4) here, like in this picture:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3157900:20:845 (3) - Align this perfectly with previous slider's end/start
00:50:845 (1) - This confused me, consider to respect Distance Snap here.
01:01:860 (2) - Move this 1/4 forward making it shorter of another 1/4, in order to follow the vocal voice.
01:09:126 (2) - Make this 1/4 longer.
01:04:204 (1) - As above.
01:10:298 (1,1) - Recovery time between these two hitobjects is very short, and this break normal's criteria. Consider reduce spinner's length. (Or at least you can remove it, and add some hitobjects)
[Insane]00:18:032 (2) - I didn't expect a 0,5x section here, in fact I made a miss during playing. Consider to remove it (since it sounds weird in my opinion)?
00:53:188 (4) - Finish at the start
01:04:907 (5,6,1,2,3) - This stream may confuse players because of Stack Leniency (which place the stream on the HP drain bar) and because of the second combo's colour. Consider to change this one. (
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/31588)
01:17:563 (1) - Finish
01:28:813 (1) - Consider to remove this spinner, since it seems out-of-place.
