Rita - Girl's spirit-Otome no Kimochi- · forum

Lily Bread

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Lily Bread 2015-12-10T04:17:44+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年2月24日 at 20:51:54

Artist: Rita
Title: Girl's spirit-Otome no Kimochi-
Source: 屋上の百合霊さん
Tags: Vert Okujou no Yurirei-san Blueberry Yogurt 遠見結奈榎木サチ永谷恵
BPM: 168
Filesize: 3534kb
Play Time: 01:18
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.42 stars, 82 notes)
Hard (2.97 stars, 217 notes)
Normal (1.92 stars, 136 notes)
Vert's Insane (4.06 stars, 294 notes)

Download: Rita - Girl's spirit-Otome no Kimochi-
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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屋上の百合霊さん OP.
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my #1 百合(yuri) map.
#2: 美郷あき - 少女迷路でつかまえて (TVsize)
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Vert's Insane by Vert
other diffs by Lily Bread

Last edited by Lily Bread 2016-08-09T15:48:49+00:00, edited 34 times in total.

Mollon

86 posts

Joined February 2013

Mollon 2015-12-10T04:40:36+00:00

又开新坑啦先射一星（

Lily Bread

1,228 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Lily Bread 2015-12-10T05:02:40+00:00

Mollon wrote:
又开新坑啦先射一星（

怎么这么快0 0...
其实只是想先提交上来，让pending时间看起来长一点...

Lyric

293 posts

Joined September 2013

Lyric 2016-01-27T11:51:40+00:00

摸得有点水啦。
[Hard]

00:56:609 (2,3) - 这个不要stack为好，因为2不是白线重音，这样做很容易导致误按3。
01:08:038 (2,3) - slider在红线开头，不太符合节奏。
01:08:752 - 这里不加个circle吗。
01:15:002 (2,4,5,1) - 没有对齐。
01:18:217 (3,4,5,1,2) - 这里堆得有点太密了。
00:22:859 (3) - 虽说要照顾DS，不过为了防止误读，不离远点吗。

[Vert's Insane]

00:21:431 (3,4,1) - 这三个不stack在一起反而很别扭。
01:06:788 (2,1) - 对齐。

Lily Bread

1,228 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Lily Bread 2016-01-27T12:08:44+00:00

/*
red = nope.
orange = in consideration.
no comment or pink = fixed.
*/

Lyric wrote:
摸得有点水啦。
[Hard]

00:56:609 (2,3) - 这个不要stack为好，因为2不是白线重音，这样做很容易导致误按3。
//虽然不是白线重音但是确实是重音呀..叠起来没什么问题

01:08:038 (2,3) - slider在红线开头，不太符合节奏。
//因为我硬要跟人声，所以才跟成这样..

01:08:752 - 这里不加个circle吗。
//这种的我不太喜欢，所以没加

01:15:002 (2,4,5,1) - 没有对齐。
//改了

01:18:217 (3,4,5,1,2) - 这里堆得有点太密了。
//改了

00:22:859 (3) - 虽说要照顾DS，不过为了防止误读，不离远点吗。
//DS了还误读就不是我的事了..

/*
thanks for mod!
*/

09kami

828 posts

Joined August 2010

09kami 2016-01-28T12:17:20+00:00

水逸泊

[Vert's Insane]

00:06:431 (2,3,4,5,6) - 改成这样？感觉现在的5的位置不好看
BOX

01:15:002 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这个地方的跳跃弧度感觉差距有点大了特别是01:15:538 (4,5,6) - 这里

[Hard]

00:40:895 (3,4) - 这个地方改成滑条感觉会好一点

00:44:288 (4) - 这里尝试改成一个circle 听起来的效果比滑条好些

Lily Bread

1,228 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Lily Bread 2016-01-28T13:23:28+00:00

09kami wrote:
水逸泊

[Hard]

00:40:895 (3,4) - 这个地方改成滑条感觉会好一点
//不错，改了

00:44:288 (4) - 这里尝试改成一个circle 听起来的效果比滑条好些
//这里还是算了，其它类似的地方我都没空出来

kunka

1,566 posts

Joined July 2012

kunka 2016-01-29T16:39:54+00:00

Hi～
From your Q～
It was written in the your queue that you could read japanese, but has done mod in english.^^;

General

I think that kinda "Okujyou no yurireisan" in the tag are different. Please confirm it in outside site. outside site / Enlarged picture
Combo color: I thought that a color was deep. Would you make it pale color?
BG: This is slightly small. I looked for big size, but a good image is not found. There is a big image in the official site, but it is necessary to change size. official site
AudioLeadIn: I recommend 500 or 1,000. Only insane diff has notes in the prelude.

Vert's Insane

00:01:074 (7) - NC?
try this, plz 00:22:502 (2) - whistle 00:23:038 (2) - finish 00:23:574 (2) - add whistle.
00:27:502 (1) - Because this is kinda sounds are strong, I recommend a jump.
00:45:359 (3) - Would you add whistle to a head of the (3)?
00:46:074 (1) - Would you add finish to a head of the (1)?
00:46:788 (3) - Would you add clap to a head of the (3)?
00:52:324 (2) - Would you add finish to a head of the (2)?
00:57:502 (1) - I recommend a change to finish.
01:03:217 (1) - Would you add whistle to a head of the (1)?
01:03:752 (2) - Would you add clap and finish to a head of the (2)?
01:06:074 (4) - Would you add finish?
01:09:288 (2) - Would you add clap to a head of the (2)?
01:15:984 (7) - I think that this stack is unnecessary. I recommend that I line up it in the same way as other notes.
01:18:752 (6,7,1,2) - A flow isn't good. Would you change the placement? For example http://puu.sh/mOa6X.jpg
01:20:181 (1) - Would you add finish?

Hard

00:48:217 (3) - A flow to the next 00:48:752 (4) - is no good. Would you switch to vertical movement? http://puu.sh/mOcbj.jpg
00:05:895 (1) - Would you add whistle to a head of the (1)? There is a whistle in the 00:03:038 (1) - of the same rhythm.

The remaining hitsounds, please perform reference of insane diff. Probably I think that there is the point that you can change.

Normal

00:06:431 (4) - I think that a flow same as 00:02:502 (2,3,4) - is good. 01:15:002 (4) - same.
00:09:288 (4,5) - ^ 01:17:859 (4,5) - same.
00:27:859 (2,3,4,5) - I think that this flow is difficult in the normal diff. try this, plz http://puu.sh/mOdM9.jpg
00:44:645 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - The normal diff thinks that rest(blank) is necessary. Would you remove 00:45:895 (4) - ?

Easy

00:38:038 (2) - I recommend extension of 1/2 rhythm. It makes the flow that is good for the next 00:38:931 (1) - to pick up 00:38:574 - . In addition, the addition of clap is possible because there is the sound of the snare.
00:40:895 (3) - ^
00:56:074 (1) - I recommend that I change it to a reverse slider. it make the flow that is good for 00:57:502 (2) - by picking up 00:57:145 - .

GL

Vert

424 posts

Joined October 2013

Vert 2016-01-30T04:09:28+00:00

09kami wrote:
[Vert's Insane]

00:06:431 (2,3,4,5,6) - 改成这样？感觉现在的5的位置不好看改了
BOX
01:15:002 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这个地方的跳跃弧度感觉差距有点大了特别是01:15:538 (4,5,6) - 这里缩小了

kunkakunkakunkakunka wrote:
Vert's Insane
00:01:074 (7) - NC? fixed
00:27:502 (1) - Because this is kinda sounds are strong, I recommend a jump. no because I think this party doesnt fit for jumps
01:15:984 (7) - I think that this stack is unnecessary. I recommend that I line up it in the same way as other notes. ok fixed
01:18:752 (6,7,1,2) - A flow isn't good. Would you change the placement? For example http://puu.sh/mOa6X.jpg I think it's ok now

hitsound problems will be fixed by lily ;w;

Lyric wrote:
摸得有点水啦。

[Vert's Insane]

00:21:431 (3,4,1) - 这三个不stack在一起反而很别扭。改了
01:06:788 (2,1) - 对齐。齐了

@Lily bread 音效摸帮我改啊;w;我这音效比较渣你看着帮我弄了吧;w;

百合赛高

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:Girl's spirit -オトメノキモチ-
Artist:Rita
ArtistUnicode:Rita
Creator:Lily Bread
Version:Vert's Insane
Source:屋上の百合霊さん
Tags:Vert Okujyou no yurireisan Blueberry Yogurt 遠見結奈 榎木サチ 永谷恵
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312,0,36788,2,0,L|292:144,1,136,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,64,37324,6,0,L|24:72,1,136,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,248,37859,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,112,38038,2,0,L|116:188,1,68,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,368,38395,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,299,38574,2,0,L|200:220,1,68,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,248,38931,5,4,0:0:0:0:
52,248,39288,2,0,P|83:257|124:252,1,68,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,208,39645,2,0,P|320:204|376:216,1,68,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,300,40002,1,8,0:0:0:0:
198,231,40181,6,0,P|182:151|196:88,1,136,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,4,40717,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,96,40895,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,96,41252,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,4,41431,2,0,L|104:20,1,68,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,104,41788,6,0,L|112:120,1,102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,156,42145,2,0,P|140:204|128:236,1,68,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,340,42502,2,0,P|0:292|12:256,1,68,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,192,42859,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,304,43038,6,0,L|256:312,1,136,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,244,43574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,244,43752,2,0,L|309:238,1,136,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,124,44288,2,0,P|392:172|376:212,1,68,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,216,44645,6,0,P|203:147|216:84,1,136,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,237,45181,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,237,45359,2,0,P|324:309|308:377,1,136,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,304,45895,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,304,46074,6,0,L|248:304,1,136,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,152,46609,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,152,46788,2,0,L|260:152,1,68,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,124,47056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,124,47145,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,124,47234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,124,47324,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,264,47502,5,4,0:0:0:0:
168,264,47859,2,0,P|224:264|252:280,1,68,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,384,48217,2,0,P|320:335|319:303,1,68,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,168,48574,2,0,P|340:216|312:232,1,68,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,156,48931,6,0,P|192:92|256:48,1,136,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,248,49467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,248,49645,2,0,L|156:248,1,68,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,148,50002,2,0,L|356:148,1,68,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,216,50359,5,4,0:0:0:0:
456,216,50717,2,0,L|440:64,1,136,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,88,51252,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,160,51431,2,0,L|408:156,1,68,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,256,51788,6,0,L|224:264,1,136,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,356,52324,2,0,L|16:200,1,136,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,72,52859,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,24,53038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,24,53127,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,24,53217,2,0,P|36:88|52:128,1,102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,156,53574,6,0,L|172:164,1,68,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,224,53931,2,0,L|356:216,1,68,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,168,54288,2,0,L|512:172,1,68,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,268,54645,5,0,0:0:0:0:
512,320,54824,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,376,55002,2,0,L|336:368,1,68,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,360,55359,2,0,L|268:352,1,68,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,220,55717,2,0,P|315:251|316:284,1,68,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,184,56074,6,0,L|376:172,1,136,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,80,56609,1,0,0:0:0:0:
476,80,56967,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,232,57145,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,136,57324,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,344,57502,6,0,L|204:352,1,136,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,272,58038,2,0,P|90:264|114:244,1,68,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,80,58395,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,184,58574,2,0,L|40:140,2,34,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,200,58931,5,12,0:0:0:0:
184,200,59288,2,0,L|336:192,1,136,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,248,59824,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,248,60002,2,0,L|388:244,1,68,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,144,60359,6,0,P|304:104|368:124,1,136,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,284,60895,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,284,61074,2,0,L|312:360,1,68,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,288,61431,2,0,L|188:192,1,68,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,192,61788,5,4,0:0:0:0:
319,192,62145,2,0,L|476:176,1,136,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,64,62681,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,228,62859,2,0,L|376:316,1,68,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,144,63217,6,0,B|228:96|248:48|248:48|204:76,1,136,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,156,63752,2,0,L|72:8,1,136,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,68,64288,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,212,64467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,229,64556,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,247,64645,2,0,P|112:296|44:316,1,102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,340,65002,6,0,L|112:356,1,68,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,336,65359,2,0,L|300:332,1,68,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,280,65717,2,0,L|432:264,1,68,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,152,66074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,56,66252,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,188,66431,6,0,P|239:217|272:236,1,68,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,113,66788,2,0,P|120:114|87:133,1,68
252,96,67145,2,0,P|267:65|268:32,1,68,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,0,67502,6,0,P|86:44|95:136,1,136,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,280,68038,2,0,L|60:296,1,68,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,188,68395,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,328,68574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,276,68752,2,0,L|419:278,1,68,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,340,69109,5,0,0:0:0:0:
388,188,69288,2,0,L|404:108,1,68,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,68,69645,1,8,0:0:0:0:
443,77,69734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
409,79,69824,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,73,69913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
345,60,70002,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,16,70181,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,49,70270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,84,70359,6,0,P|119:137|24:84,1,170,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,44,70895,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,112,71074,2,0,L|264:216,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,112,71431,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,264,71609,6,0,L|204:296,1,170,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,232,72145,2,0,L|-16:236,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,288,72502,2,0,P|156:240|144:180,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,68,72859,2,0,P|88:116|100:176,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,149,73217,6,0,B|296:108|296:108|179:120,1,170,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,232,73752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,312,73931,2,0,L|308:308,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,228,74288,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,364,74467,6,0,B|144:172,1,170,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,40,75002,2,0,L|80:144,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,8,75359,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,64,75538,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,176,75717,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,152,75895,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,132,75984,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,112,76074,6,0,L|408:16,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,228,76431,2,0,L|324:144,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,60,76788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,184,76967,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,196,77145,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,84,77324,6,0,L|84:253,1,170,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,336,77859,2,0,L|300:348,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,284,78217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,164,78395,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,296,78574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,208,78752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,195,78842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
78,196,78931,6,0,P|40:220|-7:219,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,64,79288,1,8,0:0:0:0:
81,51,79377,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,47,79467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
143,54,79556,1,0,0:0:0:0:
171,69,79645,2,0,L|244:104,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,92,79824,2,0,L|352:144,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,200,80002,2,0,L|428:260,1,42.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,344,80181,5,0,0:0:0:0:

Lily Bread

1,228 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Lily Bread 2016-01-30T05:07:50+00:00

/*
red = nope.
orange = in consideration.
no comment or pink = fixed.
*/

kunkakunkakunkakunka wrote:
Hi～
From your Q～
It was written in the your queue that you could read japanese, but has done mod in english.^^;
//^^ fine

General
I think that kinda "Okujyou no yurireisan" in the tag are different. Please confirm it in outside site. outside site /
Enlarged picture
//thanks for checking
Combo color: I thought that a color was deep. Would you make it pale color?
//ok
BG: This is slightly small. I looked for big size, but a good image is not found. There is a big image in the official site, but it is necessary to change size. official site
//ok, i will find a suitable size's picture.
//and i can't access the link you write..T-T
AudioLeadIn: I recommend 500 or 1,000. Only insane diff has notes in the prelude.
//leadin is not necessary now.

[Vert]
//hitsound all added. thanks for hitsound mod!

Hard
00:48:217 (3) - A flow to the next 00:48:752 (4) - is no good. Would you switch to vertical movement? http://puu.sh/mOcbj.jpg
//fixed
00:05:895 (1) - Would you add whistle to a head of the (1)? There is a whistle in the 00:03:038 (1) - of the same rhythm.
//ok

The remaining hitsounds, please perform reference of insane diff. Probably I think that there is the point that you can change.
//ok
Normal
00:06:431 (4) - I think that a flow same as 00:02:502 (2,3,4) - is good. 01:15:002 (4) - same.
//what? i don't know how to change...
00:09:288 (4,5) - ^ 01:17:859 (4,5) - same.
00:27:859 (2,3,4,5) - I think that this flow is difficult in the normal diff. try this, plz
http://puu.sh/mOdM9.jpg
// - 00:28:574 - here is a clap, i don't want to miss it. and it's not too hard.
00:44:645 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - The normal diff thinks that rest(blank) is necessary. Would you remove 00:45:895 (4) - ?
//nope, it's ok in normal diff.
Easy
00:38:038 (2) - I recommend extension of 1/2 rhythm. It makes the flow that is good for the next 00:38:931 (1) - to pick up 00:38:574 - . In addition, the addition of clap is possible because there is the sound of the snare.
//good, changed
00:40:895 (3) - ^
//changed
00:56:074 (1) - I recommend that I change it to a reverse slider. it make the flow that is good for 00:57:502 (2) - by picking up 00:57:145 - .
//fixed
GL

/*
thanks for mod!
very useful^^
*/

moonlightleaf

2,155 posts

Joined September 2011

moonlightleaf 2016-01-30T05:32:21+00:00

[Easy]

摸不动

00:36:074 长白+finish在尾巴不太好

00:37:324 这个应该有Finish 类似的还有 00:40:181

00:44:645 (1) - 去掉折返后面长白加个1/4

kiai还没非kiai的节奏丰富

个人感觉漏了不少音效(可能我错觉我自己都不会音效

[Normal]

00:26:074 (3) - 00:25:895开始比较好然后00:26:431再加个note 类似00:28:752 (4,5) -

00:40:895 (5,6) - 我觉得应该是这种节奏(手机热点经常传不到图orz,5延长到00:41:252 , 6拖到00:41:431

00:44:645 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 略多,删掉24?

[Hard]

说你按DS也不是,1.2x 却有很多1.17x 1.23x 之类的差0.03x

00:10:002 (4,1) - 试试4ctrl+g , 1扔3头上

00:20:002 (4,5,1,2,3) - 看来你比较喜欢这种(小町那图也是),像这类花型我喜欢做跳,现在这个也不是不可以,3号像ctrl+g+h+j那个样子会比较顺flow,虽然你考虑和后面45的图案摆的

00:21:431 (5,1) - 这种就有必要搞一下blanket,其他nazi的就没提

00:25:717 (5,1,2) - 没法传图,解释好jb麻烦, 试试5ctrl+g , 1放(333,128) ,然后2和5头叠

01:01:431 (4) - ctrl+g

01:19:645 (3,4,5,6) - 都结束了不跳几下蹦跶一下吗?(34ctrl+g然后45ctrl+g然后46ctrl+g)

[Vert]

00:08:217 (3,4) - ctrl+g试试

00:09:645 (3,4,5) - 我不清楚大家怎么样我觉得我卡手,34ctrl+g?

00:20:359 (1,2) - ctrl+g

00:27:145 (4,5) - ^

00:57:145 (4,5) - 这个ctrl+g 肯定好不少

00:21:788 (1,2) - 突然这么大也有点怪,不过打到后面也不奇怪,只是有点突然,考虑减小一点DS,你后面的考虑逐渐增大吧,这里就从小DS开始呗

00:58:574 (4) - 试试尾巴点放在(48,148)

似乎是bpm的锅,没有你在星耀那个xi的diff爽

DeltaLeeds

78 posts

Joined November 2015

DeltaLeeds 2016-01-30T05:44:30+00:00

Hi, sorry for the delay for the mod, and I'm still a newbie in modding, so if this mod wasn't useful, I'm very sorry.

Easy
Can't find anything wrong with easy, the flow is great, hit sounds and combos done well, DS and patterns are also neat.

Normal

SPOILER

00:29:645 (6): NC
00:30:359 (1): Disable NC
01:04:288 (5): Straighten the slider. Looks a bit crooked.
01:08:931 (1): Maybe make the spinner go only until 01:10:002 instead of 01:10:359, and add some beats at 01:10:359 - 01:11:431, feels a bit empty.

Hard

SPOILER

00:17:324 (1): Add a whistle or finish hit sound on the beginning of that slider?

Vert's Insane

SPOILER

I can't really mod insane, but...
Maybe add a spinner somewhere at 01:21:788 and ends at around 01:26:074... At least add a spinner. xD

Sorry if I didn't find anything significant, but I have a hunch this map will be ranked very soon and is done very well already! Good luck with your map! Hope the mod helped at least a bit.

Last edited by DeltaLeeds 2016-01-30T05:49:21+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

kunka

1,566 posts

Joined July 2012

kunka 2016-01-30T05:46:32+00:00

Lily Bread wrote:
BG: This is slightly small. I looked for big size, but a good image is not found. There is a big image in the official site, but it is necessary to change size. official site
//ok, i will find a suitable size's picture.
//and i can't access the link you write..T-T

ok.
I did all DL.
However, editing of the size is necessary because this is 1920*1200 (Aspect ratio 16:10)
It’s up to you lol
http://puu.sh/mP1iK.jpg
http://puu.sh/mP1kc.jpg
http://puu.sh/mP1lM.jpg
http://puu.sh/mP1mQ.jpg

no kds.

Lily Bread

1,228 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Lily Bread 2016-01-30T06:21:09+00:00

/*
red = nope.
orange = in consideration.
no comment or pink = fixed.
*/

moonlightleaf wrote:
[Easy]

摸不动

00:36:074 长白+finish在尾巴不太好
//为了简化难度，只有这样了

00:37:324 这个应该有Finish 类似的还有 00:40:181
//好

00:44:645 (1) - 去掉折返后面长白加个1/4
//1/4？确定吗...

kiai还没非kiai的节奏丰富
//这个在这张图里没事，kiai和非kiai伴奏和音量都没有明显变化

个人感觉漏了不少音效(可能我错觉我自己都不会音效

[Normal]

00:26:074 (3) - 00:25:895开始比较好然后00:26:431再加个note 类似00:28:752 (4,5) -
//好

00:40:895 (5,6) - 我觉得应该是这种节奏(手机热点经常传不到图orz,5延长到00:41:252 , 6拖到00:41:431
//好

00:44:645 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 略多,删掉24?
//既然有两个人提了那我还是删了吧..其实仔细看看就会懂，这里显得太多只是因为我的N其它地方做的太简单了而已。这种节奏别人的N里随处可见

[Hard]

说你按DS也不是,1.2x 却有很多1.17x 1.23x 之类的差0.03x
//差这点也没事..本来hard就不需要DS嘛

00:10:002 (4,1) - 试试4ctrl+g , 1扔3头上
//我挺喜欢现在这个flow，先不改吧

00:20:002 (4,5,1,2,3) - 看来你比较喜欢这种(小町那图也是),像这类花型我喜欢做跳,现在这个也不是不可以,3号像ctrl+g+h+j那个样子会比较顺flow,虽然你考虑和后面45的图案摆的
//我再想想

00:21:431 (5,1) - 这种就有必要搞一下blanket,其他nazi的就没提
//还是那句话，我的set里完全没有做blanket，只是做出个flow而已

00:25:717 (5,1,2) - 没法传图,解释好jb麻烦, 试试5ctrl+g , 1放(333,128) ,然后2和5头叠
//有点insane的味道，先不改

01:01:431 (4) - ctrl+g
//这里反向不反向都有道理，所以我不反

01:19:645 (3,4,5,6) - 都结束了不跳几下蹦跶一下吗?(34ctrl+g然后45ctrl+g然后46ctrl+g)
//不用，注意到我整个hard里都很少用连续的1/2圈，所以相对来说这样已经足够表现音乐了

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Lily Bread

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Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Lily Bread 2016-01-30T06:21:47+00:00

kunkakunkakunkakunka wrote:
Lily Bread wrote:
BG: This is slightly small. I looked for big size, but a good image is not found. There is a big image in the official site, but it is necessary to change size. official site
//ok, i will find a suitable size's picture.
//and i can't access the link you write..T-T
ok.
I did all DL.
However, editing of the size is necessary because this is 1920*1200 (Aspect ratio 16:10)
It’s up to you lol
http://puu.sh/mP1iK.jpg
http://puu.sh/mP1kc.jpg
http://puu.sh/mP1lM.jpg
http://puu.sh/mP1mQ.jpg

no kds.

thanks! let me see^^

Lily Bread

1,228 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Lily Bread 2016-01-30T06:28:38+00:00

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orange = in consideration.
no comment or pink = fixed.
*/

DeltaLeeds wrote:
Hi, sorry for the delay for the mod, and I'm still a newbie in modding, so if this mod wasn't useful, I'm very sorry.
//never mind, everyone is beginner at the beginning

Easy
Can't find anything wrong with easy, the flow is great, hit sounds and combos done well, DS and patterns are also neat.
//^^

Normal
SPOILER
00:29:645 (6): NC
00:30:359 (1): Disable NC
//I NC every two bar lines.

01:04:288 (5): Straighten the slider. Looks a bit crooked.
//nope, it's ok.

01:08:931 (1): Maybe make the spinner go only until 01:10:002 instead of 01:10:359, and add some beats at 01:10:359 - 01:11:431, feels a bit empty.
//considering..

Hard
SPOILER
00:17:324 (1): Add a whistle or finish hit sound on the beginning of that slider?
//ok

Sorry if I didn't find anything significant, but I have a hunch this map will be ranked very soon and is done very well already! Good luck with your map! Hope the mod helped at least a bit.

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MokouSmoke

495 posts

Joined May 2013

MokouSmoke 2016-01-31T02:31:51+00:00

[Insane]

00:01:074 (1) - not a downbeat, so visually looks better if you move NC to 00:01:252 (2) - ?
00:05:181 (2,3) - reduce spacing or smoother flow? It feels like (3) receives too much emphasis compared to downbeat
00:13:038 (9,1) - bigger spacing to emphasize downbeat?
00:15:002 (3,4) - reduce spacing to about 2.0x so it's consistent w/ 00:14:467 (1,2) - and 00:15:359 (4,5) - nothing in song indicates that spacing should be larger here
00:18:752 (9) - maybe change to 5 note stream? more fun to play
00:21:074 (1,2,3,4) - why stack these? I think unstack and continue pattern from 00:20:002 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - with smaller and smaller spacing between (1) and (2) would fit better
00:22:324 (1,2) - weird to play since emphasis falls on 2 instead of 1. ctrl+g captures back and forth motion better
00:23:395 (1,2) - ^ ctrl+g
00:27:502 (1) - ctrl+j and reposition gives better emphasis imo
00:38:574 (5,1) - I think downbeat could use bigger DS, it even has finish on it
00:40:002 (4) - maybe move this below 00:39:645 (3) - for partial blanket so bigger spacing to 00:40:181 (1) -
01:04:645 (6) - why no longer NC on downbeat?
01:06:074 (4,1) - - ^
01:08:395 (3,4,5) - ctrl+g rhythm so you don't miss downbeat

[Hard]

00:53:574 (1,2) - I don't normally comment on blanket, but this doesn't look very good
01:19:824 (4,5) - I personally like ctrl+g to give more emphasis to last note of song, but I guess that ruins constant DS

[Normal]

00:46:788 (4) - add drum finishes to slider head, repeat, and tail?
01:17:859 (4,5) - polarity change is strange here. change rhythm to 2 1/2 sliders + note? captures drum beats better

[Easy]

00:29:645 (4,5) - ctrl+g rhythm? feels weird to miss downbeat
00:34:467 (3) - curve slider other way to give more emphasis and make 3/2 pause more apparent
00:51:788 (2,3) - flow feels strange. try this? http://puu.sh/mQ3rs/17b4bb4128.jpg

Lower diffs look fine. Insane could maybe use a couple more mods. Good luck!

Lily Bread

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Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Lily Bread 2016-01-31T04:37:40+00:00

/*
red = nope.
orange = in consideration.
no comment or pink = fixed.
*/

MokouSmoke wrote:
[Hard]
00:53:574 (1,2) - I don't normally comment on blanket, but this doesn't look very good
//i'm not making blanket in all my diffs. only for flow.
01:19:824 (4,5) - I personally like ctrl+g to give more emphasis to last note of song, but I guess that ruins constant DS
//yes, it's DS.
[Normal]
00:46:788 (4) - add drum finishes to slider head, repeat, and tail?
//ok
01:17:859 (4,5) - polarity change is strange here. change rhythm to 2 1/2 sliders + note? captures drum beats better
//it's a triple, if i can't follow all of them, i will ignore them.
[Easy]
00:29:645 (4,5) - ctrl+g rhythm? feels weird to miss downbeat
// - 00:30:002 - here is a continued vocal, so i want to use slider.
00:34:467 (3) - curve slider other way to give more emphasis and make 3/2 pause more apparent
//ok
00:51:788 (2,3) - flow feels strange. try this? http://puu.sh/mQ3rs/17b4bb4128.jpg
//ok

Lower diffs look fine. Insane could maybe use a couple more mods. Good luck!

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Vert

424 posts

Joined October 2013

Vert 2016-01-31T08:04:35+00:00

MokouSmoke wrote:
[Insane]
00:01:074 (1) - not a downbeat, so visually looks better if you move NC to 00:01:252 (2) - ? fixed
00:05:181 (2,3) - reduce spacing or smoother flow? It feels like (3) receives too much emphasis compared to downbeat I moved 2 a little
00:13:038 (9,1) - bigger spacing to emphasize downbeat? fixed
00:15:002 (3,4) - reduce spacing to about 2.0x so it's consistent w/ 00:14:467 (1,2) - and 00:15:359 (4,5) - nothing in song indicates that spacing should be larger here ok
00:18:752 (9) - maybe change to 5 note stream? more fun to play I think it's fine now
00:21:074 (1,2,3,4) - why stack these? I think unstack and continue pattern from 00:20:002 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - with smaller and smaller spacing between (1) and (2) would fit betterI've straightly put them in the smallest spacing,so no fix
00:22:324 (1,2) - weird to play since emphasis falls on 2 instead of 1. ctrl+g captures back and forth motion better I think now is better
00:23:395 (1,2) - ^ ctrl+g ^
00:27:502 (1) - ctrl+j and reposition gives better emphasis imo ^
00:38:574 (5,1) - I think downbeat could use bigger DS, it even has finish on it no because I dont even put a single jump in this party
00:40:002 (4) - maybe move this below 00:39:645 (3) - for partial blanket so bigger spacing to 00:40:181 (1) - I like the current pattern so no fix
01:04:645 (6) - why no longer NC on downbeat? It follows the vocal,no fix
01:06:074 (4,1) - - ^ ^
01:08:395 (3,4,5) - ctrl+g rhythm so you don't miss downbeat^

Thx for modding

Yuri

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:Girl's spirit -オトメノキモチ-
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Creator:Lily Bread
Version:Vert's Insane
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Qiyana

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Qiyana 2016-02-01T01:18:50+00:00

M4M from queue! XD

[General]

[Easy]
I would have used 2.5 for the CS.

[Hard]
01:01:431 (4) - ctrl+g

PLZ NO KUDOS! Good luck with the map however.

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