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Ayakura Mei - Puzzle Maker

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moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 星期四,2016年3月10日 at 08:31:45

Artist: Ayakura Mei
Title: Puzzle Maker
Source: 東方Project
Tags: 東方幻奏響UROBOROS肆～dEATHtINYoVERdRIVE～ Poplica* flandre scarlet U.N.オーエンは彼女なのか? 例大祭 un owen was her touhou DreaM117er IamKwaN りいちゅ@3日目/C-14b
BPM: 136
Filesize: 4251kb
Play Time: 01:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. 117's Hard (2.9 stars, 243 notes)
  2. KwaN's Normal (1.64 stars, 150 notes)
  3. Lunatic (3.86 stars, 389 notes)
Download: Ayakura Mei - Puzzle Maker
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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綾倉盟- Puzzle Maker

Lunatic - by me √

Hard - √ by DreaM117er

Normal - √ by IamKwaN

StoryBoard- √ | BG - from Here!
Last edited by moonlightleaf , edited 34 times in total.
MokouSmoke
495 posts
Joined May 2013
MokouSmoke
from my queue~

[Lunatic]
  1. The note spacing before the kiai feels a little high for such a calm song, but I guess it works
  2. 00:15:754 (2,3) - ctrl+g rhythm to emphasize strong beat at 00:16:196 -
  3. 00:26:784 (4,5) - why such a high spacing? the big jump should come at 00:26:563 (3,4) - to properly emphasize (4)
  4. 01:01:196 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this rhythm instead. follows song better and more interesting than the constant 1/2 rhythm imo http://puu.sh/m1Qzg/88f0f1e4d9.jpg
[Hard]
  1. 01:03:512 (2) - maybe delete. the rhythm is a little hard to read
Sorry for a short mod. Both diffs are well mapped. Good luck!
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

MokouSmoke wrote:

from my queue~

[Lunatic]
  1. The note spacing before the kiai feels a little high for such a calm song, but I guess it works
  2. 00:15:754 (2,3) - ctrl+g rhythm to emphasize strong beat at 00:16:196 -
  3. 00:26:784 (4,5) - why such a high spacing? the big jump should come at 00:26:563 (3,4) - to properly emphasize (4)--- keep first
  4. 01:01:196 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this rhythm instead. follows song better and more interesting than the constant 1/2 rhythm imo http://puu.sh/m1Qzg/88f0f1e4d9.jpg
Sorry for a short mod. Both diffs are well mapped. Good luck!
others fix ,thank you :)
Kencho
952 posts
Joined August 2013
Kencho
[General]
  1. 後面物件我聽起來有點延遲，檢查了下音效發現也不是音效問題，然後我測了一下offset，實際上應該-10ms
    1. Offset: 8,245ms BPM: 136.00

[117's Hard]
  1. 01:09:799 - 加個圓圈比較好

[Lunatic]

  1. 00:08:585 - 這個位置實際有vocal，我建議把前面滑條拉成3/4更合曲

    00:10:019 (1) - 和上面說的一樣，改成3/4更合曲，但是這樣排版要改一改，我建議節奏這樣下
    SPOILER

    00:12:887 (5) - 這很明顯有琴音啊，跟一下比較好

    00:15:313 (1) - 改成3/4，這個改的話排版不用大改

    00:17:078 (1) - ^

    01:05:056 (3,4) - 我覺得3直接拉成3/4就好了，加那個圓圈不合曲也不好打

    01:06:490 (1) - 改成3/4

    01:10:019 (1) - ^

    01:29:421 (1,2,3,4,5) - 弧度大一點，容易打

    01:40:009 (1) - 改成3/4

    01:40:892 (4) - ^

    我覺得可以參考一下117的難度改一下節奏，他節奏下的好
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

Kencho wrote:

[General]
  1. 後面物件我聽起來有點延遲，檢查了下音效發現也不是音效問題，然後我測了一下offset，實際上應該-10ms
    1. Offset: 8,245ms BPM: 136.00

[Lunatic]

  1. 00:08:585 - 這個位置實際有vocal，我建議把前面滑條拉成3/4更合曲

    00:10:019 (1) - 和上面說的一樣，改成3/4更合曲，但是這樣排版要改一改，我建議節奏這樣下
    SPOILER

    00:12:887 (5) - 這很明顯有琴音啊，跟一下比較好

    00:15:313 (1) - 改成3/4，這個改的話排版不用大改

    00:17:078 (1) - ^

    01:05:056 (3,4) - 我覺得3直接拉成3/4就好了，加那個圓圈不合曲也不好打

    01:06:490 (1) - 改成3/4

    01:10:019 (1) - ^

    01:29:421 (1,2,3,4,5) - 弧度大一點，容易打

    01:40:009 (1) - 改成3/4

    01:40:892 (4) - ^

    我覺得可以參考一下117的難度改一下節奏，他節奏下的好
---都改3/4滑条了

感谢mod :)
Hollow Wings
1,514 posts
Joined July 2010
Hollow Wings
m4m

General

  1. 什么？sb这算做完了。。。不加点lyric啊特效什么的不科学啊。。。

Lunatic

  1. hitnormal的音量可以单独调低一点。。。现在这样太响了柑橘有点吵。
  2. 00:10:892 (3) - 这边开始连续用那个finish的音不会太吵么。。。
  3. 00:56:553 (4,5) - 这里我觉得可以大跳。01:25:230 (6,7) - 同理。
  4. 01:18:171 (5) - 放到442,27那边比较好，01:18:171 (5,6) - 的跳还是要稍微大一点的，毕竟1/1的gap。
  5. 01:46:186 (4,5,6,7) - 按钢琴来的话，45,56的跳应该大点，67的跳应该小点这样。
  6. 摆的好像比以前要整齐多了，但好像还可以更整齐一点。。。大多数排版的规则度还没有很好的体现出来。。。嘛，随意啦。

117's Hard

  1. 音效方面同top diff。
  2. 我还期待摸出点什么东西，然而什么都没摸出来。。。
二妹又做二妹，怎么没别的了（

good luck
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m

General

  1. 什么？sb这算做完了。。。不加点lyric啊特效什么的不科学啊。。。---没找到歌词,还在找就是

Lunatic

  1. hitnormal的音量可以单独调低一点。。。现在这样太响了柑橘有点吵。 ---格式工厂改成了75%
  2. 00:10:892 (3) - 这边开始连续用那个finish的音不会太吵么。。。√
  3. 00:56:553 (4,5) - 这里我觉得可以大跳。01:25:230 (6,7) - 同理。---01:25:230 (6,7) - 67的话,位置局限 只增加了一点点
  4. 01:18:171 (5) - 放到442,27那边比较好，01:18:171 (5,6) - 的跳还是要稍微大一点的，毕竟1/1的gap。√
  5. 01:46:186 (4,5,6,7) - 按钢琴来的话，45,56的跳应该大点，67的跳应该小点这样。√
  6. 摆的好像比以前要整齐多了，但好像还可以更整齐一点。。。大多数排版的规则度还没有很好的体现出来。。。嘛，随意啦。

117's Hard

  1. 音效方面同top diff。
  2. 我还期待摸出点什么东西，然而什么都没摸出来。。。
二妹又做二妹，怎么没别的了（ ---不要在意细节 ;w;;;;

good luck
感谢mod :)
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
3,905 posts
Joined August 2012
IamKwaN
SPOILER
osu file format v14

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[Metadata]
Title:Puzzle Maker
TitleUnicode:Puzzle Maker
Artist:Mei Ayakura
ArtistUnicode:綾倉盟
Creator:moonlightleaf
Version:KwaN's Normal
Source:東方Project
Tags:東方幻奏響UROBOROS肆～dEATHtINYoVERdRIVE～ Poplica* flandre scarlet U.N.オーエンは彼女なのか? 例大祭 un owen was her touhou DreaM117er
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126,234,81480,2,0,P|128:179|122:125,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,75,82142,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,75,82362,6,0,P|172:60|215:86,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,120,83024,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,120,83244,2,0,P|304:135|347:109,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
439,75,84127,2,0,P|431:130|431:184,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,233,84789,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,233,85010,2,0,L|496:228,2,55,0|0|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,314,85892,6,0,P|332:324|295:286,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,237,86554,1,8,0:0:0:0:
285,237,86774,2,0,P|289:184|285:128,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,78,87436,1,8,0:0:0:0:
277,78,87656,2,0,P|224:74|197:29,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
365,34,88980,1,8,0:0:0:0:
414,119,89421,6,0,P|454:75|462:23,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
325,164,90745,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,226,91186,2,0,P|256:282|254:335,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,192,92289,2,0,P|156:189|101:191,1,110,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
57,168,92950,6,0,P|57:115|95:75,1,110,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
142,62,93612,1,8,0:0:0:0:
142,62,93833,2,0,P|196:63|251:60,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,47,94495,1,8,0:0:0:0:
299,47,94715,2,0,P|350:46|380:0,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,146,96039,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,200,96480,6,0,L|380:311,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,358,97142,1,8,0:0:0:0:
389,358,97362,2,0,P|430:357|468:373,2,82.5,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
342,375,98245,1,4,0:0:0:0:
239,205,99127,2,0,B|166:221|153:182|75:200,1,165,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
26,207,100009,6,0,P|0:253|14:306,1,110,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,341,100671,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,341,100892,2,0,P|102:340|157:343,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,334,101554,1,8,0:0:0:0:
206,334,101774,2,0,P|257:335|287:381,2,110,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,235,103098,1,8,0:0:0:0:
122,186,103539,5,4,0:0:0:0:
144,89,103980,1,8,0:0:0:0:
227,142,104421,5,4,0:0:0:0:
249,45,104862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,98,105303,6,0,P|406:129|403:203,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
325,266,106406,1,4,0:0:0:0:
325,266,106627,2,0,L|330:324,1,55,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,107509,12,2,110597,0:0:0:0:
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
updated

感谢,爱你desu
Lyric
293 posts
Joined September 2013
Lyric
[General]
綾倉盟 应该拼成 Ayakura Mei 吧，日本人都是姓前名后的。
[Lunatic]
00:49:936 (4,5,6) - DS偏小了。
01:03:392 - 这里加个Note？如果想保留2连的话，就应该把这两个的距离调得离前面滑条远一些。
01:04:936 (2,3) - 2错开3的滑条头一些？前面从来没有出现这样的节奏，况且又紧接在连打后面，一到这就肯定读错了。

01:06:039 (7,8) - 感觉要加大DS。
01:08:244 (1,3) - 这两个用扭曲程度一样的滑条为好吧，也算是呼应一下。
01:18:833 (1,2,3) - 01:19:715 (5,6,7) - 这两组分开一点？
01:23:244 (4,5) - 这弧度不同……是我强迫症了。
01:43:539 (1) - 这个不如也用3/4Slider+1Note。

GL.
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

Lyric wrote:

[General]
綾倉盟 应该拼成 Ayakura Mei 吧，日本人都是姓前名后的。---百科的,应该没问题
[Lunatic]
00:49:936 (4,5,6) - DS偏小了。 ---不要紧
01:03:392 - 这里加个Note？如果想保留2连的话，就应该把这两个的距离调得离前面滑条远一些。 √
01:04:936 (2,3) - 2错开3的滑条头一些？前面从来没有出现这样的节奏，况且又紧接在连打后面，一到这就肯定读错了。√

01:06:039 (7,8) - 感觉要加大DS。---不要紧
01:08:244 (1,3) - 这两个用扭曲程度一样的滑条为好吧，也算是呼应一下。 √
01:18:833 (1,2,3) - 01:19:715 (5,6,7) - 这两组分开一点？---不要紧
01:23:244 (4,5) - 这弧度不同……是我强迫症了。---不要紧
01:43:539 (1) - 这个不如也用3/4Slider+1Note。 换3连√

GL.
感谢mod :)
Kalibe
2,060 posts
Joined October 2013
Kalibe
M4M~
  1. 01:04:715 - Unsnapped Preview Point, is it specially?
KwaN's Normal :
  1. According to BPM and pattern you have in here, i think AR should be 4 | also OD and HP to 3 or 3,5 ?
  2. 00:19:715 (1,1) - For me, unnessesary NC's - reason? There's nothing hard to read those circles, also not changing SV or spacing, so ?
  3. 01:04:715 (1,1) - Missing Finishes on heads?
  4. 01:11:333 - Also there finish should be, cause you add here ( 01:25:450 - same sound ) imo.
  5. 01:31:186 (3) - Maybe do ctrl H this slider, just to have a better transision with (2)
117's Hard :
  1. 00:53:906 (6,1) - I think spacing between these objects could be bigger, cause (1) is downbeat strong sound and it will be neat if you emphasis it. :3
  2. 01:04:715 (1,1) - Finishes on heads sounds good on heads ! ;w;
  3. 01:11:333 - As in Easy, you also add finish 01:25:450 - here so there's should be too.
Lunatic :
  1. 00:41:333 (5) - Mayb move this a little to left? Something like 444|292 ?
  2. 01:04:715 (1,5,1) - As in other diffs, Finishes were appreciated. ;w;
  3. 01:39:127 (7,1) - Switch NC's, because (7) started new 1/4 slider pattern.
Ok, that's all. Good luck !~ :3
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
M4M from my queue

[Normal]
  1. 01:02:068 (3,4) - 换成一个折返条怎么样？然后还可以在01:02:950加个note
  2. 01:32:950 (1,2,3,4) - 还是建议用折返滑条跟vocal
[Hard]
  1. 00:51:480 (3,4) - 唔，实际上这俩音的间隔大概是1/8……
  2. 01:03:612 (3,1) - hard里感觉改成滑条更好
[Lunatic]
  1. 00:51:259 (2,4) - 感觉这里把这两个note，叠到之后的滑条上会比较好玩，然后调一下ds。
好玩，射星
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Lasse
Beatmap Nominator
3,596 posts
Joined June 2011
Lasse
m4m reply

General

  1. your soft hitfinish is really weird, as it is delayed by a few ms, but only on the left channel, making it feel a bit strange (at least for me).
    I edited it for you and also cut off some wasted silence from the ending of it, making it smaller and removed a slight delay from soft-hitwhistle
  2. also your silended sliderslides are actually "soft-sliderslider" which makes the game ignore them, they have to be named "sliderslide" (wirthout the r at the end) => unused and thus unrankable. and you should use the "official" blank file provided in the ranking criteria, since yours are not even close to 100ms long => also unrankable.
    => here are all four fixed files, just replace them and delete "soft-sliderslider" and "soft-sliderslider3":
    http://puu.sh/mkRnF/f21d95ef54.zip
  3. please add the source of the background http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php? ... d=53304441 to your description to give credits to the artist, thanks

Lunatic

  1. 00:08:244 (1) - it's your choice how you draw sliders, but you can do the same thing cleaner/simpler with only two or three nodes, making it way easier to be perfectly symmetrical and look nicer: http://i.imgur.com/lNV1Agd.jpg or http://i.imgur.com/tJhPsxt.jpg
  2. 00:14:862 (7) - is there any reason to suddenly double the spacing? Don't think the music supports such a huge increase
  3. 00:17:068 (1,2) - why is the" 1/4 - after slider 3/4" pattern suddenly stacked? you never did it before and after
  4. 01:13:539 (1,2) - ^here you actually do it again, only having it twice and on not remarkably differen sounds feels so random. just space them like all others (or maybe stack more of the, lol)
  5. 00:19:936 (2) - could be stacked with 00:19:936 (2) - , not noticeable during gameplay, but why not?
  6. 00:18:392 (6) - I know it belongs to the pattern, but having the spacing on this that low, when it's actually emphasized in the music seems wrong, you could try ~90% overlapping 00:19:053 (2) - like this http://i.imgur.com/gCzrvQZ.jpg would play really nice imo and fit with the music
  7. 00:25:892 (1,5) - 00:26:333 (2,4) - perfectly stack?
  8. 00:36:369 - why ignore 1/4 after mapping them just before? maybe make 00:36:259 (7) - a kickslider?
  9. 00:49:494 (3,4) - stack leniency 5 might be much nicer for stuff like this
  10. 01:02:950 (1,2,3,4,5) - - http://i.imgur.com/9XiEDCz.png this movement doesn't feel very intuitive to me, with how you transition the sldier into those wide angles. you could for example move 01:03:392 (2,3,4) - more right or do sth with the slider
  11. 01:04:274 (9) - maybe nc to go well with addition of strong piano?
Seems nice overall, but the rhythm is so repetitve :'( considering how many unmapped 1/4 there are and all the skipped stonger red ticks due to 3/4 slider I think it could've been made a bit more interesting...

117

  1. 00:28:539 (2,3,4) - patterns like this are abit stupid to read for hard imo and having stacked 1/4 right after this at 00:30:303 (3,4,5) - makes it even worse ./
  2. 00:49:936 (2,3,1) - yeah, so pattern with way different rhythm but all stacked the same, seems not that great for a hard
  3. 00:51:480 (3,4,1) -
  4. the rhythms and most patterns seem nice, but those weird stacks that I can't grasp the logic behind are not

kwan

  1. 00:32:509 (4) - those would be nicer without curving I think, they are so minimally curved that it just feels weird
  2. 00:49:274 (4) - only having a click here would be better fitting, like this http://i.imgur.com/0VnzWLJ.jpg
  3. 01:31:186 (3) - feels strange as 01:31:847 - is much stronger than the sliderend. maybe try http://i.imgur.com/8uzrRMB.jpg
good luck with this, nice relaxing song
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
3,905 posts
Joined August 2012
IamKwaN

Lyric wrote:

綾倉盟 应该拼成 Ayakura Mei 吧，日本人都是姓前名后的。
他說的對 RC規定除非有官方Source 否則romanisation都是前姓後名 (盟 = Mei

PS. 等摸多一點才一併改
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

Kalibe wrote:

M4M~
  1. 01:04:715 - Unsnapped Preview Point, is it specially?

Lunatic :
  1. 00:41:333 (5) - Mayb move this a little to left? Something like 444|292 ? ---keep for stack with before note
  2. 01:04:715 (1,5,1) - As in other diffs, Finishes were appreciated. ;w;
  3. 01:39:127 (7,1) - Switch NC's, because (7) started new 1/4 slider pattern.
Ok, that's all. Good luck !~ :3

Pata-Mon wrote:

M4M from my queue

[Lunatic]
  1. 00:51:259 (2,4) - 感觉这里把这两个note，叠到之后的滑条上会比较好玩，然后调一下ds。---懒改
好玩，射星

Lasse wrote:

m4m reply

General

  1. your soft hitfinish is really weird, as it is delayed by a few ms, but only on the left channel, making it feel a bit strange (at least for me).
    I edited it for you and also cut off some wasted silence from the ending of it, making it smaller and removed a slight delay from soft-hitwhistle
  2. also your silended sliderslides are actually "soft-sliderslider" which makes the game ignore them, they have to be named "sliderslide" (wirthout the r at the end) => unused and thus unrankable. and you should use the "official" blank file provided in the ranking criteria, since yours are not even close to 100ms long => also unrankable.
    => here are all four fixed files, just replace them and delete "soft-sliderslider" and "soft-sliderslider3":
    http://puu.sh/mkRnF/f21d95ef54.zip
  3. please add the source of the background http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php? ... d=53304441 to your description to give credits to the artist, thanks

Lunatic

  1. 00:08:244 (1) - it's your choice how you draw sliders, but you can do the same thing cleaner/simpler with only two or three nodes, making it way easier to be perfectly symmetrical and look nicer: http://i.imgur.com/lNV1Agd.jpg or http://i.imgur.com/tJhPsxt.jpg ---keep , i am lazy ;w;
  2. 00:14:862 (7) - is there any reason to suddenly double the spacing? Don't think the music supports such a huge increase
  3. 00:17:068 (1,2) - why is the" 1/4 - after slider 3/4" pattern suddenly stacked? you never did it before and after
  4. 01:13:539 (1,2) - ^here you actually do it again, only having it twice and on not remarkably differen sounds feels so random. just space them like all others (or maybe stack more of the, lol)
  5. 00:19:936 (2) - could be stacked with 00:19:936 (2) - , not noticeable during gameplay, but why not?
  6. 00:18:392 (6) - I know it belongs to the pattern, but having the spacing on this that low, when it's actually emphasized in the music seems wrong, you could try ~90% overlapping 00:19:053 (2) - like this http://i.imgur.com/gCzrvQZ.jpg would play really nice imo and fit with the music
  7. 00:25:892 (1,5) - 00:26:333 (2,4) - perfectly stack?
  8. 00:36:369 - why ignore 1/4 after mapping them just before? maybe make 00:36:259 (7) - a kickslider?
  9. 00:49:494 (3,4) - stack leniency 5 might be much nicer for stuff like this --keep , i think now is better
  10. 01:02:950 (1,2,3,4,5) - - http://i.imgur.com/9XiEDCz.png this movement doesn't feel very intuitive to me, with how you transition the sldier into those wide angles. you could for example move 01:03:392 (2,3,4) - more right or do sth with the slider
  11. 01:04:274 (9) - maybe nc to go well with addition of strong piano?
Seems nice overall, but the rhythm is so repetitve :'( considering how many unmapped 1/4 there are and all the skipped stonger red ticks due to 3/4 slider I think it could've been made a bit more interesting...

good luck with this, nice relaxing song
no reply = fixed

thank you all :)

IamKwaN wrote:

Lyric wrote:

綾倉盟 应该拼成 Ayakura Mei 吧，日本人都是姓前名后的。
他說的對 RC規定除非有官方Source 否則romanisation都是前姓後名 (盟 = Mei

PS. 等摸多一點才一併改 ---侯
Axey
1,216 posts
Joined October 2009
Axey
M4M

Luna

00:09:568 (5,6) - 恩..虽然我也用过这样的梗 前面那个也就算惹 但是这个(4,5)是向上的flow..觉得(6)放在上面比较好..
00:10:450 (2,3) - 感觉前面这样的滑条太多了..推荐(3)和(2)一样用直滑条 平行
00:11:553 (5) - 这个也是flow..放在x:284 y:336 左右的地方比较好
00:12:656 (3) - 试试这个？ http://puu.sh/msQaU/dedbd5c1c3.jpg
00:13:318 (5) - 这个也是.. 这个梗用的太多了..用1~2次其实就够了 放左上角 或者(4,5,6)放成一个三角形
00:14:421 (5) - 这样放也不错 http://puu.sh/msQj3/b15b27d926.jpg
00:15:744 (2,3) - 这个(3)和(2)对在同一条直线上比较好? 拖动(3,4)到x:224 y:344
00:17:068 (1) - ~00:20:377 (4) - 节奏太单调了..我试试改了下 http://puu.sh/msQHw/eefde5a0b0.jpg
00:21:259 (4,5) - 推荐用滑条代替
00:25:009 (3) - 我是喜欢放x:432 y:336 不过这边4角跳就要修改下了
00:34:164 (5) - 前面这段 像这个地方都可以加个note 滑条+2note 的节奏太单调惹
00:42:987 - add note
00:44:752 - ^
00:44:421 (4) - 这个应该是突出jump的音 (3)放x:324 y:104?
00:45:965 (3,4) - 这个在时间轴上是不是应该C+G一下 http://puu.sh/msQXQ/25e90744ad.jpg 试试这个?
00:47:730 (3,4) - ..太近了 (4)也是个突出jump的音
00:52:693 - add note 或者滑条拉到蓝线
00:54:458 - ^
00:56:553 (4) - 这个其实用note比较好
00:56:994 (5) - 这个用滑条拉到蓝线?
00:58:318 (3) - ~01:00:744 (7) - http://puu.sh/msReM/9e079250eb.jpg try try
01:02:950 (1) - http://puu.sh/msRie/f655980154.jpg try try
01:07:693 - 可以加个note
01:08:024 (7) - 太近了..稍微跳远点
01:08:244 (1) - 我听到这段第一反应就是这个梗ww http://puu.sh/msRod/131d696cbd.jpg
01:11:222 (5) - add note
01:14:200 (3,4) - 这个也是时间轴上C+G 然后后面蓝线可以加note 或者滑条拉到蓝线
01:15:303 (1,2,3,4,5) - 加上soft-whistle会比较好
01:21:811 - 这个音真得加
01:24:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 还是节奏单调问题..觉得这里还是加点条子比较好

Hard

没啥问题..

老公

01:41:774 (5) - http://puu.sh/msRMC/4871ece326.jpg 试试这样放？
DreaM117er
1,594 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er

Kencho wrote:

[117's Hard]
  1. 01:09:799 - 加個圓圈比較好 >好

我覺得可以參考一下117的難度改一下節奏，他節奏下的好 >被鋒喵誇獎了\OwO/

Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m

117's Hard

  1. 音效方面同top diff。
  2. 我还期待摸出点什么东西，然而什么都没摸出来。。。 >OwO
二妹又做二妹，怎么没别的了（

good luck

Kalibe wrote:

M4M~

117's Hard :
  1. 00:53:906 (6,1) - I think spacing between these objects could be bigger, cause (1) is downbeat strong sound and it will be neat if you emphasis it. :3 >OK :)
  2. 01:04:715 (1,1) - Finishes on heads sounds good on heads ! ;w;
  3. 01:11:333 - As in Easy, you also add finish 01:25:450 - here so there's should be too.
Ok, that's all. Good luck !~ :3

Pata-Mon wrote:

M4M from my queue
[Hard]
  1. 00:51:480 (3,4) - 唔，实际上这俩音的间隔大概是1/8…… >我並不是跟琴音OwO，是鼓。你說了我才注意到有1/8 233333
  2. 01:03:612 (3,1) - hard里感觉改成滑条更好 >一樣是1/8的話理由同上，不過這裡是一定要改的，太坑了
好玩，射星

Lasse wrote:

m4m reply

117

  1. 00:28:539 (2,3,4) - patterns like this are abit stupid to read for hard imo and having stacked 1/4 right after this at 00:30:303 (3,4,5) - makes it even worse ./ >k, fix here, thanks
  2. 00:49:936 (2,3,1) - yeah, so pattern with way different rhythm but all stacked the same, seems not that great for a hard
  3. 00:51:480 (3,4,1) - >I think this is fine lol really
  4. the rhythms and most patterns seem nice, but those weird stacks that I can't grasp the logic behind are not >sure, fix rhythm for no 3/4 stacking

good luck with this, nice relaxing song
No reply = Fix
Thanks all, sorry I'm late for fixing mods :)

垃圾麻破 | 小m
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84,120,91186,6,0,P|144:128|216:144,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,160,91627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,132,91847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,76,92068,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,160,92289,5,4,0:0:0:0:
244,160,92399,2,0,P|252:228|256:264,1,90.0000034332277
320,308,92950,6,0,P|380:312|428:368,2,120,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,340,93833,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,340,94164,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,340,94274,2,0,P|191:337|144:328,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,248,94715,6,0,P|76:216|156:228,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,248,95156,2,0,P|192:200|200:152,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,84,95597,2,0,P|121:90|64:99,2,120,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,116,96480,5,4,0:0:0:0:
268,116,96811,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,116,96921,2,0,P|320:108|356:101,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,116,97362,2,0,P|476:148|484:232,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,196,98244,6,0,P|398:235|395:275,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,332,98686,2,0,L|272:340,3,40,0|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,304,99127,2,0,P|200:296|160:292,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,374,99568,2,0,P|88:368|128:364,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,256,100009,5,4,0:0:0:0:
192,256,100340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,256,100450,2,0,P|132:248|92:244,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,200,100892,2,0,P|3:150|12:88,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,132,101774,6,0,P|88:68|80:4,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
165,243,102656,2,0,P|170:203|176:164,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
270,60,103097,2,0,L|265:100|260:140,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,272,103539,6,0,P|348:320|456:312,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,92,104421,2,0,P|456:100|332:116,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,121,105303,6,0,P|199:118|256:172,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,288,105965,2,0,P|134:291|77:237,1,160,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,204,106627,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,204,106847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,107509,12,2,110597,0:0:0:0:
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
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moonlightleaf

Axey wrote:

M4M

Luna

00:09:568 (5,6) - 恩..虽然我也用过这样的梗 前面那个也就算惹 但是这个(4,5)是向上的flow..觉得(6)放在上面比较好..
00:10:450 (2,3) - 感觉前面这样的滑条太多了..推荐(3)和(2)一样用直滑条 平行
00:11:553 (5) - 这个也是flow..放在x:284 y:336 左右的地方比较好
00:12:656 (3) - 试试这个？ http://puu.sh/msQaU/dedbd5c1c3.jpg
00:13:318 (5) - 这个也是.. 这个梗用的太多了..用1~2次其实就够了 放左上角 或者(4,5,6)放成一个三角形
00:14:421 (5) - 这样放也不错 http://puu.sh/msQj3/b15b27d926.jpg
00:15:744 (2,3) - 这个(3)和(2)对在同一条直线上比较好? 拖动(3,4)到x:224 y:344
00:17:068 (1) - ~00:20:377 (4) - 节奏太单调了..我试试改了下 http://puu.sh/msQHw/eefde5a0b0.jpg
00:21:259 (4,5) - 推荐用滑条代替
00:25:009 (3) - 我是喜欢放x:432 y:336 不过这边4角跳就要修改下了 --这边不修了
00:34:164 (5) - 前面这段 像这个地方都可以加个note 滑条+2note 的节奏太单调惹
00:42:987 - add note
00:44:752 - ^
00:44:421 (4) - 这个应该是突出jump的音 (3)放x:324 y:104?
00:45:965 (3,4) - 这个在时间轴上是不是应该C+G一下 http://puu.sh/msQXQ/25e90744ad.jpg 试试这个?
00:47:730 (3,4) - ..太近了 (4)也是个突出jump的音
00:52:693 - add note 或者滑条拉到蓝线
00:54:458 - ^
00:56:553 (4) - 这个其实用note比较好
00:56:994 (5) - 这个用滑条拉到蓝线?
00:58:318 (3) - ~01:00:744 (7) - http://puu.sh/msReM/9e079250eb.jpg try try
01:02:950 (1) - http://puu.sh/msRie/f655980154.jpg try try
01:07:693 - 可以加个note
01:08:024 (7) - 太近了..稍微跳远点
01:08:244 (1) - 我听到这段第一反应就是这个梗ww http://puu.sh/msRod/131d696cbd.jpg
01:11:222 (5) - add note
01:14:200 (3,4) - 这个也是时间轴上C+G 然后后面蓝线可以加note 或者滑条拉到蓝线
01:15:303 (1,2,3,4,5) - 加上soft-whistle会比较好
01:21:811 - 这个音真得加
01:24:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 还是节奏单调问题..觉得这里还是加点条子比较好
no reply = fix

好多3连,我打不了了;w;;; 小M的好多2连,我打不了了;w;;;
[Kamiya]
637 posts
Joined November 2012
[Kamiya]
先占位 ，凌晨摸orz 晚上突然有事了

这里是四萌！FOR M4M！

[117's Hard]

01:18:833 (1,2,3,4) - 这部分的note属于bgm不属于人声 稍微有些格格不入，建议改成人声部分。(有种强行加上去的感觉

01:45:303 (1,2) - 滑条间距可以稍微拉开一些(2部分滑条大概x:200y296

[Lunatic]

00:11:774 (1,3) - blanket更美观

00:13:980 (1,2,3,4) - 连打起手重音会比较好入手，但对于这种情况来看我建议00:13:539 (6,1) - 改成slider后面连打改成反复滑条。仅此建议。如图：
SPOILER
↑可以将6滑条改成note或者7滑条改成note 这样入手连打会轻松一些。。吧。

00:14:862 (6) - 移动至x：288y：176或者是
SPOILER

01:15:303 (1,2,3,4,5) - 虽然这个地方作图上稍微有些局限，希望还是改成滑条方式。（个人意见

版面稍显混乱。00:33:392 (2,4,5,6) - 01:07:142 (3,5,6,7) - 像这些靠得很近的地方可以稍微摆开些

以上！！！！！！

:) 然而我又骗了一波kudosu
GD LK and GJ！
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